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Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:16pm On Nov 18, 2016 |
YINKS89: I will bro. Hope the knots are all starting to get loosed right ? no more confusions? |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:18pm On Nov 18, 2016 |
tunjilomo:thanks tunjilomo, *winks |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by bibijay123(f): 11:29pm On Nov 18, 2016 |
Being broke is the root of all evil. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 11:47pm On Nov 18, 2016 |
bibijay123:I' ll journal this statement.. universal truth. |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by mirob(f): 6:53am On Nov 19, 2016 |
remiseyi: Yet to take her to bed I know, but what I meant by falling is taking the offer cheaply knowing fully well what might come with the offer, because if he had not known he would not have lied to the wife. He found Dami attractive and he should know that temptation might arise. 2 Likes |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Hardybattee45: 8:35am On Nov 19, 2016 |
Creeza I dey gbadun your story......waiting for next update. THUMBS UP |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by timstone(m): 9:34am On Nov 19, 2016 |
Brother u re good the truth is that let him that think he stand take heed lest he fall 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 9:42am On Nov 19, 2016 |
Hardybattee45:thanks a bunch , I wont keep you waiting for long. |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by elskillful: 12:25pm On Nov 19, 2016 |
Gabriel please don't do it. |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 2:03pm On Nov 19, 2016 |
elskillful:Lets see what happens :-P |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 1:55pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
dedicated Hardybattee45 Sharafawizkidayo mirob , timstone *Continues Gabriel. I gently caressed her laps, my arms went a bit further upwards into the forbidden arena. It was entruiging, alluring and mind blowing, but unfortunately , Dami was already fast asleep- bad luck and alcohol effects. In as much I wanted to dive into her, it would be termed rape and far from love making. *I still have a bit of self respect and dignity , we are not a Menagerie in human form. I carefully untangled my arms and moved a few paces backwards. Turned and open the door, only to glance back at her for a while, beheld her curves then shut the door firmly.. ***************** Katherine I hoped so dearly for the best and still afraid of the worst case scenario- loosing my husband to his work. He was within reach but I couldn't grasp him even though I tried . The thought was scary enough. I sat down. The chairs pinched me and I stood up immediately. My heart raced fast and I prayed: Lord bring him home safe tonight. Just let him come back. *----------------- " Mum? Is daddy back yet? Dave said as he wiped his face , getting rid of any sleep hangovers. I must have woke him up with my frantic pacing up and down. I glanced surreptitiously at the wall clock. The big Joe said" 11: 45 pm. "No son" I said " Go to your room and rest OK?. "I' ll wait for your father, until he comes back" I felt huge amounts of sympathy in my bones, his facial expressions made me quiver with fear. "I want to wait with you , please" " No honey, I 'll be fine . Don't worry about me" I said as my arms smoothly brushed his left shoulder ,raising him to his feet. " Get up....let's get you to bed. Its really late" Dave sighed. Looked at the dinning table and said " Mummy who is going to eat all these dishes you prepared? Too bad Daddy is not back yet and my appetite is gone" *******-------- I paused for some seconds , my eyes became heavy, a tear trickled down leaving the white balls glassy. "Mummy, now you are crying" he continued " Its my birthday and I should be sad, not you" I felt a touch of ambivalence , laughter came forth and pain disapperaed. I chuckled " Haha..I'm sorry Dave... Mummy is too emotional" His lips brightened my cheeks with a touch of love. "Goodnight Mother..I love you so much" "Goodnight baby, I love you so very much" I said while standing from my squatting position. ****************------------ My mind tried to give answers to the rhetoritical questions in my head. *All of them would be answered tonight. ** --- The door creeked open I immediately feigned sleeep . I shut my eyelids perfectly without flinching . I could feel his heart beat, it was really him. His breath was fresh. I sniffed his shirt like a rabbit when he kissed me on the forehead. Clean, no sweat and suspicious. I opened an eye and saw him scanning the room with a surprise look on his face. Oops!!! He nearly caught me peeking. I shut my eyes again penultimately before he turned. "Love, love wake up" Gabriel tapped me on the shoulder. "Wake up its late. Let's go to bed" I let one eye open like I was indeed aroused from a deep sleep. "You could have at least called " I began. "Let me explain....." I cut him short and said" Please do just that! Your son was worried sick waiting for you since yesterday. You just came back this morning at 1am to explain. Explain what exactly? I said checking the time. *Calm down now Kate. Take it easy,* my mind was faster than my tongue. I wanted to let it all out. The anger overflowed . Oh help me lord.*----- " Kate listen... " He began again. " I've tried listening for the past seven years. I have been listening.... I know we need money... Yes.. But what's the essence of it ,if we can't be happy? His eyes betrayed his thoughts and I wanted an apology. *say it goddmit, just fuvking say it...say you 're sorry. Then he unexpectedly shouted" OK fine , I go to work early and come back late.. So what's the big deal huh? What? I couldn't believe my eyes , this was not my husband . This is not the Gabriel I gave my virginity , the man I sacrificed so much for. His eyes were blood shot with anger. " Everything I do, I do for you and our son Dave" He continued " its not just about me .. Can't you see I'm tired huh? Cant you see ? I'm sick and tired of this poor life. I'm sick and tired of eating from hand to mouth" " I grew up without a father, my mother and sister was all I had . I begged for food all my life. Now I'm trying so hard to give us a better life