Mizquote!. U have successfully turned a first timer in the Literature section to an addict. U are talented!

tnx every one.

she went into the restaurant and sat down.

she was there for a while, nobody seem to notice her presence, she felt invisible.

the peppersoup aroma emanating from the kitchen made her stomach to turn. she sat there for over an hour until she felt a shadow on her.

she looked up and caught a man smiling at her. he looked funny for he was short and round.

with her current state of mind and condition she didn't find humour in anything.

the man attempt of smilling was a failure because his teeth were discoloured and looked pale yellow, some where missing, in fact he looked like a 'bushbaby'.

"good evening sir' she said.

"hello,young lady, can I join you"?

"yes sir she said", she was mindful of her mouth because she haven't brushed her teeth for two days.

the man looked suspicious but she thought he was the kindest man she had met.

he asked her if she was hungry, she said yea.

he called the waiter and asked her to make her order.

she ordered for pounded yam and peppersoup with two chilled bottle of maltina.

she ate in relish.

she was happy she had met an angel among demons.

but little did she know she was wrong.
the man proved her wrong.

he was also a demon.

she happily ate.

the man ordered for extra meat.
she didn't decline.

she ate until her stomach hurt. he asked if she was filled she said yes.

he smiled.

soon enough, the waiter came with the bill.

the sum of two thousand five hundred and seventy-five naira.

she was surprised on how expensive food was sold there. but whhlat surprised her more was her savior straight-face.

he didn't behave like he was addressed by the waiter or rather sales girl.

the sales girl, seeing the man not budging turn to her.

"aunty Mi, your money na 2,575".

she was confused, being confused was a much more simple team to use, she was super marveled and astonished.

she looked to the man and then to the sales girl.

she noticed, the man was humming absent mindly, with a tooth pick in between his teeth.

"aunty, abeg settle your bill, I get work wey I been dey do inside".

she closed her legs tightly and began pinching herself. reality began dawning on her.

the man didn't say a word.
he didn't move.
he did nothing.

the sales girl became angry and started shouting, clapping her hands.

people began to gather.
one after the other.

they all came.

that Is one crazy man

the man is a crazy bastard

Misquote, please KONTINEW, the story is making sense. I have been following too. I read of your intention to publish your book. I am into graphics design. I sent a PM, please reply.

she was embarrassed.

she couldn't explain to them. she kept shut and stared at them.

the robust man, seeing the crowd, cleared his throat and brought out his Wallet.

he brought out three thousand naira from his pocket and gave it to the waiter.

she was angry but thankful at the same time, at least the people that had come with the intention of lynching her had left disappointed.

after the man paid, he turned and asked her to follow him.

she wanted to question his attitude earlier but looking at his countenance she had a second thought.

he got out and stopped a bike, he asked her to mount it.

she looked puzzled.
"why sir"?

he looked impatient.
"follow me go, abi how you wan take pay me my money"?

"abeg, climb this bike make we look for room.

her heart skipped a beat.

mrphysics:
Misquote, please KONTINEW, the story is making sense. I have been following too. I read of your intention to publish your book. I am into graphics design. I sent a PM, please reply.

I just replied ur pm.
do well to respond.

tanx.

mizquote:

I just replied ur pm. do well to respond.
tanx.

Already done that

suspence is too much ooooh it look like real

Pls don't keep me waiting too long i beg you..

mizquote if i give you 50 thumbs up i still dey too stingy....
...more alteco to ur sandals

Hmmm

i feel tho pity her lifestyle

it so terrible for a girl

excuse me sir, I don't understand.

he cut her short.
"what don't you understand"?

"you thought the food was free"? he grinned wickedly.

"abeg, enter this bike make we go look for room"', there's nothing free in this town, my dear nothing goes for nothing".

so what exactly do you want from me sir?

hahahahaha. my God! he signed.

"can I have my money back"?,
"did I agree to pay for your meal?, you look smart girl, don't waste my time.

she didn't know what else to do. she mounted the bike.

her at the front the man, right behind her.
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they man barked at the bike man to stop.
she noticed a building, it looked shabby and ugly.

the name of the place was written boldly and poorly.

DAMISA HOTEL.

she signed, deeply.
oh my God! not again.

the girlie o Don suffer o, too early in the new year

he dismounted from the bike and gave the man two hundred naira.

she also got down.

Cain smiled as he entered, in his mind he has caught a big fish, he hoped she was a virgin.

as she entered, she noticed how dirty the reception was, bottles of beer and dry gin were littered around.

they got to the reception table, they was a woman there. she smiled when she saw Cain.

the woman face was discolored, it was a perfect example of bleaching-gone-bad, when she smiles she looked uglier.

her lips were bright pepper red, her upper body was slim, in fact, she had the shape of a lion.

"oga Cain, oga Cain" she hailed.
"longest time padi, I no see your brake light".
"wetin happen"?

Cain smile broadened.
they were a perfect combination of the word ugliness.

" Vero, Vero", I go yarn you matter later.
"find me better room".


all this while, she felt she was invincible because no one acknowledged her presence.

