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Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Music/Radio / Rap Battles / Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n (2219 Views)
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Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by JigsawKillah(m): 8:19pm On Dec 29, 2016 |
Whiz10 vs Hydrog3n Voting Criteria : Opener - 1 point Rhymes - 2 points Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Punchlines - 3 points Personals - 2 points Flow - 1 point Wordplays - 2 points Closer - 1 point Rules - 20 lines. - Deadline is 8pm, Friday 30 December 2016. - Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - A no show attracts a ban. - No unnecessary comments - No smearing comments about any bar OR biting accusations without proof. - Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse - please put it in your vote. Vote and state what you found wrong. - If there's anything you need to say in defence of your verse please save them for after voting's over. - NO argument with established vets OR voters. - Battlers should not interject between votes and voters should just vote and leave it like that. Goodluck!!! |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 11:18am On Dec 30, 2016 |
* Singing * Started from the bottom now we here/Whiz started from the bottom he still there/We eat grass to grace,Whiz eat grass, no trace Whiz10 Where you at |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by whiz10(m): 7:41pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
Cc hydrog3n |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 7:45pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
late comer ,after you |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 7:58pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
Since am an older member its only fare I break the ice |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 8:02pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
AM LITERATE,SO STARTING WITH RED ILLUSTRATE, A MARKED SCRIPT WITH BLOOD OF WHIZ,SINCE HIZ GENERATION A DISGRACE, HIZ CASE GONE BE AT EASE . . . . . Whiz sister virginity on aution,With erêction, no protection,went deep like injection/It went cheap that's perfection until she refused abortion,/ katana sliced her midsection/Now she bleeding like she just went through C-Section You can't Hydro copy,periodically can't even top me/Failed chemistry in school, lost to Kinetic a fool, your raps jargon sloppy,/Fâggot ugly,like his crooke dad,and his "Crude" rap, a carbon copy Whiz family traveling for Xmas to the west/With a gun,amor vest,at my best/Stop them like I dey vex,saw his mum chest,open button start to press breast,/hiz dad got depressed,the car---i---arrest/ Before i pull the trigger he died of cardiacarrest Hiz mom getting nailed,while he runs, tries to escape/Don't wanna hear how he failed/Don't wanna hear tales of him being no Alphamale/As he runs away,i threw a "Javelin" through his thorax, "to spear him details" hiz a pussy ,guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree,/I hunted his generation,I saw them falling as i cut down the family tree,/Burn there ashes to hades,to inflict 1st degree burns for free/So check the temperature... it's murder on a first degree 1 Like |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by whiz10(m): 8:05pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
Hydrog3n:oh! Okay. Modified. |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by whiz10(m): 8:06pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
Who the Bleep is changing my words |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by whiz10(m): 8:07pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
Hydrog3n: |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by whiz10(m): 8:09pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
¤ Shot miss, but ma bullet care.ss the lad/ like my weapon sex starve/ planted a bomb in his groin, too blow off his staff/ ‘shoved ma gun in his Ass'. . .boooooofff!!! Hydrog3n fuck3d after my ‘four-play' ¤ this ain’t a brawl, am here too feast/ street, heard I was battling ‘hydro-gin’. . .they screamed, ‘sapele-water' abeg quit/ since he insist/ I made area boys sit/ ‘drinks on me like Jesus’. . .I got miraculous punch to make H too, oh! whine/ ¤ ma eve party, was a hit/. . .’cos no one wanted to leave/ show over, everyone went aggrieve/ we heard hydrogen brag abouh his party been a potential hit/ just like a plague, everyone Shun H I.V ¤ He’ll probably rap abouh screwin ma sister/ at worst, threaten to use a s3x tape to blackmail her/ truth is, he never saw Esther/ his gallery clean, no vid either/. . .even if cams were planted in his skull, he won’t picture her nak3d!!! ¤ quit hip hop bro, ya bars are lame/ stop shooting for the top, yhu won’t get the aim/ NL wackiest MC what a shame/ like his rapping on a stage filled with ‘borrowed consoles', Hydrogen is never top of his game!!! |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 8:11pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
whiz10:Sensor |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 8:15pm On Dec 30, 2016 |
whiz10: |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by JigsawKillah(m): 8:47am On Jan 06, 2017 |
verds needed here please elymaxiimus Laveda MrKang 007bruce devilmaycry iceskidd teddybiyasi and every regular battler on here |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by JigsawKillah(m): 8:56am On Jan 06, 2017 |
opener: tie closer: tie rhymes: hydrog3n personals: nil punchlines: Hydrog3n metaphor: Hydrog3n wordplay: whiz10 flow: tie Mvgt: Hydrog3n |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by MrKang: 11:36am On Jan 06, 2017 |
You both need serious improvements. In terms of rhymes,punches,wordies you both fell off big time Hydrog3n you've been on this section for years and you still script like this? I think you both need to read more archive battles to learn how to craft decent battle verses. Not verses that's tiring to read. Whiz10 you need to work on your delivery,the ideas are def there,and upgrade on your use of rhymes,in some of your lines it was lost. Also to you ninjas,its not a must to do wordplays,bad wordies make you lose points. I can't even vote based on criteria,but based on enjoyability due to his verse being a bit comical and putting in a bit more effort than his opponent. Mvgt- Whiz10 |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 4:32pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
