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Unfinished Business (21+ - A Story Of Betrayal, Sex And Infidelity) / The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal / DAYO'S ANGEL( Love, Lust And Betrayal) (2) (3) (4)
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Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 11:26am On May 18, 2017 |
Yagaaaa! All the supporters of Phil and Claire come and see o. PamelB you have cured my anger towards NYSC this morning...thank u for that. Plz make Claire so strong for this her plan that she won't give in to any emotion and allow herself be trampled on. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 12:25pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn:You're right sha 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 12:53pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn:Wer were u posted to? Jst curious |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 1:31pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn: lolzz. guess you are in stream 2. pamelB thanks for the update. but know one thing. we are going to start a riot here if Claire doesn't dump that idiot and marry phil. and as for amara and that bleached something I'll pop zobo for your downfall. team #philclaire# 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 2:42pm On May 18, 2017 |
jumpmasta: And Michael is the devil himself. Between devil and a criminal who is better. Devil is the father of all evils, therefore Michael is the devil. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 4:31pm On May 18, 2017 |
khalifahsparkles:They carry me go stream 2 o.. There shall be no riot..i support you on Amara. |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 4:33pm On May 18, 2017 |
gtin:I'm going with stream 2 o...very annoying something. |
Re: United In Betrayal by missyadorable(f): 4:34pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn: Fight for her man? Such a uselesssss man? Women will suffer for long in the hands of men! 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 4:45pm On May 18, 2017 |
missyadorable:My darling calm down, make she first try before she gives up na. I understand domestic violence shouldn't be tolerated, but he hasn't always been like this na. She should see if she can get the Michael he used to be back and if he's lost forever then she can bow out. |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 4:56pm On May 18, 2017 |
[quote author=missyadorable post=56647408] Fight for her man? Such a uselesssss man? Women will suffer for long in the hands of men! |
Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 5:31pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn:Ehya sorry same tin with me oo |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 5:43pm On May 18, 2017 |
gtin:That's nice o..I've been looking for partners. Hahaha. |
Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 5:54pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn:Hahahahhaa u sure have 1 now |
Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:25pm On May 18, 2017 |
nice update dear.keep it coming 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 7:15pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn: Until they carry her corpse home abi. Remember she went into coma, next one now will be death. Please it's not wisdon to love oneself less by clinging unto some type of men/ marriage. The women that have been beaten to death by their so called husbands, did they plan it to be so?, no. They only said "let me see whether he can still change" and the next place they saw themselves was the grave. Even God your creator won't forgive you for such foolishness. 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 7:23pm On May 18, 2017 |
crislyn: A lady will forgive a cheating husband if she can but not when your life is threatened by voilence. That's a no no no. That one is no longer a man to fight for. What will she be fighting for, an animal like michael?. The woman will be there fighting for the so called man and suddenly wake up to see herslf in the grave. He beat her to the point of coma. I believe most women don't love their lives at all. They rather die there because of what people will say. 3 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 8:18pm On May 18, 2017 |
"So what will you be doing tonight?" Micheal asked. They were both n@ked, basking in the aftermath Bliss of office sex. She was sitter on his laps while his deflated prick hung in the little space it found. "Uhm. My aunt is around and will be leaving next week. She's a Christian and condemns premarital affairs." "Hmmmm. Wanted to come and spend tonight in your arms baby." She lifted his jaw and pecked his lips. "You've got me from next week baby. And here in the office, I'm yours for keeps." He smiled in satisfaction and they shared a kiss, only to be interrupted by an incoming notification. "Bae, I've got a meeting in thirty minutes." "Ouch. I almost forgot. We should get dressed then." They stood up and began to dress up. She finished before him and made to walk out. "Bae, thanks for giving me another chance." Micheal said. "Its nothing. I love you so so." They kissed and she walked out of the office, picked her handbag and headed to the restroom for a makeover not minding stares from the other two secretaries. When he was sure the road was now free, he parked to a side of the road, not looking at her. She was surprised that he stopped. She didn't want to talk about anything. She just wants to go home and make things better. "Phil why did you stop?" "I want to talk to you. I want us to talk." "But I don't wanna talk Phil. We both are wrong and talking about it will lead us to argue and I don't want that." Without replying, he fished the paper from his breast pocket and gave it to her. She unfolded it and read the words out. "I'll give you more than you're getting. 08143******" That number belonged to Amara. What was going on with her sister? What changed her. Her eyes got Misty and she knew she had to cry it out. "Like you said, you've got your family to take care of and God forbid that I stop you from doing that. I want you to be happy Claire. I'm willing to do anything to make you happy that's why I'm going to let you go. I'm going to let you slip out of my arms because your happiness is my priority Claire." He sniffed and Claire turned to see him quickly wipe a tear "I loved you the very first day I saw you. I didn't know you were married because there was no ring on your finger. I ignored it, even tried to forget you but nature brought us back together. Our paths crossed again and I decided to nurture this love. If you leave me Claire, I won't die, I won't let my love die too but I'll be a changed man. I won't believe in a lot of things Claire. I'll loose faith." He sniffed and looked away, letting his tears fall. He had failed. She wanted to talk. She wanted to say something but words failed her. She looked at the piece of paper in her hand and bitterness consumed her. She reached out to touch him but he instead, started the ignition and drove off. To him, this was the end of the road. He quickly grafted a message. He won't be coming to pick her up because he has dinner