Kazna69:


Go to Hell, GFY, IDGAF, cos (MY) death beds & coffins are shipping

Am calling you out bro

Hydrogen9R:

Am calling you out bro

Who be this? Ta lon pe mi?

Jumbledwords:


Err...just a little heads up, if this is you "calling me out", I see battle rap as a vile waste of time and different kinds of energy and have no interest in participating whatsoever.

You scared bruh? gimme my chessboard! (picks up dropped rook)

Kazna69:

You scared bruh? gimme my chessboard! (picks up dropped rook)

LOL

How come in .mp3 after writin' their beef/ no breath control, rhymin' as they breathe/
this is not a laughing 'matter', although I wore a mask of 'Juan' shining his teeth/

I simple your plan/ if you plottin' complex, riddle that grand/
All these are "facts on the ground" . ..I easily deciphered the symbols on sand/

All my enemies see me on fb, and add as friend., usin' their judgement, knowledge/
They can't withstand the punishment, politics/
Summoned T-90, unleashed suffering in cartridges/
secondary explosion shook strong hearts of Government colleges/

You phrase numb jest/ u know not the science to nail bam text/
that's why anything you experiment 'll not blow. . ,..failed bomb test/

one, two, three verse..that's all, ure abatin' trickishly/
Opponent replies and your hatin' bitterly/ ur 'fate is sealed'....all what I just wrote 've been stamped, awaitin' delivery/

How do we sanitize this unruly communion/ of bullies, confucian/
I'm grindin' the metals and water that'll be the "silver bullet" solution/

Beef I chop here,,..appetizers, squirt/ nothin' unique bout the supervisors art/
Even the rhymes you roar about always slip off, so much that....we nick it a big cat fixed with tranquilizers dart/

some of una be dry writer/ wey wan write fire/
You want help? sure I'll be backin' u up, I be mama wey dey pet pikin wey don cry tire/

Jumbledwords:


LOL

I'll diss you on this thread o? Nah jus playing. Dude I was thinking we should like a tandem thread but ehn

dj5naira:


You phrase numb jest/ u know not the science to nail bam text/
that's why anything you experiment 'll not blow. . ,..failed bomb test/[/i]/

*vinyl scratches till fade* OOOOHHHHHHH! (runs & daps him)

[quote author=Sauron1 post=3142708]DA CYPHA
Hold the mic with a grip when i'm regularly ciphering scripts Got no ice on da wrist,but i possess a lyrical license to spit Ma mighty wisdom will tell u 'life is a gift' and 'death is a curse' You are proud of being the greatest when u are the best of the worst I smoke a pound of cess and my enemy n foes say I'm wreckless While my adversaries stay at da bottom like pros playin tetris Calling ma name is breathless, this culture is a race of the rappers To master all of the elements of hip hop and i'm acting it faster If you are fake and an actor, i ma demolish you in a place of disaster You couldn't be on top of "the game" if u was dating the rapper Rivals are facin a master, i'm a living legend like Christ in his time All civillians wait to get in heaven so i put my 'life on the line' I'm nice wit da rhymes, the last of a dying breed as a top alliance Ma inspirational work inspire d

[quote author=Sauron1 post=3142708]DA CYPHA
Hold the mic with a grip when i'm regularly ciphering scripts Got no ice on da wrist,but i possess a lyrical license to spit Ma mighty wisdom will tell u 'life is a gift' and 'death is a curse' You are proud of being the greatest when u are the best of the worst I smoke a pound of cess and my enemy n foes say I'm wreckless While my adversaries stay at da bottom like pros playin tetris Calling ma name is breathless, this culture is a race of the rappers To master all of the elements of hip hop and i'm acting it faster If you are fake and an actor, i ma demolish you in a place of disaster You couldn't be on top of "the game" if u was dating the rapper Rivals are facin a master, i'm a living legend like Christ in his time All civillians wait to get in heaven so i put my 'life on the line' I'm nice wit da rhymes, the last of a dying breed as a top alliance Ma inspirational work inspire d

alright johnny rhymes back in the building with his real kin
I guess he's gon with two filling like he's here for killing
he produce blaze to yal face when u well all kept in place
reduce saint like his case is demonic,
y'all my fans don't panic cause I got a plastic to keep it swarm.fantastic
and I was born old to die then leave older
to son
shit am colder to drop boulder on shoulder on
nine neegars shot,10 left me unstained outside for a witness
so y'all can all read it and see things
no Bleep it am a gang star who expose the ghost from hoes to shows
I go every home compose my naughty ass while holding a rose
look. your chapter closes when my gun close it, and u find your self in hell closet

