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Re: United In Betrayal by Sylva2147: 12:38pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
cyndylove64:in as much as I don't object your opinion, I think what Claire tolerated you can't endure half of it, you are only giving this opinion because it is a story but believe me in reality you can't even think of that. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 12:45pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
mamindy: OMG! Lol, please someone should help me tell Buhari to shift for me on his hospital, cos I want to faint ooo ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by nerd51(f): 1:35pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
CecyAdrian:lol, even me sef. Abeg, shift, lemme faint |
Re: United In Betrayal by Skimpledawg(m): 1:49pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
CecyAdrian:@bolded is where the dilemma lies. Claire does not know Phil one bit forget all the attention, Care and love he is showing towards Claire, plus Claire is a matured lady. There is a reason she kept fighting for her marriage despite all the shiits Mike has done and we all saw how she almost broke down when Mike came begging the last time. Am not an advocate of Phil, rara o. I would have preferred Kelvin to Phil cos She knows and understands him better. Where Phil came from, I Dnt know. P.S...Michael should be punished adequately. So, Claire is pregnant too? ![]() ![]() |
Re: United In Betrayal by missyadorable(f): 2:44pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
My only challenge is Claire's association with Phil. Phil is just acting to be who/what he is not. All men pretend to be nice until they get what they want. At this stage,what Claire should concentrate more on is finalising the divorce and get whatever she can from Michael. Then Relocate! take time to think about her life and next move Not gallivanting around the whole place with Phil,who is obviously too good to be true! @PamelB...This is a beautiful piece.Keep it up 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 3:06pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
I believe phil truly loves claire buh let her not rush into phil hands if she needs a shoulder to cry on mine is available |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 3:12pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
prodekul:Lol |
Re: United In Betrayal by Donviker: 3:25pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Ghosts mode deactivated..... thumbs up op. nice piece U've here |
Re: United In Betrayal by iamnicer: 3:26pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Crislyn spotted , you forget me na ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by emmyN(m): 3:33pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Though I don't like Michael, I'm not an advocate of divorce either. But the way things are going, I doubt they can ever be together. I remember PamelB's last story, oh what's the name again sef? The main character Pamela settled neither with the jerk ex nor the obsessive idiat. So PamelB, bring a new character inside abeg, I don't like Phil |
Re: United In Betrayal by mamindy(f): 3:49pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
CecyAdrian: Space booked, come and faint your faint 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by kelvinhilton(m): 6:41pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Aunty pamel all thanks to ur story for bringing out some hidden talents. *Never knew Nigeria have lot of Relationship DOCTORS*... ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by citykid54(m): 8:00pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
i think since i have completed from 1 to 43 episode.i will glady come out of my ghost mode.this story is highly captivating bt here re some things giving claire hard decision.... She need her home more dan Phil b/cos she was a virgin wen she came into d home.nd Michael deflowered her so half part of d love z still wit her hubby.she z not at fault fully bt she caused herself some of dis misfortune dat befell her home....as for amara nd co i dnt have time to qualify dem cos it will be like am talking to an evil vulture. Keep ur work goin dear u re a great writer nd u will shine beyond ur peer pamelB... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Mztemmy(f): 8:17pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
citykid54:how d she caused some of the misfortune..... Is it by getting pregnant or by loving her husband and her sister ![]() 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 8:56pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 9:07pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
citykid54: so she should remain with a promiscuous woman beater all because of virginity? and what's that shit about causing some of the problems? ![]() lalasticlala how can I unread this comment please? 4 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 9:25pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
citykid54: How is she the cause of her misfortune ? So coming into the home as Virgin should make her remain in bondage called marriage to Mike ? How matter how promiscuous your husband is, banging your own blood sister is the height of it. She even tried to make the marriage work. |
Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 9:30pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
