WELL DONE BABSOPEY, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING THOUGH!!

Nice one man! keep it coming

Babsopey

babs ooooo

See Suspense! Well done sir.

m glad i read dis story from d beginning till dis moment coz i swear i would hav regreted not opening it at all. anyways started frm d bottom nw we re hre.... ride on bro.

make i quick on my generator..............

Waiting..........

guy u don sit down tire I dey wait for d next one oh ooooooo

waiting ohhh

[b] EPISODE THIRTY MFYL PR2

”Choice” according to the dictionary is “an option, a decision, an opportunity to choose or select something”. The one million dollars question here is “do we really have choice in life?” We talk of destiny, fate and purpose, yet we talk of choice; are they not contradicting? If our destiny is fixed, then do we have choice? I read our destiny is in our hands, does that mean we can reshape it? Or are we permitted to only hold it?

Situations, circumstances happen to us either by fate or by our decisions. Of course nobody choose the bad circumstances but our little actions and inactions contribute to how our destiny displayed. They can make or mare us.

Life is also funny and unpredictable, because the same hot water that soften yam, hardened egg. We live, we aspire, we try, and keep trying till we have no control of our ciliary muscle, but we don’t entirely control our circumstances, God does. And it’s as He likes. The good thing about it is, He knows the best from the beginning of time, and He will to the end of time.

The ceiling was white and walls alike. Different set of flowers collection pitched at the visible corners of the room. Directly in front was a rectangular wall paper with cloud background having the inscription “You are not alone, I am with you, your first love, Jesus”.

“He’s awake” was the voice I heard from the right side of the mattress I was on. I turned my head in response to the voice to see excited face of Funmi holding my right hand as water rolls out of her eyes. I tried to lift my head but was limited by the respiratory tube across my nose. “Don’t remove it!” She said as I felt a little hitch on my chest. What did happened or how I ended up where I was is an answer eluding my imagination.

After Funmi’s exclamation, a nurse and eventually the doctor came in into room. He felt me, did some snap test and smile facing the nurse.

Doctor: At last, we have a successful case.

Nurse: This called for celebration, well done doctor, your hand work has eventually paid off.

Doctor: I give glory to God. Please call his mother and tell her the good news.

Funmi: I’ve done that, she’s coming already.

Doctor: (Facing me) You are a strong personality and your will to live is very high. You are a very big result and today will never be forgotten in the history of this hospital. Please don’t force anything, lay down there and take it easy. We’ll have to conduct some test on you.

Me: (I nodded to say okay) What happened?

Funmi: Baby just cool, I’ll tell you everything later.

After some minutes, my mum, Debby and Dan entered into the room as my mum started crying singing. In no time, the room has turned into a worship center as everybody, including the doctor were in praise mood, led by my mother. I could see they were happy as Debby lied on the mattress with me, placing her head on my left shoulder while Funmi would not let go of my right hand.

I tried to remember the events that occurred earlier, maybe I’ll understand their deep happiness. I remembered a gun was pointed to me in that hotel room and the last thing I heard was Victoria saying don’t shoot him. My guess was I was indeed shot and that explain the hitch on the chest. I remembered vividly the guy that shot me and who was behind him giving command but I’m going to keep it to myself till I regain my strength.

The doctor conducted series of test on me and came back later to talk with my mum and me.

Doctor: The test shows you are strong enough. It’ll take some weeks before you can start to walk depending on how quickly your body and mind recuperates.

Mum: You mean he can’t walk now?

Doctor: Presently he can’t. he fell on something after the gun shot and it affected his spinal cord. It wasn’t totally damaged, so he’ll walk, but it will take time.

Mum: (Sobs) God why?

Doctor: You can’t be crying in his presence, he needs motivation now, not discouragement. He’ll be on wheel till he can walk, and will need your help.

Mum: Thank you doctor

Doctor: One more thing. He might not be able to reproduce again. When he starts to walk, he can have proper sex, but reproducing is a great doubt.

Mum: Oh my God! (Crying) Is there nothing we can do?

Doctor: Well, you can fly him abroad if you can afford it. His case is minor but we don’t have necessary equipment to help him here. Even with that, I still doubt if he will be able to reproduce, but you can try.