Kazna69:

I'll diss you on this thread o? Nah jus playing. Dude I was thinking we should like a tandem thread but ehn

I don't get

Jumbledwords:


I don't get

Kinda like a back & forth thing... Like how 'kiss & styles P or Em & R5'9 or Jay & Ye did otis or Game & Nipsey. Just a thought.

[quote author=Johnnyrhyme post=42768200][/quote]
It wasn't finished... Inspirational work inspire d mind or inspirational work inspire design?

huh don't know why people discriminate me and both with women hate am sick and tired these days and which got me into desperate fate all I raised on nickel plate was just for riddle sake ooo God they just made a shizzle mistake on my middle tape the world rotate me like it mom wheel chair and still want to create fear on my f***king hair..... but I swear am gonna glare and scare on their Ruskin there steal pocket and keep my palm rich bitch and seal that rocket deep to ur ass on a mil drid I came into the game stay to show the main my restrain is hot game on your dame just give me one shot and when it comes out like rain....she'll be right at my fucking doors knocking my lucky floors so I let her enter cause I knew she held the scores

Johnnyrhyme:
huh don't know why people discriminate me and both with women hate
am sick and tired these days and which got me into desperate fate
all I raised on nickel plate was just for riddle sake
ooo God they just made a shizzle mistake on my middle tape
the world rotate me like it mom wheel chair
and still want to create fear on my f***king hair.....
but I swear am gonna glare and scare on their Ruskin there
steal pocket and keep my palm rich bitch
and seal that rocket deep to ur ass on a mil drid
I came into the game stay to show the main my restrain is hot
game on your dame just give me one shot
and when it comes out like rain....she'll be right at my fucking doors
knocking my lucky floors so I let her enter cause I knew she held the scores

This is wack.. This lacks the basis of lyricism.

I freestyle when I'm typing/
My hand lettering & sketching pen grip got that King of Iron fist Tekken X Street Fighter when I'm writing/
I split atoms, separate DNA strands, dissect embryos & sh!t babies,/
My bars cuum hard, I push em far, to send young niggas back in time all the way to the mid-80s/
My punchline bars are heavy, rhymes like a fat kid's diet, just eating Mars & spaghetti, I should lose weight fast just going bananas/
I smack you wack rappers cos you being utterly disrespectful, I should teach you some manners/
I'm the best & you niggas know it/
I'm a stubborn one man boko haram terrorizing a nairaland with a bomb strapped to my chest & I'm ready to blow it/
I'm the best rapper on the thread/
Bring out the best rapper you got, I'll cook him for a week's dinner cos I'm eating your best rapper's head, no good rappers left here instead cos the best rapper's gon be dead/

Kazna69:
I freestyle when I'm typing/
My hand lettering & sketching pen grip got that King of Iron fist Tekken X Street Fighter when I'm writing/
I split atoms, separate DNA strands, dissect embryos & shit babies,/
My bars cuum hard, I push em far, to send young niggas back in time all the way to the mid-80s/
My punchline bars are heavy, rhymes like a fat kid's diet, just eating Mars & spaghetti, I should lose weight fast just going bananas/
I smack you wack rappers cos you being utterly disrespectful, I should teach you some manners/
I'm the best & you niggas know it/
I'm a stubborn one man boko haram terrorizing a nairaland with a bomb strapped to my chest & I'm ready to blow it/
I'm the best rapper on the thread/
Bring out the best rapper you got, I'll cook him for a week's dinner cos I'm eating your best rapper's head, no good rappers left here instead cos the best rapper's gon be dead/

Uninteresting and full of stretch... Try and make it shorter..

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PaulThor:


Uninteresting and full of stretch... Try and make it shorter..

