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Unfinished Business (21+ - A Story Of Betrayal, Sex And Infidelity) / The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal / DAYO'S ANGEL( Love, Lust And Betrayal) (2) (3) (4)
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Re: United In Betrayal by Shakyroh320(f): 2:09pm On May 03, 2017 |
kip it coming, thanks for the update |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 5:01pm On May 03, 2017 |
nkan be! thanks pamelB 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 5:22pm On May 03, 2017 |
so d cheater has been cheated |
Re: United In Betrayal by Niwdog(m): 6:29pm On May 03, 2017 |
You may try to confuse other readers but for me na lie lie, kelvin just had sex with Amara and the Claire that escaped his lips mearnt either she step into the room or his doing it for her. Pamela prove me wrong 3 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by LBmujuni3(f): 9:08pm On May 03, 2017 |
Amara definitely got some some from Kelv And phewww mahn!!!! That was so action, I can't say t left me the same cos I had to read to twice!! Let's wait for regrets and confusion from both parties pamelB ya the real deal ,u gatta me hooked real good 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 8:41am On May 04, 2017 |
Clair woke up with a heavy bang on her head and body pains. She had found herself on the floor with an empty bottle of vodka. She hissed and drew her cupboard for pain killers. She won't be able to go to the plaza today. She looked at the wall clock and it was just 6;28am. She needed something hot and she hoped Gertrude and the girls were already up. "Good morning madam." One of the helpers greeted as soon as she came down. "Morning my dear. Where's Gertrude?" She stifled a yawn "In the kitchen madam." Claire nodded and matched to the kitchen. She felt like throwing up her entire system. She ran back to her room, closing the door with a loud bang. He woke up. Who could be banging the door so early this morning. He looked around and felt lost. Pink and white wall, teddy bears around, feminine smell and Jesus Lord, he was n@ked. He looked at the figure lying beside him and he almost screamed. Amara. Memories of last night came rushing to his head and he hated himself. Her face was swollen, like someone who escaped jungle justice. How would he explain this to Claire and Micheal? He began to dress up, picking his properties from different corners of the room. He looked at her one more time, checked her temperature and slipped out of the room. She was running a fever. She felt someone touch her neck. He was awake already. She watched him leave through the corner of her eyes and her eyes turned misty. Last night had been great. He was a good man who loved trying out new things and so was she. But why? Wasn't she good enough? He had told her she has a nice body, so why would he mention someone else's name when he reached his climax? It meant one thing, he was either crushing on her or they both are having an affair. She was beginning to like him but he didn't feel anything for her, he had her sister in mind, he was in love with her sister. She won't take that. Her boyfriend had cheated on her after everything she had done for him. Now, her sister wants to cheat her too? She won't let that happen. If she won't have Kelvin, none of them will. Gertrude rang the intercom, inviting everyone for breakfast. Micheal was not back yet. Amara and Kelvin were the first to come down. She had showered and changed into a bum short and basket ball singlet. Kelvin couldn't look at her in response to her greeting. A short while after they came down, Claire joined them. She was shocked to see her sister in that condition. "Jesus, Amara what happened to you? Who did this to you?" Claire asked going to her sister "My boyfriend, I mean, my ex boyfriend." Both Claire and Kelvin were shocked. "Is he crazy or something? He just messed with the wrong girl. I'll make sure he rots in prison for a very long time." She started dialling the commissioner's number. Amara expected that. She won't let her ex go Scot free. He had been surviving through her. His apartment, his feeding and clothing allowance all came from her. He would pay for cheating on her and allowing that call girl slap her. "Yes please, send your boys to the house please." She heard her sister say. Claire ended the call and turned to her sister. "Tell me, what did you do? Did you cheat on him? Did you say anything?" Imagine! A cheat asking me if I cheat too. What a funny world, Amara thought. "Check your phone. I sent you a text telling you I would be going to his place. Only to get there to see him with this wretched excuse of a girl. She slapped me and when I retaliated, they did this to me." She said, throwing a glance at Kelvin who was still tongue tied "He won't know what hit him. Have breakfast okay?" Amara nodded and began to mix cornflakes in a bowl. "Good morning Kelvin. You see what you men do to us eh?" Claire said, sitting beside her sister "Morning Claire. But, don't you think this guy acted out because he was drunk? Calling the police on him won't change........" "Any man that does this to a woman, drunk or consciously doesn't deserve mercy. Look at my sister's face." Amara shot both of them heavy glances, she picked her bowl and excused herself. She couldn't stand the pretence. They should