spixytinxy:
hahaha, u sabi chumtin, u beta let me ja e si, pasan ti a fi na iyale, o'nbe Lori aja fun iyawo

lol dtobs come and see spinxytinxy saying incantations in yoruba

WHIZKIDEFE:
I tot Nancy wud give him a Yes, d way i for take vex for ehn.. Angelinastto, thumbs up, bring the updates on.. Joshuamoses101, HBD Broda.

thanks bro..this story don go far o na where i won take start

Angelinastto:

thanks bro. Happy-birthday-TO JOSH

thanks my dear,u hv got an intresting peice going on here

lemme quickly order 4 some nkwobi nd pami nd enjoy d ride with u guys,hope m nt late

OK let me first say Wow! I just started reading yesterday and so far it's been awesome! Kudos! But I have a few suggestions/corrections to make I hope you don't mind!
1. I noticed you misspell the same word(s) all the time eg brooke! You could use auto correct while typing so that even if you don't or are not sure of the spelling it could correct it!
2. Though I like the grand style in which you brought Kelvin back and how so far you have been writing realistically! But let's be real the presidents son can't officially represent the president in an event only a top government official can do that eg vice president, senate president, secretary of state etc!
3. Nancy's lackadaisical attitude to her job is really appalling and it does not teach well! Who or rather which company grants 3 months leave for just wedding prep especially as it's not even her wedding??na im be say if na her wedding na 1 year things na!! Her lateness to work or the fact that she can just skip work any time is not really real.
Well that said you have a very nice story and abeg me I don't understand that Jordan's story abi na Nelly's story as to why Jordan was cheating, that story no carry water oo #teamKelvin# all the way. Who Jordan epp

Angelinastto:
if it is hormobolanle now you will give her drink o

. yes na,its a special case. but where did you and dtobs keep hormobolanle

Angelinastto:

heehee see my cup cake.... Skillful01 abeg bring one of the reserved drink for her....
Sis olatex25 no gree share rice after naming o. Food no dey.
Welcome back, how was the hustle land?

ma dear,twas frustration under tension ooo.jst bkus i wantd 2tel u d ppl dt ar impersonatn dz ma swt tory dahz y dy bannd me.d drink wey i wn manage nva reach ma side ooo.hw weekend owambe be nah?

I stayed up all night to read this, I went tru d entire emotional journey, shit I even cried, you know what girl, u are one of d best authors I've read and I read a lot of books, more creativity to your brain.....

