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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 9:06pm On May 25, 2017 |
kingjomezy:I ruv u more. Lol 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:51pm On May 25, 2017 |
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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 10:09pm On May 25, 2017 |
She woke up with a massive headache. She was still in her birthday suit, the same way Kelvin had left her hours back. She felt his side of the bed but it was empty. She stood up weakly and went to the bathroom, there was no sign of him or any of his clothing. How could he leave without letting her know? She picked up her phone to call him and realised that a sheet was folded neatly under it. She picked it out of curiosity. Maybe it could be a love note from her heartthrob; "By the time you'll be reading this, you'll be the most sort out pr•stitude in the country and far beyond. You owe me a lot, for bringing you to popularity. What were you thinking? That I'll date you, you of all people? With your bleached face and fake charisma? I'm laughing out loud right now. You're a big f••l miss secretary. Wait for the 3.4mil and a visit to my father. Enjoy the rest of your stay at the hotel. You still have like four more days to enjoy my money. You will be asking why I'm doing this to you huh? Call me karma because I destroyed you for breaking into Claire's marriage. See you when I see you, bleached face. She slumped on the bed and cried bitterly. How could he do this to her? She loves him a whole lot but look what he's done to her. She picked her phone to call him only to realise that her entire phone has been restored to factory settings. All her contacts, messages, chats and pictures have been wiped. He didn't want her to reach him ever again. She noticed the disc on the table and she picked it up, brought out her laptop and got the heavy shock of her life. He looked at his phone now, praying that a miracle happens now that he's going away. She should at least, drop a message or call him. He looked at his phone one last time as his flight was announced. It was a lost battle. She wasn't coming to him anytime soon. He left the room, having decided to speak to his wife. His conscience was dealing him blows and kelvin was yet to show up. He found himself in front of her room and he tapped on the door. He got no response and he repeated the action. He heard feet shuffle and he braced himself for an attack. She opened the door and her fragrance hit his nose. He had personally recommended the soap for her because it smelt like strawberry. Her eyes scanned him without emotions and he swallowed hard. "Yes?' Her voice was calm and a little bit shaky but her face showed strength and bravery. He knelt down and held her feet, sobbing quietly. She shifted back and looked at him properly. "Micheal what is this? 20 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by heemah(f): 10:20pm On May 25, 2017 |
Thanks for the back-to-back updates PamelB... Pls don't give Michael a second chance please. I'm begging! 4 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 10:21pm On May 25, 2017 |
Ewo... madam secretary sorry o. Clair plz forgive Michael but do yanga small first sha. Kelvin's love and loyalty to Clair ehn I never see..wehdon PamelB, you are superb. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 10:25pm On May 25, 2017 |
heemah:Ah ah everyone deserves a second chance na. Michael came to the realisation that he's wrong without been told or forced to see the truth and he's sorry. I'm sure some men won't care, they'd continue their jolly ride. Mbok let's give him a second chance to redeem himself...there won't be a third chance. Lol |
Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 10:26pm On May 25, 2017 |
Thank U Bt Is Too Short |
Re: United In Betrayal by Mztemmy(f): 3:12am On May 26, 2017 |
crislyn:what if she did not see him with her sister......he won't be thinking of repenting nah |
Re: United In Betrayal by Daisyben(f): 4:13am On May 26, 2017 |
Nice update
dear.....next please |
Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 8:00am On May 26, 2017 |
pamelB THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CRISLY YOU DIDNT NOTIFIED ME lol ![]() this is how life suppose to be KARMA |
Re: United In Betrayal by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 8:16am On May 26, 2017 |
Pretty good, reminds one of a broader version of Zainab Alkali's Virtuos Woman. You might have to watch your tenses and engage your punctilious side more though. |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:31am On May 26, 2017 |
:oChisos... Am a newbie here on dis popular Nairaland. joined 3 days ago. But wait Claire I'll kill u if u 4give Michael... dat dog or he-goat. Saxwizard... wie are u? 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:34am On May 26, 2017 |
:oChisos... Am a newbie here on dis popular Nairaland. joined 3 days ago. But wait Claire I'll kill u if u 4give Michael... dat dog or he-goat. Sax wizard... wie are u? |
Re: United In Betrayal by saxwizard(m): 10:28am On May 26, 2017 |
Dammykrone: thou calleth me......here am i send me......i am here.... |
Re: United In Betrayal by Timson01(m): 11:02am On May 26, 2017 |
heemah:everyone derserve a secound chance dont say u have not made mistake in life bw4 our mistake should always be our motivation for change once u have accepted ur flaws no one can use them against u 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Timson01(m): 11:04am On May 26, 2017 |
Mztemmy:why do u say soo the writer never wrote so we can look at these frm different perspective 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 11:04am On May 26, 2017 |
