Melancholy:
Hmm... Larrysun, i dey hail oo.. What a scenic story that gets anyone glued as if u watching a movie!

Thank you, sir.

Chizzyblinks:
Come o,Larrysun where you leave this tori waka go,oya come complete am u hear,i will tiger nuts and la casera.

Stupedinluv:
Larrysun pls come back and update.
Officially following this masterpiece *smiley*

Thank you, ma'am.

Adasun:
i would support black to the teeth of a shark if he comes out clean and tell basket dat amara is his.


Nmeri17 ur foresight is a bit apposite to the the story bt trust me,this writer called larrysun can still twist this story like a twine leading a germinating yam.

The real theme is still beyond grasps. Thank you, sir.

Nmeri17:
^^^ because of what I said na. If he likes let him manufacture a shabby storyline just to prove me wrong. Who e go pain pass

Your guess, sir, is quite porous. It's already proving you wrong. If you indeed believe Mr Black would kill anyone, kindly perish the thought. His plans are like an intricate chess game.

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

Woman has a way of coming in between friends.

mofy1:
Woman has a way of coming in between friends.

I totally agree with u

Oga larry, u 2 much jare, ride on

So I just started this story yesterday and here I am.....LarrySun you are something. Your characters jumped to life and it felt more like seeing an addictive movie. Thanks for making my weekend. Looking forward to more updates.
Btw, being a Rhoda/Amara is one of the most unfortunate positions to be in...been there

Mourin:
I totally agree with u

if it was a boy that said it now, u would not agree o!

dtyla:
if it was a boy that said it now, u would not agree o!

"Laughing out loud" Sincerely I would have still agree.

lol so this story is still alive afterall

Mourin:
"Laughing out loud" Sincerely I would have still agree.

indeed u would agree

JeffreyJamez:
lol so this story is still alive afterall

tank GOD my broda

dtyla:
tank GOD my broda

lol i been don unfollow the story, but i dey find story read to get my mind off some stuffs na hin i say make i play come here

JeffreyJamez:


lol i been don unfollow the story, but i dey find story read to get my mind off some stuffs na hin i say make i play come here

if u knw as i happy wen i see d last update ehn......but all dis writers sabi fall hand die

dtyla:
if u knw as i happy wen i see d last update ehn......but all dis writers sabi fall hand die

no blame them na lol....e no easy lol.....some dey write more than one story at the same time.....instead of me to castigate them, i just unfollow the story for a long time.

JeffreyJamez:


no blame them na lol....e no easy lol.....some dey write more than one story at the same time.....instead of me to castigate them, i just unfollow the story for a long time.

i knw say e no easy but at least more updates shud come in especially wen d tori sweet lyk dis one.

dtyla:
i knw say e no easy but at least more updates shud come in especially wen d tori sweet lyk dis one.

offer to pay them lol

JeffreyJamez:


offer to pay them lol

why start what they cant finish

^^^ you two should get a room goddammit

dtyla:
why start what they cant finish

best known to them

Nmeri17:
^^^ you two should get a room goddammit

shut your face goddammit

JeffreyJamez:


best known to them

dats y i like Royver

dtyla:
dats y i like Royver

lol okay...make we no derail person story

I would not have started it if I wasn't planning to finish it.

^^^ amazing update

Nmeri17:
^^^ amazing update

Lol!
The third ecclesiastical walk before the first space of time.
I'm sure you can decode that.

LarrySun:
Lol!

The third ecclesiastical walk before the first space of time.

I'm sure you can decode that.

no idea But I know a Constable () in the Nigerian police force that gets lucky with stuff like this.

me: 'constable decode55?! '
decode55:

Hmmm hmmm hmmm, in for a long ride in this intriguing story.
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"Stories ti take over".

this is a "wao" following