smileysmiley:
Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

I agree with u
miss ade23ola,pls try and proof read ur work and dnt abbreviate, they are so many blunder,and i noticed u are rushing the story,its a very good story line,i know nobody is paying and u dnt owe anybody any explanation, bt whenever u know u wont make it,tell ur readers time to time,dnt keep them in the dark for too long,after u promised to update and we got no update, do u know hw disappointed we will be,please try and finish it

Good job by the way

Happy Easter and Happy Birthday to Ade23ola wishing you prosperous years ahead

smileysmiley:
Typical pattern of a Nairaland "story teller"
1. Start a story
2. Beg for people to comment when they realize they are getting views but no comment.
3. Beg tirelessly.
4. Update without ceasing.
5. Threaten not to update when they start getting few comments e.g "I won't update till I get 10 comments"..
6. Updates become scanty when the comments increase.
7. No more updates.
8. Report that that their father's wife's mother's uncle was killed by DSS (Daura Secret Service) hence their inability to update.
9. Nothing again
10. Some divert to a new story entirely.
* I am a writer too and I have a lot of unfinished works cause I know how it works. You are writing a story then another idea pops up and you lose interest in that story entirely. It happens to me a lot and that is why I don't even attempt to post any of my work here cause I appreciate my peace of mind. Why start a story you can't end? As for me, I don't really care cause my "imagination filled brain" always gives me a clue of what the ending will be like but I think its pretty unprofessional to bring out an unfinished work unless its a review to get buyers interested in buying the finished work. Although Op you don't strike me as a professional writer cause your use of terms are bad and you have difficulty in making your readers relate with the story, the use of expression is zero and your manner of description is totally poor, I'm not trying to bad mouth you but if you have plans of being a writer, you have a long way to go. It is pretty embarrassing that you are a graduate and please stop using "I studied Physics" as an excuse cause I studied Physics too and my use of English might not be perfect but it will take someone who is into English language to dictate my error. A word of advice "stop using shorthand to write" , it is one of the reasons Nigerian youths are bad with their use of English, take your time to type out the full word cause shorthand will only affect you on the long run. I know I have written a really long epistle but I do hope you will take this as constructive criticism, please don't get defensive dear cause I didn't type all these in a bid to offend you. Cheers!

madam chat me up for whatsapp n tell me the unfinished stories you have with u

Nairaland have made me become addicted to unfinished works

Abeg make una leave adeola alone

1. She is pregnant
2. Alex just formally propose and we all know say konji na bastard so she is on long thing

Adeola! Adeola!! adeola!!! Oya update this now

Nawa it's begging things

efficient25:
Adeola! Adeola!! adeola!!! Oya update this now

so if she update now,,,,,una go still read,,,,,,,?
As for me have since moved on,,,,,,,reading people's story is not by force besides,i don't know why you guys keep begging her to update,,,,she update oh,,,she no update oooo,,,,,,,her business,,,,,,,lets all forget this unplanned stuff and focus on more better things on nairaland.

adeola you don forget us? oya remember us before I count 3

Tnxs guys for all ur comments, am back from my trip Nd d concludin part of my work wil b uploaded dis wk, tnxs for AL ur patient

u have bleeped up already , I don reload this page like 500 tyms , u guyz posting thing on nairaland should plan how to feed ur readers well.

ade23ola:
Tnxs guys for all ur comments, am back from my trip Nd d concludin part of my work wil b uploaded dis wk, tnxs for AL ur patient

l will take you by your own word and am keeping fingers crossed from now till the end of this week

ade23ola:
Tnxs guys for all ur comments, am back from my trip Nd d concludin part of my work wil b uploaded dis wk, tnxs for AL ur patient

l will take you by your own word and am keeping fingers crossed from now till the end of this week.... but you are welcome back all the same

OK. Welcome

ade23ola:
Tnxs guys for all ur comments, am back from my trip Nd d concludin part of my work wil b uploaded dis wk, tnxs for AL ur patient

Ok oooo......pls I have been waiting for a long time for this story.... thanks

Even though u kept us waiting, we'll we thank God u are back... Abeg no put us 4 long thing oolong... #waiting4theupdate

#waitingfordupdate

ok welcome bak,we don enter new week na.oya abeg update na

We are still waiting for "dis wk"..........

nawa oo It remain to crawl and beg .. every day I have been checking if she has updated nothing still[color=#000099][/color]

its been a month plus I have been checking for a new update ..... pls naw

Pls update na, biko

Nice One Op, I Enjoy D Story

pls



























update

Ade why now....... Where are you since all this days

Adeolaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa oooooooooooo, wat z happening 2 u nw? Y didnt u update d remaining part of this story?

Ade23ola, if u've gotten the story line, i fit help u. Na free of charge. Waiting 4 ur reply.

Lets pray that nothing bad has happened to her. If everything was well, at least she would reply us. Its almost three months now or am i wrong?

Ohamzee:
Lets pray that nothing bad has happened to her. If everything was well, at least she would reply us. Its almost three months now or am i wrong?

Lol its a month and a few days... but who's counting...... hope all is well

Rose01y:


Lol its a month and a few days... but who's counting...... hope all is well

Lol. So you even dey count am. You get patience oh.

Ohamzee:
Lol. So you even dey count am. You get patience oh.

yes oooo

horpheyemih6:
Ade why now....... Where are you since all this days

I wonder o.

Ade pls cum and end did story nw