CONTINUATION
DEDICATION:: PSALMORAD05 OMODIHOT HAYDOUBLE

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I pleaded with kelvin not to go after Jordan, i even showed him the text message Jordan sent but he refused my plea and stormed out of the house.
Kelvin angrily walked to his car and i followed him. He opened the door to his car and was ready to close it when i held to the door and pleaded with him not to go again.
Kelvin sighed and came out of the car. He slowly removed my hand from the door and said "Nancy, i know you don't want me to do this but i have to. All this has to stop once and for all, okay? Trust me, i will be back before you know it, I promise"
I only looked down at my feet and noded. Kelvin briefly kissed me on my forehead and zoomed off. Since i could not stop him, all i could do was to stare at his car till it went out of sight.
I ran back into my room and went on my kneels. I prayed for peace with the whole of my heart though i knew my request was next to impossible. I had never seen kelvin angry before ever since we met and I knew Jordan would be fuming as well, i thought of what to do to stop their meeting. Calling Jordan was a no go area so i decided to call and tell kelvin that Mi dad would get my things for me, instead of him getting into trouble with Jordan. I tried his number consecutively, it went through but he did not accept my call. This was all the answer i needed to know that nothing good would come out of Kelvin and Jordan's meeting. I paced up and down in my room, thinking of what to do. I could not bare to see either of them been hurt. I loved Jordan and kelvin was like my everything.
***
"Nancy, is kelvin with you? His phone has been ringing" khole said at the door. I collected the phone from Khole's hand and saw more than 20 missed call from me, i hissed and slowly walked to my bed. "What is it sis? Where is he?" I turned to khole and told her everything that happened. "OMG and you did not call me? I was on the phone with Josh. I wish i was there, i would have gladly go with Kelvin to teach that toddler a lesson!". Khole said angrily. "its not time to fight sis, i just want peace with everybody. Jordan has his reasons you know? I just wish i can have a peaceful breakup and still have that friendship i use to have with Jordan but everything just got messy because of me. Am damn tired of all this!". I said as tears ran down my cheek. Khole took me into her arms and assured me that everything would be fine, she gave me hope and i held unto her words.
After an hour without a trace of kelvin, khole called in sick for me at work and i was given the day off. I was determined not to step out without seeing Kelvin.
****
Time checked 12:00pm and kelvin was yet to return. I could not bare the worry any longer, khole's comforting words were no longer doing a thing on me. All i wanted was to know what was happening between Jordan and kelvin. I rushed to the livingroom and opened all the window in order to get a better view of kelvin if he should get back.
" Nancy, what is wrong?"
i heard mi mom's voice from behind. I ran into her arms and cried my eyes out. I did not know where the emotions came from but i felt like pouring out my heart to mi mom would be relieving. Mi mom allowed me to cry in her arm before leading me to a chair. I composed myself and narrated all that happened to mi mom. She took a deep breathe and said "even if you had woken me up, i would'nt have stopped him. Let the whole situation get messier and leave them to settle like a man. As for kelvin's safety, lets give him thirty more minutes before i will inform the police, though i know there will be no need for that. I do not know why but i trust kelvin and i trust his decisions"
"I agree with mom" khole said from the dining room.
I agreed with Khole's and Mi mom's decision. I waited with little hope.
****
At exactly 12:30m I heard a loud horn from the gate and i rushed out of the house.
Words could not express how happy i was when i saw kelvin drive my car into the compound. I rushed at him like a little girl immediately he alighted from the car and he took me into his arm. I got emotional and cried in his arm, there and then, i realised how much kelvin ment to me.
After a long hug, i released myself from his arm and examined him. He had no sign of injury, he only had a small cut on his lips. I gussed he exchanged few punch with Jordan. Kelvin smiled and said "see? Am back with just a little cut" I smiled back and walked Kelvin to mi mom and khole. They were standing at the door, watching our little drama. Kelvin made a slow bow and greeted mi mom. She patted him on the back and said "welcome my son". Kelvin hugged khole as well before we went inside.
"how did it go?" I asked kelvin immediately we settled in a chair. "Lets just say, we sort everything out like men" kelvin said and we all laughed.
In the middle of it all, my heart went to Jordan.
T.B.C

let me not talk yet@ sunshine

NEXT!!!

Haba Aunty this update is very short na

NelsonObas:
let me not talk yet@ sunshine

lol how about now?

Oly23:
Haba Aunty this update is very short na

haba aunty Oly 5000 words is not beans nao:-P

Nancy is confused. Even in the middle it my heart went to Jordan

anjel,iyaff strtd doin us badt tin ooo.y u kun dy gv us half fud 4dz early mawnin ni?biko add xtra plate abeg.

Oly23:
OK let me first say Wow! I just started reading yesterday and so far it's been awesome! Kudos! But I have a few suggestions/corrections to make I hope you don't mind!
1. I noticed you misspell the same word(s) all the time eg brooke! You could use auto correct while typing so that even if you don't or are not sure of the spelling it could correct it!
2. Though I like the grand style in which you brought Kelvin back and how so far you have been writing realistically! But let's be real the presidents son can't officially represent the president in an event only a top government official can do that eg vice president, senate president, secretary of state etc!
3. Nancy's lackadaisical attitude to her job is really appalling and it does not teach well! Who or rather which company grants 3 months leave for just wedding prep especially as it's not even her wedding??na im be say if na her wedding na 1 year things na!! Her lateness to work or the fact that she can just skip work any time is not really real.
Well that said you have a very nice story and abeg me I don't understand that Jordan's story abi na Nelly's story as to why Jordan was cheating, that story no carry water oo #teamKelvin# all the way. Who Jordan epp

thanks honey for taking your time.
1¤ About the spelling mistakes, am guilty. Am lazy to go over my write up but you should notice that am improving. Give you little girl some credit joor!


