please guys critique this logo

come on guys, please, 30 views no comment is not good.

To me it's too simple.

gboisgroups:
To me it's too simple.

sorry now I know I cannot rely on Nairaland for logo critiquing. this logo is from a turorial I watched on Lynda.com, the tutor is Aaron Draplin, one of the best logo desiners, he even appeard on Tedex.

GrandGarcon:
please guys critique this logo

spread out the " cobstruction" on the first one so it spans the length of the "all base" just like in the second one. and its good to go.

as for the rest. the font of the second one needs to be reduced. but thats my preference cos I dont like big things. lol. the last two, that pointy thing looks doesn't look visually appealing compared to the first two. personally it looks like its gonna attack me. the allbase needs space to breathe from the pointy A thingy. so move it down a bit like in d first two. and I guess thats all.

Just to note, the person that commented that its too simple isnt wrong. it is simple, but it doesn't mean simple is wrong. personal view and preferences do come into play in stuffs like this. when asking for criticism, u need to also be able to handle it cos it will come in different forms. kudos

emydexter:


spread out the " cobstruction" on the first one so it spans the length of the "all base" just like in the second one. and its good to go.

as for the rest. the font of the second one needs to be reduced. but thats my preference cos I dont like big things. lol. the last two, that pointy thing looks doesn't look visually appealing compared to the first two. personally it looks like its gonna attack me. the allbase needs space to breathe from the pointy A thingy. so move it down a bit like in d first two. and I guess thats all.

Just to note, the person that commented that its too simple isnt wrong. it is simple, but it doesn't mean simple is wrong. personal view and preferences do come into play in stuffs like this. when asking for criticism, u need to also be able to handle it cos it will come in different forms. kudos

thanks for the reply, now I can hope to rely on NairaLand for logo critiquing, but you have to understand that the logo isn't mine. I only pretended because most people won't critique logos the way you did, all they will say os it bad, without telling you were to work on. Thanks