Please. I want to know what is wrong, not ehhhh this logo is bad! without telling me what is bad about it.

another one

these logos were created with Inkscape

a quickly modified MD logo

another one

please guys say something

you said we should go away na

LMandela:
you said we should go away na

Guy! You got no chill man hahhhahahahaha.

For me, i'll advice u...

LMandela:
you said we should go away na

I said no blanket review, break it down into thier constituent parts and tell me what you feel about it. Don't tell me if they are ugly or fine

GrandGarcon:
I said no blanket review, break it down into thier constituent parts and tell me what you feel about it. Don't tell me if they are ugly or fine

first thing anybody looks at in alogo or any grqphics design is iys overall outlook I.e whether it looks fine or not. it is when it gets a pass on the overall outlook before the viewer will look to the second level which is if the concept matches the message the owner wants to pasa across e.g for a company logo, does it contain or transcribe elements relating to the niche of the business. that can also faill or pass your logo e.g if its an airline company logo, and you put a vector of a car in it.

whats am saying is fine does matter as your work has to look visually apealing to the eye and in the very least, presentable. then the concepts and elements in it are checked.
put these in mind when designing.

emydexter:


first thing anybody looks at in alogo or any grqphics design is iys overall outlook I.e whether it looks fine or not. it is when it gets a pass on the overall outlook before the viewer will look to the second level which is if the concept matches the message the owner wants to pasa across e.g for a company logo, does it contain or transcribe elements relating to the niche of the business. that can also faill or pass your logo e.g if its an airline company logo, and you put a vector of a car in it.

whats am saying is fine does matter as your work has to look visually apealing to the eye and in the very least, presentable. then the concepts and elements in it are checked.
put these in mind when designing.

Yes! Thank you very much!

I guess you haven't read Simple Logo Design Principle before, so I suggest you reading it.

From my view:
For the first one, I think the words below are a bit big. You've alread kb in book graphic, why mentioned it again in upper case?
The second one is better than the third one, since unified color scheme is better for visual accepts. Still their sizes of shape and text are odd to me.
Why not design them in B&W and judge them first? It's necessary to obey the rule of logo design principles.

Phiapia:
I guess you haven't read Simple Logo Design Principle before, so I suggest you reading it.

From my view:
For the first one, I think the words below are a bit big. You've alread kb in book graphic, why mentioned it again in upper case?
The second one is better than the third one, since unified color scheme is better for visual accepts. Still their sizes of shape and text are odd to me.
Why not design them in B&W and judge them first? It's necessary to obey the rule of logo design principles.

I did them all in black and white first. Thank you very much.
I highly appreciate your advice, I will do as you said.