I didn't want to do this but ya forced my hand, congratulations but seriously who dafuq are you anyway? No one asked for your opinion so who are you to judge people's rhymes you overly critical little biitch? All you do is just whine & complain "eehn needs more bars, eehn needs lyricism, eehn I need tampons!" like one of them X factor judges. If you think you rhyme, be my guest, otherwise sit there, read people's rhymes or gouge your eyes cos no one gives a damn so why take it so seriously, ok Paul? (pats head)

I spear words on soul bearers the strong keep bearing
clear swords from whole hearers and blunt wearing. shit . you hate two strikes cause it taste right to the devil escape huge pipes force coz your pussy ain't love evil man. am skipped off like race shit even likewise when am racing . am kicked off right and laced with tight, and chasten am the serpent in your garden you better face me cause am rampant and harden when y'all chase me. and u gaze right to my face when am on a race ....to raise the satanic case , don't panic mace I already place it in a safe and steady crave shit in the space my techniques great and it view is reckless like necklaces fade and yet my testis rage against mr festise gay but hey I play on pay to slay spray fortune on y'all day don't ask me how I got that made its me brave slave by the kings pave . I got your chest smoked but I ain't Puff cigar . I Scott rather to walk with these cuff nee gar. search with microscope you gon' find me with tough jigga. I ain't surf neither but I cut slot enough to cough either

Kazna69:


I didn't want to do this but ya forced my hand, congratulations but seriously who dafuq are you anyway? No one asked for your opinion so who are you to judge people's rhymes you overly critical little biitch? All you is just whine & complain "eehn needs more bars, eehn needs lyricism, eehn I need tampons!" like one of them X factor judges. If you think you rhyme, be my guest, otherwise sit there, read people's rhymes or gouge your eyes cos no one gives a damn so why take it so seriously, ok Paul? (pats head)

This is why you haves debased lyricism to its pathetic stage. You refuse to be corrected. Then why did you drop it? Was it not for us to read and give comments if needed. If you don't want to be commented on, then don't post at all. Whether you take it seriously or not.. Your lines were not interesting and below standard of what a text should be.. You can accept the truth or rant about.. I care less..

Kazna69:


I didn't want to do this but ya forced my hand, congratulations but seriously who dafuq are you anyway? No one asked for your opinion so who are you to judge people's rhymes you overly critical little biitch? All you is just whine & complain "eehn needs more bars, eehn needs lyricism, eehn I need tampons!" like one of them X factor judges. If you think you rhyme, be my guest, otherwise sit there, read people's rhymes or gouge your eyes cos no one gives a damn so why take it so seriously, ok Paul? (pats head)

This is why you have debased lyricism to its pathetic stage. You refuse to be corrected. Then why did you drop it? Was it not for us to read and give comments if needed. If you don't want to be commented on, then don't post at all. Whether you take it seriously or not.. Your lines were not interesting and below standard of what a text should be.. You can accept the truth or rant about.. I care less..

Kazna69:

Kinda like a back & forth thing... Like how 'kiss & styles P or Em & R5'9 or Jay & Ye did otis or Game & Nipsey. Just a thought.

Oh? You actually might be better off with someone who's more interested in this section than I am

Johnnyrhyme:
I spear words on soul bearers the strong keep bearing

clear swords from whole hearers and blunt wearing.
shit .
you hate two strikes cause it taste right to the devil
escape huge pipes force coz your pussy ain't love evil man.
am skipped off like race shit even likewise when am racing .
am kicked off right and laced with tight, and chasten
am the serpent in your garden you better face me
cause am rampant and harden when y'all chase me.
and u gaze right to my face when am on a race ....to
raise the satanic case , don't panic mace
I already place it in a safe and steady crave shit in the space
my techniques great and it view is reckless like necklaces fade
and yet my testis rage against mr festise gay
but hey I play on pay to slay spray fortune on y'all day
don't ask me how I got that made its me brave slave by the kings pave .
I got your chest smoked but I ain't Puff cigar .
I Scott rather to walk with these cuff nee gar.
search with microscope you gon' find me with tough jigga.
I ain't surf neither but I cut slot enough to cough either

Too long a rhyme makes your lines sound senseless.. You devote too much time in making perfect long rhymes, and other criteria are woefully put to stakes.. Which includes logic and enjoyability..