Mum: Thank you doctor. We’ll surely try, I don’t mind what I’ll have to sell. Seeing him alive is a miracle in itself.

Doctor: But you can’t fly him anytime soon. His body cannot withstand such thing for now.

Mum: Till when?

Doctor: At least sixteen weeks. He’ll also be coming for check up every four weeks.

Mum: Alright, we can wait but how do we go about the checkups because our side is very far from here.

Doctor: Maybe I’ll send you letter you can take over with you to any good hospital at your side if you can’t be making it here. But you must come here at least once in two months.

Mum: Thank you doctor. God bless you.

I acted as if all what he said did not get to me, all I wanted is to be on my feet back. Being on wheel chair will limit how much I can pursue my goals. It might even force change my goals. I decided to build appositive mind and believe I will walk again.

A week after I woke up, I was discharged from the hospital as the hospital was filled by my fellow corps members in the same local government, clothed in NYSC outfits. They were led by Temmy and our LI.

Temmy: Happy passing out my brother. We came together and you almost left me alone.

Me: Passing out? How?

Temmy: Hmm, you were out for four months bro.

Me: Four months? Like I was in coma?

Temmy: Yes, I thought I’ve lost you.

Me: And I survive? In Nigeria? For four months?

Temmy: It’s a miracle, I’m sure God answered our prayers.

Me: Coma, four months, in Nigeria, ALIVE!!!? There is something you are not telling me.

Temmy: Don’t worry bro, we’ll talk about everything later. LI is here.

Me: I’m still confused

Temmy: Just chill. We’ll be going home tomorrow. I’ve brought your phone for you (He handed me the phone has a little crack on the screen). The crack was when you fell down from the shot.

Me: Thanks bro. What of Funmi?

Temmy: She has gone back to Lagos for her POP

Me: She did not tell me

Temmy: We asked her not to, because we were not sure you are ready to know how long you were asleep. It’s the reason we did not bring your phone to you. Let’s just enjoy the moment, we’ll talk about what happened later. Thank God Dan is around, so there is no dulling moment.

Our LI and some corps members came into the room as we all laughed, joke and enjoy the moment together. I’m happy to be alive and to see that people love and care about me. The greatest joy man can have is to know people really care about you. Although I still can’t phantom what happened in-between the lost four months.

We left the hospital and went back to the lodge I had swear in anger not to ever enter again. My stuffs has already been packed as we were only waiting for the night to pass before we head back to our home town. Going back will be easier as Dan will go with his car while Temmy will drive mine. One thing I noticed was that Uncle Ben did not show up to even say hi that evening as he has not showed us since I woke up. Neither did I see Aunty Joy; well I think I’ve passed thinking about them.

While we were inside the sitting room discussing stuffs that had happened while I was in coma, Aunty Joy did come in, but was rejected by my mum. This might probably means, mum has been the one stopping them from visiting and I’ll not blame her for that. She needs to protect her son after all.

Mum: What did you want? You are here to finish the work right?

Joy: Cool down ma

Mum: Please leave, I’ve told you we’ll leave your house tomorrow and if you want us to leave tonight, we will.

Me: Mum, let her come in

Mum: No, they were the one trying to kill you. I don’t trust her or any of them

Me: Mum please, I’ll like to speak with her in pivate

Mum: What’s wrong with you Opeyemi? God just delivered me from one and you want to create another one?

Me: Mum, nothing will happen.

Mum: No problem, talk to her, but you are not going to court with anybody. Let them pay for their crimes.

Me: Court?

Mum: Just talk to her, but I’ll be watching.

Me: Thanks mum

I wheeled outside the sitting room as she sat beside me on a chair. We stayed there for like five minutes just looking. As I was about to break the silence, she stood up and hugged me on the chair as she starts to sob. I stylishly pushed her back but she held on to my hand and that was how I noticed she was wearing a different ring.

Me: You are married now?

Joy: Yes, I’m sorry you were not there

Me: Wao! A lot has really happen in these four months. Congratulations!

Joy: Thanks dear

Me: (Chucks) Dear? You are calling me dear? Well, I did not lose my memory, I still remembered everything that happened that day.

Joy: That day was a day to forget in our lives. It was an unfortunate day.

