nice story @op

Oooh boy.. Dis story is dope mehn.. Bt dat 5.2b fit change d story of a whole village ooh.. Anyway i blve u op 2 do more update.. Nepa shall forever favour ur phone battry

It is first class not ''first class upper''. Nice piece op

update ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

sunddy:
It is first class not ''first class upper''. Nice piece op

Correction noted... Tnks

Bros pls update...following patiently...give us weekend specials abeg

Olanireti:
Totally wrong! Did you just join nairaland? The story is great, but nothing compared to other great stories ve read. Have u read CONFESSION OF A ROUGH RUGGED NAIJA GUY, AN EVENING WITH EVA, ALL IN CIRCLE, THERE AND BACK ON TIME, etc? U need to read those and many more, then come back and judge ur statement.

Op, kudos to u. But try to link d story line properly. OAU is in Ile-ife, not in Ibadan as u said in ur story. Following.

THANKS BRO, THE CORRECTION HAS BEEN EFFECTED...
I can't compare my story with others because it's their field, I'm a technologist who determines components of body fluids by conducting chemical analyses of blood, urine, and carrying out experimentation using microscopic techniques and procedures.
I developed the interest of writing stories March this year after reading an interesting story on net. I started writing stories 2months ago and behold I have written 3 stories so far, Why? Because I write and post immediately without editing nor substituting words, unlike a real writer who knows about literature...

So I need your corrections and critics to make me a better writer...

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eliboy92:

Correction noted... Tnks

u are welcome boss keep up the good work

EPISODE TWENTY-ONE

In less than an hour we were in the hotel.
We walked in confidently, as we believed we can now buy the whole world with the cash we got.
Parcy who was limping like an handicap, was spreading his hands like someone seen flying over the moon.
We checked-in, into our normal room and ordered for some Moet and Hennessey which we pumped into the air to grace our celebration.
After lot of noisy celebration, we settled to split the money;
ME: First and foremost I wanna appreciate the level of cooperation and understanding among us all, I wouldn't want us to decline rather we should sail forward to meet our peak and claim more cash into our purses. What we got now will take us far, even if we choose to lay low. So I will say kudos to the great 'LION SQUID'
GANG: Kudus too nig_ga
PARCY: Lion squid till I die
ME: Nobody will die bro, we will all live to enjoy the fruit of our labour...
SHARON: Amen oo
ME: Back to the sharing of the cash, each one of us will have N1.3 Billion from the N5.2 Billion
PARCY: I don quench oooo, Oyibo man say 'This is unbelievable' Wow! See me see money. patatatatata on top ashawo. com tonight, them go hear my name for everywhere even internet
ME: Patata e' do, I never land
PARCY: Sorry boss continue, I go try wait till you finish. Pardon my manners
ME: Better
GREAT-KALI: Patata your own don dey too much oo, why your blood dey hot self? Na this your one and half leg you won take snap selfie put for internet? Even your left hand don turn hanger
SHARON: Facebook and twitter go reject am self
PARCY: So my swag nor get level reach? una go see am na
ME: Are you guys done with your trash?
PARCY: Boss abeg sorry
ME: like I was saying, the remaining N58 million naira will be used to get us a well furnished private duplex, which will be our hideout. If there is any cash left we will get some better criers and two fast cars in our garage. How do you guys see it?
GREAT-KALI: Its okay by me but I don't know about the others, Maybe you should ask them
ME: Shakitibobo what is your say?
SHARON: I think you have said it all, we need a good house instead of coming to this public hotel all the time
ME: Patata?
PARCY: I fit talk now
GREAT-KALI: Talk abeg
(Patata always makes Great-kali to fed up)
PARCY: I agree with everything wey oga Anini talk, but if we go buy criers then make we buy better baby food (bullets) also, because I nor won hear say one day my gun go come do pata_kpo for war front, I want to hear patatatatatatatatakpo_kpo.
GREAT-KALI: You don talk finish?
PARCY: No sir, lastly I nor like all those guns when we get for stock, nor be only normal pistol and ak47 we go dey use na. If we must purchase guns then let's go for pump-action ITHACA37, M61 Vulcan machine gun, Heckler & Koch MP5A3, SIG-Sauer P228, HK45CT 2010model, Mossberg 590, M230 Chain Gun. Then add quality grenades like AN/M14 incendiary, M84 stun, M7CS gas, and maybe M34WP which is even now outdated, but better than the Mk2 hand grenade we have been using
ME: Its okay, those guns you made mention of will cost us alot since we can't get most of them in this country, but we will make arrangement for them through some of our military friends. I believe Sharon knows how to go about it?
SHARON: Yes na, some top army and navy officers wen be my customer for night runs, go arrange them for us, all I need to do is to Zap them well and pay them the normal amount the guns worth without extra charges
ME: Should in case the amount is higher than what we will budget after getting our duplex, then let me know
SHARON: Problem nor dey, na una won make me go run street matters so oo. I suppose quit totally from that job with the kind of cash when I done get, and the ones wen dey come
GREAT-KALI: Ashawo na Ashawo so lockup. You nor go fit stay without greasing your sharwama, abi na lie Patata?
PARCY: No na, you never lie since them born you
SHARON: But I go select person na, nor be before wen people dey select me
GREAT-KALI: So na me you won select now? Nor even try am because I nor go pay you pass 50k
SHARON: Watin I won use you do when Anini dey there? Let me just be plain here, Anini has been my crush since the very first day I met him in this hotel
(I pretended I didn't hear that, even though i noticed it long ago that she likes me)
PARCY: I nor hear that one oo, make unna run una matter, but I nor wan hear say my blood brother contact HIV from......
SHARON: Your father Patata
PARCY: Thank you, abeg i fit collect my cash now? Because part of me don leave this place to my joint
ME: Sharon please split the cash like I have said, 1.3 billion naira each. Patata you can assist her to make it fast, but please nobody should bank his or her money with any bank in town. Its for our safety because those cash can be easily identified
GREAT-KALI: Who fall for problem na'im know na, them dey tell person?