2¤ I thought d president can be represented by anybody he thinks can represent him well. We've got instances where the first lady represent the president so why cant the first son do the same *WINKS* its just an overhead bridge opening.



3¤ Nancy is just still serving. I clearly explained how her PPA was gotten for her through her dad's connection and she was granted the leave because of her dad's connection as well. Gusse we all know how power and money run things in this country we call Nigeria. And forgetting about power, i know of some people who misses work for months while serving.
Again thanks sis, for pointing out my mistakes.
God bless you for me!.
Morning

Lankyannie:
anjel,iyaff strtd doin us badt tin ooo.y u kun dy gv us half fud 4dz early mawnin ni?biko add xtra plate abeg.

sweetheart is light food that is good for breakfast nao.
Morning dear

Sharryboo:
I stayed up all night to read this, I went tru d entire emotional journey, shit I even cried, you know what girl, u are one of d best authors I've read and I read a lot of books, more creativity to your brain.....

wow am honoured. Thanks babe!

Lankyannie:
ma dear,twas frustration under tension ooo.jst bkus i wantd 2tel u d ppl dt ar impersonatn dz ma swt tory dahz y dy bannd me.d drink wey i wn manage nva reach ma side ooo.hw weekend owambe be nah?

lol nah so dem ban elskillful. I tire for dem.
Owambe fine oo, e dey do me like say make e no finish

skillful01:
. yes na,its a special case. but where did you and dtobs keep hormobolanle

me i dont know oo HORMOBOLANLE OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

joshuamoses101:
thanks my dear,u hv got an intresting peice going on here

lemme quickly order 4 some nkwobi nd pami nd enjoy d ride with u guys,hope m nt late

thanks swidy. Welcome on board. We don't have that here. We only have akara of life!

Nice story angelinastto

Angelinastto:

thanks honey for taking your time.
1¤ About the spelling mistakes, am guilty. Am lazy to go over my write up but you should notice that am improving. Give you little girl some credit joor!


2¤ I thought d president can be represented by anybody he thinks can represent him well. We've got instances where the first lady represent the president so why cant the first son do the same *WINKS* its just an overhead bridge opening.



3¤ Nancy is just still serving. I clearly explained how her PPA was gotten for her through her dad's connection and she was granted the leave because of her dad's connection as well. Guess we all know how power and money run things in this country we call Nigeria. And forgetting about power, i know of some people who misses work for months while serving.
Again thanks sis, for pointing out my mistakes.
God bless you for me!.
Morning

All righty!! It's actually true that you have improved in spelling kudos!!b please come and complete the story sharp sharp! Do you know I woke up by 3 to check for update today nawa oo

Angelinastto:

haba aunty Oly 5000 words is not beans nao:-P

You haff try no mind me it was while you were still updating that I posted that comment! Even before the comment will show the story magically elongated

Her heart WENT out to jordan.
no be only WENT na BENT.
angelinastto please give nancy a little bit of sense,love is blind but not foolish.




Nice update

Angelinastto:

lol thanks sis........... Some people like spinxytinxy abii?

lol *smiling*

Great story, filled with intrigue, suspense, life lessons but unfortunately spoiled by irregular and scanty updates.

Angelinastto:

sweetheart is light food that is good for breakfast nao.
Morning dear

9ja is nt oyinbo ppl dt eats lyt fud.we nigerians eat full plate of eba nd fufu 4breakfast.who light fud epp?

Angelinastto:

lol nah so dem ban elskillful. I tire for dem.
Owambe fine oo, e dey do me like say make e no finish

lol i noticed 2,dahz y u didnt even bother 2gv dtobs his dinner nd meet him in d oza room.u badt gan.plz i go folo u go owambe dz weekend so beta remind me.

Thanks a bunch, more update please... I have been a ghost reader buh am being forced to comment. More data to your phone dear

Nancy is confused, just like me, may God help us

Angelinastto:

lol how about now?

you try (sha), but i guess you dont know what or how it feel to be kept in suspence. just try and close the gaps a li2