Me: Not for me. It’s a day I’ll never forget. Is there anything you want to tell me?

Joy: I’m just happy you are alive. I’ve missed you a lot. We all thought we’ve lost you but your determination to live is stronger than our thoughts. It’s really a miracle you are here talking, considering how we met you at the hotel room that day.

Me: Yeah, I’ve been hearing that from many people. Glory is to God. Don’t worry, by tomorrow, I’ll be out of your lives totally.

Joy: No, I don’t want you out of my life. Ben doesn’t want it either, he loves you so much.

Me: Wao! That’s the best thing I’ve heard all day. Uncle Ben loves me? I’ll rather believe the devil has accepted Christ and be born again.

Joy: Don’t judge with what happened that day. He really loves you, he was only confused and angry that day.

Me: Yeah, I was too. But it doesn’t matter anymore

Joy: Leaving his life will break him totally, he’ll be hopeless.

Me: Staying in his life will kill me totally, I’ll be hopelessly hopeless. Common look at me, I’m on wheels! Is that right to you? All because someone was confused and angry, anyway I’ll take my own fault, everybody should answer his father’s name.

Joy: Cool down Will

Me: I nearly died Aunty Joy. Oh! I mean I died, I’m only having a second chance. I was shot because of him. Maybe by his commands, who knows? Where is he anyway?

Joy: He’s in prison

Me: Prison, why?

Joy: He was arrested last month for attempting to kill you and one other lady, since he was the one they met there.

Me: That’s ridiculous, except if he was the one that sent them.

Joy: He didn’t send them but the other lady found at the scene and the hotel manager gave witness against him in the court.

Me: Victoria is alive?

Joy: Who is victoria?

Me: The other lady you mentioned. He did not attempt to kill me, at least he wasn’t there physically.

Joy: Will please, will you testify for him?[/b]



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Babsopey ride one beht this suspense don dey too much

Babsopey i dey feel you. four months long o but thank God he survived

Suspencee!

OH GOD SHIT IS GETTING SERIOUS OYA BABSOPEY TELL US WHO SHOT HIM NOW AM TIRED OF GUESSING

will on wheel, getting more interesting each day. thumbs up bro.

The price we pay for greatness, it is well with you o Will. Well done babsopey, thanks for the update.

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Babasopey is the BEST!!!
Respekt!!!

best story have read so far nice one babsopey

Am enjoying every dose of dis story, kip it up

It's my first time of comment, I don't even know how to comment, lol, but brother, you are a genius, am just commenting to inform you I might not finish this story, it's sad anyway, but if you can make it2 episodes daily, it might help me, thanks I advance Bro, you forced me to coment, I had to go to Gmail and do all those stuff just because of you, keep it up, but please, do something about the posting, two episodes a day is not a bad idea

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Weldon Babs, nothing do you!!

nawa oooo... complications. ... now his uncle has accused of trying to kill him even tho he knw nothing abt him but because dey had misunderstanding den he is a suspect. weldone .. cc: babsopey

Babsopey ur head dea dere,ur future is bright .

Babsopey, you are good. How can one chew English like food, analyze it like football and make it sweet like music. Keep it up.
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mr man, na because of this story i join nairaland, i've always been a silent reader, back to the matter abeg na God i take beg you pls post the next episode,abi u want make them post obituary of boy wey die of suspense ;Dmr man, na because of this story i join nairaland, i've always been a silent reader, back to the matter abeg na God i take beg you pls post the next episode,abi u want make them post obituary of boy wey die of suspense

[b] EPISODE THIRTY-ONE MFYL PR2

Honestly I was still confused about everything. Why will Uncle Ben be arrested? He wasn't related to the horror in any physical way. Another angle is he's rich and influential, I expect him to work things out with his influence except if there is more to this than I know.

Me: To tell you the truth, I am confused and I'm beginning to have headache.

Joy: I'm sorry dear

Me: But Uncle Ben is influential, why can't he bail himself out with self recognition and get a good lawyer.

Joy: The case is bigger than what he can influence

Me: Who is the person against him? I guessed it's supposed to be me.

Joy: Dr Samanja is behind it. He's using every of his power to make sure Ben did not come out of this alive.

