mitchyy:


I think Fi deliberately lied against Gio. She twisted her narration of what she saw, just to give Jessica an alibi. If she lie about that, she can also lie about the bloodstains. She went too far in my opinion.
And she is my number one hated character!

do you hate her that much

Hatred does you no good

kingphilip:
do you hate her that much

Hatred does you no good

Don't take it personal jeez. Its just a fictional story. Are you in anyway related to anyone named Fi? If you love her so much, you can rewrite a similar story and make her your hero.
I repeat, its just a story and not reality

Audrey!!!! I've misssssssseeeeddddd youuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!
Happy new year!!
Happy new month!!!!

chai, See how exams almost robbed me of this beautiful story. I wish you would never stop typing and the story would never end... lol
To be frank, I've always hated that Jessica. That one evil pass devil. I just don't understand some people. I only hope Gio reaches Nkiru before Jessica or Fi does....cos it would so not be funny.

Audrey nice story you have here n interesting twists

But I don't seem to like the latest development.... The truth is I almost discontinued the story.had to give myself time before commenting coz I read the updates since morning

Gio has been unstable and you just lifted his spirit with Nkiru.....pls don't sentence him to agony with what you are about doing (the marriage thingy)

Instead cos another twist so Jessy will be shamed...I don't care if Gio doesn't marry N.k finally but not to the lady he caught with another guy in school

As for Fio she is a shameless selfish and jealous fool who doesn't know what she wants

hi Audrey, desperately waiting...

Izyyblaze:
Hmm...now i feel like falling in love. Jessica is a nut case...future husband ni,future b/f ko. Felix is such a hopeless womanizer,i pity ivie. Thanks ma'm Audrey for this wonderful story, can't wait for tomorrow to come.
By the way, i love your name,what does it mean please?

Izzy ever so inquisitive, trust you are good dear

I don't know when impregnating someone has automatically meant one must marry the lady in question... What happened to baby mama?
Fiorella- is saying Gio ruined her life, I don't understand oo.. The girl is selfish, stupid

This has been interesting. The twisted plot beautiful too. However, if I have a child in this kind of mess, I will take my time to think especially one who is just recovering from trauma.

If Jessica Says she is pregnant for Gio, and Gio Says " I never touched her". I don't think the next thing is "family introduction" even if the younger sister is an alibi in this twisted drama.

The senator should have a little Faith in his son, and insist on a DNA test for the child after he/she is born before asking Gio to "cement" the relationship. Even an average Nigerian family will insist on that when they see confusing stands on the opposites.

Good work though Audre timms

Anty Audrey is so nice to be back even though am a little bit late
nice story you have here and interesting
twists
Sir Jonathan2787 ur constructive criticism actually encourages the written please keep it up sir

Audrey timms nice story



pls update

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mitchyy:


Don't take it personal jeez. Its just a fictional story. Are you in anyway related to anyone named Fi? If you love her so much, you can rewrite a similar story and make her your hero.
I repeat, its just a story and not reality

I'm suppose to tell u this because the kind of hatred you have for her make me wonder whether one of ur rich friends have left u before

I'm only joking though

AudreyTimms today don show o.. When the update de land

kayemdy:
As for Fio she is a shameless selfish and jealous fool who doesn't know what she wants

Oga wetin happen nw

Y r u saying all these to Fi
Did she reject ur advances

eitsei:
I don't know when impregnating someone has automatically meant one must marry the lady in question... What happened to baby mama?
Fiorella- is saying Gio ruined her life, I don't understand oo.. The girl is selfish, stupid

why r u people just castigating Fi like this

Wasn't Gio selfish all these while and none of you stood up to condemn him n now this my lovely Fi is doing hers all tongues are nw wagging.. Please cut my Fi some slacks

@mitchyy, lol. Number one hated character? It took a lot of guts for Fi to have done what she did. Maybe she had a good reason for throwing her brother under the bus. Who knows? You didn't answer my quick question. *sobs*


@loadux, lmao. Who's the sadist now? 


@phebean008, lol. Take it easy. 


@vonn, darling. I missed you too. Happy everything to you too. I wish you success in your exams. Thanks dear.


@kayemdy, you almost discontinued? But I warned you guys of scenes that might make you wanna smash your phones against the wall, didn't I? Story don finish if Jessica is shamed na. 


@fatemmy, hello. Till in the evening, please. I'm very tired right now.


@eitsei, lol. Just keep reading.


@MidieMeliss, how you doing? Been a while. Please give the senator the benefit of the doubt. Gio has been known to blank out in the past and why would his own sister lie against him? But let's watch and see. Thanks dearie.