The cash was shared in the presence of everyone, who took their own share instantly.
Sharon who loves club life decided to stay with me that night leaving Great-kali and Parcy with surprise...
"I gave them sign to let her stay if she wants, while they both went out together using the Camry.
There was no doubt that they were going to Parcy's joint.
I was now alone with Sharon...

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TO BE CONTINUED...

this elibiy just dey crack my ribs without mercy....just dey do patatatata...kpo anyhow.... lol..
boss u Neva finish ozoro poly story

Kudos to you. Not easy to be a writer. Even if na ur life story u dey write, not easy putting them together. Let alone fiction. Corrections and criticism are both part of writing. It makes you wanna get beta. So expect and respect it when ppl throw them at you. You are great bro. Following

eliboy92:


THANKS BRO, THE CORRECTION HAS BEEN EFFECTED...
I can't compare my story with others because it's their field, I'm a technologist who determines components of body fluids by conducting chemical analyses of blood, urine, and carrying out experimentation using microscopic techniques and procedures.
I developed the interest of writing stories March this year after reading an interesting story on net. I started writing stories 2months ago and behold I have written 3 stories so far, Why? Because I write and post immediately without editing nor substituting words, unlike a real writer who knows about literature...

So I need your corrections and critics to make me a better writer...

. Are u a biochemist or into medical lab?

kikayboss:
this elibiy just dey crack my ribs without mercy....just dey do patatatata...kpo anyhow.... lol..
boss u Neva finish ozoro poly story

I've finished it, but couldn't complete it here on nairaland because of the anti spam bot that has been blocking my post.... you can get it on other site through Google search, site like coolval and aygist

Olanireti:
. Are u a biochemist or into medical lab?

Medical lab scientist.... However I studied Science Lab Tech (SLT) with option Microbiology

Olanireti:
Kudos to you. Not easy to be a writer. Even if na ur life story u dey write, not easy putting them together. Let alone fiction. Corrections and criticism are both part of writing. It makes you wanna get beta. So expect and respect it when ppl throw them at you. You are great bro. Following

You have said it all... Nice talk

eliboy92:


I've finished it, but couldn't complete it here on nairaland because of the anti spam bot that has been blocking my post.... you can get it on other site through Google search, site like coolval and aygist

tnx...I've read it on coolval

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EPISODE TWENTY-TWO

My entire body was soaked with Moet and Hennessey which makes me uncomfortable, I pulled off my wears and went into the bathroom.
I was about Opening the shower when Sharon came in unclad. She smiled at me as I returned her gaze.
She didn't gave me the chance to talk as she walked towards me hastily, held my curve7 and planted her lips on mine.
We kis_sed for some minutes until my curve7 became static.
She increased the water dripping from the shower using the regulator controlling the flow, removed her hair net and knelt down right in front of me.
She placed my static curve7 which was at attention into her mouth, and did some suc_king job, this makes my entire body to be electrified as I wiped off the dripping water on my face.
She left my curve7 which has being on her custody right from when she entered, and positioned by holding the water bath in the bathroom.
"Put it in" she manage to whisper with a very low tune....
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NB: Scene skipped by the author (Ayis Eliboy) because it contained some offensive and nu_de words...
THANKS FOR UNDERSTANDING...

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That very night I couldn't sleep well as I kept on imagining the ride I had with Sharon.
The worst part of it was when she said she loves me.
I haven't been in love before, so I knew it will be very difficult for us to start up a relationship, which is where she was driving to.
She wrapped her hands around me, as we slept off late that night..


