Ouch! You guys have gone far.

Thanks for the mention dear.

Kai Kai Kai this Rosa has suffered please na don't let Harry kill her please atleast let her just escape with her son!!

Wow!! diz harry or escobar or jacob iz a devil in human form.. what wil he gain 4rm torturin Rosa. i hate d guy

Btw oludare007 i just cnt figured out d right word tew qualify ur work.. all i can say iz Excellent even tho excellent iz an understatement. keeping it coming bro

Hadampson:
Wow!! diz harry or escobar or jacob iz a devil in human form.. what wil he gain 4rm torturin Rosa. i hate d guy

Btw oludare007 i just cnt figured out d right word tew qualify ur work.. all i can say iz Excellent even tho excellent iz an understatement. keeping it coming bro

thanks bro

Oly23:
Kai Kai Kai this Rosa has suffered please na don't let Harry kill her please atleast let her just escape with her son!!

Oludare


Extremely you are good..... Thanks for d update, pls keep it coming.

I'm really loving this...5star rating for you Btw,thanks for the mention

oludare007:

please na I wey cry for you oo

Oly23:

please na I wey cry for you oo

don't cry na. Let's read on. I don finish the story, so update wont take long again. Just three short chapters to go

iamharkinwaley:
Oludare



Extremely you are good.....
Thanks for d update, pls keep it coming.

*kowtowed*

oludare007:
don't cry na. Let's read on. I don finish the story, so update wont take long again. Just three short chapters to go

3 short chapters to go cool ! Lemme get my reading glasses then and save the tears for another time!

oludare007:
*kowtowed*

you be my boss o.... I dey prostrate like this, infact my beards dey touch ground

Oly23:

3 short chapters to go cool ! Lemme get my reading glasses then and save the tears for another time!

you won't have a reason to cry jare...

iamharkinwaley:

you be my boss o.... I dey prostrate like this, infact my beards dey touch ground

I am honoured, Sir

Great work man......
You are doing just too well....
You too much.........

oludare007:
you won't have a reason to cry jare...

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Chapter 22


I woke up to a biting cold. My skin aches so badly. I looked around, it was a bit dark. A small light reflected at the far end. Wherever I was, the whole atmosphere was very cold- including the floors. It should be the freezer, just as Harry as directed. I knew that my eyes would adjust itself to the darkness, but I got to find a way out, fast. It would seem impossible, but I was determined to try.
I breathed out cold air like a dragon would breathe fire and I crawled towards the door. The design was simple- it could only be opened from the outside.

‘Great.’ I told myself.

I hugged myself very tight, but it wouldn’t help. The cold bit harder and I could feel it. I became dizzy and sight, blurry. I sat at a corner to think. Then my eyes caught the cash, neatly removed from the bag, wrapped in a plastic bags. I crawled over it and held them in my hands. It was a pity that I was gonna die, afterall I went through. All these time I was dying to get home without an empty hand, I was only chasing the winds. Mama had been killed, David had been adopted by the same man, who had caused my woes.

I wandered through the freezer in search for anything- anything to help me out. I found me a dead body- Holden’s body. I searched through it- no gun, no knife, but a lighter. I took the lighter and dropped it. It would be useless. I need something to help me try to open the door- I was freezing to death. Then I decided to indulge in some exercises. That would keep me warm. So I started; jumping jacks. This kept me alive until I got tired and started to freeze to death again.

I collapsed on the floor of the freezer and resolved to death. My whole life flashed in my eyes. The struggle, David, Mama and the money.

‘Yes, the money!’ I jerked back some strength. ‘The money!’ I said pulled myself back to my feet.

I went for the money, tore some of them away from the plastic bag and carried it beside the dead body. I took the lighter. Without much ado, I made myself some camp fire, burning the whole cash away, while I warmed up my hands. I laughed as I threw in more notes into the fire and watched it burn- providing a life-saving fire with the very thing that I would have killed to keep. I laughed at myself. By the time I started to hear voices, I had burned up to five million dollars.

I quickly stood up, dragged the dead body over the ashes. I packed some ice and lay on the floor, eyes over me. I played dead. After some minutes, the door opened.

‘She should be dead by now.’ I heard Harry’s voice.

‘You finally killed her.’ Fredrick said.

‘Well, she left me no choice. Go, go see if she’s dead. She can be a real bittch, sometimes.’

‘Okay, Boss.’

‘No, not you. Let Fredrick do that.’

‘Bleep you, dad.’ Fredrick said and I heard him step into the freezer.

He came over to me and kneel. My intention was to grab him, but I would be shot dead right away. So, as soon as he bent over to listen to my heartbeat, I whispered in his ears.

‘Fredrick…’

I believed he jerked. I couldn’t say because my eyes were wide shut, but I heard Harry asked what the problem is.

