Timson01:
u can not forgive the man dats ok then u can not also forgive ur sister that alright so who will then forgive u for ur mistake

Forgiveness in this regard is for those that are expecting Claire to remain married to Micheal, what he did may be forgiveable though because well, God said we should forgive those who sinned against us but to forget nkor? Easier said than done.

Jsaviour:


You think what Michael did was a mistake? Not once not twice not even with one person even to the point of raping Gertrude. Please remove mistake from the show abeg.

micheal was never an adultery frm the begining,it was not is character right from the start listen to claire i want my micheal back,that is to say dat micheal charater has change after he met sarah the wrong person mind u he never had the intention of sleeping with amara or gertrude yet who knows how long gertrude had been with dem see wrong association corrupt gud manners so micheal met a wrong woman and dats what affected him the most it can happen to anybody dats why we always need to be careful even proverbs 5 says something similar to dese case thank u

Fijumokesayo:





Forgiveness in this regard is for those that are expecting Claire to remain married to Micheal, what he did may be forgiveable though because well, God said we should forgive those who sinned against us but to forget nkor? Easier said than done.

am getting ur point now the issue of forgetting is God's ability only God forgets but we ought to forgive is hurtful but these things happen in marriage not sexual immorality in all but there are challenges that occur in marriages it is different for somepeople but know these every marriage will pass thru the trial to prove their love marriage is not a bed of roses the issue with peole nowadays is that they walk into marriage as if they are going to heaven no is not like dat pamela has prove to us that claire is indeed a strong women phil needs to get himself somebody else someone dat deserve him not someone else woman moveon man is not easy but needs to accept it.

hmmm! Keeping my fingers crossed.

Claire is a strong woman, after going through this shit and still have d mind to forgive... To me forgiveness is d easy part, mike has lost her trust nd respect, and its going to take time to give it back, or may not even vet it back, and Claire is ng going to b happy, cos u cnt live happily wit someone u don't respect or trust..... She should do herself a favor and go back to phill, cos Micheal has tasted d forbidden fruit and dere is no going back, and as for amara, DAT b*tch is d devil in human flesh, and doesn't deserve any form of forgiveness even if she comes begging....and as for PamelB dat bae is d bae, u r too gud...

Timson01:
am getting ur point now the issue of forgetting is God's ability only God forgets but we ought to forgive is hurtful but these things happen in marriage not sexual immorality in all but there are challenges that occur in marriages it is different for somepeople but know these every marriage will pass thru the trial to prove their love marriage is not a bed of roses the issue with peole nowadays is that they walk into marriage as if they are going to heaven no is not like dat pamela has prove to us that claire is indeed a strong women phil needs to get himself somebody else someone dat deserve him not someone else woman moveon man is not easy but needs to accept it.

easier said than done my people.

It doesn't matter who he was from the beginning. No one changed him. Saah didn't ask him to beat his wife. she didn't ask him to have sex with his wife's sister. She didn't ask him to rape their maid. He could have fired or transferred Sarah after the initial episode but he didn't Why are we already trying to blame others for our choices? He wasn't this way from the beginning is not an excuse to forgive him or call him a good man. He had decided to be what he is. He isn't seeking apologies from anyone. Claire should fvck off and stop acting like he did what he did under a spell. He husband is a monster and he doesn't care about anyone because he choose not to. No one triggered him to act like a beast. He choose to be a beast.


@Pamelb, you are a beautiful writer but this story doesn't add up. Why do you find it convenient to blame one person for another person's Bleep up?