look for a two year old to pretend to. "She's shaken by it. Men eh. What would you have?" Kelvin weighed his options and settled for cornflakes. They ate in silence. Kelvin knew he had messed up and someone else was going to pay for his own crimes. He needed to speak with Amara before the police gets here. "I'll be upstairs." Claire said, interrupting his thoughts. "You won't visit the plaza?" "No. I'm not too strong myself. But just let me know if you need anything and you're friend isn't back yet." Kelvin nodded and watched her leave. She was filled with grace and elegance. What other men needed, Micheal had it in abundance and still has the guts to cheat. He shook his head and continued eating distractedly, thinking of the best way to approach the issue at hand. "I knew you would come." Amara said, bolting her door They faced each other, it was moment of truth. "I'm sorry for last night. I don't recall all that happened but believe me, I'm sorry." "You don't remember calling my sister's name when you were cumming?" Her words hit Kelvin hard. "Shit" he cursed "So I need answers. What are you both up to? Same thing Micheal and his secretary are doing?" "How........" "I know Kelvin so tell me." "Amara, your sister is a nice woman and I can't bring myself to defile her home. I don't have anything sexual to do with her. Outside what you see from the surface, there's nothing inside." "Then why call her name? We were doing so well Kelvin. You were touching places no one has touched, I felt a connection with you, tell me." He held her but she pushed him off. "Amara, I won't lie to you......." "You're lying. Why her name? I was the one who took the beatings from you, the lashes, tell me why she would be in your thoughts?" "Because I see her as my goddess. She's my goddess Amara that is why I respect her so much, that is why she's always in my thought. I'm sorry Amara, for last night. I also felt that bond between us but now, I don't know anymore. Think again about what you said about your boyfriend. Don't let your heart mislead you because you're hurting. Excuse me please." "Wait Kelvin." He paused in his track and turned to her. "I'll ask my sister not to involve the police if you'll take me again this morning." 19 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by jennygovy(f): 9:04am On May 04, 2017 |
I must have to commend,pamelb you are the best thing that has happened to me on Nairaland,I and my hubby have been glued to our phones since yesterday we came across this piece,my hubby feel like killing MICHEAL ![]() 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by OkoAnike(m): 9:29am On May 04, 2017 |
PamelB, u made my day... I appreciate ur creativity in the art of writing, thank you and work safe. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by jumpmasta(m): 10:19am On May 04, 2017 |
Kai!!!!....pamelB...You are simply the best..got me hooked and simply wanting more...Kudos to you girl ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 10:30am On May 04, 2017 |
Nice, nice update sis. Living based onAssumption is not good at all |
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 10:49am On May 04, 2017 |
Oya. Let the fvcking begin! |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 11:40am On May 04, 2017 |
So Amara Already Love Kelvin. United In Betrayal Indeed, |
Re: United In Betrayal by Timson01(m): 3:19pm On May 04, 2017 |
so these begins to make sense unity in betrayal so who will be betrayed at last just keep it posting pamela 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 8:19pm On May 04, 2017 |
ONE WORD "CREATIVE" |
Re: United In Betrayal by smokeydrinky: 8:37pm On May 04, 2017 |
I'm speechless. OMG!! !!! OMG!! !!!! Pamelb, you have outdone yourself. This is a masterpiece!!!!! @donatee, @kejimogbe @maran1983 @ Beevan, food don done o. Finger licking good. Plz call others. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Lillyane(f): 10:52pm On May 04, 2017 |
Thank you pamelB....you are the best! 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 9:31am On May 05, 2017 |
Morning house. Micheal opened the door. Everywhere was unusually quiet. Maybe they've gone to the plaza but her car was still in the garage. Whichever way, he was tired and needed rest. He went upstairs to the room he shared with his wife and it looked different. Something was amiss. He looked into the wardrobe and it hit him. His wife was gone. Her properties were no longer in the wardrobe. She has finally ran away with the guy she's been seeing. He angrily went down the stairs, his bile turning up his stomach. "Gertrude!" He thundered "What are you saying Amara? Last night was a mistake and........." "And I want it to happen again. I understand you've got something for my sister but hey, I'll satisfy you, make me your $lut, I'll......" She said removing the basket ball singlet she was wearing to reveal her melons. He looked away, afraid of getting carried away by her beautiful body. "You want this don't you?" "Amara stop this nonsense." "Don't call it. Don't you dare. Last night when you had me on this bed, when you were grunting with your manhood in between my thighs, it wasn't nonsense to you huh? So what are you doing here? Leave my sister to make another one pay for your crime, Mr bdsm." He looked at her with disdain and all he felt for her the moment he came into the house disappeared. This