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Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 8:56am On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



You must be very stupid for this comment... Who is this motherfucker? What's your problem? Are you mad or is something wrong with your head? I guess you are illiterate since you can't understand simple English.. I blamed both parties for destroying their marriage & you are here laying curses on my unborn child.. It is your own daughter that will die from domestic violence... Don't start what you can't finish,stupid asshole...
you are the stupid one here. why blaming claire for Michael's foolishness? idiot, its your type that won't hear excuses if a strand of your child's hair is removed and here you are acting foolish. bring whatever you want to start on. I'm ready.
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 8:56am On Jul 31, 2017
tnks sis 4 the breakfast
Re: United In Betrayal by boldndbeautiful(f): 9:45am On Jul 31, 2017
Good morning PamelB, sorry i've been on ghost mode since, u r a very creative writer, more mb to ur phone. romanticnovella and iamlynn pls lets not fight over imaginary characters, bikonu dont start swearing on unborn children over a mere make believe, there is power in our tongue. please let there be peace. smiley

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Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 9:49am On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
mr man plz tuck that stupid thumb into your pocket. you didn't read where she was an orphan? where she had no motherly figure? or where she was married a virgin? I pray your daughter dies from domestic violence, then and maybe only then will you understand. I wonder how some people reason with their anus. stupid.
what nonsense is this? Are u sure you're okay? It is ur own daughter that will die from domestic violence. What nonsense!

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Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 9:51am On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
you are the stupid one here. why blaming claire for Michael's foolishness? idiot, its your type that won't hear excuses if a strand of your child's hair is removed and here you are acting foolish. bring whatever you want to start on. I'm ready.
i'm speechless. Ur level of stupidity has left me stunned

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Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 9:52am On Jul 31, 2017
Chumzypinky:

what nonsense is this? Are u sure you're okay? It is ur own daughter that will die from domestic violence. What nonsense!
you don't support it yet you are blaming her. lemme ignore you
Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 9:56am On Jul 31, 2017
boldndbeautiful:
Good morning PamelB, sorry i've been on ghost mode since, u r a very creative writer, more mb to ur phone. romanticnovella and iamlynn pls lets not fight over imaginary characters, bikonu dont start swearing on unborn children over a mere make believe, there is power in our tongue. please let there be peace. smiley
lol, I'm not fighting jare.
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 10:02am On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
you don't support it yet you are blaming her. lemme ignore you
ignoring me is the best for you right now

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Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 10:03am On Jul 31, 2017
Kimkardashain:
and mama ibeji has spoken.
lol. My darling baby girl, how are you this morning?
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:08am On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
you are the stupid one here. why blaming claire for Michael's foolishness? idiot, its your type that won't hear excuses if a strand of your child's hair is removed and here you are acting foolish. bring whatever you want to start on. I'm ready.

Hehehe I'm an expert when it comes to argument & beefing but I won't go to that level because you will definitely get tired of replying me.. Let me just ignore you & pretend like you never existed before.... Have a nice day.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:09am On Jul 31, 2017
Chumzypinky:
i'm speechless. Ur level of stupidity has left me stunned
Please ignore that one..
Re: United In Betrayal by Chommieblaq(f): 10:27am On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:
But to be honest Claire shouldn't have given up on her marriage... And Kelvin made things worst by encouraging Phil to go after Claire,what kind of brother and friend is He?

Yes Michael is a fool & swine for all the things he did to Claire... Is it now that Claire wants to be sexy? why didn't she do all that when she was married? how can a woman not know that she's pregnant

Michael & Claire destroyed their marriage because they lack communication & trust. So I'm blaming them both for what is happening to them & I'm not in support of Claire divorcing her husband. If she had stood her ground when Phil was disturbing her maybe Phil won't even have the mind of going after her... What kind of married woman doesn't wear a wedding ring? One of the reasons why Phil fell for her so easily...