Timson01:
micheal was never an adultery frm the begining,it was not is character right from the start listen to claire i want my micheal back,that is to say dat micheal charater has change after he met sarah the wrong person mind u he never had the intention of sleeping with amara or gertrude yet who knows how long gertrude had been with dem see wrong association corrupt gud manners so micheal met a wrong woman and dats what affected him the most it can happen to anybody dats why we always need to be careful even proverbs 5 says something similar to dese case thank u

PamelB you too much. From Alone to United Betrayal.
What I love about your story is that they are practical, like things you have in the society e.g marriage.
Thank God that Mich finally regretted his action. Waiting next for the result of betrayal from Claire's sis

The next morning began with Gertrude making assorted dishes. It was going to be her last chore in the house. Ebere and Chika helped her, pleading with her at same time not to leave. They'd made white rice and vegetable sauce, roasted turkey, catfish peppersoup, white yam and egg sauce. Now, she was frying the plantain while the girls washed the dirty dishes.

"Don't worry eh, during vacations, I'll come around, that is if you girls are still here."

"Are you sure? Don't do us promise and fail o." Ebere chipped in.

"I won't. I promise." Gertrude responded

"I won't say anything yet o till I see you. Ehe, are we expecting guests?" Chika asked

"Mba o. That other visitor, Mr kelvin gave Gertrude the list of what to cook. Maybe they're celebrating something." Ebere responded.

"Nsogbu adiro. My stomach is already wanting the food." Chika said and they all laughed.

Gertrude rounded up with the plantain and put it in its place before heading to the dinning to set the table.
She ran into Micheal who came to collect water from the fridge.

"Good morning sir." She greeted

He looked at her, memories of what he had done to her came to his head and he bit his lips.

"Morning Gertrude. Uhm, are you really going navj to school or you just used that to get my wife's permission?"

"I wish to go back to school sir and I told madam the truth.'

"That's good to hear. I want to apologise for what I did to you. I need no soothsayer to tell me that's the reason why you're leaving. I'm sorry and do find it in your heart to forgive me."

"Please don't embarrass me sir. You don't have to.......'

"My being your employer gives me no right to treat you in whatever way I please. Forgive me and thanks for keeping my secret."

"Its alright sir. Thank you. Breakfast will be ready in ten minutes."

He gave her a nod and left with the bottle of water.





She woke up and was surprised to find herself in a different room. She looked around and saw her wedding pictures on the wall. How dare he bring her to that room? How dare he make her lie on that bed he had defiled? She stood up and made to leave but the door opened and he came in, bolting the door behind him.

"Good morning my princess, hope you slept well." He said with a smile.

"Why did you bring me here?"

Her question surprised him but he still maintained his smile

"Baby this is our room. You slept off and......"

"And you should have taken me to my room. Never you think that I'll share this room with you again."

"Baby I'm sorry. You don't have to punish me this way honey. I love you and treating me like this hurts Claire. It's not fair."

She felt his pain but she needed to break him. He needs to respect her as a woman.

"Sleeping with my sister is not fair. In my house, in my room, Micheal that is not fair. I'm outta here."
She brushed past him and left the room.


He sat down on the bed, holding the bottle of water. He deserved it, whatever she does or says, he deserves it. But he won't stop, he won't give up in their marriage.
His phone beeped and he picked it from the lamp stand. It was a text message. He read it and ignored it, gulping down the water straight from the bottle.
He would straighten his marriage, make things perfect and then deal with his past.

The intercom rang, inviting him for breakfast. He picked up his phone and left the room.




She picked up the phone and the grumpy voice spoke up;
"How do I get my money? Or do you wish I get it in kind?'

She smiled. He was always the best.

"I'm coming to the house."

She hung up, picked her handbag and left the house.




She got to her house and was surprised to see the MD and some guys in the premises.
He saw her and walked up to her.

"Good evening Sarah."

"Evening Sir. Has it been long you got here? Let me open the door so we'll go in."

He nodded and she led the way. She opened the door and he followed her while the rest of the guys waited outside.

"Sit down sir. I'm sorry it may be dusty. I've been in my aunt's house."

"Hope everything is fine?" He asked, using a finger to check the cushion before sitting down

"Yes sir." She said, sitting adjacent to him

"The boss sent me to you." He started.

Her heart started the somersaults. Was she going to be arrested for lying? Maybe he misses her and wants her back. Or, has he seen the videos trending online? It's been two days since kelvin duped her.

