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Noooooooo!!!!  Shouted kratos in a kneeling position and head bowed with his two hands bound with a big chain made by haephestus the blacksmith for the accused (krato$)each to two huge pillars beside him ..Zeus don't do this, kratos this is for the good of us the gods of Olympus and the universe as a whole said Ares slyly ....shut up Ares you know nothing about. good of the world all u know is bloodshed...... Ares burst out laughing hahahaha oh that's so charming coming from one who killed his family look at your filthy skin looking grey from the ashes of your wife and kid murderer shouted Ares.... Enough said Zeus in a calm voice... you guys should really b fast I've got a situation in hell my demons really want to introduce their new project to me all the twelve superior gods turned and looked at Hades what? it's not like am still planning to kill Poseidon Hades said looking at Poseidon smiling wickedly Poseidon looked at him frowning .... mmh mmh Zeus cleared his throat and all attention went back to him Kratos you have been sentenced to the wormhole of handela for murdering a village filled with Innocent mortals and also for slaying your own family in the temple of Athena thereby desecrating her temple which is against the laws laid down by the supreme being above us all and...... Zeus, Ares deceived me into this I didn't do it in my own will said kratos interrupting Zeus..... silence kratos said Hera wife of Zeus.... as I was saying Zeus continued and I hereby sentence you to the wormhole of handela for all eternity never to come back kratos

kratos flinched on hearing this and raised his head looking at ares there was silence a bead of sweat formed on his forehead rolled and fell off hitting the ground making a hissing sound when all the gods looked it was as if a drop of acid dropped there

Ares was scared and kratos broke the silence with a threat to Ares saying "Ares I'll be back you will suffer by my mortal hands and I'll make sure every single drop of ichor (a liquid said to be the blood of the gods ) in you drops at my feet

as Ares heard this he shuddered and a cold feeling went through his entire body but no one noticed

and Zeus lifted his hands a lightning bolt formed in his hand and he threw it behind kratos and a portal opened and a powerful spirit dragged kratos as he kept on shouting Noooooooo!!!!! Ares!!!! you will payyy!!!! then it dragged him in and the portal closed

Good riddance to bad rubbish said Dionysus the god of party,wine and drunkenness I could have hosted a farewell party for the 'ghost of Sparta ' he said in a funny voice then some of the gods burst out laughing

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Is the meeting over Co's am way behind schedule I've got souls to guide to the afterlife said hermes god of travel and messenger of the other gods... yes son it's over replied Zeus.... finally I can get a moment of silence in my kingdom interrupted Hades all the happiness radiating from this awful Olympus is making me sick Zeus chuckled and Hades burnt up into a flame and disappeared but reappeared behind Poseidon god of water and was about saying booo!!! when Poseidon said am not scared Hades without looking back... grrrrrr Hades growled then disappeared then all the gods disappeared leaving Zeus and Hera in the huge court.... you made the right decision honey Hera said before kissing him and disappearing... then why does it feels so wrong Zeus muttered to himself before disappearing

rawswag:
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OK sir but u don't have to quote the whole thing ... thanks for stopping by

rawswag:
OK sir but u don't have to quote the whole thing ... thanks for stopping by

easy mate. I dey your back like hunch back. Just doing it like back in the days at school

jmichlins:
easy mate. I dey your back like hunch back. Just doing it like back in the days at school

lol OK thank u sir

rawswag:
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Thanks Bro.

Interesting. But op ur updates short o Make am long na. More ink to ur pen.

