boyo123:
thanks,all corrections noted.really appreciate. u can checkout my other story i think its better edited

good work bro... wishing it could go on and on Lol.... i'm like an Oliver Twist, i always want .

let there be a second part to this story plssssss LOL

nice story.Pls follow my new story wasted years in the literature section

boyo123:
dnt know how to go about it.will be glad if u can help me

D point m tryn 2 make here is dat,

Since u re Gud in story telling, why don't u learnt how 2 write film scripts,

Guy dat will fetch a lot of Money if u re Gud.

I have seen a friend sold a film script for 400k dollars, I won't mention d name of d script cos I don't hv d ryt 2.

Write films, register for script competitions on Internet if u make d top 20's in d competition I can assure Hollywood agents will contact u.

It won't be easy, but if u feel that u re gifted, then go ahead and make try.

I know what am about t say we anger some nairalanders but if u keep telling your stories online like dis,

Som1 will just steal d idea script it, copyright it and u got notn

nice one bro

[“ I DIDN’T RAPE YOU , WE HAD SEX”.[/quote] Gbese!!!

Good one

Nwanemu dis is lovely keep it up

idensko:


D point m tryn 2 make here is dat,

Since u re Gud in story telling, why don't u learnt how 2 write film scripts,

Guy dat will fetch a lot of Money if u re Gud.

I have seen a friend sold a film script for 400k dollars, I won't mention d name of d script cos I don't hv d ryt 2.

Write films, register for script competitions on Internet if u make d top 20's in d competition I can assure Hollywood agents will contact u.

It won't be easy, but if u feel that u re gifted, then go ahead and make try.

I know what am about t say we anger some nairalanders but if u keep telling your stories online like dis,

Som1 will just steal d idea script it, copyright it and u got notn

oh! ok thanks God bless u

#boyo, boyo, c wot u've done, because of u no breakfast for me. buh anyways ur story don bele ful me, buh i need desert o.
in 2baba's voice: u captivated my soul and evryday i want u more.

that tunji guy i dont know if he did the right tin or just spoilt the whole thing.

abeg epilogue dey(desert).

nice story, wld luv to see it on my tv screen.

bros pls go on with the story ..i'm waiting for read it all

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this is the best story so far I have ever come across.............nice piece....mere reading it gave me goose pimples, I kept on seeing it live the more I read it..........................nice bro I owe you some bottles

"Few days later I got two invitations for interviews , the first companies was to conduct theirs the next day while the second company was to hold theirs next weefast forward. Hanging up the phone I ran out into the compound of our house and was dancing shoki shoki, shoki shoki shoki.people around started laughing at me they asked why I was dancing and I told them I just got a job that news made everyone to join in the dance .i was all smiles throughout the day, I was to resume work the next day .on getting to work the next day I met the other guys that were newly employed just like me some I remembered I saw at the venue of the interview.we were all excited and ready to work that was when I was told that I was assigned as an pa to one of the top managers in the company Mr shittu and I was very happy about it.I met Mr shittu later that day and we got along really well, he was a nice man and very funny too"

Between the phone call "inviting you for interview" and celebration for a secured job, I thought some lines are missing. . It just my proofread Input though.

Carolope what u think? Grade him

NICE PIECE.. ...

TOO BAD STORY WRITERS DNT GET PAID MUCH IN NIGERIA.. ALL THIS NEEDS IS A GOOD SCRIPT AND A BIT MORE FLESH AND YOU HAVE A NICE DECENT MOVIE..

I HAVE WATCHED THIS SOAP OPERA ABOUT 7 YEARS AGO, THANKS FOR THE AWAKENING MY MEMORY AGAIN.





YOU EVEN VERY GOOD IN REMEBERING STORIES, NO MISTAKES, YOU ACTUALLY FOLLOWED THE EPISODE RELIGIOUSLY.

STILL WAITING FOR THE FINISH LINE, WHERE YOU THREATENED TO COLLECT YOUR SON.

kossyablaze:
Carolope what u think? Grade him

Well, not a bad start for a first time writer but he's got a great talent. Let's talk Boyo.

after you cook this kind tory... u no end am well.. nollyplank pple

What a mega write up. The ending was really emotional. I enjoyed your story. KUDOS!!!!!

Man dat story was fantastic .... TAKE A BOW

It will be dishonouring for anyone to read this without at least a thumbs up to the writer.....nice work bro....remind me in the future say i owe you one olosho

boyo123:
am very serious dear

lols she is serious

I was late for work today when I started reading your story

carolope:


Well, not a bad start for a first time writer but he's got a great talent. Let's talk Boyo.

think same too. How u bn

Abeg make we use dis story shoot film,

I really enjoyed your work bro... Keep it up and the sky will be ur starting point. Cheers

this boyo123 deserves a Nobel.... tho I observed a constant usage of "greatful" maybe was an oversight...should be "grateful"....all in all u made my day... hope to meet u someday

boyo123:
Later that night I got a text from opeyemi that reads “NO I CAN’T TELL MY HUSBAND “ I then replied her with “  YES YOU CAN”  we continued exchanging text messages for a while before I slept off.

The next day around 3pm at work I got another text from her that reads” HOW WILL I TELL HIM HOW YOU RAPED ME” but  I was busy with so much work that I didn’t even check my phone not until I got home at night .

Mr. shittu was very excited as he drove his wife home from work, he has already called the nanny that takes care of Benjamin to stay back for some hours that he and his wife were having a night out. As he drove her he looked at his wife and said darling you look stressed out I think you need some rest he said, “come on honey you know I can’t leave  the company now at this crucial time ,you need me there” she replied , ok what about we having a good dinner at the Chinese restaurant  ” oh that’s sweet of you dear but what about Benjamin who is going to look after him” you don’t  worry about that honey that as been taken care of  he smiled, she looked at him and said “I love you “ he was very happy but kept his calm and said “I love you more”.