‘Is she fuckin alive?’

‘I… I don’t think so.’ Fredrick said.

“Well, be sure. Check again!’

Fredrick put his ears on my chest again and took the chance again.

‘Please, help me.’

Fredrick stood up.

‘So?’ Harry asked.

‘She’s fuckin dead.’ Fredrick said.

‘Great. Now, take some boys and go plant her into the soil. Plant her by the apples, so that everyone can have a taste of her. What do you think, son?’ Harry laughed. I could hear his voice trail away.

‘Hey, you. Get the truck around.’ Fredrick ordered.

‘Yes, boss.’

‘You, come help me grab her legs.’

I was put in the truck and driven for sometimes. I opened my eyes after a while, and there was Fredrick, looking at me, smiling.

‘It’s okay.’ He said. ‘You’re safe now.’

‘Thank you.’ I whispered. Tears rolled down my cheeks.

‘I’m sorry.’ Fredrick whispered.

The car stopped at some time, and Fredrick ordered his guys to get as far as they could- away from him.

‘I’ll do this myself.’

‘Yes, Boss’. The two of them chorused.

After they had left. Fredrick helped me down.

‘Cindy…’

‘It’s okay.’

‘No, it’s not. I killed your Mom.’

‘Listen to me Fredrick,’ I held his hands, ‘I need to get my son back. Please.’

‘I think you should leave, now that you could. My father is gonna kill you.’

‘Harry is your father.’

‘Listen, it’s a long story. Noone’s supposed to know. And that was how discreet we have been. But, you need to leave now. You can take the car. I will ring the base to bring a new one.’

‘I can’t be safe. Harry, your father will hunt me down.’

‘You’re dead and buried. Unless you didn’t stay dead. But for your sake, I hope you would take this chance and leave. Forget about Terry…’
‘David. His name is David and I can’t forget about my son!’

‘Then, you left me with no choice, Cindy.’ Fredrick said and brought out his gun.

‘You’re gonna shoot me?’

‘I should have. You have proven too stubborn. I am sorry.’

I chuckled. ‘I thought we had a thing going on back there.’ I sniffed as I fought back my tears.

‘If we didn’t, you would be dead by now.’

‘Please, I don’t want the money. Get me David and I will leave forever.’

‘That is impossible, Cindy. You know. My Dad loves Terry, let him be. He is currently in one of the best schools. He’s going to be a great boy. You can’t give him what my Dad could. Please, just leave, now!’

It was apparent that Fredrick won’t bulge, so, I decided to take the deal.

‘Promise me that you will stay in touch.’ I said.

‘I promise.’ Fredrick whispered. ‘When I get back to Mexico, I will find you.’

‘Do me a favour.’ I said.

‘What?’

‘Ring the base for a new vehicle, give me your phone to keep. At least, you would know how to contact me.’

‘Cindy…’

‘Please! Do this for me.’ I pleaded and he agreed.

He called the base and rang them for a new vehicle. He then wiped the phone and gave it to me.

‘Take the vehicle and proceed north. There is navigator that would direct you out of this barren land. Okay?’

I nodded. ‘Thank you.’ I whispered.

I got myself into the vehicle. Removed the SIM from the phone, removed the battery and smashed the phone.

‘What the fucck, Cindy?’ Fredrick was confused.

I started the engine and engaged the gear, ready to roll.

‘Get ready to trek back to base, Fredrick. I got a son to retrieve.’ I said and turned the car around.

I headed back to base. From the mirror, I saw Fredrick tried to run after me for a while before giving up. The new vehicle would be on the way, but I was determined to get to my son before words got out.

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Harry or is it Jacob, is soo dead, he's fvcking gonna die. Way to go Rosa.

This girl is too stubborn but then, I like strong will I see her triumphing in the end

This girl is too stubborn but then, I like strong will I see her triumphing in the end

ChizzyMaris:
Harry or is it Jacob, is soo dead, he's fvcking gonna die. Way to go Rosa.

U can never tell chizzymaris.. who knws rosa myt get killed in d process.. she suppose tew haff listen tew frederick


I just pray Rosa doesn't get killed o coz yoruba adage said Aja to ba wo ile ekun lo, yoo fi eje we

ouch!!!this bitch is gon get slayed like a fucking chicken..nice story oludare

Please oludare007. Nothing should happen to her ooo . She has suffered enough.

Fingers crossed o. Me sef no knw wetin go happen o

Hadampson:
U can never tell chizzymaris.. who knws rosa myt get killed in d process.. she suppose tew haff listen tew frederick


I just pray Rosa doesn't get killed o coz yoruba adage said Aja to ba wo ile ekun lo, yoo fi eje we

Hadampson, actor no dey die for film..

