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Re: Tradition - A Story by Ochyglowsglows(f): 1:06am On Aug 01, 2017
Nne Oma, Nne ejime, iya beji,Nwanyi Oma, chummy pinky dearie. I rarely comment o, on this thread and even on many others, but Ehn, I wanna try to u ghost myself, I'm gonna start commenting more often. And I l start from this thread. You are highly appreciated.
Re: Tradition - A Story by donteanz(m): 7:39am On Aug 01, 2017
mummy chumzy, make you helep me thank baba GODE as E don sama another year to my years.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by veenessha(f): 8:06am On Aug 01, 2017
Mummy chumzy shiv should not be barren ooo. My regards to your twins.
Re: Tradition - A Story by Rakiababy: 9:47am On Aug 01, 2017
Chumzypinky:

eyaaa dear, i'm sorry. You're my friend. Everyone is my friend. You're wlc 2 d thread
awwwn tnk u dr
Re: Tradition - A Story by YoungestD(m): 10:38am On Aug 01, 2017
Speechless...
Re: Tradition - A Story by Crystalprince(m): 11:32am On Aug 01, 2017
More ink to your pen pinky. You are really doing a good job, despite the omugwor. I really like your determination in putting up this wonderful story. Thanks dear.
Re: Tradition - A Story by Dyoungstar: 6:39pm On Aug 01, 2017
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Okay, me don land GIDIGBA after 5 days of interrupted reading, I managed to finish this story just now.


this goes to EVERYBODY who has taken seats without my notice and permission; I HEREBY BANISH YOU ALL.

Then, I have my observations about the story:
1. Freda in the earlier chapters said Mia gave birth at age 12, at Germany it turned 13 - that's understandable though

2. Earlier on Freda said she's not sure if Mia was her daughter therefore cannot allow her get married to the crown prince but at this tail end she changed the story to she EXCHANGED Mia at the Hospital.

3. The story taking a direction to Germany was way off it for me, the Germany side of the story soured the taste of the story as it was boring and nothing realistic about it. That's my opinion though.

4. The writer didn't give us any insight about Choudhary's origin, you said he is white, came down to Nigeria for a woman and after losing her stayed back to get another one or what? You need to clear me on this.

5. Then, you made travelling to Germany look so easy as if one can just wake up and pack his things and head to Germany within an hour without processes.

6. I LOVE ALL THE DRAMA HAPPENING IN DIKE'S HOUSE - I read this story just because of the drama between the seven wives and the prince. Please, endeavor to give us more in subsequent updates.

More observations to come soon... All the same good work.

I suggest you publish and probably PRODUCE this piece as a MOVIE.

Well done Madam Chumzypinky.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by Chigold121(f): 9:07pm On Aug 01, 2017
Wow!! am finally here, I started reading since yesterday, I almost didn't sleep last night, dis story is exceptional and I really enjoyed every bit of it. Well done iya beji, may his grace always be sufficient for u and ur family.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by kerenjay(f): 1:21am On Aug 02, 2017
cry my darling shiv...
Re: Tradition - A Story by dasilver20(f): 3:27pm On Aug 02, 2017
Chigold121:
Wow!! am finally here, I started reading since yesterday, I almost didn't sleep last night, dis story is exceptional and I really enjoyed every bit of it. Well done iya beji, may his grace always be sufficient for u and ur family.
U were not the only one doing night vigil me sef follow.and pls mama ibeji dnt let the story end on a sad note lyk red ashes oo biko

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Re: Tradition - A Story by Habeebat61(f): 11:04pm On Aug 03, 2017
Madam chumpzy wellu done o hope d twins no dey too stress u ma
Re: Tradition - A Story by ikheAllah: 11:21pm On Aug 03, 2017
Dyoungstar:
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Okay, me don land GIDIGBA after 5 days of interrupted reading, I managed to finish this story just now.


this goes to EVERYBODY who has taken seats without my notice and permission; I HEREBY BANISH YOU ALL.

Then, I have my observations about the story:
1. Freda in the earlier chapters said Mia gave birth at age 12, at Germany it turned 13 - that's understandable though

2. Earlier on Freda said she's not sure if Mia was her daughter therefore cannot allow her get married to the crown prince but at this tail end she changed the story to she EXCHANGED Mia at the Hospital.

3. The story taking a direction to Germany was way off it for me, the Germany side of the story soured the taste of the story as it was boring and nothing realistic about it. That's my opinion though.

