It wasn't love at first sight. I wasn't flattered by his charm and interest in me. I tried to ignore him and turned down his relationship proposal countless times.

I wasn't having any of it - a destined for failure relationship shrouded in secrecy and guilt. A roving fire of passion and lust bound to leave everyone burned out. An abominable liaison - or so I thought.

But he had been relentless, plying me with gifts and acts of kindness, making me change my mind, making my cold broken heart start to beat again.

"No it can't be him!" Common sense had warned my heart. "Anybody else but him."

But my heart proved a traitor when it beat triple time at the sight of him. Common sense was eroded over feelings when the butterflies danced wild in my tummy at the sound of his voice; when my eyes lit up after our first kiss; when I started finding him cute even with his chipped front tooth.

Amor vincit omnia

Does love truly conquer all?

Its been one year since we first met...one year since I first got introduced to the handsome, shy guy who was always washing the family car every morning on my way out. Even then he seemed geeky. The greeting and complimenting as I passed everyday soon became a routine. A routine that had to be broken when he went back to complete his service year after the Easter holidays. It felt sudden the way he left and I was unhappy about it for a few days.

I eventually saw him again at a friend's party a few months later and we continued being friends - like we'd never parted. He, in an uncharacteristic show of emotion later said he liked me and would want us to be more than friends but there was a major setback. I was already going out with someone else - his elder brother.

We could be nothing but friends until his brother went to America to seek greener pastures and forget his past. His past included me.

Now here I am, the spurned lover still grieving the abrupt end of my relationship and b**ching about men being worse than b**ches. But he's trying his best to right a wroong and redeem the male folk in my sight.

This is an abomination, a relationship doomed for failure but I don't care anymore. After all, what is life without its healthy dose of forbidden pleasures? I ask myself as I reply his final proposal with the three-letter ominous word, "Yes."

In your narrative story his elder brother did not break up with you before he left for abroad. Hmm! Has he been calling you? Well, it will definitely be an abomination if you go ahead with the younger brother who seems resilient until he catches your heart in a relationship.

hope u r nt 4real.

but if u r,u must be influenced with meth or sumtin stronger...

I don't see what's terribly abominable in this. His elder bro left u, right? And now u're in love with the younger brother and he loves u too nd has proposed marriage to u, which u accepted. That's fine. But, pls... Think about this thoroughly. The situation's a lil awkward, I must admit, but not an abomination, nevertheless.




Most importantly, make sure u aren't on the REBOUND. Don't rush into tying the knot with this young man until u're doubly sure of ur feelings for him.

Lalasticlala.. Farano.. Ishilove.

His elder brother broke. her heart,he didn't keep in touch after he left...

Nice poem.

Is this story even real?
I just saw a similar version on your blog...care to explain?

In all it's fictitiousness i find it surreal
...and has lead to an inconclusive sumnabulism

Sheikwonder:
Is this story even real?

I just saw a similar version on your blog...care to explain?

Does it matter whether its real or not? I write a mixture of fiction and fact so in a way, its real

fulfillbill:
In all it's fictitiousness i find it surreal
...and has lead to an inconclusive sumnabulism

Care to explain ur grammar prof?

elijah2u:
In your narrative story his elder brother did not break up with you before he left for abroad. Hmm! Has he been calling you? Well, it will definitely be an abomination if you go ahead with the younger brother who seems resilient until he catches your heart in a relationship.

Really? Wat if he's d one for her? She shld nt date him cos her and his elder bro dated?

Oliviaarims:
I don't see what's terribly abominable in this. His elder bro left u, right? And now u're in love with the younger brother and he loves u too nd has proposed marriage to u, which u accepted. That's fine. But, pls... Think about this thoroughly. The situation's a lil awkward, I must admit, but not an abomination, nevertheless.




Most importantly, make sure u aren't on the REBOUND. Don't rush into tying the knot with this young man until u're doubly sure of ur feelings for him.

Alright...thanks!

Suigeneris93:



Care to explain ur grammar prof?

Means i was captivated by the darkness, mystery of your imagery and but i was too lazy to stitch the ideas together,my eyes started sleep-walking on the rest of the piece.

You are a United fan and a writer? Damn! i like you already.

Suigeneris93:



Care to explain ur grammar prof?

Means i was captivated by the darkness, mystery of your imagery and but i was too lazy to stitch the ideas together,my eyes started sleep-walking on the rest of the piece.

You are a United fan and a writer? Damn! i like you already.

fulfillbill:


Means i was captivated by the darkness, mystery of your imagery and but i was too lazy to stitch the ideas together,my eyes started sleep-walking on the rest of the piece.

You are a United fan and a writer? Damn! i like you already.

Lol

some peeps on nairaland write better stories than wale adenuga

fulfillbill:


Means i was captivated by the darkness, mystery of your imagery and but i was too lazy to stitch the ideas together,my eyes started sleep-walking on the rest of the piece.

You are a United fan and a writer? Damn! i like you already.

No, something is wrong with that combo. ManU fan & writer.

Sui just wants us to bathe in the aqua of obfuscation. Apologies Honourable Patrick.

Man U fans are prawn sandwich eaters! If you doubt me, ask former capitano, Roy Keane.

AreaFada2:


No, something is wrong with that combo. ManU fan & writer.

Sui just wants us to bathe in the aqua of obfuscation. Apologies Honourable Patrick.