ChizzyMaris:
Hadampson, actor no dey die for film..

Ok o i don hear u

Rosa!!! No retreat no surrender, get rich or die trying, when there is nothing to for then there is everything to die for.

Nice story oga, pls keep it coming

oludare007:
Chapter 22


I woke up to a biting cold. My skin aches so badly. I looked around, it was a bit dark. A small light reflected at the far end. Wherever I was, the whole atmosphere was very cold- including the floors. It should be the freezer, just as Harry as directed. I knew that my eyes would adjust itself to the darkness, but I got to find a way out, fast. It would seem impossible, but I was determined to try.
I

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Chapter 23

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Chapter 23

I saw the new vehicle cruising in from afar- I fastened my seatbelt and pressed hard on the gas pedals. Immediately the driver saw me approaching, thinking it was his collegue, he slowed down and parked at the side of the untarred road. I never planned to stop. I increased my speed and planned a head-on collision. By the time the driver realised what was happening, I was already close to him. He tried to reverse the car, but he was too late. I rammed into his. I saw him swerved back and forth as his car swerved.

I reversed and planned another attack. This time, sideway- through the driver’s side. The guy driving the car hasn’t overcame the shock of the first collision. As I drove nearer, I saw him hung his head. He shook off the shock and looked up slowly. By this time, I was already close to his car. He scrambled for his gun. I pressed on the accelerator harder- my vehicle jolted like a lightening. He aimed, but I was already there- I hit it again and this time, the car summersaulted. I stopped my vehicle and ran towards it. He was already dead. Through the window, I retrieved his guns.

The journey to the main base was simple- I followed the vehicular tracks on the dusty road. It leads me right to the gate. I had no plans, but I planned to pursue my intentions. With the driver that was down, on his way to retrieve Fredrick and the other two, stranded with Fredrick, I wouldn’t be dealing with more than five more street soldiers. I drove towards the gate as normal as I could imagined. Few meters from the gate, the guard at the gate spotted me, he quickly opened the gates. It was the routine, so, I moved on. I was sure that by the time he realised it was me, he would raise an alarm. So, as soon as I neared the gate, I veered towards his position. It was too late for him, he tried to run, but I rammed him to the wire fence. He groaned and struggled. I kept my foot hard on the accelerator and pressed him harder against the fence. He bellowed in agony and screamed. He struggled against the power of the four wheeled truck that raises dusts into the air behind it. Then, he gave up.

The security was poor enough- I likey! No one spotted a thing. I came down, went to check on the guard, who now lay on the bonnet, still. As I put my hand on his neck to feel his pulse, he grabbed my hand and tried to pull me over. Luckily, I was with my gun, he got pistol-whipped and went numb. I knew he wasn’t dead, so, I hit him a couple of times. I felt his pulse, he was dead.

I took his gun and went through the back. The first place I went was the banquet hall. It was expectedly empty- I hid a gun at the back of the curtains. As I opened the door to leave, I got a blow to the nose. I staggered backwards and got stopped when I rammed against the table. I shook my head to clear my head, but as soon as I did that, I got another to the head. I knew it was time to act. I fell on the floor and rolled beneath the table. I got up from the other side to face my assailant.

‘You’re just a lady.’ He said. ‘How could you have done all the things I heard you did. You certainly had help. I am sure of that.’ He said as he rolled his sleeve and circled me, ready for a fight.

‘You are about to find out.’ I said through the taste of blood in my mouth.

‘Oh, I would love to.’ He kowtowed. ‘After you, lady.’

‘What?’ I asked.

But before I would complete the statement, he came flying with a punch. I ducked and swiftly rolled to the other side. I clenched my fist.

‘Don’t be sneaky.’ I said. ‘Be fair.’ I smiled.

‘Oh, I am being fair.’

He charged at me again and I tracked back. Nothing in my head was ready for him. Like a pro, he threw punches at me. A hook both left and right that I managed to evade, but not the uppercut that followed. My brain screamed as I was lifted up with his uppercut. I slammed on the floor.

‘Too bad.’ He said. ‘You seem like a kid to me.’ He teased and bounced in my front. ‘Get up, bittch.’ He said.

I struggled to my feet and held my punch ready.

‘Bring it on, pussy.’ I said.

He came again. This time, I was ready. I evade all his punches and threw mine- with his right hand, he caught it right in the air and hooked me a punch twice in the stomach before finishing it up with a back slap! I rolled in a complete cycle only to face him again. My ear ached from punch across my ear. I held my head as I landed on the floor. There was no more need to try- he would definitely kill me.

‘Get up, bittch.’ He teased.

There was a slow clap in the room. I managed to look up, it was Harry; he already sat at the far end of the table, enjoying the show.

‘Good one, Jack.’

