The pacing of this last chapter was a little rushed in my opinion..
I'd be happy to explain further if need be..

wow wow,double wow, more ink to ur pen dear,am new here bt i jst have to commend ur great writing skills

Dikachi


Sweet Dikachi

Oma is such α fool for letting α man droppin her and picking her up at †ђξ front of her husbands house, she shouldn't have allowed Dikachi †̥♥ knw †ђξ house at all,, twaci nice 1.. I can't wait for more updates.. †ђξ story is really keeping me a† †ђξ edge ☀̤̣̈̇f ma sit... Weldone sist Twaci,, God bless Ūя handwork

so sad,kachi is dead.

laikas:
hmmm, for ur mind, na even for the party self wey u for start self.

to chop meat last na im dey sweet

This is interestingly crazy...

Twaci I love your story, it's so twisted, dark and full of lust....keep up the good work

dis dikachi mumu sha..after oma hit seun if na me ehn..? na cut out o walai...u go dey hug oma say are u alright? thought he was my typo guy..twaci nyc wan sha...nyc story more scenes to ur imagination...twaci bae

aww see how Oma' s stupidity wasted the poor guy' s life* teary eyes*

bibijay123:
aww see how Oma' s stupidity wasted the poor guy' s life* teary eyes*

It was in a dream now; don't you get?

veekid:

It was in a dream now; don't you get?

wait! dream? lemme go reread it!

bibijay123:



wait! dream? lemme go reread it!

Lol; I was joking; actually t wasn't written it was but that was my presumption

Nice story twaci...keep it up...Expecting ur nxt update...u toomuch jare

Ghost mode deactivated, this story is mind blowing. Kudos to you Twaci. More updates please

The circustance leading to the death of Dikachi i think was not the true reflection of the same character that took that role when first came on board. Rather, we saw a subtly cold-blooded fellow. What was he thinking at the scene of a crime? Homicide! Like * ok the man is dead so let us move on * Anyone would have expected him to go into frenzy and even tried to move away from her in reflex or better still, think of calling a police. Embracing her at that precarious moment was unthinking. Whatever he felt for her would have disappeared in an instant not dis kind coddling. His death tho. Twaci you are good.

i just cant get enough of this story...

Dikachi was just a love-struck puppy caught up in the wrong place and at the wrong time(honestly, if i were him as soon i heard the words "dead husband".. i would hang up and block her..) aint nobody should have time for psychos...
anyways R.I.P to him ...he'll be missed.






On a different note.. Twaci, you have got to teach me how to write as good as this

steryj:
What was he thinking at the scene of a crime? Homicide! Like * ok the man is dead so let us move on * Anyone would have expected him to go into frenzy and even tried to move away from her in reflex or better still, think of calling a police. Embracing her at that precarious moment was unthinking. Whatever he felt for her would have disappeared in an instant not dis kind coddling.

What you're saying could be true but honestly, I expected exactly what happened. If he wasn't going to be an accomplice to the murder, I think he wouldn't have gone to her house in the first place, let alone answering her call.

Maybe we really react impulsively to certain situations but mine is, at that minute when she admitted to being married he should have stayed away from her. I mean, loving someone that's taken and then they still hide it from you defines bad character all together. He allowed himself to be played because she (stupid Oma) new for sure that he loves her.

Still hoping its a bad dream. Do your thing ma'am

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jagugu88li:
What you're saying could be true but honestly, I expected exactly what happened. If he wasn't going to be an accomplice to the murder,

Yes you are right. He could be an accomplice. There could be more twists to this.

@jagugu88li, I wanna second the motion that says "dikachi's death is ntin but a dream"


This update is WAOH!!!

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Caught in the act...

caught in what act ps2 I feel so sober now cos of dikachi's death; will come to normal state after I succeed in convincing myself that it's only but a story... no Twacy it has to be a dreammmmmm . Ride on jare

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caught in what act ps2 I feel so sober now cos of dikachi's death; will come to normal state after I succeed in convincing myself that it's only but a story... no Twaci it has to be a dreammmmmm . Ride on jare

I av some questions for @twaci to answer
1. u wrote that she dropped out of school and still she speaks good except for some words or things she no nothing abt like the contraceptives

2. dikachi is a doc. and he is nt scared of going straight with her within ow many days and nt knowing her. that doesn't look real. he shld b careful in that aspect. at least he shld have used c. d being the first time

3. the last post, is to me a make belief. things we normally see in nollywood. 'dikachi I did it for u, for us' Wat if Seyi caught them in her shop or an outing


forgive me babe. just need to understand. nt against.
nice job.


kinahbee

I knew Seun's death wouldn't be that easy

Twaci.. You've turned me to a widow

Lemme just goan meet dikachi..

Should I use teebillz style?

[quote author=kinah post=50316690]I av some questions for @twaci to answer
1. u wrote that she dropped out of school and still she speaks good except for some words or things she no nothing abt like the contraceptives
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I think there's a part i read where her hubby enrolled a private tutor for her when she just opened her supermarket, #silentreadingmodedeactivated weldone writer, keep it up

the only weak point of every man is a woman


if really dikachi die then more crazy dude are coming,,,LOLs
oma will be acting a gangster in her husband house
twaci,,,nice one

Thanks guys! I appreciate your comments, suggestions, opinions and questions. Really, I am honored to have you all here.

I might not be able to post an update tomorrow as I had been on the road since morning...from Aba to Lagos.

I will try to do something tomorrow, but no promises.

Thanks

Twaci:
Thanks guys! .............Thanks

Yhu're welcome... How was yhur trip?

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Yhu're welcome... How was yhur trip?

Fine, thank you very much

Oma's just a naive silly girl.. the moment she fell out wt dami & even watched as her hubby trashed her, she should've known it wouldn't end there. she already made an enemy & rival but then., she's not smart. To think she kept on with her sexcapedes & expect none of her domestic staff to know? c'mon!! they had been wt her hubby before her...lotta loopholes.. and then she underestimated her hubby.
love can really make one stupidd & do silly things. kachi should've been smart shoot!

Twaci tell d driver to drop you in the other room.