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Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 11:15pm On Jul 06, 2016 |
Rex1:yes dear. Thanks |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Airyprince(m): 1:32am On Jul 07, 2016 |
smartestpopqueen i must say you got quite a story here got me glued to thread ghostmode deactivated nice work |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by elmogaji(m): 6:21am On Jul 07, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN: Lol......Okay 1 Like |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 6:50am On Jul 07, 2016 |
Airyprince:welcome on board..... Nice to have yhu here |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Presh900(m): 8:39am On Jul 07, 2016 |
Nyz job 'ere ....keep it up. |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 8:52am On Jul 07, 2016 |
Presh900:thanks... Long time.... |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by dada4138(m): 11:11am On Jul 07, 2016 |
queen u're taking too long to update naw...very hungry for more |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 2:09pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
dada4138:please, kindly be a bit more patient with me... Been busy with some stuffs. Will update A.s.a.p. |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 2:50pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
[size=30pt]KWANTINUE[/size] [b][color=006600]Prof Jane steps back then, and a look of horror crosses her face, but I stop it, before she can say anything. “No one knows what happened in here,” I assure her. “Our secret is safe.” She looks at me dubiously, “How. . .?” then shakes her head, and gets dressed in rapid order. Once Jane is fully presentable, I lean into her ear, and whisper, “I expect you to keep teaching. You won’t regret it.” She looks me deep in the eyes, before blinking, and seeming to come back to herself. “I expect you won’t miss any of my Math Club practices, Mister Smith?” I smile as the professor façade returns. She’s going to be alright. I wish her the best of luck, and leave her office. I get a few glances from some of the students, but am quickly forgotten when there is a commotion outside the classroom. Running out, I have to grab someone to find out what’s going on. “Something’s happening outside,” is all the response I get, before I’m swept along in a tide of students heading for the exterior doors. The sun hits my eyes, and combining that with the white snow all over the ground, I’m momentarily blinded, as a communal gasp sounds around me. Blinking to clear my eyes, I start looking around to see what the fuss is about. And almost shit myself. Floating a few feet off the ground are a couple of older teenagers, maybe eighteen or nineteen, one boy, and from the familial resemblance, I’m guessing his sister. In one of his hands is a floating fireball. She is scanning the crowd, and her eyes look odd, as if. . . yes, her eyes are the color and reflectiveness of chrome. Around each of their necks is a necklace that appears to be made of some type of clear gemstones, each one about the size of my thumb. They both have on white shirts and white pants, with matching shoes. Her hair is red, and tied back into a ponytail, his dark brown and cropped close to his head. The girl’s eyes land on me, and I shiver. It’s almost as if I can physically feel her gaze. Her hand lifts and she points at me, and then both siblings are looking at me, and there is no mistaking the sensation that spreads across my skin. They land softly on the ground, and start walking towards me. The smile that graces their lips would look peaceful, if not for the flickering glow of the man’s fireball reflecting off of them. There is no possible way that even I could predict what they do next. “Prepare for trouble,” says the girl. “Make it double,” the boy follows up. I groan, as the rest becomes predictable. “To protect the world from devastation,” “To unite all people within our nation,” “To denounce the evil of truth and love,” “To extend our reach to the stars above,” “Emmanuella,” “Emmanuel,” “Team rocket blasts off at the speed of light,” “Surrender now or prepare to fight,” I stumble mentally when I don’t hear the final line delivered. That can’t really be their names, can it? “Pokemon?” I ask, trying to keep the derision out of my voice. “Really?” I can tell they’re dangerous, and likely another one of the alien’s experiments. “We’ve been given god-given powers to cleanse the world of evil-doers like you,” Emmanuel snarls at me. I try hard not to laugh at the way he worded that statement. Emmanuela fingers the necklace around her neck, before saying, “Each of these is a fallen soul. Each one is someone who’ve gained their powers from the devil.” Great, I think, religious fanatics. “Submit to us now, and we will make your death painless,” Emmanuel spouts, and I realize these lines are rehearsed. If what she said is true, and each clear gem is another person with the gene that the alien’s were activating, then they’ve already taken out quite a few people. Only now, do I realize that there is a large gathering surrounding us, and that I’m no longer on the edge of the group. People are looking from the Rocket twins to me, and back again. Most of them likely think this is some performance being put on by the drama department. They don’t know the danger they’re in. Before I can think to warn the crowd to get away, Emmanuela speaks up. “Answer our demand now, or we will assume your response.” I start to form a switch, in an attempt