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Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 10:33pm On Oct 28, 2016 |
akinkudin:Thanks |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Babsopey(m): 11:42pm On Oct 28, 2016 |
Peak my dear, it's in You. Keep it coming, slowly and steady, it will reach the promise land. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Domance: 12:18am On Oct 29, 2016 |
I luv ur story, gud job. Just make sure u keep at it ok 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by sirblero(m): 12:21am On Oct 29, 2016 |
rachealfst:LOLZ.... All These For Me?You Want Make Constipation Worry Me You Try Joorh ooo Thanks So Much...Waiting For More Updates.. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 4:25am On Oct 29, 2016 |
Babsopey:Thank you,have a lovely weekend. |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 4:26am On Oct 29, 2016 |
Domance:Thanks |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 8:24am On Oct 29, 2016 |
sirblero:You are welcome, Thanks for following. |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Daniluv2k4(m): 9:09am On Oct 29, 2016 |
lesson for u guys.. never trust ya Bae with anybody. never knew I can bleep my roomie Bae until it finally happens. nice story kinda related to me somehow 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 11:44am On Oct 29, 2016 |
Daniluv2k4:Wow! I wish I could hear your story. Things like this do happen, thanks for sharing your experience. |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 3:11pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
This episode is dedicated to: hardybatte45 shakyroh320 sirblero akinkudin babsopey domance daniluv2k4 Episode 9 Thessy was relaxing in her father’s compound, chatting with one of her siblings. Her phone rang, she checked the caller’s ID, it was her boyfriend Tony. “ Hi sweetheart” she said smiling “Hi, how’s your day going?” “Fine, I’m just here enjoying my free time” “How’s work?” “Work is fine?” “How’s Port Harcourt?” “Cool” “Thessy please I want you to come to Lagos, I kind of need you here” “Tony what exactly do you need me for, I was in Lagos last month nau, do you miss me that much?” “Please……. “Ok I will come, but I can’t come this week, I just left Ibadan last week, so you can’t expect me to embark on this impromtu journey" “Ok, let’s make it next week then” “That’s better” “Thanks, I’ll talk to you later in the day. I love you” “Love you too, bye” Relationship can be stressful sometimes, what’s the meaning of this now, it’s not in my plan to embark on any long journey for now, but do I have a choice. It would have been much easier if I was still in school. Some days later, I started feeling somehow about my trip to Lagos, I don’t feel like going any longer, but I already promise him. Reluctantly, I traveled down to Lagos. I noticed he didn’t call me all through the journey, the last time we talked was when my bus took off. I tried calling but his line was switched off. Wemmy called, I told her I’m still on my way. I got to Lagos around 8.00pm. On a good day he use to come to the park to pick me up, but since I couldn’t reach him, I took a cab to his house, I got there some minutes to 9.00pm. I was about to knock at the door, then I heard sounds, someone is inside his apartment. I knocked and he opened up. “Baby…… “Don’t baby me, you knew I was coming and you did not bother calling me, you were to pick me up, why did you treat me like an unwanted guest, you begged me to come remember?” “I’m sorry, my phone…… “……Is right here with me, I seized it” she said opening the door wider. “Tony what’s going on here?” “Please come in first, then I’ll explain everything” “And where do you think you are going” she said obstructing me. “Anita will you please quit this drama, I told you already that I’m expecting my girlfriend. She came from a very far distance so please move before I move you” “I give her just 30minutes” She hissed and went back into the sitting room. “You are sick in the head, did you just gave my girlfriend order in my house?” “If you think she will sleep here, then both of you are joking, because both of us can’t stay under the same, is better she goes back to where she’s coming from”she said shouting. “Anita get your things and leave my house and my life, I told you I’m not interested in you, I have my own get friend whom I love, so please leave now” “When you are sleeping with me, you don’t know you have a girlfriend abi, I’m going no where, I’m your girlfriend and she has to leave” She faced me raining abusive words on me, she threatened to kill me, if I did not leave her man. Before I knew what what’s happening, she pounced on me and tore my clothes, pushed me out of the house, she even pushed Tony who was trying to stop her away, she pushed him so hard that he hit his head against the wall. Tony’s neighbor Mr Martins and his wife showed up when they heard noise coming from his apartment, the wife hurriedly pull off her scarf to cover me. They are nice couples, they really liked me, because I do visit them when I’m around especially when Tony is at work, I stay in their flat to keep the woman's company. We are all outside except the crazy girl who locked us all out. Tony’s head was already bleeding. So the couples suggest we go their flats, so I can change, Tony’s also needed a first aid, so we followed them to their flat. I was quiet although, even while all the drama was unfolding, I did not alter a word, its like I went dumb all of a sudden. The woman gave me one of her top to wear, Tony wound too has been dressed by her husband. “Tony what exactly is going on, who is that girl in your apartment? Thessy is the only girlfriend I know of” Mr Martins asked “I met her in the club and we became friends, little did I know that she wanted more. Fine, we had sex once, she tried to lure me into sleeping with her again but I told her I can’t do it, that I’m in a committed relationship, but she refuse to leave” “Liar ! I finally found my voice. “Thessy that’s the truth” “Please sir, there is just one question I need you to help me ask him. He asked me to come, I was here last month, so I did not even plan to come to Lagos, but he pleaded with me saying he needs me here. So why am I here?" “So you ask her to come when a crazy girl is living with you? Mrs Martins added. “The reason why I asked her to come was that I want Anita to see her and knows that I’m serious with what I said about been in a committed relationship. I thought she