@yusufibrahim, thanks dear.


@Ali1king, lmao. Please chill till in the evening. I'm exhausted. Woke up pretty early and couldn't go back to sleep. Just got back from church. My eyes are half closed here.  Please bear with me.


@kingphilip, don't allow people look for your house address o.


@all, thanks for your comments. I truly appreciate you all. Try to give Gio's dad the benefit of the doubt. Of course paternity test can be carried out on a pregnant woman. I don't write a story without researching. So let's just keep our fingers crossed. I'm bone tired right now. I'll update in the evening.


Thanking you.

yusufibrahim:
Anty Audrey is so nice to be back even though am a little bit late
nice story you have here and interesting
twists
Sir Jonathan2787 ur constructive criticism actually encourages the written please keep it up sir

thanks bro, i dont do so with other writers just Audrey

Double post

kingphilip:
I'm suppose to tell u this because the kind of hatred you have for her make me wonder whether one of ur rich friends have left u before

I'm only joking though

AudreyTimms today don show o.. When the update de land

Who's talking about her wealth? That's not my business. I can't help but dislike characters who can lie to your face and even turn against their own blood. She shud control her emotions jare. Now i'm beginning to sound like my friends whenever they watch Nollywood movies

@AudreyTimms i'm judging your Fi based on what I've already read . Maybe subsequent updates will clear the air on why she did that. You already gave me spoilers. Don't defend any of your characters dear. Just let us think whatever we wish and at the end, allow us to be surprised. That's the beauty in it.
But for now, Fi messed jare

@your question, sorry i just read it. I think you're actually right not to capitalize chief justice in the middle of the sentence. Study of English language can be confusing sometimes. Pls ignore that correction

Patiently waiting for your next update

mitchyy:


Who's talking about her wealth? That's not my business.0I can't help but dislike characters who can lie to your face and even turn against their own blood. She shud control her emotions jare

Patiently waiting for your next update

Like begets like so also dislike begets dislike

She has good reasons for what she's doing

She prefers the devil she knows to become her in law than the angel she doesn't know about

BTW hw was ur service today

kingphilip:

Like begets like so also dislike begets dislike

She has good reasons for what she's doing

She prefers the devil she knows to become her in law than the angel she doesn't know about

BTW hw was ur service today

I believe everyone has the right to have a favourite and least favourite character right? As far as she dished out that big lie i don't like her and no amount of words even from the author will change my mind. Only subsequent positive updates on her reasons, if any, can sway my heart towards her.

Christian meeting was great

these mods would have waited for Audrey to finish posting the entire piece before moving it to fp for me to see,this anticipation for the next chapter is just uncomfortable thats why I watch or read the beginning of a story and then the end so I can get a mental picture of how the story goes before starting over from beginning to the end,I just hate suspense

Aunty Audrey pls come and update...am so hungry for an update

3rdlegxxx:

Izzy ever so inquisitive, trust you are good dear

Ever so Inquisitive? How would you know that when you don't even know me. I'm very good dear,thanks for asking. Hope you are good too

The queen is back......

Wonderful story so far. Looking forward to more twists.

Welcome back.....

oya oooo, com nd update ooo

How come no one is talking about my man Felix, the womanizer is back and that's fantastic news ppl. Don't get it twisted, love is a terrible Scam. Felix, shag everything in skirt Abeg. Beautiful story telling Audrey, Cheers

Essyprity:
To be frank Audrey, u are not doing justice to these characters and ur descriptions are still suffering. U didn't get better after unfulfilled promises. I don't know how to begin to point them out but am sure another person must hv noticed what am trying to get at. Unfulfilled promises is more compelling and smoother. Please u are over stressing on the wealth of d Ekwes making almost unbelievable. Make ur story more real except there's something am not used to.

Any refreshment here?!

Please ma'am, always try to encourage writers. Writing isn't an easy task. God bless you.

LarrySun:
Please ma'am, always try to correct writers. Writing isn't an easy task. God bless you.

Oga Larrysun hw far now? I was misunderstood by d writer. Don't mind her shaa, she'll get over it.

mitchyy:


I believe everyone has the right to have a favourite and least favourite character right? As far as she dished out that big lie i don't like her and no amount of words even from the author will change my mind. Only subsequent positive updates on her reasons, if any, can sway my heart towards her.

Christian meeting was great

I'm very sure you'll join Fi's team soonest

I'll welcome you with open arms

Audrey dear, where art thou, update o

Audrey, evening is here o, pls cuman update.

Ha! So many comments to reply. Lemme update first. But first. LarrySun, my secret crush! Hubby traveled, so i'm permitted to do this How have you been? Missed ya.