Jeez I can't belive I came late to class ride on bro I'm with you

Keeping up this way would make the story quite interesting to read but you really need to work on your update make it long and worth while, thank you.

after the portal sucked kratos in he was deposited in space he was still breathing fine and he wondered why, he looked at the his hands and the chains were still there he looked around trying to grasp where he was Co's the wormhole sent one to anywhere he deems fit
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but wait I haven't gone through the wormhole yet he thought as he floated and was in a state of brigadoon and was feeling so otiose still floating in space he saw a huge asteroid coming his way it was as huge as the temple dedicated to ares in sparta suddenly he remembered ares and was again angry filled with rage

he said oh Ares i'll hunt you down and kill you he whispered to himself but he soon came out of his reverie he saw the asteroid coming his way very quickly like it was being attracted to something then he heard a whooshing sound behind him as he turned around he saw the wormhole of handela he smiled weakly to himself ready to start his punishment but still wondering where he would be deposited. he turned to see the once big asteroid was shedding some of it's mass he wanted to Dodge but it was too late as the asteroid crashed wholly into he's sturdy frame pushing him into the wormhole he shut his eyes tightly and upon entering the wormhole blacked out


KRATOS
I wonder why I was summoned into the temple it's has never been done before oh well who knows.... kratos saw the red cloud that came out of the eyes of the golden statue of Ares the priest that brought the sacred chest out of the sacred room bowed down before the statue as the red cloud the color of blood hovered for a while then some grains of sand poured out of it the way sand pours in an hourglass forming the shape of a human gradually the sand. materialized into a tall handsome and sturdy man with face well chiseled.

"Ares", gasped kratos before bowing down he couldn't believe the god of war was right before him.

my faithful servant kratos rise.. kratos slowly rose up Ares was taller than him and more good looking than him Ares saw surprise in the hard eyes of kratos and chuckled and said you have served me well kratos but before going for your next mission I would like to present a gift to you..


the most elderly priest rose up and opened the sacred chest with closed eyes before retrieving the object wrapped in a red cloth and moving with head slightly bowed he raised the object wrapped in the cloth up to kratos, take it said Ares that's for you my servant. kratos took it and unwrapped the red cloths as he unwrapped it the red cloth floated back to the chest and the chest shut in a violent way and disappeared kratos couldn't believe his eyes the fabled blade of chaos was real it was overly huge for a normal sword with ancient greek inscriptions in gold made on it which means BLADE OF CHAOS with jagged edges and so sharp it could slice the air itself as he held the handle and closed his eyes he could feel the surge of power that accompanied the blade the inscriptions turned bright red and shone brightly the strength was so powerful that Ares was scared at what he saw this mortal, kratos scared him even as a god he was scared but did his best to conceal it his plan was working the power that came with the blade was intoxicating, it came with a bloodlust spirit Ares smiled again But with a tinge of fear .

kratos Ares called breaking him out of his reverie duty calls I have to go to Valhalla to welcome the new fallen warriors kratos bowed down with one knee to the ground and his new blade supporting him ares turned and dematerialized into the air

Deo7:
Jeez I can't belive I came late to class ride on bro I'm with you

thank you very much sir

tahir01:
Interesting. But op ur updates short o Make am long na. More ink to ur pen.

thank you sir.... But the thing is I type with my phone cc deo7 new update ready

what manner of write-ups is this
not even one paragraph

ReInstalled:
what manner of write-ups is this

not even one paragraph

sorry sir it's my first time I will edit it when free

Hmm it's getting interesting now updates are moderate, next should be paragraph learn to fix that in,your manner of description is quite okay keep it up with that. Although there is still room for improvement thank you

Superb plz more

Deo7:
Hmm it's getting interesting now updates are moderate, next should be paragraph learn to fix that in,your manner of description is quite okay keep it up with that. Although there is still room for improvement thank you

thank you very helpful advice

where the hell is the captain grumbled kurmi a newly recruited soldier who broke from his line with other newbie soldiers to rest their aching feet and their still soft skins from the scorching sun speaking to no one in particular as the laughs and arguments of the soldiers were deafening

Here comes the captain announced the serving boy at the entrance of the temple causing a little frenzy as the soldiers scurried like cockroaches caught in the kitchen at night to assemble themselves in the half broken line.