@ MrKang I challange you to read the verse again,but this time in between the line,read with an open mind,you probably was expecting too much. You said I put less effort,how did you come about this,you only think this because of the flow,the continuation with each verse,the story telling,which made the delivery flow ,From beginning to the end I didn't sway Unlike my opponent he was,just jumping from one unrelated punchline to the other,with poor build ups ,which has nothing to do with the punche line Your verdict was flawed,you gave no reason for your vote,You didn't allocate any point,You did the same thing on Paayne vs Zachhugo One more question Why are you like this ? |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by MrKang: 5:29pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Hydrog3n: MrKang:Its a shame niggas can't take decent criticism. Sentimental ninjas. Your verse was just all over the place,I saw no effort at all, Whiz verse had its fair share of probs but at least his ideas were fresh,he made attempts at punches there was non in yours at all. If I used the criteria you won't get any,it will be nil all through. Thats why i had to use enjoyability as a tie breaker. Now explain how this is the same as the verd in Paayne's thread? You don't think before you type. what generation of textcees are we breeding in which ninjas get sentimental over verds ,even when voting is still open? na wa o I shouldn't have even bothered voting here. |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 5:35pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
more verdict needed nastynic Dotwillz 04kaa Dj5naira YOLOHOMMIE fluxmind Paayne Zachhugo Giyazz Pressplay411 gottoboy 007bruce HMZi zedoo let get this over with |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 5:39pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
MrKang:am tired of this to and fro bullshit between us,,aren't you also tired ? |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Nobody: 5:52pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Hydrog3n: You no go calm down before they kick you comot for here. |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by MrKang: 6:18pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
fluxmind:Its shocking, now I know why you thought he was a 16 year old. Someone cannot vote in peace again without warranting attacks. Its the behaviour of Hydrog3n and co that drive voters away, cus they feel when their vote is in contrary to these whining textcees they get attacked. When will these kids understand there's something called "opinions" and it differs? Just see him talking "to and fro bs", when he was the one who initiated the attack pointlessly,trying to make it seem my vote was based on something else. smh Its a shame the mods aren't really active anymore,if it was back then you'll get disqualified instanta for arguing with voters while voting is still on. |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Nobody: 6:40pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
MrKang: Honestly I like the boy's demeanor overall, just chill until he's battling someone then he gets troublesome & reactive. Figures, that's why he call himself hydrogen ffs, comical yes, lyrical not yet. Some things he says make me bonkers, say him go plank pessin, wtf lol. You should give him side tutorials sef, if he's patient & willing to learn tho. |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by HMZi: 9:29pm On Jan 06, 2017 |
Hydrog3n nailed it....it ain't hard to see |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Guykhena(m): 10:36am On Jan 07, 2017 |
smh,you both need to up your game Opener - 1 point-Hydrogen Rhymes - 2 points- tie Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points- tie Punchlines - 3 points- Whiz Personals - 2 points- nil Flow - 1 point- Hydrogen Wordplays - 2 points-tie Closer - 1 point - Whiz 4-2 MVGT- Whiz10 |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Paayne(m): 12:30pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
If my vote will count, then here goes... Opener _1 point - Tie (although whiz could have had this buh his end punch didn't connect well with the build up). Rhymes _2 points - Hydrogen Similes/ Metaphors _2 points - Tie Punchlines _3 points - Whiz10 (obviously due to his better build ups) Flow _1 point - Whiz10 (enjoyed his verse more) Wordplays _2 points - Tie Personals _2 points - None Closer _1 point - Tie Thus, mvgt _ whiz10 buh sincerely speaking tho, you guys should make room for adjustment. You can actually be better than what i saw here. I wont say much so as not to derail, buh pls let ur next respective battles show some level of improvement!!. #peace |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 1:12pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
^^ the nigga above me though, for those saying we need to improve, well, that's why we here This thread is long over due Jigsawkillah close the thread as soon as you get this,I think am done reloading this page |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by ZachHugo(m): 5:16pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
Opener - Whizkid Rhymes - tie Similes/ Metaphors - Hydrogen Punchlines - whizkid Personals - Flow - tie Wordplays - Whizkid Closer - Whizkid W - Whizkid |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 9:13pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
Na so? |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Hydrog3n(m): 9:17pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by JoeWendell: 9:28pm On Jan 08, 2017 |
Mvgt-Hydrog3n opener, punches -hydrogen wordplay, closer, Rhymes, Flow- Tie Metaphor- Whiz pers- Ojuku |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by Nobody: 12:08pm On Jan 09, 2017 |
Honestly speaking Hydrog3n had more brutal lines now. I read both verses start to end & whiz10 didn't really put up. As much as they both need work, Hydrog3n came out swinging with aggression in his lyrics tho. Only the last bar from whiz was decent enough cos I expected more if he got votes. Oh well, no shoot me ejoor |
Re: Brutal Clash: Whiz10 Vs Hydrog3n by MrKang: 6:32pm On Jan 09, 2017 |
Also this thread is long overdue. cc Jigsawkillah |
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