"He wants to apologise for harassing you and pleads that you do not take the case to court."

She nodded. She wouldn't be that stupid because he was innocent and she would loose the case if she dared. She doesn't even have money to hire a good lawyer.

"Secondly, the company has given you 30 days to vacate this apartment since you've resigned from the company. We'll be checking if we owe you anything and you'll hear from us in six days."

She was doomed for life. With the trending videos, who would ever employ her?

The MD stood up and she joined him.

"I just hope you know what you're doing Sarah. I'll leave now"

She thanked him and he left. She slumped in her former position and cried bitterly. She should have remained in her lane after the several rejections from Micheal but no, she wanted to explore. She had learnt her lessons the hard way.





Kelvin and Micheal were already in the dinning when Claire came down. She was dressed in a plain chiffon gown and she had a notebook in hand.
She got to them, greeted Kelvin and sat at the end of the table.
Ebere served her white rice and vegetable sauce, adding two slices of yam, just the way she liked it.

"Where's Gertrude?" Claire asked?

"She's dressing up." Ebere replied.

"Okay. Tell Chika that I've called the agency and two more girls will be joining you tomorrow. You may leave now."

"Thank you ma."

"Eh?"

"Thank you madam." Ebere corrected.

"That's better."

Ebere left the dinning area with smiles. Her boss was educated and loved having intelligent people around.

Kelvin bit from his turkey and hummed.

"I'm sure you guys will miss Gertrude." He said.

"Big time. She's good and I'll miss her, but then, she's leaving for her own good." Claire added.

"I'll pack up these things when we're done, then I'll eat them all later. She's a wonderful chef." Kelvin joked

"Your stomach will end up suffering the consequences." Claire said and they laughed.

Gertrude showed up with her bag just then. She was dressed in a jean trouser and Versace top. Her natural hair hung on her shoulder. She wore no make up but she looked beautiful enough to turn heads.

"I'm ready to leave madam."

nyc story madam keep it up happy celebration day

Sterope:

It doesn't matter who he was from the beginning. No one changed him. Saah didn't ask him to beat his wife. she didn't ask him to have sex with his wife's sister. She didn't ask him to rape their maid. He could have fired or transferred Sarah after the initial episode but he didn't Why are we already trying to blame others for our choices? He wasn't this way from the beginning is not an excuse to forgive him or call him a good man. He had decided to be what he is. He isn't seeking apologies from anyone. Claire should fvck off and stop acting like he did what he did under a spell. He husband is a monster and he doesn't care about anyone because he choose not to. No one triggered him to act like a beast. He choose to be a beast.


@Pamelb, you are a beautiful writer but this story doesn't add up. Why do you find it convenient to blame one person for another person's Bleep up?

Thank you for the truth.
Who now told Michael to change. He changed because he doesn't want to lose all and that shows he knows what he did or is doing.

Of course, he knew what he was doing.

Look at them commending Claire, someone that almost died now trying to form strong woman like he cares about her.

This story is all shades of wrong. The leap from being good husband to a total bastard and vice versa is too much, like a switch.

Stories like this encourage everything worng in the world.

Jsaviour:


Thank you for the truth.
Who now told Michael to change. He changed because he doesn't want to lose all and that shows he knows what he did or is doing.

thankx,expecting more to mark children's day

Sterope:

It doesn't matter who he was from the beginning. No one changed him. Saah didn't ask him to beat his wife. she didn't ask him to have sex with his wife's sister. She didn't ask him to rape their maid. He could have fired or transferred Sarah after the initial episode but he didn't Why are we already trying to blame others for our choices? He wasn't this way from the beginning is not an excuse to forgive him or call him a good man. He had decided to be what he is. He isn't seeking apologies from anyone. Claire should fvck off and stop acting like he did what he did under a spell. He husband is a monster and he doesn't care about anyone because he choose not to. No one triggered him to act like a beast. He choose to be a beast.


