Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,199,985 members, 7,973,395 topics. Date: Saturday, 12 October 2024 at 03:47 PM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. (8602 Views)
NPC Cypher: Compassion / NPC Collaboration Poetry Competition Season 2: The Renga Fiesta / The Roast: An NPC Initiative. (2) (3) (4)
(1) (2) (3) (4) (Reply) (Go Down)
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 4:35pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
llaykorn: Lol You is you and yours is who ever is yours |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Laveda(f): 4:43pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Llaykorn..can I? |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by llaykorn: 4:44pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Laveda: Sure! |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by fixedhollies(m): 4:47pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
I entered with all consciousness and alacrity,
suddenly it was like a shady part,
full of darkness yet I see,
I lost some, I gained some,
He was my closest pal,
to part with him is to set apart,
he gave me a damsel,
yet I marked my day,
I became a full grown man in it.
In this little globe I am,
I smelled corruption here an there,
the incorruptible judge was so fair,
with so many fear in the air,
for little foxes that spoils the vine!
It was a lesson, my best teacher was the year,
for he smiles and teaches me with care!
Glory to Jah I am full of marks... I passed! 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Buqqui: 4:51pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
llaykorn: The dude just had to open his incinerator. Damn! Llaykorn you just made My day. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 5:04pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Nubian113: it's not yet 2016...7 more hours to go over here. nonetheless, i wish you a happy new year as well |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Laveda(f): 5:06pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Thanksgiving Let us be thankful... For each new morning with its light For rest and shelter of the night For health and food, for love and friends For flowers that bloom our feet For all things fair we hear or see For the friendship that hope and affection has brought Thankful for the year 2015 Thankful to who gave it all Father in heaven we thank thee.... Happy new year in advance all..... 3 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by IAmNotYourMate: 5:12pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
So today is the last day of the year You're probably on your bed, reminiscing about the year Holding a paper where you wrote your resolutions for the year Only to discover you haven't achieved any this year You should give up on having resolutions, right? New year! New me! Is ironically the scam of the year, right? But on a second thought, that paper should make you realize that you were once enthusiastic about making things right And if you had been committed, things may just have worked out right A good engineer they say doesn't build an engine without a design in mind It isn't built yet but its in his mind Now you want to make a new resolution but you have nothing in mind Don't panic friend, you aren't running out of your mind Life is full of ups and downs, that's how legend put it Its still going to give you another chance, do take it Life is giving you one more chance in 2016, make sure you rock it My name is jumai and I believe in resolutions. Bleep it! 5 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 5:21pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
llaykorn: When did you become so mean? |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Buqqui: 5:24pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
daretodiffer:I'd call that 'fair'. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by llaykorn: 5:36pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
daretodiffer: Sincerely, sister, I wasn't being mean. I would only have been mean - if I didn't do that - to poets that are better than him whom he stepped out to critique their works in a worse way. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 5:42pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
llaykorn: I was messing around with you |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 6:00pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
[quote author=llaykorn post=41509667]Woah! The year has come to an end already. Stay and watch as some of the Nairaland Poetry Club poets decide with short verses of poetry to give thanks to God this yuletide. Happy new. Pls how can i join the nairaland poetry club? Hope i get reply soon |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Qaisar1: 6:15pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
rudepen: I see you #Western |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by llaykorn: 6:17pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta: You don't seem so intelligent. You copied some else's poem because you can't write a line of poetry, posted it without giving credits and you're so brave to say it to the whole world? You're dumber than a dumb-bell. Notice I didn't identify my name as the writer still is mile ahead of the trash you guys have been writing. You didn't identify your name as the writer? Now I understand. If you could identify the mistakes in that poem, you wouldn't steal it to form for us here. Because the main sign of a good poem is "dancing language " a poem should leave you wanting more not as self explanatory as a nursery rhyme. Just shut up, already! What the hell is dancing language? You think we are some bunch of retards here who will get confused and back off at the spilling of your poorly-conjured unexisting vocabulary? Poems shouldn't be self-explanatory? Are you sane at all? You must be a better poet than the tens of great late poets whose poems never need a second reading to be grasped. Maybe I butchered the spellings but the person who wrote that is one of the most respected Lecturers in Nigeria. Your dumbness is legendary. So the fact that the poet is a lecturer made those ugly spelling errors correct? If that poet is a lecturer of literature truly, and he wrote that bullshit you posted, he needs an urgent sack. Something judging by your stupid childish criticism you can never be . It's quite interesting that an honest-but-harsh critique can sound childish to you. I want you to find a name for your ill-mannered, stupid, non-honest and rude critiques you've been jumping around dishing out to people when you can't even write a ten line poem to give thanks to God until you steal some error-riddled work of some imaginary dumb lecturer who substitutes 'is' for 'it is'. 'Is a new year' And before you foolishly assume someone wrote a poem ,check the name of the poet first .Mumu Now, you're officially the biggest fool I met in 2015. You posted a poem without a name to make everyone think you wrote it but your illiterate self couldn't see that it was filled with shame-birthing errors. Now that we've made you see that, you're asking me to check the name of the poet first? A name you didn't put there? You can be a very happy troll in the Romance Section or the Politics Section. Don't try this nonsense with us here again. 8 Likes 6 Shares |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Qaisar1: 6:18pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
barrysome001: SMH... who made him Judge? A copy and paste Judge. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by emaculate99: 7:06pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:Congratulations... You actually won my award for the most intelligent poetry thief who parade himself as the Messiah of poetry with no poem attached to his name. The poetry thief whose stupidity is known all over the world and pride himself as the greatest man who prides in his ignorance and wallows in his stupidity. No doubt you are a "great" poet but a greater dumb ass poetry thief who believes his intelligence is not enough for him but has to steal from other poets. congratulations. Guy! you should critique poems without insulting others next time. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Bosville(m): 7:19pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:Welldone bro.....Bravo |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by emaculate99: 7:24pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:We are only telling you your flaws because you aren't skilled in criticising works. You want to be skilled in it, then learn the act. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Qaisar1: 7:38pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:It's Over! |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by emaculate99: 7:45pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta:It's over |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by llaykorn: 7:48pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by emaculate99: 7:51pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
llaykorn:Let's leave him, he is not ready to learn the act. He will understand later but I pray it is not too late. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 8:10pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
E383: Waiting |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 8:13pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
Hi guys... I think he gets it even though his ego won't allow him to admit it. Now let's not turn into bullies please. He errored you corrected now let him leave. |
Re: NPC End Of The Year Thanksgiving Cypher. by Nobody: 8:16pm On Dec 31, 2015 |
morganacanta: Believe what you wanna believe man, great minds are not verbal aggressors. You've just reached a new low by resorting to invectives. It shows you're very insecure! If you wanna bicker, bicker with intelligence; if you wanna argue, argue intelligently; you wanna critique, critique with humanity and some sense. And for your obvious plagiarism, man, you need to cover your face in shame. 3 Likes |
Excercise In Exorcism / This Is For Dat Texas Girl : 2fine4u (2nd Entry) / My Mother Is My God- Abdulrazaq Hamzat
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 58 |