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Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Preciousbouy(m): 11:18am On Jun 18, 2016 |
Now all we have in mind is to take Parcy to nearest hospital, which is another risk. "I later concluded to take the cash to a safer place, while we visit any hospital to kidnap one of the best doctor... hehe to kidnap a doctor... nahco bring it on bro |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by opalk(m): 10:26pm On Jun 20, 2016 |
9ce story |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by tdemo(m): 4:31pm On Jun 21, 2016 |
please kontinue de story de sweet me..... |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 9:48pm On Jun 22, 2016 |
EPISODE NINETEEN Great-Kali suggested we take Parcy to our normal hotel room, but I didn't buy the idea as i see it as a very big risk. Come to think of it, our body is now stained with blood which will buy the attention of those working in the hotel. "After series of meditation, I told Great-kali to drive down to his house which will be safer. More also, he won't be staying there any longer since he now had the raw cash to get any mansion of his choice... In the next 6-7minutes time, we were in Great-kali's apartment. We took Parcy inside and also the bags containing the cash, leaving them in the custody of Sharon as we drove out to get a Doctor. I was on steering this time around, with a splendid plan of going there as a good Nigerian who picked up an accident victim... -- -- -- -- VICKLIN CLINIC A private hospital situated at the outskirt of the city We got to one of the best private hospital in the town, and to make things look real, I drove in with a very high speed which made the gateman to open up the gate without questioning or proper checking. I took Great-kali in as a patient to the emergency ward, as I kept on shouting "Emergency, please help". Some Nurses rushed to assist us, and I told the Nurses that he had a very fatal accident and need to be examined by a specialist, even before they asked. The Nurses hurriedly left to get the Doctor, while we were alone in the ward making strategic plan on how to carryout our mission. Immediately the Doctor walked in to access Great-kali, I brought out my pistol and pointed it at him. Great-kali also stood up and raised his shirt for the Doctor to view the gun that was tucked in, in his trouser; DOC: Please don't kill me, I'll give you any amount of money you wanted, Just spare my life ME: We are not here to kill you neither are we here for your money DOC: Then what do you want? ME: A very important friend of mine was shot some hours ago, and he is dying, so I need you to bring him back to his feet DOC: That won't be a problem I assure you, I'll attend to him just bring him in at once, because we have to placed him under anesthesia ME: I'm sorry, we can't bring him in, rather you will be going with us right away DOC: But I'm the only Doctor present in the hospital, there are some patients in the labour ward I have to attend to, especially the ones due to give birth any moment from now. As am talking to you there are some operations that need to be done in next one hour ME: That is enough reason why we have to leave, so you can return back on time (I didn't give him chance to explain as I told him to move out, carrying all the medical tools needed) We accompanied him to a room where he took a surgical pack containing prope, some hemostats, forceps, scalpels, needle drivers etc. The doctor got all he needed and we left the room without wasting a dhem time. We were shocked to see ourselves on the plasma TV screen that was hanged in the reception, as about 25 persons were busy watching the live broadcast from AIT news station, with the heading "UNKNOWN GANG EMPTIED A BANK". Myself and Great-kali was forced to leave with the Doctor at once to avoid any suspect. The worst part of it was that I haven't changed my clothes, as I wore same shirt which was shown on the TV screen. It was an image of myself and Parcy on top of the Hummer Jeep shooting spontaneously... -- -- -- -- As soon as we got to the Camry, Great-Kali took over the steering while myself and the Doctor responsibly occupied the back seat, leaving Great-kali with no other option than to head straight to his apartment for the next phase. Which is to save Patata. Great-kali parked the car by the side of his apartment block. "We came out and assisted the doctor with his tools and led him to the room... Sharon's eyes was filled with tears as we burst in; SHARON: Thank God you guys are here, I'm afraid we will lost him ME: Don't be afraid dear, we got a specialist with us SHARON: Is he a surgeon DOC: Yea, I'm a surgeon. Don't worry your friend won't die Parcy was laid on the flat surface of Great-kali money save, which was bent, and his sleeping foam placed on top of it. We watched the Doctor keenly as he brought out a sterile gloves which he wore. He gave me another gloove to wear telling me I'll be assisting him to hasten up everything, and inject some doses of an unknown drug on the surfaces (skin) close to the wounds formed by the bullet. He brought out iodine and hydrogen peroxide which he used in cleaning the surface of the wounds with great caution for it not to penetrating inside the both wounds, caused by the bullet in his hand and leg. The Doctor went to the other stage, by probing the wound with a small knife and a sterile needle to reach the dept of the bullet. He noticed the bullet had already cavitate and displaced important tissues, so he cut the area wide open a bit and asked me to hold the fleshy part as he dab the bloods that were rushing out from the wound as a result of excessive bleeding. "The Doctor used tweezers to get firm hold of the bullets and pulled them out. "He switches on his headlamp to view the wound thoroughly if there was any other bullet but couldn't find any. "The Doctor closed the surgical wound with some stitches, and wrote down some drugs that we have to give to him as soon as he is awake... . . . TO BE CONTINUED... |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Nobody: 10:17pm On Jun 22, 2016 |