to turn off their abilities, but the girl with the strange chrome eyes shouts, “Watch out brother, he’s attacking!” Without any further warning, Emmanuel throws the fireball he’s been holding at me, and I have to dodge to the side, landing hard on the snow packed ground. I also lose the switch I’d been preparing. The crowd “oohs,” as a tower of flame goes up where I’d just been standing. Don’t they understand the danger? I can see that those closest to the pillar are backing away uncertainly, shielding their faces from the heat. “It’s not too late to come to the light,” Emmanuel informs me, and I can see him preparing another fireball. T.b.c. I appreciate everybody.. Yhur comments and Pm's are what keeps on Fueling this Updates... [/b][/color] 5 Likes |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Presh900(m): 4:39pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:. Yea...been in ghost mode since. Jst wanted you to knw thah i still be ya no1 fan 1 Like |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by RealLordZeus(m): 5:19pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
seriously hon... You are the hero |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by elikzeey(m): 9:29pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
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Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by elikzeey(m): 9:32pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
your work is great, keep it up
can't wait for your next updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by jerry20019(m): 9:41pm On Jul 07, 2016 |
SMARTESTPOPQUEEN Wow! How do I start? Well , my comments on this forum is not up to ten which means I don't really comment unless I it is important. I will be an ingrate if I don't appreciate all that you have posted for us all to enjoy. I really like your story, I have never seen anything like it. You nearly turned me to a W A N K LORD( I had to space the word so that it can show, cos it's like nairaland automatically sensored the word). I am a big fan of Sci fi and if you have any story apart from this kindly send me the link. Thank you |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Nobody: 12:24am On Jul 08, 2016 |
It's been awhile I commented on this thread ooo but this is the best episode I've read, I feel he should more swift in making his switches |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Beebzz: 1:23am On Jul 08, 2016 |
since d first day that i've been following this story I've fell 4 it. pls my Queen,can't wait 4 d next update. m dying small Small oooo |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 9:09am On Jul 08, 2016 |
RealLordZeus: ![]() |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 9:11am On Jul 08, 2016 |
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Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 9:14am On Jul 08, 2016 |
jerry20019:in Oladim001's tone... THATS MUSIC to the ears...... Welcome..... |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 9:17am On Jul 08, 2016 |
Dat9jakid:good... Buh, i must tell yhu, this is'nt even tha best yet... Stay tuned for more BEST's.... Yhu Dis9JAKID |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 9:25am On Jul 08, 2016 |
Beebzz:oh my! ![]() ![]() |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 12:00pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Hmmmmm.... Finger's crossed... This is wow! Sister... Keep it up.. |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 12:03pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Prof Jane Janet? Stephanie? Stacy? Tina? Loveth? Alice? Rose? Mrs Stilinsk?, Vage? Varand? and Mary? Weldone Queen... |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Oladim001(m): 12:25pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Who are the twins. And whats their motive in all this saga. How were they able to identify Nick as someone with powers. These are questions deep thinkers should be asking. Can't wait for the next update. |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Vidamia(m): 5:53pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
i'm out of ghostreader shell to comment on this thread.......to say the fact, hardly i do comment on threads. Qudos to you smartestpopqueens. i read alot of sillhouttee books but this story of yours is da nuclear-biological-atomic bomb. thank gawd that me and my wife are living in state apart.......if not, you will read a story that one of your reader have Bleep his wife to death.......moreover keep the update flowing, the world is at your feet..... |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Beebzz: 8:16pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Nice words, good character, conversational, intelligent thinking, that's the least I observed u got,abeg more ink to ur pen,more data to smartphone and more power to ur battery( phcn out). can't wait 4 d next update Queen |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Airyprince(m): 9:15pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Oladim001:look a deep thinker has be sighted ogun must hear diz |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 10:31pm On Jul 08, 2016 |
Hello Famz.... Yhu've missed me? ![]() ![]() |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Rex1(m): 8:07am On Jul 09, 2016 |
PrinceOFprince:n u 2 1 Like |
Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by YASDON(m): 9:17am On Jul 09, 2016 |
PrinceOFprince: Alright waiting 4 u |
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