nice one....... thumbs up fiyah

fiyah!!!!!!!! we are waiting please serve it hot to us. am glued to your story always checking if you have updated.

Bae, Cm And Update Na?

fiyah nahhhhhhhh... its nt fair o

Your write up is one of the best I've read so far here. Keep up the good work and you are going places........ oya update biko

Nice one dear...kip it up

Mrlemuel:


See This Guy O, Who No Sabi Beta Thing?

Keep It Rolling

TGOLD1, THEBLESSEDMAN, MRLEMUEL, #HAPPYJOLLOFRICEDAY , Abeg Where Is Mine Oh



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fiyah now. why are you delaying the post. Please update now thanks

Nice work, can't wait for the next chapter

fiyah:


I hope you do believe me when I tell you you are good now

Nope

Waiting for next update.

ROYH:
Keep It Rolling
TGOLD1, THEBLESSEDMAN, MRLEMUEL, #HAPPYJOLLOFRICEDAY , Abeg Where Is Mine Oh


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Nna, Na Eba Dey Here O, U Go Chop?

jealousy jealousy tobi♣♧♣♣♣♣♣♣♣♧♧♧♧♧♧♣♧♣♧♧

fiyah,nice write up.pls we re waiting for the next write up.

u wrote #a hole through ur curtain# since last year but u did not finish it .I hope this one won't b a half story

this is a nice write up I must commend. suspense filled no always wanting u to know what's up next. fiyah I u a thumb u for a job well done. Pls d next update should not keep me waiting

:Dthis is a nice write up I must commend. suspense filled no always wanting u to know what's up next. fiyah I u a thumb u for a job well done. Pls d next update should not keep me waiting

Bae update na

I'm really enjoying this pls update na

Don't tell me fiyah hasn't updated since morning. I just got the time to check and I'm kinda shocked

Opeoluwa99:
Wow This is beautiful Madam Fiyah you are gifted
Tobi(big) the naughty boy,you choose the right names I can't stop laughing, this update really cracked me up Jealousy Tobi

ThIs Man juzz dEy spoil My mood the morE

LOLz

I hope Fiyah don't get angry with me for this but I will like to tell friends and fans of Kayemjay that he is resuming Shadow Corp tonight at 8pm...Expecting more interesting update from you too oooo

you're exceptional fiyah thanks for this piece keep it coming. yagazee grandpa comman see o

Mrlemuel:

Nna, Na Eba Dey Here O, U Go Chop?

Itz 2 Local, I Run 4 My Dear THROAT

ROYH:
Itz 2 Local, I Run 4 My Dear THROAT

Lol, Too Local Enh? Na Wetin Mohammad Ali Dey Chop Be Dat O.

Good story!
I was supposed to travel with my unfinished 'americannah' as I'm on vacation right now but once I started this story I knew I had me a companion for the next few days.

On commenting on the story itself, I'll say be you, be original but do mind the little typos here and there. Another thing I noticed is the story sometimes being made to look as though it's being narrated by a character. That's not the case right?

......

Mattkent:

Nope
Waiting for next update.

you have issues

Tobi & Tori has both fallen in-love with each other without them knowing it but there wil be lots of obstacles especially with Joanna
Fiyah u are doing a g8 job

fweshberry:
kudos to you fiyah but please don't keep us waiting

Is ur own Fweshberry named Adeola, a Student of LAUTECH, department of Computer Science and Engineering?

just let it be like dat coz any oda obstacle dat would block dem is not allowed by mi.

Fiyah the mastermind...

And why is Jo always bumping into Tobi to destroy his plans...

I guess there will be trouble whenever Jo catches Tori and Marcus...

And Tobi should rather wake up to reality that Tori is meant for him. I just pray this guy doesn't loose a gem in Tori...


I wonder what the point will be or how there word bash point will be wen Tobi tells Tori that he rocked her to sleep.

Tori has a very emotional background, and I hope you are not bringing it up shaaa oo..


Good Job @Fiyah, love this work very much coming from a medical student...