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Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Missmossy(f): 8:11pm On Nov 03, 2016 |
Angelinastto:Lol... We are even then |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Melgy: 8:54pm On Nov 03, 2016 |
Finally up to date! A lovely story U have here Angelinastto. U started on a slightly poor note and wanted 2 leave d thread but I'm bold 2 say that after some corrections U improved so greatly I was amazed and I'm stuck 2 dis story till d end whenever U want it 2 come( but pls make it soon). U are a good writer with a good head 4 a story. Keep it up and be careful stl with ur spellings. God bless U and give U more grace 2 write. Welldone 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Ridwan1821: 9:23pm On Nov 03, 2016 |
Angelinastto:By saying playing and watching football, I mean "playing football and watching football.. Not d type of play u think.. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Roeteemie(m): 9:39pm On Nov 03, 2016 |
OMG!!!!Am jst crying lyk a baby.God bless u sis,more grace,wisdom and more ink to ur pen.....thumps up........I salute u oooooo.3 gbosa 4 u..Angelinastto.. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Tbills(m): 9:54pm On Nov 03, 2016 |
Roeteemie:Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa !!! .. She's really good. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 6:09am On Nov 04, 2016 |
abefe99:Bae. So sorry i could not meet your request. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 6:12am On Nov 04, 2016 |
Missmossy:Lol. You look like a senior of mine in college. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Ridwan1821: 12:29pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
@Angelinastto, are u a KWASU student? |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by menumchi: 1:19pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Wow! Wow! Wow! Am really short of words. I had to come outta ghost mood to render my 'tiny' voice. This piece is so amazing it got me glued to my phone for a whole day. The improvement in writing was tremendous, the suspense was next to none, the story line was overwhelming and for the first time in ma life I noticed bubbles of what looked like tear escaping my eye while reading an epic story like yours. Thanks a lot for this piece. However, you didn't mention the individual that hit Nancy; if it was a hit-and-run-driver, or one careless persona and if the individual apologised or took care of the hospital bills or something.......that notwithstanding, it was awesome reading your piece. Thumbs up! 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by girlhaley(f): 2:47pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Aunty angel......come here o We are hungry... We need updates asap more mb to ur fone o And thank God for Nancy life waiting impatiently |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 8:44pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Angelinastto:!!!!you didn't ask of me!!! I only know of one thing that happened in 1995, it was.... Anyways, you re Rilly Rilly doing wonderfully well... More ink to your pen, sweetie... |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 9:08pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
DTOBS:So you did not see me carrying that cardboard with the inscription " Where is Dtobs" around town? I asked of you nao.check my post. Thanks darling! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 9:10pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Guys so sorry for not updating since, had a long day struggling with my project. In short i am frustrated. Your comments brought me outta my lazy mood. Update in a bit! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 9:16pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Angelinastto:Loll this one wey be say na "cardboard" you dey carry upandan town, I go suspect you oooo.... Thanks for asking anyways, u don dey form caring small small ...i was kind of busy in jawe... How has been work? Oya come update this thing Abeg, am starving! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 9:18pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Angelinastto:At the bolded, who/what is causing that! Just tell me make I call on DSS |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Missmossy(f): 9:40pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 10:25pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
CONTINUATION ********************** I prepared all i thought i would be needing for the camp and retired to my bed after the party, i was not feeling slipy so i called khole. Khole told me alot of interesting things about the NYSC camp and my anxiety increased, all in all i could not wait to wear the NYSC uniform, it will be a dream come through. I ended the call after a long talk with khole and i laid on my bed with my face up. Ever since my parents died, i never dreamt of them. I really wished they could appear to me just like i watch in movies, or they could even come to me in dreams but they never did. I know they are happy with the way my life turned out anywhere they are but, i really wanted them to show me a sign that i was doing well. I was greatful to mi mom and mi dad for all they had done for me but my late parents are irreplaceable (blood is thicker than water). I was lost in thought about my late parent throughout the night, but slowly and unconsciously i fell into the beautiful hands of sleep. ¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤ I woke up happy the following morning, i said my prayer and had my bath before going to mi mom and mi dad's room. I met dad bussy with his phone on bed while mom was reading from her bible. I greeted the dual and sat between them and waited for mi mom to finishup with her prayer. When mi mom was done, I thanked them for the party and mi mom pulled mi into her arms and said "Jadesola mi, you don't have to thank us, we performed our parental duty and we are proud of you dear" I gushed at mi mom calling me by my yoruba name, only my dad calls me by that name, but ever since he died, i almost forgot i still bear a yoruba name. Dad pulled me closer to his arms and he patted me on the back. He smelt like my dad and that made me wanted to remain in his arm forever. " Young lady why are you inhaling my saint like that?" dad said and that was when i realised i was making my like for his saint obvious. I gently pulled away from mi dad and i smilled. Mi mom told me we would be going for shopping to get the things i would be needing in camp and i told her i had everything already but she insisted and i agreed. Dad said he would deposit into my account in case i would be out of cash. At that moment i had more than five hundred thousand naira in my account and he was still talking about me going brooke. I gave mi dad and mi mom a quick peck in appreciation and i left for my room. Later in the day i shopped excessively with mi mom and i packed more than enough for the camp. I wanted to arrive camp on time for early and easier registration so i left the following day with mi dad. He personally wanted to drop me off. I wished this beautiful love i received will never die. ¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤ "mom...........dad, am home" i shouted immediately i entered the house. Its been three week without this guys but it felt like ten year. Over the years it been everyday with them but i had to stay without them for three weeks cos of camp. "Oh my angel, look at you............ You look lean, you did not feed well? Look at your skin, did mosquitoes bite you?" mi mom welcomed me with questions as she turned me around as if she was looking for a pin on me, i only smilled and told her i was fine. Mi dad hugged me and said "Dont mind her, she takes you for a baby" we all laughed and mi mom said i was her baby. I argued against been a baby and paraded my self as a full grown lady. We all laughed and i excused myself to my room. "Come for lunch on time dear, i made your favourite for lunch, there is enough to feed the whole nation" mi mom said has i was about climbing the stairs. I laughed and said ok. I entered my room and it was like it been a year i last used the room. I walked round the room to notice if there was any changes but there was none. "Its so good to be home" i said to myself as i undressed to take my bath. Mom made a delicious meal of coconut rice and turkey for lunch. She also baked a welcome cake for me. I had the best lunch ever with family. After lunch i called khole to inform her of my arrival, she told me she would come over and i ended the call. I missed my sleep due to the camp stress so i had a long nap. ¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤ The following morning, dad took me to the television station i was posted personally and he handed me over to the managing director before taking his leave. He was scheduled to go on a bussiness trip that day so he had to run along. I was required to work as a journalist under the supervision of my department head. I was assigned the duty of collecting tangible and confirmed news to be broadcasted. This requires travelling to the point of incident and it sure will be time demanding but i was ready to work tirelessly. This had been my passion ever since i was a child. ################## T.B.C 6 Likes 1 Share |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by princessadeola(f): 10:30pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Great........... More |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 10:37pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
princessadeola:Haa. Sis you read with all the grammatical jargon? I just modified the post. No more o. Dtobs is waiting in the other room. Lol |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 10:37pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Wow... Interesting... Na d kind of Nancy girl I been dey pray to jam for camp but unfortunately na d one wey be say "come buy me drink, come buy me pure water, come pay for my snap shot" I dey always jam until I commot my break pad to dey crush dem if den no commot road! Hope u never forget ur uncle Mike and his wife sha...? Where is Kelvin? Where is Nelly and Jordan? Throughout your days in the school, u no get boyfriend? Abi na boyfriend no get you? Answer me oooo... Nancy Don turn 21ooo,no be 16 again nah... Sweetie, wetin u chop Dis night? |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 10:39pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
DTOBS:Lol. Been caring from birth. Heeya you for call me to help you nao. Greatful for life jare, work dey. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 10:39pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Angelinastto:You didn't off the light before you went to the sitting room to update... Before you jump to the bed, Abeg off that light and sleep gently ooo, I no want rough tackle for my sleep... |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 10:42pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Angelinastto:You no go fit do am, na why I no call u. The work na outside work no be za other room work wey you Sabi do... Nagode |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 10:43pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
DTOBS: DTOBS: DTOBS: DTOBS:Lol. Ole ( thief)... No........... Not forgetting a thing. They will all come to the picture. You know all of you are still in the dark here. But no worry i go bring touch light for una. Lol i pirry you, you think say nah Yankee you dey bah? Which one is off light again, you gt evil spirit? |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 10:47pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
DTOBS:chai i wish buhari will just read this. You will be in the other room dancing to mopol whip. Nah sleep remain o switheart |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 11:21pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
Melgy:Wow thanks alot! Am short of words **Sobs** |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 11:23pm On Nov 04, 2016 |
menumchi:thanks for bringing my attention to that. Definately it was a hit and run. Proudly the first to like you pic . You look cute! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by xamster(m): 1:09am On Nov 05, 2016 |
The story is going gr8, angelinastto. I had to subscribe to check on the page. Now that our lovely Nancy is working towards the dream of her biological parent through her foster parent, am sure she'll attain the zenith of her Career in no time. So at this point am sure she'll meet some folks in her past(most esp Kevin). And wait! Don't tell me our big gurl ain't getting toasters. Hmm....okay make we dey watch, as u dey write am. it no easy to dey write story for nairaland. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by girlhaley(f): 7:03am On Nov 05, 2016 |
Sister Angel I sight u o......pls come and update us na 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 11:38am On Nov 05, 2016 |
Angelinastto:I comment my reserve... Am still studying the outcome of the judgement... |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by DTOBS(m): 11:39am On Nov 05, 2016 |
Angelinastto:Dhurrr... And u will be happy with that abi? ThankGod, I Don know who my enemy is... |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Tbills(m): 11:51am On Nov 05, 2016 |
Person dey wait !! |
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