vandops10:
so u start a story behind my back
Am updated sha
no greet me

Awww no vex. I gave some mentions n i tot u were among. I even felt that u weren't online. Mabinu

yorhmienerd:

For real??

Yes sir

Just as I wanted to say "after 36hours" I saw the dedication Osheey bibi . But you still owe us 1 more before you crash sha . God bless you.

Nice one m'Lady. I don't care what happens to the other characters anymore really. I'm just here waiting for Linda to drop the BOMB

A little worried about Victoria though.

More grease.

Puttin myself in shola shoe, i swear i wil go wit my moda... Make i no talk much..
Weldone bibi, i dey feel u

bibijay123:



That's true. Nt all hosps but some do.

Ok. it is your story. However, register is filled immediately after successful birth but most babies are named after one week.

When publishing, I'll suggest you make her ask for mother's name.
Still a great story. keep it up.

old2boy:


Ok. it is your story. However, register is filled immediately after successful birth but most babies are named after one week.

When publishing, I'll suggest you make her ask for mother's name.
Still a great story. keep it up.

In Nigeria, yes that's true. Alright, thanks.

olatex25:
Puttin myself in shola shoe, i swear i wil go wit my moda... Make i no talk much..
Weldone bibi, i dey feel u

Sola wasn't bothered. Tosin was d one given an a ultimatum. Thank u my person

Thanks 4 d update. but ur update takes tym Pls. Try & update regularly

Nice Update But Pls Bibijay Who Is Tosin?Is She A New Character?

* Continues*


Tosin


'' Where are you going at this time of the night?"
I almost jumped out of my skin as the parlour flicked on, i almost jumped with glee when i saw that it was my brother.


" Sola i thought you were already asleep".


" I was watching a movie and i slept off. You jarred me out of sleep" he said with a bone_cracking yawn. " Where are you going?"


" I have to be somewhere now"


" Where?"


I knew he would persist until i tell him and i didn't want our voices to wake up our father.



" Promise me this will only be between us".


" I promise."


" Mom is ill" I informed him.

He suddenly looked pensive. " What happened to her?"


" I don't know but her condition is critical "


" Tosin you know that i had to throw her things out.....Father expected it of me and i had to."


" He sent her away like a dog and he cut her off without a penny! I said with pain." You should have stood with me against Father.''


He had the good sense to bow his head in shame. " I feel so terrible. What should we do now?"


" I want to go see now and give her some money too.'' I said.


He smiled. " I wish i could also come along but one of us has to stay here so Father won't suspect. Please tell her I' m sorry and give her my love."



" I will. Sola you got my back on this?" I asked.


" Sure Lil bro. I got it. Oya go quickly and come back before Father wakes up."



" Thank you"



I drove off to the hospital where my mother was taken by the management of the hotel she lodged. I met her shivering at the reception, and a saucy nurse was shouting on her. I paid the bills and she was given a bed. I left at the break of dawn so my father won't suspect that i had gone to see her. But when i got back,my bags and my family outside.


" Tosin so you defied my orders! " he shouted.


I looked at Sola, he had a big grin on his face and i felt my hand balled into a fist. I wanted to smash the grin off his face. He had betrayed me. Our Father couldn't have known that i went out or even saw my mother if he hadn't tattle on me.


" Father you should have seen how i begged him not to go." Sola lied, his eyes were trained on mine.


" Why? Why did you go see her despite my warning? do you have any idea what that woman did to this family? She has dragged our good name through the mud! She soiled our reputations! " Father said, taking a low pain laced tone.



" I am sorry dad. She was critically ill and i only went to give her some money."



" A married woman who can lie with another is capable of murdering her husband. You have shown where your loyalties lie on countless occasion and i am no longer comfortable with you being under my roof."




" Father please. I apologize, it won't happen again."



" I am sorry too but i don't want to be strangled in my sleep. I want to sleep with both eyes closed. Take your things and leave." He said with a note of finality.



" Where is the key to the car you took out?" Sola demanded.



I opened one of the boxes, removed the file that contained my certs. I threw the key at him and my treacherous brother caught it in one fluid motion. I walked out of the gate with just the clothes on my back but i left the young foolish boy in me behind. I knew then that i won't rest until i see my father and brother shed blood from their eyes.