Lmao PaulThor seriously you need to dial it down a notch.

who's gon mess with a guy full of stress kiss he's cool for rest geese ...be wise coz if u Bleep em up u trow on nest seized.
dude don't freeze when u see the same guy as police.
he Bleep bastards' light up the matches and burn your house down to ashes he will crash it and match it till it crashes
bitch u get addicted to drugs coz he's known sick
your balls hate been kicked am unknown freak
see rapper he wanna be but he ain't got sh*t so he better quit, let the sh*t pass u by

Jumbledwords:
Lmao PaulThor seriously you need to dial it down a notch.

Most times, simplicity is all that is needed.. Do not try to impress viewers, try to interest them first..

Kazna69:

Who be this? Ta lon pe mi?

No no no no no this not Cameroon Flag this is purely Camouflage






Well anyone interested in a battle should lemme know

PaulThor:



This is wack.. This lacks the basis of lyricism.

PaulThor:

Uninteresting and full of stretch... Try and make it shorter..

PaulThor:

Uninteresting and full of stretch... Try and make it shorter..

PaulThor:

This is why you haves debased lyricism to its pathetic stage. You refuse to be corrected. Then why did you drop it? Was it not for us to read and give comments if needed. If you don't want to be commented on, then don't post at all. Whether you take it seriously or not.. Your lines were not interesting and below standard of what a text should be.. You can accept the truth or rant about.. I care less..

PaulThor:

Too long a rhyme makes your lines sound senseless.. You devote too much time in making perfect long rhymes, and other criteria are woefully put to stakes.. Which includes logic and enjoyability..

PaulThor:

Most times, simplicity is all that is needed.. Do not try to impress viewers, try to interest them first..

Nice deducing skill now comes the but..
But even the Book says too much of everything is bad you're over doing it we Nigeria call it I Too Know aka over sabi we Nairalander & others call it spamming am not going to ask if you rap you don't need to know how to to know good rap when you see hear one
Yet all you did was judge I couldn't even read 1(one)positive comment it was all negative no one ever get encourage by negative reviews only imagine they compose write memorize and all you could say is wack and most importa ... *Ink runs out when typing*


NOTE:There where no comma nor full stop you where to read non stop till you...*ink runs out again*

Hydrogen9R:

Nice deducing skill now comes the but..
But even the Book says too much of everything is bad you're over doing it we Nigeria call it I Too Know aka over sabi we Nairalander & others call it spamming am not going to ask if you rap you don't need to know how to to know good rap when you see hear one
Yet all you did was judge I couldn't even read 1(one)positive comment it was all negative no one ever get encourage by negative reviews only imagine they compose write memorize and all you could say is wack and most importa ... *Ink runs out when typing*


NOTE:There where no comma nor full stop you where to read non stop till you...*ink runs out again*

There's little to encourage these days.. When that time comes.. I will also do that.. Why encourage some lines below mediocre?? Not all my comments are condemning though, some are corrective and insightful..

PaulThor:


This is why you have debased lyricism to its pathetic stage. You refuse to be corrected. Then why did you drop it? Was it not for us to read and give comments if needed. If you don't want to be commented on, then don't post at all. Whether you take it seriously or not.. Your lines were not interesting and below standard of what a text should be.. You can accept the truth or rant about.. I care less..

PaulThor:



Not only is it weak, it is almost meaningless...

(I'm bout ta put this nigga on blast right now)
I think I stand for everyone who's new to this thread when I say grab a curling iron, preheat it & shove it up your whiny @$$! Face it, no one wants your opinion so let it go. You think you're some big shot, is the thread exclusive to you? Are you the best at anything you do? Do you always have to scratch that itch to openly criticise everything thing you see with those judgemental eyes? Always looking for faults in others as opposed to looking in the mirror & stare at the monster you Paul, are becoming. It's a free world, it's a free thread, people can drop rhymes however they want & however they know how to,people have different styles, stories, concepts on what to rhyme about but I guess you're too big a idiot to figure that out now huh? Nobody asked you to play judge & jury & teach em how to rhyme nigguh, ain't nobody give a flying Fûck about what you think. If you don't like it, move on! If you do, show appreciation. You even sound like my aunt telling me to "wear a sweater cos it's cold or get an umbrella cos it's snowing" Fûck sakes Paulie go sink your sh!t face in a toilet bowl cos that's where you belong & that's what you're like on the inside "a toilet soul, all sh!tty & badly in need of toilet paper rolls!"