ELYMAXiimus:
I forgot I wrote this



I'll slap this fatso till my hand sticks to his face/

I'm beast in this place/ I'll beat ibime till he's picking a race/

like bacteria, I'm bringing d K./ clips will be sprayed./ skin will be laced with metals like military display!/

I saw his pix; his f*cked up neck din't show/
same direction his skull and belly goes/
he looks like a frog unhealthy to ... Hop on steady toes/

this nigga's so fat, he can't jump off the floor/

yet he talking tough/ Ironically, fat niggas always have a timid fuck1ng c0ck/

b1tches say his d1ck is invisible like the girl in fantastic four/


I don't like bis, I'd rather stay jobless/

and while I stay jobless, I'll aim four techs/

shoot clips at bis like plays on set/


i'mma bring tha gun in/ to uplift him when the clips are popping/ It's like PLAYING DANGER DASH when i'm trigger-clutching/ one flick of ma finger takes this b1tch @ss jumping/



we gassed you! We don't think your lyric sick

you ain't got disses, b1tch.

we only see beef in your flows, when you rinsing meat


fvck it!

I kill the best with my disrespect

you just a fat @ss nigga with t1ts n breasts

I bring wits to flex. You bring sh1ts compared.

Your punches softer than bread and flour meal that's wet.

You couldn't drop hard shits, if you only eating bread

...
Listen, twerp

Stop claiming you teaching vets

or I'll bag everyone in your school like fishing net


Then I hop in ya hood with forty gats

I'll bring your whole street to an end; that's a cul de sac



max-cray

JigsawKillah:



you're rusty as hell

Subconscious:
Feeling my rap is omen...then I go against the art
If Christians were open-minded , truth will keep us smart
Every seconds was a surprise ..I took Trump spot in slander
Politics a rehearsal ..sky was cracked wide open for Sander
I'm in a dream lighting a candle on Ghandi's grave
Looking for reasons to know ugliness in earth's cave
My solemn promise to RAP was to build justice and love
In the struggle ...I ask God for a staff and a dove
Our time was stolen ..we never cast our prayers on pyramid
Spiritual flaws unspoken to the stars we invalid
Nothing ever lasts...doctors did surgery, what about soul?
Imitation is confined doom...man lost its goal
Mistakes turned my teacher ...the preacher can keep his sermons
Many have been dumb like white horses came from Germans
Slaving a culture ..revolution becomes myth to the youth
Sane minds clapping to congress drama ...only "I" attest truth
The passion of our cries won't wash away the crosses
To them Africans are at losses ...Catholics were born bosses
We had miserable laughter thinking Jews share our views
History has its tape ...many deceived by Goodluck shoes

ELYMAXiimus:
That's an Irony.

P.s I wrote that verse as a rebutal to one of bis's drops sometime ago and forgot to post it.

JigsawKillah:


if you like, claim you wrote it last year, still wack!

JigsawKillah:


if you like, claim you wrote it last year, still wack!

ShaqFu:
Hey. What's a bar?

ELYMAXiimus:
Lmfao!

ShaqFu:
Just a question, and you laugh? Come on.

ELYMAXiimus:
hope you know I wasn't laughing at you? ... Or, maybe I was wrong in my discernment of why you asked that question.

ShaqFu:
Hey. What's a bar?

goshikid:
Its been long i came here! jezz!!! everywhere is so dry and dirty. . . . jigsawkillah do ur job

JigsawKillah:


a bar is normally 2 lines

ShaqFu:
Was thinking it's a line. Though I heard it varies, when I did Google search, was told same thing.

JigsawKillah:


it varies. originally, it is 2 lines. in here, it's 4. some sites say 1.

ShaqFu:
http://www.thestateofhiphop.com/article-05-writing-16-bar-verse.html

This site say it's one. If it's 4 then that's a quatrain. So 16 bars will be how many quatrain exactly. And do you do syllable count also in rap?

JigsawKillah:



before I came here or knew those Facebook groups, I knew it was 1 line = a bar, and then 16 bars normally makes up a verse. then I knew NL where a quatrain makes up a bar. 16 bars equates to 64lines here.

and no, we don't do syllable count in rap except we're talking about rhymes

ShaqFu:
Hmm. Nairaland is indeed different. Will start dropping bars though and I intend to do so following the norm in that like I posted.

Or maybe i'll do more digging to know for sure.

ShaqFu:
http://www.thestateofhiphop.com/article-05-writing-16-bar-verse.html

This site say it's one. If it's 4 then that's a quatrain. So 16 bars will be how many quatrain exactly. And do you do syllable count also in rap?

JigsawKillah:
all I ever wanted to do was write music
become renowned for one fact; I write true shît
thugging was fun, the doggies and all, we fûcking was young
I was getting leaner, mummy then thought: something was wrong
lips blacker than coal, never became a rapper with soul
was thinking fame, bîtches game, ice dapper than owl's
poetry was the way out, sorry Jeff, I lost it too
this what happens when you let your alter ego take over
I was thinking too many paybacks, niggas call me a fake soldier
though I still be popping clips each time I cruise in the range Rover
in my mind I was doing fine, but fûck, I started loving too
denied all my niggas just to be with Ejiro, that was fûcking true
Jeff, it's you I am talking too
you think I changed you? nah I think you changed me
it wasn't me inspiring all the shît you engaged in
yea I like murders, but you wanted the paybacks
I do the acts, you tell me who and how under the claim: rap
you beat me to Hannah, I wanted to say that
you picked her because she could make your dirt clean
you beat me to the smoking, I never knew you at thirteen
wanna see a monster? Jeff, look in the mirror
I'm a badass, but when compared to you, I'm looking inferior
J E F, F E R
Y, I guess that last part rhymes with Best with bars
it was you who decided to start killing without make-ups
fûck! you taking over again, until I wake up

JigsawKillah:

this what happens when you let your alter ego take over
I was thinking too many paybacks, niggas call me a fake soldier
though I still be popping clips each time I cruise in the range Rover
in my mind I was doing fine, but fûck, I started loving too
denied all my niggas just to be with Ejiro, that was fûcking true
Jeff, it's you I am talking too
you think I changed you? nah I think you changed me
it wasn't me inspiring all the shît you engaged in
yea I like murders, but you wanted the paybacks
I do the acts, you tell me who and how under the claim: rap
you beat me to Hannah, I wanted to say that
you picked her because she could make your dirt clean
you beat me to the smoking, I never knew you at thirteen

mikuz:

Don't make me unleash my cannibal rage/
He's a broke tailor earning a paltry amount of wage/
So no matter how much he brag on this page/
We ll always know that this 'Goose sew'... but it ain't in 'Zamfara state'!/

dj5naira:


Rhymeables.

Hydrog3n:
'bout time,well hit me up in the future if you need my feature in you mix-ture

Hydrog3n:
This has to be the most GAY-ish rap ever,those last bars....damn