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Pls Review And Drop Your Comments On This Poem (Juice). by AndyAustin(m): 8:08am On Aug 18, 2016 |
There used to be that juice That made me innocent, That made me simple, That made me care. There used to be that juice That permeates all about me Making them tender, naive and soft. They used to fill my days And saturates my world... Though, that world I see now, only when I retrospect.. Of days I smile, laugh with all my hearts, Of when I still made friends...and more when that circle was with no selection. There used to be that juice that filled my world It used to be but now no more. Sometimes I wonder where it has gone Sometimes I wonder how it has gone Maybe with those giving hands, it receded Or ever since the rising sun no longer met me on the bed. |
Re: Pls Review And Drop Your Comments On This Poem (Juice). by Kruzilano(m): 8:54am On Aug 18, 2016 |
Its cool.. Message so simple.. *unflavaoured juice* I would name it.. Would be fantastic if u can make em Rhyme. More grease to your elbow 1 Like |
Re: Pls Review And Drop Your Comments On This Poem (Juice). by AndyAustin(m): 9:32am On Aug 18, 2016 |
Thanks @ Kruzilano. |
Re: Pls Review And Drop Your Comments On This Poem (Juice). by Kruzilano(m): 9:47am On Aug 18, 2016 |
AndyAustin:you welcome.. Why not move over to the poem for review section... |
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