@Pamelb, you are a beautiful writer but this story doesn't add up. Why do you find it convenient to blame one person for another person's Bleep up?

You deserve e-hug and e-kisses for speaking my mind!!

Jsaviour:


Thank you for the truth.
Who now told Michael to change. He changed because he doesn't want to lose all and that shows he knows what he did or is doing.

micheal changed because he does not want to lose all i did not see that when i was reading sha these statement is basically speculative,micheal changed because he realised his mistake.he then understand why she should not have made her (claire) suffered like that

Timson01:
micheal changed because he does not want to lose all i did not see that when i was reading sha these statement is basically speculative,micheal changed because he realised his mistake.he then understand why she should not have made her (claire) suffered like that

the reason why u are saying these is because probably you are a lady and dats understandable i get,u are speaking emotionally many women will say the same thing too,dont't forget micheal was carried by sarah seduction by a woman it was never his intention frm the start but u knw one thing with doing badthings is dat it all start small but as a man give himself to onething to another again he continues until he comes to his senses micheal had his flaws dats ok but claire should forgive him or better still ignore if dats possible we show our weaknesses wen we revenge our strength wen we forgive.

Sterope:
Of course, he knew what he was doing.

Look at them commending Claire, someone that almost died now trying to form strong woman like he cares about her.

This story is all shades of wrong. The leap from being good husband to a total bastard and vice versa is too much, like a switch.

Stories like this encourage everything worng in the world.

and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

the reason why u are saying these is because
probably you are a lady and dats understandable
i get,u are speaking emotionally many women
will say the same thing too,dont't forget micheal
was carried by sarah seduction by a woman it
was never his intention frm the start but u knw one thing with doing badthings is dat it all start
small but as a man give himself to onething to
another again he continues until he comes to his
senses micheal had his flaws dats ok but claire
should forgive him or better still ignore if dats
possible we show our weaknesses wen we revenge our strength wen we forgive.

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

pamela please dont stop for our sake and others dont dont't even mind the comment the most important thing is dat u keep ur focus high even though your story was all gud people will still have their comment remenber when u started the story some people where complaining dat u dont't finish ur story but that did not make u stop pamela u have come these far to just walk away like that i really want u to continue these story and i wish u more ink to ur pen thank u more update please

Timson01:
micheal was never an adultery frm the begining,it was not is character right from the start listen to claire i want my micheal back,that is to say dat micheal charater has change after he met sarah the wrong person mind u he never had the intention of sleeping with amara or gertrude yet who knows how long gertrude had been with dem see wrong association corrupt gud manners so micheal met a wrong woman and dats what affected him the most it can happen to anybody dats why we always need to be careful even proverbs 5 says something similar to dese case thank u

i have been observing this story for some time now in ghost mood but ur well analized comment knocked me out of the ghost mood. nice comment.

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

Please don't see it that way. Your story is superb if not you wont be getting comments at all from us. We are just analysing base on the characters behaviour. Continue with the story abeg. Don't mind us. Thanks

I just hope Claire is "pretending" as to easily kill Michael without anybody suspecting her

Cos I would do the same in her shoes
I will so pretend ehn,make sure am signatory to his account and can have access to all his money and properties

A man who slept with my only sister....right under my nose

That is unforgivable.

Penalty : Death

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg myriad humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

pls ma'ma dont mind dem ooooo jz continue the story and pls dont listen to dem,if it so easy to write a story let dem write ders nw......cos dey will tell u its bad nd dey will still be d one to read it wen u post a new update.SMH

Sterope:
Of course, he knew what he was doing.

Look at them commending Claire, someone that almost died now trying to form strong woman like he cares about her.

This story is all shades of wrong. The leap from being good husband to a total bastard and vice versa is too much, like a switch.

Stories like this encourage everything worng in the world.

pls stop dis ur bad mouth if the story encourage bad things, den write urs dat encourage good thing or better still walk out nd stop read d story.......tch oversabi dem

Oya sorry, waiting for it.