TBC

Fidelismaria:
Nice Update But Pls Bibijay Who Is Tosin?Is She A New Character?

No. He's kelvin' s frnd. Remember that they both went to Linda' s house wen Vicky was missing?

bibijay123:


No. He's Tosin' s frnd. Remember that they both went to Linda' s house wen Vicky was missing?

Kevin's friend you mean.


Narratives from characters are getting too many. Hope I don't get them mixed up. I'm still trying to figure out how Tomi and Dantata happen to be friends. I have a feeling that Victoria is Maggie's biological daughter. The storyline is starting to divert far away from the title, even the title character is not getting featured as I expected. Can't wait to see how the story play out.

It's another masterpiece from the ever gifted Bibijay123, thumbs-up sis.

dominique:


Kevin's friend you mean.

Yes my bad.

Narratives from characters are getting too many. Hope I don't get them mixed up. I'm still trying to figure out how Tomi and Dantata happen to be friends.

No you won't mix dem up.

I have a feeling that Victoria is Maggie's biological daughter. The storyline is starting to divert far away from the title, even the title character is not getting featured as I expected. Can't wait to see how the story play out.

OK noted.

It's another masterpiece from the ever gifted Bibijay123, thumbs-up sis.

Thank you babe.

This nice but OP I can see you in 3d so if you can, please give my eyes the pleasure of reading another splendid episode of this amazing story before it goes to rest tonight

How did Victoria get to know Tomi's house? And please who's this tosin/sola guy I'm bit confused


Nice story sha

bibijay123:


Yes sir

Alright

bibijay123:



Sola wasn't bothered. Tosin was d one given an a ultimatum. Thank u my person

tosin i meant 2 say..
U welcum sis

Hmm, revenge

Please Who's Sola? Someone said the story is beginning to divert from the title and I agree. Please try to connect your readers with the characters. God bless you bibijay123.

Jay542:
Please Who's Sola? Someone said the story is beginning to divert from the title and I agree. Please try to connect your readers with the characters. God bless you bibijay123.

Sola is Tosin's brother and Tosin is Kelvin's friend that went to Linda's house with Kelvin when Victoria was kidnapped..

MidasTouche01:


Sola is Tosin's brother and Tosin is Kelvin's friend that went to Linda's house with Kelvin when Victoria was kidnapped..

Sola is Tosin younger brother?

Jay542:

Sola is Tosin younger brother?

Senior

MidasTouche01:

Senior

Okay. Thank you sir

Jay542:

Okay. Thank you sir

You are welcome sire, bibijay123 let's go there!!!

Please what other stories have bibijay123 written asides this one and allen avenue. i need more ''bibijay therapy''. . BTW. the updates on this story are taking time.

[/quote]Lyk stars on earth may ur days 4eva be brightest coz u made my day more brighter am more closer 2 u lyk ur spinal cord.
GO! GO!! GO!!! bibi abeg notify me 4 d next update am always on board luv u.......... [i][quote]

Lyk star

[quote][/quote]Lyk stars on earth may ur days 4eva be brightest coz u made my day more brighter am more closer 2 u lyk ur spinal cord.
GO! GO!! GO!!! bibi abeg notify me 4 d next update am always on board luv u.........

@bibi your writing improves with every story you write, do keep it up.
I wonder how/why people are getting the characters mixed up. Well maybe your style of writing is different from the norm, but that's why I like your stories sha.
I also appreciate how you infuse native tongues in your stories, I find it refreshing but some of them do not need the the extra translation you give them in brackets. We often understand what they mean from context.
And foxyflow is doing a good job with dantata's character.
Keep up with helping your readers understand the characters and scenes , but remember you can't please everyone tho. So keep writing in your way.

Lyk stars on earth may ur days 4eva be brightest coz u made my day more brighter am more closer 2 u than ur spinal cord.
GO! GO!! GO!!! bibi abeg notify me 4 d next update am always on board luv u.........

Looking at the title again, The story is a drama series, and in a drama every character has a story. Her previous works were novels and short stories, so she didn't do much background story on all the characters. That's the way I see it o.

Bibi, come and update us mbok.