Now sitting at the restaurant they ordered her favorite which is Chinese rice and shrimps, they both ate while they talk about different issues ,he then cracked jokes that she laughed really had at , they were both having a nice time when she said “ honey am really pressed I need to use the ladies” ok he replied if any man talks  to you on the way you just whistle I will be there in a flash, she smiled at him and said like superman abi ?  Exactly he replied, then she smiled and said naughty guy like you then left for the toilet.  

he was so happy that he could finally make his wife smile again and thinking of how good the idea was when he noticed that she left her phone and it was ringing he looked at the name of the caller and it was her friend so he dropped it, but few second later she called back again so in order not to disturb the other people at the restaurant he picked the call and said “ hi ronke  its bayo, ope is not around at the moment but I will let her know you called when she gets back “ the caller said something and he replied with “ ok I will, have a nice day dear” then  pressed the end button on the phone .he was about to drop the phone on the table when he noticed a message display on the screen that reads” NEW MESSAGE FROM IDEOT” he smiled and said this ope self who the is idiot again,as he opened the message he couldn’t believe what he saw.

Ope came back from the toilet to see her husband playing with the food in his plate,are you not eating again dear, well I whistled  but you didn’t come for me she smiled, he looked at her  with a frown on his face and said well maybe I was busy reading this , he pushed the phone towards her , she grabbed the phone and the message displayed on the screen reads “ I DIDN’T RAPE YOU , WE HAD SEX”.

u finally succeed in causin trouble in dia family, well thats unfair, she didnt deserve it, u should av just make ur stand and not to put her tru trauma again

carolope:


Well, not a bad start for a first time writer but he's got a great talent. Let's talk Boyo.

ok add me on whatsapp 08087575603

nice write up

boyo123:
thanks,all corrections noted.really appreciate. u can checkout my other story i think its better edited

Waooo waooo waooo

Awesome............

Please tell us the recent relationship with the family.....

Enjoyed your story so much.

Kudos man

boyo123:
On getting to my car , I looked at my wrist watch and I saw that it was  11:52am, with the way am feeling if I don’t see ope today am going to lose my mind , it was then I decided to stay in the car till she’s discharged  . Later that day at around 3:00pm i was listening to a program on the car radio when I heard a tap on the side window of my car and I reduced the volume of the radio simultaneously as I whined down the window,” good afternoon oga  a young security man said to me” good  afternoon  I replied, then he said “ I noticed that you have been sitting here for a while now are you waiting for someone sir? “  yes I replied “and when is the person coming sir because the hospital don’t allow people to stay too long in the premises “  the person am waiting for will be discharged this evening so I have to wait” in that case am sorry sir I will have to search your car sir, that is the order from above” I nodded my head opened the door and came down, the security man searched the whole of my car but it was clean he apologized again then left,

It was 4:20pm when I saw a wheel chair coming out of the hospital building , it was opeyemi that was being pushed by her husband then followed by Mrs. Badmus, as they approach their car I came out from my car and walked towards them, Mrs. Badmus saw me first and immediately she made a sign to me to go back but I refused,” good evening sir I said” I said, my boss looked back at me and said “ what the hell are you doing here, answer me ? What are you doing here?” he ran towards me ,just like I was ready for it  I started running backwards , he  became faster  and I ran faster too until I got to were two of the security men were standing I quickly stood behind one of them, he came running at both of us with me hiding at the man’s  back and peeping occasionally, he threw a punch and surprisingly it landed at the side of my face as I was trying to peep, I felt really hurt and angry then came out from hiding and stood in front of him, I guessed he saw the anger in my face because I noticed that he was less aggressive  then he said, “ tunji am going to show you,” now standing in one spot “ before you will end my marriage I will end your life you bastard” , I just stood there with anger in me patiently waiting for him to make a move for me so that I would beat the hell out of him, when I saw that he wasn’t going to make the move I decided to move towards him, that was when I heard opeyemi’s voice from  my back that says “ you guys should stop this nonsense , am really ashamed of you two, look at the way you guys are behaving like kids.

At that point I notice that he has calmed down so I calmed down too, he moved towards his wife and Mrs. badmus who was standing behind her,he tried moving the wheelchair when I said “ wait ope I want to talk to you”, he tried pushing the wheelchair  again when she said “ please leave the chair alone with a frown on her face”  he left her and I began to talk “ope I want to apologize for all the trouble have caused you in your life,I wish I never met you that night ,I wish I never ran away when you threatened me with the police, I wish I was there to defend you when everyone called you a slut when you were carrying my baby, i know  that in your heart you know that I didn’t do all those things on purpose, I don’t know what else to say than just ask for your forgiveness, have made up my mind ope am leaving your life completely, as from now on I no longer work at the company and I don’t want  to meet  our son anymore” I turned to her husband and said “have always had great respect for you,i never tried to spoil your marriage all I wanted was my child” then to Mrs.badmus “ mummy thank you for everything, but I want you to know that am not a gold digger “  then back to ope “ I only want to ask you for a favor, when ben is old enough to understand everything that happened please don’t tell him that am dead, if he feels like meeting his father he could come find me” I didn’t even realized that I was crying by the time I finished talking, I turned my back on them and left.

THE END.  

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u really tried with dis story, good write up, bt tried to check ur spellings and grammer for error, in the next one u are to compose, well done