However you should know that this would be an opportunity for you to advocate against rape, support for rape victims, discuss about domestic abuse and banish the nonsense notion that it is a woman's job to build a home at the expense of her life and esteem.

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

Get lost! Thanks.

yewande1234:
pls stop dis ur bad mouth if the story encourage bad things, den write urs dat encourage good thing or better still walk out nd stop read d story.......tch oversabi dem

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

Madam PamelB don't even try that pls am seriously begging u, remember everyone is entitled to his/her opinion so u can't becos of people opinion decid to stop this story half way, abeg my zobo and cream cracker biscuit still remain if u don't mind i will pass some to u. I Love U PamelB pls keep the update coming.

Let someone rape your sister, or put your sister in intensive care unit or f.u.ck one sister while married to another....Doing everything consciously without a gun to his head. Then we shall not talk about emotions.

Don't forget to forgive him once he prostrates on the floor..You hear

Every human being is emotional, man and woman. That emotional line iis stu.pid and sta.le. . Being a woman does not mean being stu.pid. I am not stu.pid, don't even try to insinuate such.

Given that Michael is man, shouldn't he have handles it logically instead of emotionally. The fist time Sarah seduced him, he didn't end up acting sex with her because Claire entered. He was the one that carried his two left legs to Sarah to fix appointment. Sarah did not hold a gun to his head. After he pushed his wife and she lost her pregnancy, his first issue, he never tried to set things straight and reevaluate his circumstances. Sarah didn't tell him to not to mistreat his wife, did she? All that she offered was sex. Did Sarah ask him to rape Getrude, their maid too? Did Sarah asked him to have sex with his wife's sister when he could have avoided it?

Bad things start small, yes... But infidelity is not the same thing as rape. Infidelity does not lead to rape. Infidelity also get level, sleeping with an outsider is different from sleeping with your wife's sister. Infidelity is also not the same thing as domestic abuse. Claire could have does if she hasn't gotten through to Phillips. Micheal is a beast that do not care about Claire. Simple as a ABC, stop trying to justify what is not. Claire would be a foolish woman to wish things well with such a beast. I bet you would ask her to forgive him if he is found sleeping with their child too, after all bad things start small. Perhaps you are one of these people who treat others like trash with the hope of forgiveness when you tire.


Sorry sir, revenge is not a weakness and forgiveness is not strength....Let people so what will satisfy them.

Timson01:
the reason why u are saying these is because
probably you are a lady and dats understandable
i get,u are speaking emotionally many women
will say the same thing too,dont't forget micheal
was carried by sarah seduction by a woman it
was never his intention frm the start but u knw one thing with doing badthings is dat it all start
small but as a man give himself to onething to
another again he continues until he comes to his
senses micheal had his flaws dats ok but claire
should forgive him or better still ignore if dats
possible we show our weaknesses wen we revenge our strength wen we forgive.

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

Haba PamelB! Would you have love us to just read without commenting or "nice one" give us more" thanks".. We were just analyzing each characters buh sorry if that got u angry

Sterope:
Get lost! Thanks.

nw i get ur problem... SMH

PamelB:
and I've read it again. All shades of wrong, what are you guys saying after all? That I should stop writing, fine. I have. Even some people that commended d story before now see it to be preaching bad things, all shades of wrong, encourage wrong in the world. Both those giving e-hug nd e-kiss ngwa, I yaff stop writing so as not to give our future husbands encouragement to do wrong.

You guys concluded on d story without waiting for it to finish.
Oya pls no vex abeg my humble gents and ladies. Bikonu.

PamelB, what can I say...
Just few words if that will make a difference, one person's opinion can not decide for all of us on this platform, hence making his views irrelevant.

On behalf of of every body that enjoy your creativity in the art of writing, we say continue and who ever is not interested should go elsewhere... Thanks and God bless you for making out time and all sacrifice to entertain us.