‘Thanks boss.’ Jack responded.

‘But. I feel this is rather a one man show. You would certainly kill her. I wouldn’t say you shouldn't, because you must. But, how about you use just one arm to fight her?’

‘Sure. She’s not worth…’

He groaned to finish his statement. I had punched him in the ear. Before he could recover, I swirled and kicked him in the stomach. As he doubled up, holding his stomach with his two hands, I brought an uppercut upwards to straighten him- right on his face. He fell flat.

‘That’s bad. Harry said. ‘I was thinking the show would last longer.’

‘You are dead, Harry.’

‘Not yet.’ Jack said and caught me right on the heel.

I swerved around to hit him with the second feet but he caught it too and pulled me down. No sooner had I touched the floor that he dragged me towards himself. He was already kneeling. I was ready for him, he was not. As soon as I was close enough, I sat up while still dragged and punched him in the nose. He let go of my feet and it was easy to kick him with both feet. He staggered up and backwards, towards the window. I didn’t allow him to settle, I turned around and gave him a forceful hind kick. He slammed against the glass. I swirled and kicked him again. This time, I was successful; he crashed through the window, outside her went.

'Oh, no Harry,' I teased, 'your boyfriend is gone!'

‘Very shameful.’ Harry said.

‘Harry, you are dead.’ I said and I made to move towards Harry.

‘Bring him in.’ He ordered.

Immediately, one of the guards brought in David, with a gun to his head. He was sobbing loudly. I stooped immediately.

‘David!’ I screamed. ‘Please, let him go!’

‘Well, too late. You should have stayed dead, Kate.’

‘Please.’ I sobbed.

‘If she tries to move, shoot him.’ Harry ordered his guard.

‘Now, Kate, take this gun and shoot yourself.’ He slid a gun across the table. ‘I believe that would end all these and Terry, would be just fine.’

I starred at the gun.

‘You got just five minutes to decide, Kate.’ Harry said and sat down.

I took the gun, looked at it for a while, crying profusely, thinking of what to do. I couldn’t aim that perfectly, I would have shot at the guy holding David. I had no choice, I put the gun to my head. David was so terrified, crying.

‘Good girl.’ Harry said.

I sobbed on. By now, my mucus had mixed with my saliva and I was eating it all.

‘Please, take care of him.’

‘Oh, please, don’t make me cry.’ Harry teased. ‘Be quick about this. Hey,’ he turned to the guard, ‘cover his face, I don’t want him to see this.’

Immediately I felt they were distracted, I aimed at the guy and fired. Harry started to laugh and I stopped and starred at the gun in my hands in surprise. It was empty. I stood like a fool.

‘See, I told you, didn’t I? I told you she would do that.’ Harry laughed as he talked to the guy.

I watched him collect the gun from the guard and aimed at me. This time, I was already weak. My mind was blank and I knew I had definitely blew it. Harry fired, it caught me on the right chest. I fell. I starred at the ceiling, thinking about how it would all end. For the first time, I could see the design and shape of the ceiling. I thought about how I should have listened to Fredrick, at least, I would have come back for David.

Harry blocked my view of the ceiling as he appeared- his gun, pointed right at me. He beamed with smile- a victorious one. He aimed at me and fired another slug to my chest. I didn’t fight it- it was definitely the end. Maybe, it was time to rest. I said to myself as another bullet caught me in the thigh. I groaned. Harry started to laugh and talk, but I couldn’t hear a thing he was saying. The guy, who was holding David also came forward and to meet him. They laughed and talked. But I couldn’t hear them. Only a low static noise went into my ears, my visions became blurred and darkened, slowly- I was definitely dying.

Harry squatted beside me and talked, but I couldn’t hear. His mouth was moving but I could only hear low static noise. He held the gun to my head and smiled broadly. I saw his hand cocked the gun, his fingers on the trigger, began to move, to pull the final round. I closed my eyes slowly, ready for it.

End of 23

Chai diz gal(rosa) no sabi anytin at all. u knw u are dealin with BADDO, u shud be xtra careful.. Rosa had nt 4 once enjoy life.. when iz she goin tew enjoy it sef wen escobar or jacob or harry is abt tew pull d trigger nd bust her brain out..

Oludare007 ur work is dope.. i had read diz story ova nd ova buh cnt seem tew get enuf of it, u sure deserves an AWARD 4 diz. pls wen r u goin tew release a new chapter. i am anxious tew knw wat iz gonna apen next.. i just hope ntin goes wrong 4 rosa. she had suffered enuf.

kudos tew u nd more ink tew ur pen
You are d best.. #remain bless my humble author

It's not easy, all she has ever fought for. I feel your pain gal but you got to have plans.

Let's see what twist oludare007 will bring on as the game is almost over.