Echelle:
Echelle is still waiting...

DrRasheed:
Writing Is A Talent, Keep The Stone Rolling.

thanks sir, I appreciate

SurestG:
I no say you no fit vex for me

Hmmm u dey try me abi.

Am enjoying it

Thanx for d update

Hapi sundae every1

CHAPTER 11

"Could this be real" she asked herself "Omolola wanting my downfall, what could have been my offence that may have warranted such" Luisa couldn't think straight, the thought of Omolola being the enemy of her existence was difficult for her to imagine. She realized she could have a hand in her first kidnap too since the abductors were similar and she invited her to the party where she was kidnapped


The news of Luisa's kidnap spread like wild fire on campus, many pitied her while some wished she never appeared again. She wasn't even allowed to write her final exams.

It was on the day of her last paper some of her coursemates really believed she was kidnapped, she didn't write a single exam.


*****

Before and during the time when exams were on, Lola visited her friend with food and clothes, she bath for her everyday and treated any bruises she may have had from the beatings that were given to her in her absence. Perhaps she still had a little bit of kindness for Luisa.

Nobody could suspect Lola had anything to do with Luisa's kidnap, she was helpful to them and at a time, people felt she was Luisa's real friend. Rebecca wrote her exams though not to the best of her ability, her concentration has been divided ever since her friend's disappearance.


*****

Funke visited Soji
At the hospital, only God knew what the nature of his sickness was. Lola had told her the previous day that Soji was in the hospital, that was part of her role in the operation. She was to be an inside man, it was part of her strategy to seduce Soji. She wanted to make him hers at all cost.

Funke ur plan no go work oo shegoat

Some people bad o. It's kuku better not to have friends

SurestG nice one but this episode is too short nah just 30 seconds reading.

queenitee:
Some people bad o. It's kuku better not to have friends

Yes o u better unfriend ur friends

Akinwale14:
SurestG nice one but this episode is too short nah just 30 seconds reading.

Bear with me sir

SurestG:
Bear with me sir

U dey use "sir" for me? so i don get rank like this

Akinwale14:
Yes o u better unfriend ur friends

I no get driends like that

queenitee:
I no get driends like that

Hmmmm

hmmm.

Akinwale14:
U dey use "sir" for me? so i don get rank like this

you get o

Nice story here . I just have to comment thumbs up

[quote author=SurestG post=56553153]I'm inviting all awesome readers on NL Lit section to come check this piece out: Phemmy429, Akosy, Horlah, leesah, Akinmusi, ebysandra, Alennsar, Musampa73, Johnsown1, comelyjummy, chuxxxx007, herosakin, Adeyife, urchman23, Harunablezin, Adesina12, Mhizdherbee, Dopeyomi, saxwizard, Jane1234f, Aminzy, countrygirl.

Its an amazing write-up
[/quote

Yeh I just saw dis ooo thanks for d mention.

Dis story z short ooh anyway weldone

SurestG:
you get o

Lol

No update

*****

"Omolola! Why are you doing this to me, have I ever wronged you in anyway?" Luisa asked her friend with tears in her eyes.

"you've done everything wrong dear, your life seems perfect and you'll be punished for that. Everything you want you get without stress, someone who love you that much. Soji had been in the hospital for 3days now because you've been missing for just 6weeks. You are liked by everybody around you and I envy that about you. Above all, fact remains that I'm jealous of you"

Luisa who was hearing incredible things about herself couldn't help but cry. Why was her life crumbling like that. Lola stopped giving her Lunch for a while as she was sobbing too.

Lola was already a graduate and has been sleeping in the same room with Luisa. Lola had lied to Becca that she needed to visit her Uncle who worked in Calabar before she traveled home but she moved in with the other abductors pending the time they'll be through with the operation. She doesn't want anybody suspecting her.

She baths her friend twice daily since she was already living with them.


*****

Funke was in her room with the thoughts of what had happened the day she went to visit Soji. Soji suddenly was gasping for breath, she couldn't just stood and watch him, she hurriedly called the doctor and he's breath was supported.

" What is there about this girl, that's been making Soji this sick because he hasn't seen her in a while, well I can't just fold my hands and watch him die, I must do something"


*****

Luisa was dressed like a ninja so that nobody will recognize her as she was taken to Soji's room.

"Soji please stay strong for me, you can't die Soji, I love you. You have to live" she said amidst sobbing.

She really needed to get out of that room, she was taken back to her abductors den. The incident that led to her visiting Soji replayed in her brain.

Oliver Twist mood 'I want more pls' winks at surestG.

I'm waiting to see the end of Funke and Lola.

Lukeleq:
Am enjoying it

thanks for following

Musampa73:
I'm waiting to see the end of Funke and Lola.

Their end is near na

comelyJummy:
Oliver Twist mood 'I want more pls' winks at surestG.

I'll will gladly update ma

Creeza:
Nice story here . I just have to comment thumbs up

Thank you sir

queenitee:
Some people bad o. It's kuku better not to have friends

Lol its better but not possible

Well done ma

SurestG:
I'm inviting all awesome readers on NL Lit section to come check this piece out: Phemmy429, Akosy, Horlah, leesah, Akinmusi, ebysandra, Alennsar, Musampa73, Johnsown1, comelyjummy, chuxxxx007, herosakin, Adeyife, urchman23, Harunablezin, Adesina12, Mhizdherbee, Dopeyomi, saxwizard, Jane1234f, Aminzy, countrygirl.

Its an amazing write-up

Thanks Dear for d mention... the story is superb n awesome... reading n following u strongly.