I'm sorry for last night's short update. I was feeling sleepy but I said I must drop something for you guys. I slept in the middle of typing and when I got myself, I decided to just post the one I've written and jejely answer the call of nature. "What is this Micheal?" "Baby, I'm sorry. I know that no word justifies my action towards you this past few days but please honey, for all we've shared, forgive my shortcomings. I....' "Get out. Get out of here before I change my mind Micheal." "Honey, hit me, slap me, do whatever but please, forgive me. I don't know what came ovet me. I was blind Claire. Listen, I promise we can still be better than we were. Holiday to Bahamas, shop at Dubai, anything you want baby." "How about giving me your attention? If its not a board meeting by ten, its a business proposal you want to look at. Micheal it's not about money and material packages Micheal. If you'd given me attention, you'll notice the changes in me and we'll tackle it together. I don't want holidays or picnics or shopping or whatever. I want my husband Micheal. I want the man I married. Give him back to me Micheal." She cried, sliding down the wall to the floor. She wept, thankfully and still, with lots of regrets. It was going to be difficult for her. He had slept with her sister, who knows what would have happened if she'd not caught them that night. He kneel walked to her and held her, pulling her into his arms. He had missed her and he regretted ever making her cry. She'd been faithful to him, even after she found out that he was having an affair with his secretary. The secretary that had ruined him. He was going to deal with her. If only he knew that things would turn out like this, he would have had her fired the very first time she seduced him. But he thought with his Johnson instead of his brain and it had cost him a lot. "I'm sorry baby. I'm sorry I promise. Let's go back to the life we had before now. I'll make everything better I promise. I'll be that man you want Claire. I promise." She let him hold her. She'd missed him. He walked upstairs and found them in each other's arms, crying their eyes out. He smiled, beating his chest proudly for accomplishing his goal. At least, he would go home now without fear. Claire has got her marriage back and he was satisfied. He would talk to Micheal later but for now, they should take their time. She stepped into the flat with her box. The agent came to her immediately with a big smile. "Hope you like the apartment madam?" She looked around, satisfaction gleaming in her eyes. "Show me around. I'm loving the decor already." He smiled and led the way. Twenty minutes later, she was transferring eight hundred thousand naira to his account while he wrote her receipt. "I would have paid for a year but my husband will be back before the expiration of this six months.' "Its alright madam. You're welcome." He left the apartment and she went to the room. The house was big enough to contain six people but it was only a room and sitting room with the dining area. It also had a big kitchen and it was worth the amount being charged for it. She began to unpack her things, having it in mind to call Micheal once she was done. They both sat down on Kelvin's bed, not talking to each other. Claire had cried herself to sleep in his arms and he had carried her to their room, their matrimonial room. He was about going to the sitting room for a drink when he ran into Kelvin who invited him to his room for a chat. "Man, this silence is killing o." Micheal said Kelvin smiled. "I'll get us drinks and then ask the girls to send chicken upstairs. It's good to have you back bro." They shook hands and Kelvin left the room. He would disclose nothing to Micheal. The most important thing was that he had realised his mistakes. Whatever happened before today should remain behind. Hope you guys understand me please. It's still your girl, Pamelb 19 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 11:10am On May 26, 2017 |
iamnicer:I'm sorry dear...oya come there's an update. |
Re: United In Betrayal by jumpmasta(m): 11:15am On May 26, 2017 |
PamelB:We understand You dear...We got your back !!! ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 11:28am On May 26, 2017 |
Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 11:34am On May 26, 2017 |
Thanks for the update pamelB i really hope micheal changes for real GOD PLEASE BLESS ME WITH A VIRTUOUS WOMAN LIKE CLAIRE EVEN IF HER NAME ISN'T CLAIRE ![]() ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Fijumokesayo(f): 11:46am On May 26, 2017 |
I understand everybody is entittled to 'second chances' but then, I can't forgive a man that has slept with my sister. My own blood Sister!!!! PamelB pls, Give Claire and Phil a chance. He love her too much, though not all relationships can lead to marriage but pls let them be happy together. 8 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by phayth(f): 12:11pm On May 26, 2017 |
Nice update. If it were the woman that cheated on her husband, forget forgiveness.Women are indeed strong. |
Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 1:30pm On May 26, 2017 |
jumpmasta:Is that why you should quote the whole update? Na wa ooo |
Re: United In Betrayal by Timson01(m): 3:54pm On May 26, 2017 |
Fijumokesayo:u can not forgive the man dats ok then u can not also forgive ur sister that alright so who will then forgive u for ur mistake |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jsaviour(f): 4:02pm On May 26, 2017 |
Timson01: You think what Michael did was a mistake? Not once not twice not even with one person even to the point of raping Gertrude. Please remove mistake from the show abeg. 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by jumpmasta(m): 5:15pm On May 26, 2017 |
LilySopi:Haba...dear..Calm down for Jesu!!! ![]() |
Re: United In Betrayal by chitheo(f): 5:45pm On May 26, 2017 |
[nice story... please i want more |
Re: United In Betrayal by Davidhero(m): 6:58pm On May 26, 2017 |
LilySopi: Na wa ooo Can't you just overlook? Just calm down let God use you... |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:49pm On May 26, 2017 |
Claire but why nah?...... Erm. Saxwizard am jez greeting u oo.... Somebori get me gun oo |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:52pm On May 26, 2017 |
Saxwizard wie iz mai own popcorn.
.or u don't wanna welcome me? PamelB I sight u oo keep it rolln |
Re: United In Betrayal by Dammykrone(m): 9:54pm On May 26, 2017 |
iamnicer:me too 1 Like 2 Shares |
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