missyadorable: "all men pretend to be nice... " we are too good with blanket generalisation. Phil hasn't shown that he is not what he is. From his interaction with his friend, it showed that he a perfect gentleman. What a lady need in a man. If he is after Claire or anythijg apart from love and her happiness, he would have taken advantage of Claire when she was broken and at her weak point. Remember how he handled her at the club in Abuja when she was intoxicated ? Nothing stopped him from devouring her but he restrained himself and did what a perfect gentleman should do. |
Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 9:34pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Skimpledawg: She almost broke down cos her husband made her lose her pregnancy and yet he is busy getting others pregnant like public he-goat. She nearly broke down cos she can't get over the fact that a man she loved and sacrificed for, fought to remain married to could do all the shitt to her. Sleeping with her workers, her blood sister (who supposed to a sister to Mike) and his secretary. She nearly broke down cos her own sister, her only family. Someone she brought up like a daughter can do that shiit to her. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by IamKlassik: 10:33pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Hello pamel .ur story if i must say its d best av eva read. It tourched evry part of me. Pls i would like 2 share d story 2 few of my whatsapp frnds if u dnt mind pls am trying 2 avoid plagiarism. Thank u... |
Re: United In Betrayal by Mayreeyam(f): 10:43pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
kelvinhilton: I concur with u sha,but dey is no perfect marriage anywere |
Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 10:43pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
I don't support divorce, but I believe Claire's happiness matters most. Micheal is definitely the unrepentant type, because the very first time Claire caught him with her sister and forgave him should be the last time he would ever think of doing such. I would have wanted Micheal and Claire back together if obly Micheal learned to control his lust. I believe Micheal loves his wife, it's just tha he has a shallow thinking and he is easily manipulated and also, he is insecure and he hasn't learn to trust his wife totally. If he could deal with this issues, i'm sure his home would be problem free. I'm sure Micheal doesn't love Amara, it's just lust. He's overwhelmed with what she can offer him and he put his true feelings underneath, he hid his feelings for his wife just to satisfy his lust. What Micheal really need is a counsellor, someone who would make him understand what he has lost and his about to lose. Someone to make him understand his true feelings, Micheal is a confused fellow As for Claire and Phil, Phil is too good to be true and also I'm not really sure Claire loves him, might just be an infatuation. Claire might just be infactuated to him probably because he has always been there for her, comforting anytime her husband make her sad. We humans tend to fall in lust(not love) most times with that person who is there for us when we are down. You might think why didn't she fall for Kelvin then (after all Kelvin was also there for us) but Kelvin and Claire are more of siblings than friends or anything else, so the natural affection of siblings between them won't make her fall in must with him. I stand to be corrected if my thoughts are wrong It's just my thought, I can only wait to see what ends this. 3 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by citykid54(m): 10:43pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Sensitivity1254: ![]() Sensitivity1254: she noticed all these things on tym bt she failed to do her duties as a wife by calling d husband to order wen it was early bt she instead waited till it was out of hand....i don't blame Michael much cos dat z what law of nature z all about cos women possess a attraction dat it takes strong willed nd minded men to escape d temptation bt Michael wasn't dat strong so he fell nd needed help on tym which didn't come early.if nt she waited for her hubby nd she caught him red handed when she met dat banquet nd card during his absence nd she sit him down nd talk sense into him after reprimanded his inability to have self control i knw he won't have gone dat far.tenkio!!! |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nathblessing(m): 10:53pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
CecyAdrian: I wish i can like this comment over and over again. You just perfectly analyse each character as I also wanted too. Infact this your comment is just perfecto. Michael never loved Claire. The reason he changed all the documents to Claire's name was cos he tot she wud always remain obedient no matter what he does. Claire please just go your way cos if you forgive Michael he would still cheat on you and you wont b able to catch him cheating cos he wud ve gotten beta at his game. #My Opinion... Kudos to u Madam PamelB. More ink to thy pen i pray..... 4 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 11:42pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