Nice write up bro. you are a man of your words. you told me you will update dis evenin and u really do. thumbs up. |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 11:30am On Jun 23, 2016 |
scoutlebest4: Expect new episode tonight, thanks for following |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by rfnextar8(m): 1:12pm On Jun 23, 2016 |
nice write-up. I really love it when you don't beat about the bush like some other people. more ink to ur peb bro. |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by tdemo(m): 8:31pm On Jun 23, 2016 |
sipping my cold Origin expecting new update!!!!!! bro no time ooooo |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 3:11am On Jun 24, 2016 |
EPISODE TWENTY Left for me I never wanted the doctor to go, but because of the patients that needs medical attention in his hospital, I allowed him to go with a surprised package; ME: Doctor, you have done a great job but my heart isn't at peace DOC: Why? ME: I taught after your work he will stand on his feet, but now he has closed his eyes permanently DOC: The opioid, Morphine and Succinylcholine I gave to him in form of injection, is still active. All you have to do is to get those drugs i wrote down from any pharmacy around, because he will wake up soon ME: No problem Doctor, sorry for disrupting your job today. How much is our bill? DOC: You are not paying Sir ME: I must pay, and my bill should be times two because the work you did is a home service job DOC: I insist you don't pay, I have to go now ME: Thanks Doctor, just manage what we are about giving to you as transport (I told Sharon to get me two clips of 1,000 naira note from the brief case) The money was given to me, and I handover it to the Doctor; DOC: Isn't this too big? Two hundred thousand naira ME: 'Only' so you see, Is not too big. We will make you our private Doctor and please don't betray us in anyway. You can as well call us for help at anytime DOC: No problem, I'm Doctor Okowa and here is my complimentary card I collected the complimentary card from him, and gave him my phone number before he left. Sharon rushed down to get the drugs while myself and Great-kali waited behind to watch over Parcy. It wasn't long when he regain himself and started coughing... We were so happy to have him back with us; ME: Are you feeling pains? PARCY: Not really, just a slight headache ME: Thank God you are back to continue your patatatata from where you stop... Yeye jaguda boy PARCY: You are not serious, abeg let me touch the balaries (money) **Trying to stand up** GREAT-KALI: Com'on sleep there, the money nor dey run PARCY: Oh boy le, I'm really happy we made it without encountering big bang GREAT-KALI: Watin happen to you na small thing? ME: Oh boy God dey our side, nothing go ever happen to us till we retire GREAT-KALI: Make we pray make patata fit waka oo, because that he leg don dey bend oo PARCY: Bros if nor be your age, and the kind respect when I get for you eh, I for say you dey craze and your papa na nor go fit waka again. But because of brotherly love and who you be to me I nor go tell you like that ME: Hahahahahaha GREAT-KALI: Tell me say you won use brain insult me na. Assuming you well, I for flog you like 5yrs old pikin but since you nor well, I go lockup and pretend you didn't say anything. ME: Hahahaha, make una nor kill me oo We were all gisting and laughing when Sharon came in. She dropped the drug on top of the TV set, and sat on the ground with a vanguard newspaper she bought ME: Watin you serious dey read? SHARON: But pipo dey lie oo, just this morning when we go rob this bank na news paper don carry am, them won use us make money, na make them go print afternoon edition. ME: Make I see Watin them talk SHARON: Anini abeg wait the thing dey sweet me, make I read am loud for una to hear. The front page say 'A gang of 12 disappeared with a whole Bank' page 7&8. Make una tell me how we take carry the bank for head disappear (She flipped the newspaper to page 7) [b] " Well-armed Gunmen in the early hours of today killed about twenty five policemen and two passersby at a new generation bank during a robbery operation in Lagos state. The armed robbers were also reported, to have successfully carted away N5.2 billion that was deposited by a fast growing company called "Geemas Unique Oils Ltd", and N58 million meant for the payment of salaries for the Local council workers and ATM refill. Eye witness account said the incident occurred at about 10:00am. The State Criminal Investigation Department, CID and the State Police Public Relations Officer, PPRO, who confirmed the incident said the police are strategizing to nab the culprit, but so far had arrested 9 of them with Bullet proof vest at the crime scene. Although the 6 men and 3 women caught, claimed they were customers to the bank and was forced by the leader of the group called Anini to hold the guns and put on the bullet proof. The both police top officer, said the command will make sure that those behind the dastardly act are fished out and severely punished. " [/b] ME: Abeg e' don do. Nor read again, them never see something maybe our next move will be a bank also GREAT-KALI: I think? that one dey, bank job na fast money self SHARON: What next now? ME: Give Patata his drugs let's freshen up and go to BBhotel to share this cash, as e' dey hot SHARON: Yes oo, as e' dey hot na e' take dey sweet oo Parcy took the drugs, and relaxed to take a nap, since he hasn't fully regain his strength. We waited till 6pm before thinking of freshening up. We bathed one after the other, in Great-kali's bathroom and was set to leave... . . . TO BE CONTINUED... Try to read up my first story titled 'My life in ozoro polytechnic' season1. The season2 is also going on now ... |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by thistemple(m): 7:03am On Jun 24, 2016 |