Haba what would she have done?
She was a loving wife to Michael, and yes I have seen women that don't know they are pregnant till the 4th month.( some people are that naive and still are), not forgetting that she doesn't have a mother figure.
And for her being lazy and not dressing sexy and stuffs, pregnancy comes with different systoms same way menstruation comes with different systoms for different people. Some ladies don't even experience a single cramp, while some are even indisposed.
As a man you noticed that your once hardworking and loving wife is becoming lazy, no longer does things the way and at the pace she's used to doing, then you should know something is wrong. It's not as if she nagged him into cheating.
She was ready to forgive and work things out, but he's just unrepentant. It's better they divorce biko, forever is too long to be unhappy.

Michael is unrepentant, looks for any tiny excuse to cheat. Impregnated her sis, her maid and raped Gertrude and even lusting after Chika. There a limit to what one can take .

And she didn't lead Phil on. The truth is Love is not enough to sustain a marriage or a relationship, what sustains it is commitment! Yes, you will meet ppl that aren't your spouse or boyfriend, and you will have a connection with them, you see the qualities you love in them, the only thing that will stop you from cheating is how strong your commitment is to your partner. Oga Michael is not committed biko

Divorce is better than unhappy marriage

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:34am On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
mr man plz tuck that stupid thumb into your pocket. you didn't read where she was an orphan? where she had no motherly figure? or where she was married a virgin? I pray your daughter dies from domestic violence, then and maybe only then will you understand. I wonder how some people reason with their anus. stupid.

That's uncalled for. This is just a story and probably a fiction. Why take it so so personal and insult your fellow nairalander and rain curses on his/her daughter.

Koolu temper bro, dem nor dey scratch body as e dey itch.

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Re: United In Betrayal by kerenjay(f): 10:41am On Jul 31, 2017
newbie in the block..... nice story, been following it since the start, as a guest tho, I love it, wehdone ma
Re: United In Betrayal by phayth(f): 10:56am On Jul 31, 2017
There are ways we can disagree nd argue without insulting one another. The insults and mean words are uncalled for. Pls let's learn to respect our different opinions.
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 10:57am On Jul 31, 2017
Chumzypinky:
lol. My darling baby girl, how are you this morning?
am fine oh. how are my twins dm
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 10:58am On Jul 31, 2017
Chommieblaq:



Haba what would she have done?
She was a loving wife to Michael, and yes I have seen women that know they are pregnant till the 4th month.( some people are that naive and still are), not forgetting that she doesn't have a mother figure.
And for her being lazy and not dressing sexy and stuffs, pregnancy comes with different systoms same way menstruation comes with different systems for different people. Some ladies don't even experience a single cramp, while some are even indisposed.
As a man you noticed that your once hardworking and loving wife is becoming lazy, no longer does things the way and at the pace she's used to doing, then you should know something is wrong. It's not as if she nagged him into cheating.
She was ready to forgive and work things out, but he's just unrepentant. It's better they divorce biko, forever is too long to be unhappy.

Michael is unrepentant, looks for any tiny excuse to cheat. Impregnated her sis, her maid and raped Gertrude and even lusting after Chika. There a limit to what one can take .

And she didn't lead Phil on. The truth is Love is not enough to sustain a marriage or a relationship, what sustains it is commitment! Yes, you will meet ppl that aren't your spouse or boyfriend, and you will have a connection with them, you see the qualities you love in them, the only thing that will stop you from cheating is how strong your commitment is to your partner. Oga Michael is not committed biko

Divorce is better than unhappy marriage
Gbam!

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Re: United In Betrayal by yewande1234(f): 12:37pm On Jul 31, 2017
Chommieblaq:



Haba what would she have done?
She was a loving wife to Michael, and yes I have seen women that know they are pregnant till the 4th month.( some people are that naive and still are), not forgetting that she doesn't have a mother figure.
And for her being lazy and not dressing sexy and stuffs, pregnancy comes with different systoms same way menstruation comes with different systems for different people. Some ladies don't even experience a single cramp, while some are even indisposed.
As a man you noticed that your once hardworking and loving wife is becoming lazy, no longer does things the way and at the pace she's used to doing, then you should know something is wrong. It's not as if she nagged him into cheating.
She was ready to forgive and work things out, but he's just unrepentant. It's better they divorce biko, forever is too long to be unhappy.