Vero, suddenly looked at her, her eyes strayed from her head to her legs, in a slow motion.

she suddenly became self aware, for she looked shabby and dirty, her legs were dusty.

"who be this one?, oga Cain?

Cain face smiled and said "na my new catch be this, just get me one correct room".

she got the message of what he wanted to do.

but she convinced her self otherwise.

pls oooooh continue

Hey bae whassup na.. You're sucking my blood with this suspense o... Anyway sha, i understand you have to keep the story on track and worth the readership so take your time.. But not too much o.. I'm anxious to know what comes next

She must faint dis time around

more strenght to ya hand in other to type

what da suspense!
Keep it coming don't stop

she's just a sixteen year old girl, who's naive.

she was there, hopeless, depending on fate to lead her through.

maybe, if she had hope of where to stay or money on her she would have disagreed

she would have screamed her lung out to be set free .

but here she is, alone.
no home,
no family.
no sibling,
no friend,
no money.

even if she was killed, no one would know.
no body cares.

she had been hunted right from her mothers womb.
even the woman who sheltered her in her belly, who felt her kick for the first time had despised her.

Nice update nd patiently awaiting more

she felt she was the most hated person in the world.

she felt she carried the mark of inquiry on her forehead.

it was placed on her by her creator, for where ever she go, she was hated.

she was brought back to reality by the voice of Cain.

a room had been given to him. he held the key.

she followed him, like a goat led to the slaughter house.

Cain was amused by the girl beside him, he didn't know her name, he didn't bother to ask.

it wasn't the first time he had cajoled girls to follow him, he is always on the look out for hungry vulnerable virgin girls to prey on.

he was cursed
he knew it

he stopped at room 46.
his favorite room.
he was 46 years old.

she saw him stop at the a room, she saw the number, number fourth six.

she saw him as he struggle to open the door.
she followed him.
he got in and closed the door.

the room was dirty, rumpled bed spread and stained curtain.

the room had a sterile smell, it was Dusty.

she saw a dustbin, banana peels was there with used condoms filled with stale sperm, it looked brownish and she saw a used sanitary pad.

she felt like puking.

cain didn't Mind, he liked the room.
he saw nothing wrong with filth.

he began to pull his belt.

she stood there, hands on her waist.

watching.

Pls continue o, before i die here!

ur posts are really interesting, kip up d good wrk

you have this talent of perfect choice of words. you can combine words perfectly. At the end, tell us if it's a true life story.

she stood there, starring at him.

after pulling off his belt, he began to pull his trousers, till he got to his under wear.

he was wearing a brown short, she was watching him sternly as one does when watching a movie.

she noticed his stomach was hairy, the hair sat comfortable on his big stomach.

he sat on the bed.
" Omo, why are you standing there"?
" come over to daddy",

his attempt of being friendly repulsed her.
she moved towards the door.

seeing that being nice wasn't working, he became angry.

"shebi, you know dey hear word ko?
" biko comot your pant make we do this thing comot for hear"

she moved backward
closer to the door.

when it dawn on her of what he wanted to do.
she wanted to run.
to escape.

she couldn't bring herself to sleeping with a human-chimpanzee.

she took another step backward.

then Cain looked up, he saw she wasn't ready to comply that angered him.

he stood up and went towards her, his underwear almost off, revealing springy dark pubic hair.

he pulled her.
she let out a tiny scream.

"leave me" she pleaded.

he dragged her by the hair.
"she screamed louder".

Cain liked the sound of her screams.
it excited him.

he liked it when they scream.

it was a form of pre-intimacy.

am following u mizquote

bravo

watching in 3D

she began to struggle but he held her.

she never knew a man that fat would be that strong.

he dragged her roughly to the bed.
he was fully aroused and was prepared for the next action.

but this lady was uncooperative. this made him angrier.

"pls sir" she pleaded.

he began to pull her clothes, he had no time to waste.
he was ready for the main deal.

seeing that the man was convinced to carry out his evil plan she laid still.

Cain, was surprised of her sudden stiffness, he wanked her cloth and tore her brassier she was still.

his excitement began to wane.
he enjoyed it when they scream for it stimulated him.

his turgid manhood became limp.

he slapped her,
pulled her hair,

she didn't move
she didn't flinch.

she just starred at him.

he tried servicing his limp member but it refused to rise.
it was there, looking dead.

he stood up,
frustrated.

he put on his cloth and left the room banging the door after him.

he left the hotel, without saying bye to the bleached receptionist 'Vero'.

in his anger he didn't look well before crossing.

he didn't see the the trailer coming on high speed
he didn't hear people scream.
he was consumed in thought, how he spent three thousand naira without getting laid.

the trailer knocked him down.
he was grinded, his blood sprayed the street.
his flesh on the ground like minced meat.

but for a second before he gave up the ghost, his final thought was about the girl.

the one in room 46.
he was 46 years old.

coincidentally, it was the Fourty sixth hour in which a family died, poisoned by their adopted daughter

update please. the girl is really in trouble