THE NEXT DAY

I woke up as early as possible, did some exercise, freshen up and ordered for breakfast, which myself and Sharon ate together.
She left later on, to meet with the military men, whom she had already arranged date with.
I was really depressed and felt like sleeping all day but there were some unfinished job I need to carryout.
I put the manager of the hotel on call, telling him I would love to see him, he directed me to the pool side where I found him smoking.
I shook hands with him and sat on one of the chairs close to his;
ME: Greetings to you Mr. Manager
MANAGER: Same here
ME: I really don't wanna take your time, the reason why I wanted to see you is that, you got a nice hotel here and I would love to pay ahead, for a particular room
MANAGER: Thanks, you can do so if you wish
ME: I won't be there everyday, but will be coming once in a while. So the room shouldn't be given out for any reason
MANAGER: No problem Sir
ME: Good, so how can I make the payment now?
MANAGER: You can pay directly to me or meet the receptionist
ME: Okay, I'll be right back...

I went back to the room, brought out some cash, and made payment for 12months.

The reason why I paid ahead for that particular room was because, it might be of use someday.
I called Great-kali and pleaded he should come around so we can go look for a befitting house to purchase, having no patient to build a new one.
Great-kali and Parcy showed up in less than an hour and we left immediately.
With the help of some house agents, we were able to secure a clean duplex which is situated on a lonely road for an affordable price of N35 Million.
The house was newly built, but the owner who wanted to travel out of the country permanently, decided to sell it out.
I also told the agent to get me something similar for my family, but in a good estate or open area.
The agent promised to get back to me and collected N100,000 from us after which he left happily.

Myself and Great-kali didn't end our movement there. We went to a 'car shop'. After viewing nice cars from their showroom, we finally bought a 2015 Toyota Tundra Truck which is rarely used In the country for N8million, and a Venza for N6.4 million.
We drove the cars down to the building we bought, and planned to move in by that weekend.

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Sharon came back later that day and informed us that her meeting with the military officers was successful.
She said they reach on a deal, and the items will get to us in two weeks time.
The news got us happy, especially Parcy who made the demand;
PARCY: Mhen I can't wait to get hold of ITHACA37 and M230 Chain gun
SHARON: Let's just pray they deliver the items on time, as they promised
ME: I have a strong belief that they will deliver the goods. So how much is the cost?
SHARON: Actually the person bringing the criers is different from the one bringing the grenades. The Army general bringing the criers said we should arrange N50 million and there about, but the money will be paid after he has gotten them. While the Airforce officer bringing the grenades said we should send N2 Million into his account before weekend
ME: You have to take the N2 million to him today, as for the criers we will wait to hear from the General
GREAT-KALI: I have a suggestion
ME: go ahead
GREAT-KALI: You know we have gotten a building which cost us N35.1Million including the one we gave to the agent, and cars worth N14.4million. In total we have spent roughly 49.5million naira
ME: Ye__ esss
GREAT-KALI: We did some little spending on the way oo
ME: I'm aware of that
GREAT-KALI: It then means we have less than N35Million left from the N85Million we budgeted for everything, which won't be enough to get the criers worth N50Million and Grenades worth N2Million. So I will suggest we go claim the money, we used in buying that house from that man tonight.
ME: Great-kali the greatest, there is no need for that. The money we are adding to what we have left is not even up to N20 Million, so leave that to me I'll chest the bill. My next target is my wicked uncle but that will be after my return from the village
SHARON: Sweetheart
PARCY: Eh! Watin I hear?
SHARON: Sorry, Anini are you travelling?
ME: Yes, I'm going to my home town in 2days time, to bring my family down to Lagos. I have already made arrangement for a nice building which I want to buy for them
PARCY: I'm going down with you so I can see the Woman that gave birth to this wise brother
ME: You all are free to go with me
SHARON: I'm not going because I need to communicate with those bringing the ammunitions. More so, you know the right time to take me to your parents, don't you?

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TO BE CONTINUED...

Sharon has gotten a fiancé. She's deceiving herself. How i wish these people ll learn. With what dey have gotten, its enough to last them for the rest of their days on earth. But they don't stop. Good job bro.

Anini007..lol
Nice story ayis eliboy..following this one to the end

Eliboy aka Anini i dey feel you abeg carry go jare

eliboy92:
CAUTION: Please don’t mind the title of the story, its a task upon you to rename the story as we proceed… lol.
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places,
and incidents are products of the author’s imagination.
Any resemblance to actual events, locales, or persons living or dead is entirely coincidental.

Note: This story is a property of the author AYIS ELIBOY hence all form of copyright is prohibited,
Criticism is welcomed.

