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| Re: Kutana The Great by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:27am On Dec 09, 2015 |
Hi, bro. You've got a really nice story line here, I believe. Over time. You've of course improved and that's a good thing. Your tense usage now has a flow, the story has a headway and I would have really enjoyed this piece but I actually didn't. You don't give detailed attention of events in the story. For example, we didn't know anything about Kutana's father appearance and now, he's dead. You don't talk about the clothing, structures and all descriptive stuffs like so. Try to be more punctilious, it would really go a long way in building the story. Also, your paragraphs often appear like they stand severally. There's been no links between them. It often looks like you aren't talking about what you were talking about in the previous chapter in the succeeding chapter. Simply put, you haven't mastered the art of making your entire story flow like water. Following. |
| Re: Kutana The Great by Igwoh: 8:13pm On Dec 23, 2015 |
Bro where art thou |
| Re: Kutana The Great by Topsyvic(f): 7:58am On Jan 08, 2016 |
Chey u wont cum nd complete ur story ni? |
| Re: Kutana The Great by jephthal: 5:37pm On May 19, 2016 |
please come and complete the good work. |
| Re: Kutana The Great by vickkydgreat(m): 4:53pm On May 20, 2016 |
jephthal: i wud av luved to bro bt lack of coment jst discouraged me, nd moreover av lost d manuscript wen i flashed my fone |
| Re: Kutana The Great by oppsyij: 6:28pm On May 23, 2016 |
too bad but what i want u to knw is dat d more u post d more ppl fall fr ur plot....u were actually doin pretty well |
| Re: Kutana The Great by vickkydgreat(m): 7:16pm On May 23, 2016 |
oppsyij: |
| Re: Kutana The Great by vickkydgreat(m): 7:16pm On May 23, 2016 |
oppsyij: thanks... Well maybe i will try to continue after exam for nw i cnt promise anything |
| Re: Kutana The Great by oppsyij: 10:25pm On May 23, 2016 |
vickkydgreat:best of brain |
| Re: Kutana The Great by vickkydgreat(m): 7:13pm On Jul 19, 2016 |
Hello! Or where should i start? Well..... After all the interceeding of my nairalanders i have decided to continue this story... Update will come tommorow i urge u guys to stay glue...... Thanks.... Ur guy vickkydgreat |
| Re: Kutana The Great by Nobody: 8:47am On Jul 21, 2016 |
vickkydgreat: Better person, we full ground berekete dey wait. Nothing do u! |
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