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PERFIDY- A STORY OF LOVE,BETRAYAL AND DECEIT / Countless (a story of Sex, Betrayal and vengeance) by Darousmart Emmanuel. / United In Betrayal (2) (3) (4)
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Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Shakyroh320(f): 5:26am On Dec 18, 2016 |
Angel,i just hope kelvin wont turn to another jordan,he should not let Nancy regret telling him the truth ooo,tankx for the gud work dear,more inspiration |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by WHIZKIDEFE(m): 5:32am On Dec 18, 2016 |
Angelinassto, thanks for the update.. Don't rush d story under pressure o. I'll go for quality(update) over quantity anyday.. I'll appreciate if you give us much quantity of quality updates, lol.. Just like Oliver Twist, i want more(updates). |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by AirstarKane(f): 5:41am On Dec 18, 2016 |
spixytinxy:I was posted to Abuja dear what about you. I wish we could meet sef. Anyone staying in gwarinpa abeg make we hang out o. ![]() |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by oluwatymylehyn(m): 8:25am On Dec 18, 2016 |
Kelvin, please don't make a mountain out of the molehill. It's painful though, knowing fully well that Nancy has always been a good girl. I however, implore him to accept her status and let bygones be bygones. Angel, I tip you for laurels in the nearest future. You're great. Happy Sunday to everyone. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by ChizzyMaris(f): 11:37am On Dec 18, 2016 |
Angel, you can help me inform Jordan that I'm still single. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Hadampson(m): 2:20pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
Angelinastto:are u muslim? sori 4 asking ![]() |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by coltaine(m): 6:41pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
hey dearie, u re really good with the way you write your story....the way you paint the scene through the eyes of the character, awesome i must say......keep it up angel |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by olatex25(m): 6:59pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
Mike greedines is beyond limit oo, Just imagine.. I comment my reserve... |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by princessadeola(f): 9:39pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
Angelinastto:The Lord will help you. More wisdom 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by xamster(m): 10:15pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
Story a goan gud Angel. So what's the fuss about virginity?!. Its laudable to think the lil Nancy of yesterday would still be a virgin. After all the trials and at end triumph, this shouldn't be a deal stuff. Anyways i don miss ur story dear, they've been a tremendous increase in your writing skill. That i must commend. it ain't easy reading back to back since Oct rolling up to the next year. Baby you're da best. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by xamster(m): 10:16pm On Dec 18, 2016 |
Story a goan gud Angel. So what's the fuss about virginity?!. Its laudable to think the lil Nancy of yesterday would still be a virgin. After all the trials and at end triumph, this shouldn't be a deal stuff. Anyways i don miss ur story dear, they've been a tremendous increase in your writing skill. That i must commend. it ain't easy reading back to back since Oct rolling up to the next year. Baby you're da best, More wisdom to you dear. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Chumzypinky(f): 9:04am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Awww...wats happenin 2 all d writers on Nairaland na? No one's updatin. Wetin we do una na? Abi na Xmas palava? |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by girlhaley(f): 10:04am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Angelinastto: Hehehe......Aunty angel,why you fear me na abi Gulder na bad thing ![]() Please......What's d fuss about virginity.....why did kelvin misunderstand Nancy By force ![]() Nw....this getting intense..... The thunder wey go fire Uncle mike and his wife is still inside d gym doing press up More ideas to your story Angel......btw,have u get d new phone |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Divineroyalty(f): 10:53am On Dec 19, 2016 |
Wow! Best story ever. So sorry I haven't commented yet,I've been sick all these while. Guess what! Ur story just did something to my system. Am sure I'll b well soon. Keep up the good work. I rate u five stars. 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by hormobolanle: 1:07pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Angelinastto: uhmmmmm c CONFIRM BRIBERY CHAIIIIII DIARIS GOD O ABEG WE NO UNDERSTANDING |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by mchloe599(m): 1:35pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Smh Mike's fighting for bride price Kelvin's getting bitter about Nancy losing her virginity Mthceeew Egbon kelvin take the girl like that jare.. Shey na virgin yhu dey find kakakiri.. Lol And if you can't take her like that then give her back to Jordan.. Afterall everyone deserves a second chance.. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Nobody: 5:17pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Kelvin gerarahere.
who virginity epp,abi kelvin go say e never bleep.person. T34M V1RG1N |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Oly23(f): 6:21pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Hiaa which one is this new wahala? Kelvin it's not after rooting for you, you will now come and spoil show!! abeg our Nancy is still a good girl na even she is not a virgin again! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Roeteemie(m): 8:49pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Nawa oooooo angelinastto nd others.so u guys cnt even wish a api bdae hmmmmmmmmmmdr is God oooo 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Divineroyalty(f): 10:39pm On Dec 19, 2016 |
Roeteemie: Hip Hip Hip! Hurray! Happy birthday dear. Many more prosperous n fruitful years to u. Age wit grace.