ona no need to rub again na.... 5.2billion and 58million naira no be child's play na. chaii which day God go give me my bread na??. I no need butter again,just give me the bread like that. pls lord... I go use groundnut take eat the bread. lalatiscala help me beg jah na ![]() ![]() |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by jide219(m): 7:29am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Guy your story made fp for nairaland ooo,congrat |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Nobody: 7:36am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Eliboy!Finally you made front page, following you back to back. Please give us more updates |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by anonymousbim(f): 10:06am On Jun 24, 2016 |
This story is awesome More ink to your pen More mb to your data Keep the work going More updates 1 Like |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Skipuru(m): 10:22am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Bros i dey greet you wells, i go holla you on WhatsApp and call you so that i go hear your voice. |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 10:36am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Skipuru: no qualms bro.... All praises goes to Jah, Tnks for following |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Imhandsome: 10:39am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Dis story makes so much sense but if una go again after Dis one ehn 5.2 billion no be small money oo |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by linusbnn(m): 11:04am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Thank you for making my day with this sweet and refreshing story. |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by olanrewaju99(m): 11:42am On Jun 24, 2016 |
Nice write up can't wait for the conclusion. Keep it bro |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by osec007(m): 1:01pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
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Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by osec007(m): 1:02pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
Omo dis one pass Hollywood & nollywood combine e b like say na film I dey watch,abi how Una see am na |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by mattyboy007(m): 1:20pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
As I dey read am, I just dey picture one GT bank wet dey my area like say na dere e take happen... keep it cumin guy.. dis is more Dan Bollywood slf 1 Like |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by CioAngels(f): 2:01pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
When are you concluding this story? Becos you have not told us all anini did while he held the city to ransom. |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 2:51pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
CioAngels: It might be put to an end as soon as I write up to 40 episodes and probably start up season2 some months later... I can't really tell now sha |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by eliboy92(m): 2:53pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
mattyboy007: Nor picture GT bank oo, make dem nor find me |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by djojo(m): 3:03pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
Pls dont stop. nice write up. keep it up |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by AbbieGee1(f): 3:59pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
Mehn I gotta say,this is awwwwesome!,I love supense and crime and evil *muaahahaha ![]() Oh sorry I was caught up,I like hw you delivered it,not scanty,keep it up But ehm,the guy real nme(anini) na you're name na |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by mattyboy007(m): 6:24pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
eliboy92:No dey wunt.. keep bring it on bro |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by whizbee(m): 7:18pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
For the record, this is the best story on nairaland, ever |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by ola4ola(m): 9:06pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
coman continue |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by ogboni76(m): 11:07pm On Jun 24, 2016 |
Wow! That's all I can type....weldone bross |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by brajy(m): 2:17am On Jun 25, 2016 |
I dey feel am |
Re: New Story: 'anini Reloaded' By Ayis Eliboy by Olanireti(m): 8:44am On Jun 25, 2016 |
whizbee:Totally wrong! Did you just join nairaland? The story is great, but nothing compared to other great stories ve read. Have u read CONFESSION OF A ROUGH RUGGED NAIJA GUY, AN EVENING WITH EVA, ALL IN CIRCLE, THERE AND BACK ON TIME, etc? U need to read those and many more, then come back and judge ur statement. Op, kudos to u. But try to link d story line properly. OAU is in Ile-ife, not in Ibadan as u said in ur story. Following. |
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