Man U fans are prawn sandwich eaters! If you doubt me, ask former capitano, Roy Keane.

Lol...smh

Suigeneris93:
It wasn't love at first sight. I wasn't flattered by his charm and interest in me. I tried to ignore him and turned down his relationship proposal countless times.

I wasn't having any of it - a destined for failure relationship shrouded in secrecy and guilt. A roving fire of passion and lust bound to leave everyone burned out. An abominable liaison - or so I thought.

But he had been relentless, plying me with gifts and acts of kindness, making me change my mind, making my cold broken heart start to beat again.

"No it can't be him!" Common sense had warned my heart. "Anybody else but him."

But my heart proved a traitor when it beat triple time at the sight of him. Common sense was eroded over feelings when the butterflies danced wild in my tummy at the sound of his voice; when my eyes lit up after our first kiss; when I started finding him cute even with his chipped front tooth.

Amor vincit omnia

Does love truly conquer all?

Its been one year since we first met...one year since I first got introduced to the handsome, shy guy who was always washing the family car every morning on my way out. Even then he seemed geeky. The greeting and complimenting as I passed everyday soon became a routine. A routine that had to be broken when he went back to complete his service year after the Easter holidays. It felt sudden the way he left and I was unhappy about it for a few days.

I eventually saw him again at a friend's party a few months later and we continued being friends - like we'd never parted. He, in an uncharacteristic show of emotion later said he liked me and would want us to be more than friends but there was a major setback. I was already going out with someone else - his elder brother.

We could be nothing but friends until his brother went to America to seek greener pastures and forget his past. His past included me.

Now here I am, the spurned lover still grieving the abrupt end of my relationship and b**ching about men being worse than b**ches. But he's trying his best to right a wroong and redeem the male folk in my sight.

This is an abomination, a relationship doomed for failure but I don't care anymore. After all, what is life without its healthy dose of forbidden pleasures? I ask myself as I reply his final proposal with the three-letter ominous word, "Yes."

[Quote] dear u like writing in literature...ur posts are quite interesting but enhance the comprehensibility biko....nice write up [/Quote]

murphyibiam15:

[Quote] dear u like writing in literature...ur posts are quite interesting but enhance the comprehensibility biko....nice write up [/Quote]

Alright, tnx

OP I love u......not like I'm toasting u o, but I just love u......I've been stalking u secretly

obejoseph10:
OP I love u......not like I'm toasting u o, but I just love u......I've been stalking u secretly

Hmmmn, any particular reason why?

Richy4:
I read your write up, and it was amazing... You must have been really good with Literature in English in your secondary school days.......

It is not an abomination. but why would you make your self look like a "holy communion" that every one in the family must have? so if this second person travels tomorrow, then he will pass you to his younger brother right?

How do you think the family members will look at you? I was simply impress on how classy your write up was. please act that way dear......

Thanks for the compliment dear, but d story is fictional

Suigeneris93:
It wasn't love at first sight. I wasn't flattered by his charm and interest in me. I tried to ignore him and turned down his relationship proposal countless times.

I wasn't having any of it - a destined for failure relationship shrouded in secrecy and guilt. A roving fire of passion and lust bound to leave everyone burned out. An abominable liaison - or so I thought.

But he had been relentless, plying me with gifts and acts of kindness, making me change my mind, making my cold broken heart start to beat again.

"No it can't be him!" Common sense had warned my heart. "Anybody else but him."

But my heart proved a traitor when it beat triple time at the sight of him. Common sense was eroded over feelings when the butterflies danced wild in my tummy at the sound of his voice; when my eyes lit up after our first kiss; when I started finding him cute even with his chipped front tooth.

Amor vincit omnia

Does love truly conquer all?

Its been one year since we first met...one year since I first got introduced to the handsome, shy guy who was always washing the family car every morning on my way out. Even then he seemed geeky. The greeting and complimenting as I passed everyday soon became a routine. A routine that had to be broken when he went back to complete his service year after the Easter holidays. It felt sudden the way he left and I was unhappy about it for a few days.

I eventually saw him again at a friend's party a few months later and we continued being friends - like we'd never parted. He, in an uncharacteristic show of emotion later said he liked me and would want us to be more than friends but there was a major setback. I was already going out with someone else - his elder brother.

We could be nothing but friends until his brother went to America to seek greener pastures and forget his past. His past included me.

Now here I am, the spurned lover still grieving the abrupt end of my relationship and b**ching about men being worse than b**ches. But he's trying his best to right a wroong and redeem the male folk in my sight.

This is an abomination, a relationship doomed for failure but I don't care anymore. After all, what is life without its healthy dose of forbidden pleasures? I ask myself as I reply his final proposal with the three-letter ominous word, "Yes."

...are u lightskin?

MrCork:




...are u lightskin?

No, what has my skin got to do with this?

Suigeneris93:



No, what has my skin got to do with this?

.....sweeethat...I dint ask u for story..I ask if youis lightskin!!

MrCork:



.....sweeethat...I dint ask u for story..I ask if youis lightskin!!

No

Suigeneris93:


No

...well sweery..the good news is that u hav 2week to shange color to yellow lightskin..or else...an by the way..did I mention I drive £28,000(cash) range rover spot!..

Suigeneris93:



Hmmmn, any particular reason why?

. Your humor and ur intelligence