will leave once she sees Thessy" “No wonder my spirit held me back from coming, but i ignored the signs. So you brought me here to help you chase your crazy girlfriend away right. I’m sorry your plans did not work out. Tony! Officially, it is over between us” “Baby please don’t do this, you know I love you, you know have never cheated on you before now, please forgive me this time, it won’t happen again, I promise….. “Keep those promises to yourself, you will need it in your next relationship. I never knew you are such a reprobate, sleeping with a random girl, someone you met in a club?” “Thessy! I’ll do everything to make things right, please forgive me” “Oh! so that I can die abi, I’m sorry I love my life, didn’t you hear her, she promise to kill me if I don’t leave her man or you think it’s just an empty threat? I doubt that and I’m not ready to die for a man, I’m Thessy and not Jesus” “Thessy, you travelled a long journey, I think you should shower, eat and sleep, we will sought things out tomorrow” said Mrs Martins “Thank you very much ma, but I’m leaving, I can’t stay here, I have a friend here in Lagos, I’ll pass the night at her place” “You are going no where Thessy, its late and risky its 10:30pm”said Mrs Martins “She’s right, you can sleep here, you can sleep here too Tony, I don’t trust that crazy girl ” Mr Martins added. “Then I’ll leave sir, we can’t sleep under the same roof, let him go and sleep with his lunatic girlfriend” I said Tony thanked the couple for their hospitality. “Thessy I’m sorry for putting you through all this” he said and left for his apartment. Mrs Martins prepared the guest room, she serve me dinner, but I can’t eat, I already lost my appetite. I called Wemmy and told her everything that happened, she promise to come and pick me the next day. I cried uncontrollably, I’ve never been humiliated in my whole life, Mrs Martins heard my cry, she came in and comforted me. I slept in a stranger’s house while my boyfriend was with his crazy girlfriend. I’ll live to tell the story. TBC Happy Weekend 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by akinkudin: 3:33pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Thanks for the dedication. Happy weekend to you as well rachealfst. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Hardybattee45: 3:48pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Happy weekend Rachelfst.......More power to your elbow 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Daniluv2k4(m): 3:49pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
nice piece of work.. keep it coming thanks for the dedication.. more ba3 to ya phone /PC 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by sirblero(m): 6:56pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Nice Story Dr..Thanks For The Mention....
Have A Great Weekend.. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 9:28pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Hardybattee45:Thanks |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 9:32pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Daniluv2k4:Thanks |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by rachealfst(f): 9:33pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
sirblero:Thank you... |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Domance: 9:44pm On Oct 29, 2016 |
Tnx 4 d mention. Following u all d way cant wait 4 d next update 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Evakinqz: 12:23am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Seriously, I fink ah need to comment something, I mean anything.. It's really lovely reading, pls bring it on we r waiting patently for the next update... #thumbs up 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by yerokunphilips: 6:33am On Oct 30, 2016 |
The reason I stopped reading stories on nairaland is that many people Will start an interesting storyand will never complete it at times they will turn themselves to thin god people will be begging them for update.I hope you will do better 2 Likes |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Daniluv2k4(m): 6:44am On Oct 30, 2016 |
we make it to FP... more update Dear... 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Babsopey(m): 7:51am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Babsopey: Hey T. TOYIN @rachealfst finally we made it to the promise land. You are on front page dear. Nice one. I'm happy you eventually let out. Thumbs up 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Daddykuyt(m): 8:31am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Nice one, pls grapy ur copy now! 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by oyinkatua: 8:39am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Good story really enjoyed it...I fell in love!! 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Brio984(m): 8:59am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Nice Story I Appreciate 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by ofonike: 9:04am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Nice story. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by hersarhn: 9:52am On Oct 30, 2016 |
I sooo love this story,
can't wait to see the end... 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by Nobody: 9:59am On Oct 30, 2016 |
rachealfst: Really interesting story but permit me to point your attention to these few grammatical errors. I will number the corrections following the order the errors appeared. 1. Promised 2/3. Their 4. Loves 5. Would 6.Tests 7.Opened 8.asked 9. Moved 10. Needs 11. While 12. These 13. Thanked 14. Would 15. Promised. Also, you should try to write differently from the way you speak because that's what make writing unique. Beautiful story nonetheless. Keep it up. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by obyikye(f): 10:01am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Op, do not keep me in suspense now. Come and finish up the story. Good story line. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by PopoolaTaiwo(m): 10:12am On Oct 30, 2016 |
next episodr 2 Likes |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by KINGPINE: 10:45am On Oct 30, 2016 |
I don't usually read NL stories.... But this is good ... Next episode pls.. 1 Like |
Re: I Fell In Love By Toyin Taiwo(ty Praise) by oomiyale(f): 10:55am On Oct 30, 2016 |
Pls don't act like others that will fail to finish stories. Pls drop d subsequent episodes asap. thanx 1 Like 1 Share |
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