Kratos slowly approached the entrance of the temple adorned with precious stones, rubies and orbs he stopped admiring the entrance and savoring the well decorated entrance wondering How one could be So talented as to Make a magnificent artistic piece of the entrance then when he heard the serving boy at the entrance announce his coming and the sounds of rushing sandals made of leather and shields clattering against swords he smiled an evil smile the new soldiers must have broken their lines I'll punish them he thought inwardly. slowly he emerged and the serving boy bowed down one would think he was kissing the helpless marble floors he turned he's attention to the crowd of soldiers in their neatly formed 20 lines of about 50 soldiers each line then they bowed. rise, said kratos and they all stood looking ever ready with loyalty in their eyes and a little tint of fear then he saw a newbie soldier with inquisitive eyes and a face of a weakling "what Is he doing here" thought kratos he is supposed to be in the stables tending to the horses.

As kurmi stood up from his bowing position his eyes locked with that of the captain and go e was scared who wouldn't be? he unlocked his eyes in the temporary looking competition and he saw something upon closer look he gasped the blade of chaos almost inaudibly But the soldier behind him heard him and looked towards the direction of the captain and almost ran away from his line the stories his grandfather who worked in the kings palace and had access to the book of chronicles a book not known to all But a handful of the kings workers. the memories of the stories came flooding back what horrible stories. he could visualize it.

Comrades, kratos broke the heavy silence that has enveloped the courts of the temple. Today, he continued is going to be put in books of history, we will storm the city of Asgard and burn it to the ground and kill both men,women and children and livestocks shall be also destroyed nothing I mean nothing should be left out..... yeeeehhhh roared the soldiers kratos raised his hands silencing them then lifted his new blade up it shone bright red and the inscriptions stood up from blade and into the air enlarging itself So all could see.... kratos saw the looks on their face he smiled and said our lord Ares gifted us with this to bring all walls in our way down and tomorrow the whole world shall know we mean business. for the love of Sparta he thundered for the love of Sparta retorted the soldiers.

nady94 deo7 tahir01 jmichilins perfectionist11 new update

"Impressive" , your line one I suppose it should be "where the Hell (he'll) is the captain(,) Kurmi a newly recruited soldier grumbled for a newbie you are pretty good thumbs up

update o!

TRUCE20:
update o!

I will sir ....b patient

Deo7:
"Impressive" , your line one I suppose it should be "where the Hell (he'll) is the captain(,) Kurmi a newly recruited soldier grumbled for a newbie you are pretty good thumbs up

lol thank you sir. the auto correct is trying to show me it knows better than me

_HADES_
Am starting to get a little bit rusty ... damn that water fish Poseidon...... murmured Hades as he appeared underworld, his kingdom. he stood before the lake filled with fog waiting for Charon the ferryman of the underworld

what's taking him so long, he said under gritted teeth

he then saw the ferryman paddling lazily clad with a black robe with a big Hood and a fleece tied around his waist with the helm of his garments very tattered and heading towards him through the heavy white fog

Master, Charon said bowing down slightly.. Charon never talked even to his passengers only to Hades himself and for the whole of his existence in the chthonic world no one has ever seen his face due to the hooded garment.

what took you so long said Hades as he boarded the old boat long enough to contain ten people , to my castle immediately, he barked upon sitting down on the forefront of the boat with Charon at the back Charon just nodded and off they went...

help us, save me, a water to quench my taste shouted the many souls that struggled to reach the boat as Hades passed the lake kokytos the lake of wailing they reached for him But upon seeing it was the underworld god himself
Finally some respect I deserve he said to himself with contempt as the boat swerved to the left and headed towards a waterfall the road reserved only for the chthonic god himself then they went over the waterfall defying gravity because the boat was floating while the ferryman still paddled nonchalantly they were now overhead most part of hell with the magnificent castle in the middle of the underworld. slowly the boat drifted down and stopped at the gate of Hades castle he could just disappear right from when he came to the lake into his throne room But for some strange reasons he came by the squeaky boat of Charon and now he felt like walking into his castle., he got off the boat and ignored the ferryman bowing to him then Charon took off with his old boat. hades entered past the gate and there was no one manning the gates grrrrrrrr growled the three headed hound guarding the gates from behind and before hades fully turned the hound pounced on him and he fell to the ground under the weight of the overly huge dog, the the three heads of the dog gave him a