and you call me selfish?. Go on, tell the whole neighbourhood that your husband doesn't sleep at home because he is working very hard" He said. I was stoned with silence but then I got a bigger shock. " Gabriel what happened to your ring? Where is it? I said trying to refrain from the thought. He sighed.. " Its in my bag" " why would you put your wedding ring there? I said this time a bit calm but deep down I boiled with anger. " Safety measures at work" He said. I couldn't believe my ears. Could my husband's love for me be dead already? Did he place his work before us- me and my son? What have I done wrong? He walked out on me and I caught his arm " Please Gabriel, please..... What's happening to you- to us? Tell me I want to understand" I said with tears in my eyes. He brushed me off and said" Im being truthful and sincere, your problem is that you are doubting me" I watched as he banged the door loudly behind him and broke down terribly into tears , crying my eyes out. TBC 9 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 2:01pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Updated just now... cc Dominique jagugu88li Yorhmienerd |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Nobody: 3:01pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Thanks for the dedication creeza, really appreciated. If Gabriel doesn't refrain from this daddy-for-hire nonsense, he'll loose more than his family. I'm still struggling to understand why he feels he'll loose his job when admitting to having a family because clearly, Dami will still need his services regardless, given her desperation. I thought Dami hired the PI for Gabriel, me sef Good job, still here! 2 Likes |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 3:12pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
jagugu88li:thanks dear, I know you read through all the latest updates cox I saw your moniker there for a long time. The P. I she got an email from is in New York! Keeping watch off her mom...The first man I introduced is actually another investigator, I' m surprised you didn't see that ---- she is on to someone else. *winks..... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 3:16pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Udochee my guy..... I ' m sorry baba Gabriel no gree do am o.. His conscience didn't allow him to |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Udochee(m): 3:23pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Creeza:nice suspension abi na suspense sef(all join). but hope Gabbu will hold strong for long.story getting more interesting. more ink to you & other writers. 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by bibijay123(f): 3:29pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
I think Gabe does not really love Kate. else he won't be falling so easily for Dami n he is not even scared of losing his family wen the truth comes out. I am officially Andy's fan.... 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by elskillful: 3:30pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
if not that dami fell asleep gabriel would have done it.
see how poverty and want for money is shattering this loving family.
thanks for the update creeza. N£XT 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 3:30pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Udochee:chai!!! I hope he does o!! and thanks for the encouragement |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 3:35pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
bibijay123:lol team Andy ! But you don't know him that much to support him nah? Bibijay he might be worse than Gabe , you never can tell. |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 3:36pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
elskillful:OK dear |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Nobody: 3:42pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Creeza:Makes sense now, I was going back to read where I lost it. Thanks for explaining hey 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by yorhmienerd(m): 4:00pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Cool! |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 4:28pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Ehbulu aba (thanks in Esan lang.) yorhmienerd: |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by yorhmienerd(m): 4:41pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Creeza:If you hadn't interpet it, you would have seen "Back to Sender" |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Creeza(m): 4:58pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
LOL yorhmienerd: |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by mirob(f): 7:10pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
bibijay123: Exactly what I said, he fell to cheaply for a man that dearly loved his wife. 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Nobody: 7:22pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
yorhmienerd:hahahaha bibijay123:I beg to differ m'Lady. Mine is, Gabriel really loves his wife hence he's always worried about hurting her by his lies (if she were to fund out). He's desperation for wealth comes also from wanting to fulfill a splendid life for his family. He simply took the wrong turn by allowing himself to take a job offered by a lady he finds attractive. Wrong turn. Mr. Author Sir! Your life depends on wether or not they divorce after the truth comes. Andy guy could turnout to be a bought admirer too. I'll stop here 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by tunjilomo(m): 7:30pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Gabs mind is definitely cheating,even if he is not. 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Sharafawizkidayo(m): 8:42pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Creeza: |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Sharafawizkidayo(m): 8:45pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
Eeyaa, pele kate, ur husband is taken, y dont u too go for andrew Nyc story bro. bt wait first o, wetin go kon happen to the 2 of dem, i just the think! hmmm 1 Like |
Re: WHEN LOVE DIES....( The temptations of Gabriel) by Gloria007(f): 8:54pm On Nov 20, 2016 |
I love this...following 2 Likes |
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