wasn't the innocent Amara he had seen a wife in, he hated himself for getting drunk out of Michael's stupidity. "You should leave my room now please." They both heard the noise from downstairs. Micheal was back. "Gertrude!" His voice rang out from downstairs "Please leave now Kelvin." "Meet me at Top rank hotel. Call me when you're there but please, stop your sister from arresting an innocent man." He said and left the room. "Good morning sir." Gertrude greeted "Where's my wife? Couldn't you call me to inform me that she was leaving the house?" "But sir?...." "Shut up. Bunch of useless things." He took out his phone to call Claire. "Mike, why are you making noise the very moment you stepped in? This house has been quiet and peaceful since last night." Kelvin said, picking the car key from the table "My wife has left the house and you're asking me not to make noise?" If he were not in a different mood, he would have laughed him to scorn "The Claire I had breakfast with or your new mistress? Excuse me." Kelvin said and walked out "Sir, madam just changed her room. She said the doctor......." "Get lost." He ran up the stairs, brushing past Amara who was dressed in a hood. He stood in front of Claire's room. She would give him reasons why sge moved out of their matrimonial room. He opened the door without knocking and was surprised to find her sleeping. She looked different. He walked into the room and sat on the bed, looking at her with concern. If only she'd not changed, if only she wasn't seeing someone else, they would be happy together now. Why would she leave their room? Why? If not that someone else was screwing her, why would she distance herself from him? He tapped her and she opened her eyes, surprised to see him. She slowly sat up. "Good morning honey. I didn't know you were back." "Obviously. I want us to talk." "Is there a problem? Tell me." She said, sitting properly. He heaved a sigh, calming his nerves. "Why did you leave our room?" "Oh! I'm sorry I didn't tell you my love but you see, the miscarriage.........." "You don't use that as an excuse Claire. Women who give birth still share same bed with their husbands, so why is your case different? Tell me, are you seeing someone?" His question rang a bell in her ears. She couldn't believe it. Why would he ask her that question? "Answer me now. Who's he?" He said angrily, standing up with a heavy heart. She too stood up and faced him. "What nonsense Mike, are you accusing me of infidelity? Are you?" "Yes I am. You are tired of seeing my face every morning, you're tired of me touching you, you've gotten a replacement so go ahead and tell me who he is." "Wow! Unbelievable. But I refuse to answer that question. If you so believe that I'm seeing someone else, its fine but let me be Micheal, let me have some peace and quiet." And that was all it took to start raining slaps and punches on her. Worst case scenerio, there was nobody to stop him. 13 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: United In Betrayal by chara019: 9:44am On May 05, 2017 |
what!? really?
He is mentally sick,what nonsense....he is the guilty idiot o ,chai.
poor claire...ma pamela,please let karma visit mike pls.
well done,I love your story. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Timson01(m): 11:18am On May 05, 2017 |
nyc story the devil has broken in already |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 11:30am On May 05, 2017 |
i can't believe Micheal lay his hand on his wife. Don't worry Claire Phil is coming for me |
Re: United In Betrayal by rachealfst(f): 12:07pm On May 05, 2017 |
Wow!!! This story is dope. United in betrayal Indeed. Good job ma'am, more grace. |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 1:56pm On May 05, 2017 |
I hardly a fan of romance stories but now a fan of this story. Keep it comming... |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 2:15pm On May 05, 2017 |
what ![]() ![]() 4 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Lillyane(f): 2:21pm On May 05, 2017 |
PamelB:micheal is biting more than he can chew 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by TemiGURL(f): 2:50pm On May 05, 2017 |
Have been super glued to this wonderful masterpiece since yestday. Thank God am finally here. Pamelb, weldone 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by SmartestPopQUEEN(f): 2:59pm On May 05, 2017 |
Pamelb, you are fantastic to say the least. Weldone 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Gynah33(f): 4:10pm On May 05, 2017 |
Pls more am waiting.hurry oh ehen 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Elveera(f): 4:27pm On May 05, 2017 |
Mike is really insane......i'm so loving dis story 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Fijumokesayo(f): 4:40pm On May 05, 2017 |
Ewu Mike, you're on your own. Kel shud f*ck Amara again jor, wetin be her problem? Claire my Love, sorry hun... This is a great piece writer, you're doing a good job. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 6:00pm On May 05, 2017 |
Can't believe Michael is playing victims role now? Is he crazy or what?? 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by MhizDherbee(f): 7:25pm On May 05, 2017 |
Micheal don eff up!!! 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 7:30pm On May 05, 2017 |
heemah:My sister o 4 Likes 1 Share |
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