citykid54: Lolz. Blame a partner for his/her partner's inability to say no to sexual overtures ? A married man not being able to control himself or lack of self control is the fault of the wife ? She noticed Mike's infidelity and decided to forgive him and make amends. She sent her sister packing just because she want her marriage to work. Kelvin even helped to deliver Mike by making the video of Mike's secretary go viral thereby making her to lose her job. What did Mike do ? He worked out a transfer for her and still planned for another hanging with it which made him to cancel his travelling to Abuja with Sarah. He dicked Sarah. Same with Ebere. But let's blame his wife. We keep finding excuses for cheating husbands, wives, boy friends and girl friends same way we do for abusers. And they keep growing in boldness to keep committing the shit they are doing which is a game to them. I think the problem of Mike is his inability to realise that he is no longer that single guy in school that jumps from one skirt to another. And this has been the ruin of many a man and husband. The flirting and sexual laundering that they thoroughly involved in when they were single comes back in their later life to ruin them. I have seen many become victim of this. 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 11:46pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
citykid54: What is this you are saying?? ![]() |
Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 11:48pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
First PamelB good work, Lemme 1st tlk abt Kelvin I think he is worse Dan Micheal BT pple d ignore that coz they think he cares 4 claire, but d guy didn't do anything tangible to safe their marriage, forget him calling mike bro n all i mean check he called Phil over to abuja even wen he knew mike n Claire are starting to get on d right path broda indeed, am sure everybody tinks he is gud coz he said he wantd to c Claire happy no p BT he shud stop calling mike broda. Amara, can't imagine wat Claire did to her to deserve wat she is doing, she is jus plain evil. Phil, well I don't have a problem with but nothing can tell if he is a good guy or not, Claire with him is a gamble coz even a chronic wife beater can be like d way he is if he wants a lady. Micheal, u can't take d fact DAT he loved Claire I mean willing almost everything to her is a big deal n Claire won't be who she is today if not for him even she admitted that, d love phil is showing Claire nw is child's play compared to d love mike showed Claire wen dey wia dating, but he is a terrible person that shud suffer forever, i blve even if he ends up with Claire( which I tink is d best thing) the guilt will forever be dia. Claire dear, no mata d decision u take u r ryt, if u choose to look at all d rong mike did n decide to bounce u r ryt, if u decide to look at all d gud tins he did for u in d past and forgive him fight for marriage u r ryt, jus knw no mata d decision u take its a gamble, running off wit phil a gamble, fightin for u marriage a gamble. Am with u any decision u take. |
Re: United In Betrayal by Destiny4fame(m): 11:51pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Nathblessing:I disagree wih you here. I believe it was love even Kelvin testified to that. Mike is a modafuckinf arse for all he made Claire go thru and should be punished foe that,still, I don't want them apart #teammiclaire# |
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 12:22am On Jul 09, 2017 |
sweetdude001: Kelvin worse than Micheal in which way?? Kelvin stuck his neck out for Micheal just so Micheal and Claire can have a perfect home. Initially, I wanted to hate him for covering up for Micheal when he told him about his secretary, and he covered up for him but you can't blame him, Micheal is more like his brother and he didn't want to break his home, but did he do nothing about the the information Micheal gave him?? He took his time, to beautifully expose that lady, just so that Micheal's eyes can be open a his marriage will be saved only for him to find out about Micheal and Amara, then the helps and the beatings, haba!!! Talk true, if you were Kelvin, knowing that Claire was also your friend, you would do worse. Remember Kelvin also loves Claire, if he was a bad fellow, he would have used all of Micheal's evil deeds against him to get Claire to fall for him if it's just for one night. It won't be a hard job for him to convince Claire that Micheal is truly not worth her and take advantage of her during her weak moments. Kelvin is only trying to help Claire, but she alone decides if she wants to be helped, he didn't force Claire or ask her to leave Micheal. To me, Kelvin is a true friend! 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by CecyAdrian(f): 12:39am On Jul 09, 2017 |
Destiny4fame: It was not love, if Micheal loved Claire, he would have trusted and believed in her, seriously, what did the poor woman do to even make him doubt her? If you understand how Phycological attitude or meaning of a trophy wife, you will understand that Micheal never loved Claire, he was obsessed with her beauty, obedience and the crown of all being her virginity, Claire was naive with no family, she had just Amara. Remember when Kelvin revealed to us the readers that Micheal before marrying Claire used to eat food prepared by anyone and that he didn't get why Micheal insists that Claire alone cooks for him and takes offense if she doesn't. That is a sign of a possessiveness and slavery, it's not love neither is the act romantic. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jaiyeola24(m): 12:53am On Jul 09, 2017 |
Pls I need somebody to tell me time to sleep I can't just drop my phone at this stage the write up is ...... |
Re: United In Betrayal by Jane1234f(f): 2:09am On Jul 09, 2017 |
I stumbled upon this recently, I must say you're a writer by nature, you're good at what you do, this story is DA bomb,the place that got me laughing is during the time that Phil's friend brought him a girl to sleep with and he refused touching the girl, when the girl started complaining, he asked her "is your name Clair?" Phil is crazy sha 1 Like 1 Share |
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