Me: (Smiles) Samanja, hmm

Joy: Did you know something?

Me: Maybe, but what exactly is Uncle Ben owing him? I thought they are friends.

Joy: They used to be until of recent he asked Ben to sell some of his shares to him.

Me: Uncle Ben refused him?

Joy: Yeah, he said you'll get everything that belongs to him

Me: That's even wrong. You are his wife, you should get everything.

Joy: I already have all I needed dear, besides whatever is yours is mine.

Me: Hmm, anyway I don't want anything again, so he can sell to him

Joy: It's not that easy, he'll keep asking for more until he gets everything

Me: How can he even be friend with such person. I can't testify in court in this condition. Is there a way he could be bail out?

Joy: He's in prison, not police cell and the judge has refused his bail

Me: For a month now?

Joy: Yeah

Me: Wao! This is big. Well, let me talk with my mother, maybe I can help

Joy: Thank you Will

Me: But before I can do anything, I need to know about that woman that was with you on my birthday

Joy: All I can say is, she's Ben sister

Me: Biological?

Joy: Yes

Me: She's close to Samanja?

Joy: Samanja is like a friend to their family, so she's definitely close. That's why he's holding a big post on the company.

Me: Hmm, there is a lot to know, and I'll like to get to the root of everything. Is Victoria also arrested?

Joy: No she claimed she's your girlfriend and you were together that night.

Me: My girlfriend? Wao! She tried. I'll call you in the evening because mum will not wait to see you.

Joy: Thanks Will

Me: Can he be reached on phone?

Joy: No, nobody can contact him except on the hearing day

Me: When is the next sitting?

Joy: This coming Monday

Joy: Wao! That's far, I don't think anything can change my mom's mind. We'll surely leave tomorrow, but I will help him. Even though he rejected me, I still know he's my uncle.

Joy: He didn't reject you Will, he was only angry.

Me: No problem, I'll do something my health can carry.

Joy: Thanks Will, I've missed you so much

Me: Hmm

Joy: I actually support you to leave tomorrow

Me: Really, why?

Joy: I'm not sure of what Samanja will do of he knows you are alive

Me: He didn't know?

Joy: He didn't even know you were only in coma. He thought you are dead.

Me: So you think I'm still in danger?

Joy: Yes you are, even Ben doesn't know you are awake yet.

Me: But the news has already circulated, even all corps members have heard. I think he may have known already, I mean Samanja

Joy: You might be right and I'm honestly scared the more

Me: Can you get Uncle Ben's lawyer to come later this evening?

Joy: I can do that

Me: Let's him come over, discreetly though.

Joy: I get it. Thank you Will.

Me: Thank you too, we'll talk later.

Due hugs me again and I could feel she was really sorry. I know she has a kind heart but she should have try to get my dude oof the story then, before concluding. She did try anyway, but I was too stubborn, I reacted to the way we he asked.

Uncle Ben might look like the devil just for that single act, but I think this is too much for him. He's a good man and it will be evil of me to just neglect him there when I'm sure he wasn't the one that tried to kill me. I determined to convince mum to allow me help him. He has done me many goods, he at least deserve this.

Me: Mum, I'm going to help uncle Ben

Mum: He's not your uncle and you are not helping anybody

Me: Mum, you might not be fond of each other but we both know he's my uncle

Dan: Will it's dangerous. I have a feeling the person that tried to kill you is still around

Temmy: Can you remember the person that shot you?

Me: Very well, Uncle Ben is not involved

Mum: Are you sure? All fingers point to him.

Temmy: No mummy, we went to the hotel together that day with Aunty Joy.

Me: I just needed to be sure of something before I divulge the truth.

Temmy: I'm sure Uncle Ben is not involved but I have some confusion. The timing and everything is very suspicious.

Me: I still want to help him. My spirit help him; mum, he's a good man.

Mum: (Sighs) Dear I'm more concern about you than anything. Helping him will be the right thing to do since you are sure he's not the one that tried to kill you, but it will put you in more danger.

Dan: Mum is right, besides if you say he's not he one, the court will ask you who

Me: I'm not planning to go to court.