with some clients. He would come in late. Immediately the text said delivered, his phone rang. The bleached face was calling. "Hi honey. I just got your text." She said into the speaker. "Yes dear. My secretary arranged dinner with some clients from this side. It's really important to me please." "I understand dear. So, what should I do?" "You've got the card right?" "Yes. I'm with mine." "Good. I'll come to you once I'm done." "Uhm. Like, what time?" B|tch! He cursed. So she would go and have flings and get back before that time. You're in for a lonely night fool. He wanted to say but; "I don't know baby but I'll try to round up on time." "Alright baby. You take care alright?" She said sweetly. "One more thing huh, be sexy for your boo okay?" She giggled, replied in the affirmative and they ended the call. He wanted to laugh at her stupidity, but he didn't want to laugh yet. He would laugh when Claire is happy. He brought the car to a halt in front of the gate. The second and last time he'd be there. "Phil I'm sorry. I......" He took her hands in his, facing her with a smile. She knew that smile. A smile of defeat. She had used it before, even using it now so she knew he was pretending. "We met for this reason. You would have been dead if our paths had not crossed. God put me in your life so we can only meet for this reason. Jeez, I don't even know what I'm saying." He laughed. Claire won't buy that. She knew better. "Philip please stop the pretence. Stop it." "What should I do? Cry? Ask you not to leave? Beg for your love? For God's sake Claire you're married. I'm to be blamed for thinking we can ever get something together. You want your family back so here it is. You're here now but know one thing. I'm here. I'll be here if you need me but the last thing I'll do is to stop you from deciding what you want. You don't know my house, you don't know my office. You turned down my invites but I never suspected that you did it because you don't want me." He took a jotter and pen from his pigeon hole, wrote down two addresses and gave it to her "I'll wait for you Claire and even if you finally get what you want, I'll still want you to visit and show me how happy you are so I can fu©king move on with my life." He stepped out of the car and moved to the trunk where he got her things down. When he saw that she was out of the car, he got in and drove off without looking back. She heaved a sigh and cleaned her tears when he was out of view. He meant the world to her and she only hoped that her sacrifice would be worth it. She carefully put the address and Amara's bitchy note in her purse before gently knocking at the gate. 16 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 9:17pm On May 18, 2017 |
So this is the man some people are saying she should fight for. He doesn't even know the wife he almost killed is back home. Yeye dey smell. Thanks for the update dear. 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Grandslam7(m): 9:34pm On May 18, 2017 |
Pamelb Thanks For The Update Dear U Are A Darling, The Story Is Getting Interesting With Every Update Still Sipping My Zobo With Cream cracker Biscuit. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 9:44pm On May 18, 2017 |
Jsaviour:Toooor. The matter don tire me!! Where Michael dey ehn, devil is still a learner.. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 9:45pm On May 18, 2017 |
Thanks for d update Ma'am. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 9:50pm On May 18, 2017 |
hum Wat a life 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 11:03pm On May 18, 2017 |
pamelb , you are wonderfully wonderful, May you continue to live in abundance of grace, ointment of wisdom would be added to lubricate that your oblongata..... more grace dear, am just happy reading this..... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by MhizDherbee(f): 11:12pm On May 18, 2017 |
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Re: United In Betrayal by smokeydrinky: 7:34am On May 19, 2017 |
Jsaviour: Some people actually said Claire should fight for that fool? For how long? Until she is dead and gone? Hmmmm.. .. This marriage is by force mentality that some Nigerians, especially women have eh.... I pity. As for me, I don't know why Claire is taking time to embrace happiness. If na me, na from hospital straight to Phil's house, to the court for annulment of my existing marriage and then the registry to sign the dotted lines with the man who deserves to have me, simple. 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 7:49am On May 19, 2017 |
Am Speechless....Hope Claire Doesn't Cheat With Phil,let Her Show That Idiot That She Is A Godly Woman.With A Lot Of Respect. Hope Micheal Gets Hooked,as 4 Amara. Sango Will Decide The Best Punishment 4 U. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by jumpmasta(m): 10:16am On May 19, 2017 |
smokeydrinky:Are you married?...If you were, maybe you d be a bit slower in making rash decisions |
Re: United In Betrayal by smokeydrinky: 11:23am On May 19, 2017 |
jumpmasta: Oh..... I'm very much married. With 2 cuties to show for it. It's because I'm married that I stand on that decision. Our sole aim of creation is not marriage. Imagine that Kelvin Didn't come homenwhen he did, we would have been reading about Claire's burial by now. My decision is not because mich is a cheating idiota, rather it's because he is inhumane. Twice now he has nearly caused Claire's death. Should she really wait til death do them part? When there is someone else out there for her Secondly, it's worrying how we have come to see men's infidelity as a norm, it is not!! I read comments suggesting Claire should be good, win the husband back ND punish the sister...lol oh lol... .this is why men keep acting like cads. I have always been of the opinion that if the man wants to taste other soups, there should be a mutual arrangement where his woman should be allowed to sample other deeks too. There is a name for it, open marriage. Because, Wat is good for the geese is good for the gander too . Do not try to preach religion because that will entail that the husband should be faithful to his wife too. Men's infidelity is not a norm and we should stop treating it as such. I would walk out if I were Claire, yes I would. 28 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 11:25am On May 19, 2017 |
smokeydrinky: Thank you. Many Nigerian women think bitterness in life is their portion for life. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 11:27am On May 19, 2017 |
smokeydrinky: I love women like you who know they deserve better. Don't mind sufferheads who think they must die in a marriage to prove what I don't know. 6 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 11:51am On May 19, 2017 |
Jsaviour: marriage does not certify happiness. like my saying goes d day a man raise his hands on me; he looses everything we share. shikena 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Tgold1(m): 12:04pm On May 19, 2017 |
smokeydrinky: even though am a guy, you are seconded. Claire has been through a lot for this feck of a man called Michael, so if she walks away, its understandable. 6 Likes 3 Shares |
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