Michael is unrepentant, looks for any tiny excuse to cheat. Impregnated her sis, her maid and raped Gertrude and even lusting after Chika. There a limit to what one can take .

And she didn't lead Phil on. The truth is Love is not enough to sustain a marriage or a relationship, what sustains it is commitment! Yes, you will meet ppl that aren't your spouse or boyfriend, and you will have a connection with them, you see the qualities you love in them, the only thing that will stop you from cheating is how strong your commitment is to your partner. Oga Michael is not committed biko

Divorce is better than unhappy marriage
Gbam!!!!!!........ U ar on point
Re: United In Betrayal by IamLukas(m): 12:55pm On Jul 31, 2017
Though am not married but I won't advise any lady to continue with the kind of marriage Claire had with Michael...There's little on nothing to be done to save what they had.How do you cope with the idea of your younger sis and your employee carrying a child for your husband at the same time


This is not enough to begin to swear and lay curses on unborn children.



Let's be matured and not take it too personal as this is only a story.


Let the writer write the way she deems fit.

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Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 1:58pm On Jul 31, 2017
1st of all, y r u all fighting? Pamelb u did a great Job until...... Well I tink u shud end it already, something bad happen to Mike n amara( dey deserve it anyway) and Claire n everybody else live happily Eva after.
I might b making a movie outa dis n don't worry u d get d due credit, bt am nt buying d whole story, u lost it wen u started painting it a saint vs devil story, bt its ur opinion n I so respect it.
God bless u n pls u all should stop dragging ur unborn children here.
Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 2:11pm On Jul 31, 2017
Chommieblaq:



Haba what would she have done?
She was a loving wife to Michael, and yes I have seen women that know they are pregnant till the 4th month.( some people are that naive and still are), not forgetting that she doesn't have a mother figure.
And for her being lazy and not dressing sexy and stuffs, pregnancy comes with different systoms same way menstruation comes with different systems for different people. Some ladies don't even experience a single cramp, while some are even indisposed.
As a man you noticed that your once hardworking and loving wife is becoming lazy, no longer does things the way and at the pace she's used to doing, then you should know something is wrong. It's not as if she nagged him into cheating.
She was ready to forgive and work things out, but he's just unrepentant. It's better they divorce biko, forever is too long to be unhappy.

Michael is unrepentant, looks for any tiny excuse to cheat. Impregnated her sis, her maid and raped Gertrude and even lusting after Chika. There a limit to what one can take .

And she didn't lead Phil on. The truth is Love is not enough to sustain a marriage or a relationship, what sustains it is commitment! Yes, you will meet ppl that aren't your spouse or boyfriend, and you will have a connection with them, you see the qualities you love in them, the only thing that will stop you from cheating is how strong your commitment is to your partner. Oga Michael is not committed biko

Divorce is better than unhappy marriage
thank you jare. probably when thosr ones experience it then they will understand.
Re: United In Betrayal by iamlynn(f): 2:14pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:


Hehehe I'm an expert when it comes to argument & beefing but I won't go to that level because you will definitely get tired of replying me.. Let me just ignore you & pretend like you never existed before.... Have a nice day.
oga itk start nah. why running nah.
Re: United In Betrayal by Chommieblaq(f): 2:33pm On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
thank you jare. probably when thosr ones experience it then they will understand.

I saw your comments kiss. Take it easy, everyone opinion mustn't be same and don't forget it's an imaginary story, let's. It haul insult at one another.
Re: United In Betrayal by Mztemmy(f): 2:43pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:
But to be honest Claire shouldn't have given up on her marriage... And Kelvin made things worst by encouraging Phil to go after Claire,what kind of brother and friend is He?