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PROLOGUE
In the quest for survival, a graduate of business administration from OAU (obafemi awolowo university),
who happened to be the eldest son of his family of four (mother,himself,brother and sister with the exception of his late father) opted for crime though it is not what
he liked.

Eli was in his early 20’s, he was 24yrs old to be precise and hailed from otor-owhe in Isoko North local
government Area of Delta State. He struggled into the university despite not having a sponsor.
Mr. Jude, his rich uncle did not want the progress of his family. His immediate brother, younger sister and
mother took it as a challenge to make sure he achieved his goal to become a graduate.
He finally succeeded but due to unemployment, he had no other choice but to work out a way to make his
family happy, instead of suffering in the village…
Whether he will succeed or fail, we shall get to know.
WATCH OUT FOR “ANINI RELOADED”

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imagine me with dah kinda money.. oluwa pick up ma flashing

come n continue oö

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EPISODE TWENTY-THREE

Sharon's question look weird so I never bothered to answer her. I ended up smiling at her before leaving them all in the room.
I went outside, took a seat in the bar of the hotel and dialled my Mother's line;
ME: Hello mummy!
MUM: Hello my son, what is wrong? We haven't heard from you for some days now
ME: Nothing is wrong ma. You know my friend Great-kali who came with me to the village the other time?
MUM: Yes, was he not the one that paid for my operation and even bought us things?
ME: Exactly, he has been the one helping me with all the money I have been sending to you guys
MUM: God will bless him oo, the money you sent earlier this week has even finished. You know your sister, she collected about fifty thousand which she used to enrol WAEC GCE and paid for expo which they call runs. Lucky on his own part collected fifty thousand naira too, I don't even know what he used it for. I've been using the rest to cook for them
ME: Mummy don't worry, the last money I sent is a peanut. Great-kali introduced me to some client who awarded a contract worth N1Billion to me this week, as I'm talking to you the money has been paid into my account, so am bringing you all to the city
MUM: **Singing**

" I have a Father
who will never ever fail me
I have a Father
who will never ever fail me
Jesus is my father
He will never ever fail me
Rock of ages
never ever fail me…."

ME: Mama its okay, just tell Lucky and Joy to get prepared, that I'm coming in 2days time
MUM: I'll my son, hehehehe! My enemies has been put to shame by the God I serve
ME: Yes oo mama, just be praying for me because more are still coming
MUM: I don't sleep my son, I always put you in my prayers
ME: Thank you mama, bye bye
MUM: Bye my son
**call hanged**

Money they say 'changes all things'. Imagine the joy in my mothers voice.
I was very happy to have made it, even though it came via a wrong means.
My aim was to take my family out of poverty, and that I have achieved today, after hearing my mothers voice..

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The next day the house agent called me that he has seen a duplex that suit my demand.
I dashed off to see for myself, and behold the building was wow!.
I made payment immediately, furnished the house and bought a 2007 Rang Rover HSE for my mother.

I knew my mum won't accept the car easily, but she dhem need's it, and must accept it when she come.
I went back to the hotel to get myself prepared for my trip to the village the next day.
I was still arranging my things when Great-kali and Parcy came in with a surprising news;
ME: Why are you guys smiling like a rat who successfully jumped over a trap?
GREAT-KALI: Guy na we dey run am
ME: Tell me something Joor
PARCY: We are storming your villa with convoy
ME: See your mouth like convoy, make una talk jare
PARCY: Myself and Great-kali just bought the latest Lamborghini Gallardo that is invoke. You can check through the window
(I rushed to the window to take a view)
ME: You don't mean it, that is 2014 model
PARCY: Ya, the white one is mine, while the blue is for Great-kali
GREAT-KALI: That baby out there worth $150,000 and you know what that means
ME: You mean you guys bought a car worth 40 million naira?
GREAT-KALI: No No No No! Don't skip any digit, you can do the conversion
ME: Okay I'll do that
(I brought out my cell phone and made the conversion using the present dollar rate and arrived at N41,933,250)
ME: I'm happy for you guys, this calls for celebration
PARCY: Ya mhen, hurry up so we can go out...

I dressed up after arranging all am taking with me to my village, and joined them.
We went to 'Bar Beach' which is one of the several beaches on the Atlantic Ocean, situated at Victoria Island. There we drank alot of alcoholic drink and ate lot of suya and barbecue.
I remembered Sharon wasn't with us and called her to come over.
She was sounding weird on phone, which made me code that she was right under a man...

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TO BE CONTINUED...

nice update

more updates pls!!!!!!

eliboya since am on nairaland have never follow a movie or should I call it story, I only look for the ready made ones.... big twaale for you and more spirit to Ya PC. make you continue dey give us patatatatat kpo kpo.

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