Temmy: How will you help him then

Me: I've asked for his lawyer to come. The court and the accusers don't know I'm alive yet. When the lawyer come this evening, I'll make a video, confessing he's not the criminal.

Temmy: Did you think that will be enough?

Me: It’s should be, we'll all be there, including the lawyer so it will not look like a make up act.

Temmy: There is a girl also testifying against him apart from the hotel manager. She's claiming to be your girlfriend

Me: Victoria, there is something I don't understand about that lady.

Temmy: The lady's name is Victoria? How did you know her that much?

Me: She was in the hotel that day. In my room or should I say rooms.

Dan: She was indeed in your room? You doing prostitute?

Temmy: No, my guy don't do prostitutes. How did she get into your room Will?

Me: I'm still confused about her really. She is the main criminal

Temmy: How do you mean?

Me: She was my primary abductor. She and her colleagues injected many drugs into my body. I passed out more than twice that day.

Temmy: I still don't understand

Me: The time I called you, I just escaped their kidnap

Temmy: She kidnapped you?

Me: More like kidnap hostage thing. I was tied to the chair and was covered with hood.

Temmy: Damn! That's why your number was not going then

Me: No, I had off the phone before they came. Why I'm confused is because this same girl was the one that saved me. She came back after they've all left. She even warned me they'll come back to kill me to the extent of her begging them not to kill me at gun point.

Temmy: This is confusing.

Me: She was shot that day, I was even trying to help her

Temmy: No she wasn't shot at all. She's perfectly sound. I think she faked the gun shot to get to you

Me: But I felt the wound and even tying cloth round the place to stop the bleeding

Dan: She claimed to ran away after Ben pointed gun at her.

Me: Wao! That girl must be devil. She told me that day she doesn't kill. I don't think she faked the gun shot. She might be testifying for money though. That's what she does

Temmy: You might be right

Later in the evening, Uncle Ben's lawyer came around and I made the video stating he's innocent. I narrated as much as I could but insisted I could not remember the face of the shooter for now but I'm sure it's not Uncle Ben. I also stated I wasn't with any girlfriend, that every other persons that came into my room were intruders. The lawyer was happy with the testimony as he claimed it's enough to save Uncle Ben.

I wish I can be there at the court but even the lawyer advised against it. Saying I'll be in more danger. If anybody foresaw it that I'll end my service year like this, I'll have rebuke the person. I started so lovely I was envying myself, but ended rather pitifully. But all in all, Glory is to God.

Me: Mum, what of Daddy Orire?

Mun: He's in Europe for his leave

Me: Oh, I thought he was going to wait till after our service year. He went with his daughter?

Mum: I can't say. He fast forward it because of you. He couldn't bear seeing you like that.

Me: He came here?

Mum: Yeah, he paid for your hospita bills after I reject Ben's help

Me: Wao, but that means he has traveled before Uncle Ben was arrested?

Mum: Yeah

Debby was playing game on my phone and I noticed she has been rejecting a call on my line for up to four times.

Me: Debby who is it?

Debby: BB it's nobody

Mum: Is it Uche?

Debby/Temmy/Dan: Mum!

Mum: I don't think we should hide it from him anymore. He needs to know.[/b]

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mr man, na because of this story i join nairaland, i've always been a silent reader, back to the matter abeg na God i take beg you pls post the next episode,abi u want make them post obituary of boy wey die of suspense ;Dmr man, na because of this story i join nairaland, i've always been a silent reader, back to the matter abeg na God i take beg you pls post the next episode,abi u want make them post obituary of boy wey die of suspense

Lols, suspense don't kill now. It only keep you guessing. The same way it has been keeping me guessing.

One thing about this story is I compose each episode as a whole, I usually don't have idea of what happen next until I started writing.

How are you bro

ChemicalReaction I sight you. It's been long I read your comment. Hope you are good. Also KomonSense where art thou all these while. Jidxin I sight you too.

I hope we all had a great day

Babsopey:



Lols, suspense don't kill now. It only keep you guessing. The same way it has been keeping me guessing.

One thing about this story is I compose each episode as a whole, I usually don't have idea of what happen next until I started writing.

How are you bro

more ink to your pen thanks for the update

This kind of time nobody is to be trusted. thumbs up babsopey