Yes Michael is a fool & swine for all the things he did to Claire... Is it now that Claire wants to be sexy? why didn't she do all that when she was married? how can a woman not know that she's pregnant?

Michael & Claire destroyed their marriage because they lack communication & trust. So I'm blaming them both for what is happening to them & I'm not in support of Claire divorcing her husband. If she had stood her ground when Phil was disturbing her maybe Phil won't even have the mind of going after her... What kind of married woman doesn't wear a wedding ring? One of the reasons why Phil fell for her so easily...
sorry to disturb u but am just going to ask u one question..... If u discover your wife is sleeping with ur brother will u still go on with the union? Many people here can't even take half of what Claire went through so asking her to fight for d marriage is out of it

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 3:06pm On Jul 31, 2017
Mztemmy:
sorry to disturb u but am just going to ask u one question..... If u discover your wife is sleeping with ur brother will u still go on with the union? Many people here can't even take half of what Claire went through so asking her to fight for d marriage is out of it


Lol I'm a lady not a guy & no I won't be happy if my husband cheats on me with my sister neither will I give him any reason to do that... Like I said earlier on,I'm blaming both parties for the destruction of their marriage... Michael for cheating on his wife with Amara & house help.. Also blaming Claire for giving chances in the destruction of their Marriage...

But I won't say anything until I see the end of this story...
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 3:09pm On Jul 31, 2017
iamlynn:
oga itk start nah. why running nah.

I'm a lady... I'm not running but simply doing what every mature person would do & that's ignoring you. You are very immature judging from your comments because I didn't even say anything to you,I only gave my own opinion... But insulting my unborn child is something I won't take from you... Please back off..
Re: United In Betrayal by bimberry1307(f): 3:27pm On Jul 31, 2017
All these insults and name calling is uncalled for, Biko. PamelB, please say something to your fans.
Re: United In Betrayal by Mztemmy(f): 3:32pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



Lol I'm a lady not a guy & no I won't be happy if my husband cheats on me with my sister neither will I give him any reason to do that... Like I said earlier on,I'm blaming both parties for the destruction of their marriage... Michael for cheating on his wife with Amara & house help.. Also blaming Claire for giving chances in the destruction of their Marriage...

But I won't say anything until I see the end of this story...
and I don't even think I saw any part where she gave him the chance to cheat on him
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 3:36pm On Jul 31, 2017
Mztemmy:
and I don't even think I saw any part where she gave him the chance to cheat on him

I'm not talking about the cheating but about Phil... Let me keep my opinions to myself & wait for the ending of this story.
Re: United In Betrayal by cherieb2(f): 3:52pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



Lol I'm a lady not a guy & no I won't be happy if my husband cheats on me with my sister neither will I give him any reason to do that... Like I said earlier on,I'm blaming both parties for the destruction of their marriage... Michael for cheating on his wife with Amara & house help.. Also blaming Claire for giving chances in the destruction of their Marriage...

But I won't say anything until I see the end of this story...

Sweetheart some men that cheats don't need reason(s) to cheat o....no matter how near perfect a wife may think she is(n she may be for real), a husband that wants to cheat on her will do it. To me, Claire tried....it will take a whole lot for a woman to be like her in the real world.....She even sold the house for him at a lower price...after all d betrayal Which woman nor go prefer to pursue dem enter under rain if she can. E nor easy at all. The betrayal is way tooo much.
Re: United In Betrayal by uminem02(m): 5:06pm On Jul 31, 2017
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Re: United In Betrayal by Sensitivity1254: 5:24pm On Jul 31, 2017
romanticnovella:



Lol I'm a lady not a guy & no I won't be happy if my husband cheats on me with my sister neither will I give him any reason to do that... Like I said earlier on,I'm blaming both parties for the destruction of their marriage... Michael for cheating on his wife with Amara & house help.. Also blaming Claire for giving chances in the destruction of their Marriage...

But I won't say anything until I see the end of this story...

Lolz....
How did Claire give chance for the destruction of her marriage?

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