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Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Nobody: 2:19pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
Angelinastto where are you,oya come drop sumtin |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by olatex25(m): 3:01pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
Where s my darling Angelinasto nah.. Cum and update biko, or has she travel 2 her home town for Xmas.. Maybe dere's no network at where she is.. Anyway Merry xmas nd apy new yr in adv dear, kip my chicken lap oo 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Adeyemi4ril(m): 9:26pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
Pls cum n finish d story ooo! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Ita33(m): 11:32pm On Dec 20, 2016 |
mr writer, you'll pay for my Mb, i love this piecw of writing bro!!! |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 8:52am On Dec 21, 2016 |
CONTINUATION *** I knew kelvin was angry because of my virginity but i never expected him to take it that far."You say what?" i asked Jordan again. "Honestly i do not know the problem with you guys but is he suppose to accuse me of taking your virginity with force?Letting go of you in the first place is tearing my world apart,he doesn't have to rub salt on my injury.Just so he knows,am regretting the fact that i let go already and am not starting a love battle yet because i do not want to go back on my words.Let nobody take my gentility for stupidity or else i won't think twice about bringing up the old me".Jordan said and i could feel how hurt he must have felt.I had nothing else to do than to apologies to Jordan.I gently picked my words and apologized on behalf of kelvin.Without much argument,Jordan accepted my apology and we got talking again.We talked for awhile, before i finally suggested we call it a day. After ending Jordan's call, i called kelvin,his line went through but he did not accept my call.I opted to sleeping instead of getting worried about him,since it was obvious that his actions were intensional.I went to bed with my engagement ring close to my heart and a heavy heart. *** At exactly 6:00am,the sound of my alarm woke me up. After saying my prayer, i dressed for work and had breakfast with my foster parent before leaving. I got to work at exactly 7:30am.While working down to my department,i noticed some of my co workers were looking at me in a strange manner but i did'nt care,i only greeted them and left. I did not leave my office until lunch time, when i saw the need to refill my stomach.I tried kelvin's line without success before leaving for the cafeteria. "Congratulations Nancy" I heard a voice behind just when i was about to place my order.I turned and saw Dtobs ( a co worker)."For what?" I asked."Is that not an engagement ring on your finger?" He said and i just replied with a nod."The ring must have cost the dude his life savings, he must really be inlove with you " dtobs said as he examined the ring and i smiled in response."This worth celebrating, my bills are on you for lunch" He said and i agreed.That was when i realised everybody must have been looking at me strangely because of the ring. I had my lunch and left after paying for myself and dtobs. Time checked 3:00PM.My table was free from work, so i decided to sign out and go over to kelvin's apartment. **** I was welcomed by the security men at kelvin's residence and Through them i got to know that kelvin was home all day.I went into the house after giving them tips. There was no sign of kelvin in the living room so i went to his bed room but he was'nt there as well.I dialed his number and eventually traced him to the kitchen with his phone ringing tone. "There you are" i said when i saw kelvin in the kitchen. "Hi" kelvin said without facing me.I walked up to him and hugged him from behind but he did not respond to my greetings.I released myself and said "like seriously? You still mad at me and thats why you've not been accepting my call? You even called Jordan?Tell me whats the problem?All this show for virginity?" Kelvin faced me and said "You call this a show? Do you know how painful it is that am not going to have you first? Its like a shame and it makes me question if all the steps have been taking is right. Its better to go back before its too late". I felt my eyes darken when Kelvin ended his statement. "Are you kidding me?" I asked with little force.Kelvin gave no reply to my question and i decided to leave because one thing i can never be is a lady without pride.I grabbed my bag and matched out.I was almost at the kitchen door when kelvin gripped my hand from behind.He made me face him and said "Am so sorry sunshine.Its just that have always had the fantasy of deflowing my future wife first and when you told me you are no longer a virgin, my dream was shattered.Just now i realise that you mean more to me than the so called Virginity and my dream. Please forgive this once" I only looked else where with a frown on my face. Kelvin held my face and said "Am waiting honey,am sorry". I noded and he said "Are you sure am forgiven? I can kiss you now, cos thats what have been dreaming about?" I noded again and kelvin brought his lips on mine. At first i did not respond to the kiss but with time, i could no longer fight the passion. If Jordan was a good kisser, kelvin was the best.At a point my legs could no longer carry me due to the sweet sensation running through my vein.Kelvin lifed me off my feet and i climbed on him. He gently placed me on the long table in the kitchen and lifted my blouse.Kelvin slowly kissed me on my belly botton and gently moved up to my boobs not leaving any part untouched.I could not help but moan out his name as he worked on my bra."You have to apologies to Jordan" I managed to say. "Anything for the queen of my heart" he said as he gave my boobs freedom from my bra cup. 8 Likes 1 Share |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by princessadeola(f): 9:20am On Dec 21, 2016 |
don't mind Kelvin jare, he is just hurt and I told u then o. |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Chumzypinky(f): 9:49am On Dec 21, 2016 |
N y do i get ds naggn feelin dat Kelvin is only tryin 2 use Nancy? As 4 me, i'm teamJordan all d way and no 1 can change dat |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Angelinastto(f): 9:53am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Hii guys...... Sorry for not replying your comments and the late update. Bussy i am. Sadly this will be the last update for 2016. Will be traveling to my home town and ion know if i will even be able to make phone call talk less of internet connection. From Angelinastto to everybody Merry Christmas and happy New year. Babsopey rachelfst skillful01 Hormobolanle Girlhaley spinxytinxy Olatex25 lankyanni lawal1470 WHIZKIDEFE, Princessadeola Oly23 divineroyalty Jane1234 Jagugu88li Shakroh320 Oluwabuqqyyolo Oluwatymylehin Xamster Reoteemie Creeza and all readers! You made 2016 Meaningful guys! You all rock! 1 Like |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Xerox01(m): 9:55am On Dec 21, 2016 |
I kinnda feel kelvin is now trying to use nancy. Anyway thumbs up |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Lankyannie(f): 11:19am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Are my the only one suspecting dz kelvin nw?d guy myt just want to use nancy nd dispose her cus of mere virginity.i hope its nt true cus na die 4am if he hurt ma baby.ma angel,so u no wait make i folo u go xmas wid u?wishing are funfilld christmas babe,plz do bring smtin 4us dt wont be travelln when kumin bk.stay safe. 2 Likes |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by teel123(f): 11:29am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Have a good xmas n newyear. But kelvin bad oooo |
Re: IN The DARK (A Story Of Love,betrayal And Survival) by Creeza(m): 11:43am On Dec 21, 2016 |
teel123:As in eh.... I thought I was the only person who noticed that |
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