4. The writer didn't give us any insight about Choudhary's origin, you said he is white, came down to Nigeria for a woman and after losing her stayed back to get another one or what? You need to clear me on this.

5. Then, you made travelling to Germany look so easy as if one can just wake up and pack his things and head to Germany within an hour without processes.

6. I LOVE ALL THE DRAMA HAPPENING IN DIKE'S HOUSE - I read this story just because of the drama between the seven wives and the prince. Please, endeavor to give us more in subsequent updates.

More observations to come soon... All the same good work.

I suggest you publish and probably PRODUCE this piece as a MOVIE.

Well done Madam Chumzypinky.
you just say my mind.
Re: Tradition - A Story by Kadexkadijat(f): 12:45pm On Aug 04, 2017
Chumzypinky:

mum twins, i knw it hasnt been easy of u updating d tradition story, pls try to update it. I love you. Tradition is my best story so far. Kiss twins for me
Re: Tradition - A Story by cbella(f): 6:25pm On Aug 04, 2017
Mummy Chumzy ..... Emmmm how do I send airtime to your phone

Hope the family is doing well.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 1:22pm On Aug 06, 2017
Kadexkadijat:

mum twins, i knw it hasnt been easy of u updating d tradition story, pls try to update it. I love you. Tradition is my best story so far. Kiss twins for me
oh sorry dear. I've been AWOL for a while, bt i promise two updates in dis coming wk. I cnt really say wen xactly, bt 2 long updates dis week
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 1:23pm On Aug 06, 2017
cbella:
Mummy Chumzy ..... Emmmm how do I send airtime to your phone


Hope the family is doing well.
the family is well my sister, hw is urs??
I posted my number here sometime ago.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by yim(f): 8:19pm On Aug 06, 2017
Chumzypinky:

the family is well my sister, hw is urs??
I posted my number here sometime ago.
Pls when will you update? cry cry cry

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Re: Tradition - A Story by charytea(f): 10:52pm On Aug 08, 2017
Hmmn, whats happening? Hope all is well with the Writer and the story?
Re: Tradition - A Story by Slimberry123(f): 7:30am On Aug 09, 2017
Chumzypinky ma, i hope u are doing good and how is family?? its been a while and we hope you are doing fine ma.. God is your strength.. patiently expecting you here.

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Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 12:23pm On Aug 09, 2017
'Shiv's on her way' Freda announced.

'whatever' Mia replied nonchalantly settling on her once favourite couch. Her mum had managed to coax her into coming here, just to see Shiv.
She knew she agreed because her mind wasnt settled. She was having a reflection of her life at the moment. Her mistakes. The times she fell short. Freda hurried out of the sitting room.

'i miss Junior' Kelly grumbled beside her. She looked at her daughter, opened her mouth to say something but closed it again when she realised she had nothing important to say.

'when will you take me back to Germany aunt?' Kelly tugged at her arm.

Mia sighed 'first of all, i'm not your aunt. I'm your mum, and i wont be called aunt again. And secondly, going back to Germany is going to take a whole lot of time because one, we just got back. And secondly, you've no reason going back there because there's no one for you there. Now, dont provoke me and just continue being the good girl mummy expects you to be. If you're hungry, go to the kitchen which is by your left through the hallway and ask the kitchen workers to prepare anything you feel like eating, understood?' Mia said gently but sternly.

When Kelly opened her mouth to say something, the look Mia shot her scared her.

Freda walked back into the sitting room carrying a tray of freshly made fruit salad and a plate containing small chops. She placed it front of Mia and Kelly with a smile.

'you should try and eat something. This is the only thing i could get the kitchen staffs to prepare at the moment. But there are preparing something more solid. Kelly, i know you're aint used to the meals here but you'll love it, trust me. They are preparing Vegetable soup and pounded yam'

'whats that?' Kelly asked.

'just eat this first' Mia said throwing a piece of springroll into her mouth. She chewed slowly 'you can have the fruit salad if you want'

'no. I love springrolls. I hate fruit salad' Kelly wrinkled her face.

'but you'll eat it. Because fruits are nice for the body' Mia said.

'but....'

'no buts Kelly. Fruits makes you fresh and healthy. And you'll eat vegetable too. You have to look fresh'

'but Mia, if she doesnt want to eat it, then you shouldnt force her' Freda said.

'and neither did i ask for your opinion'

TBC

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Re: Tradition - A Story by do4luv14(m): 12:34pm On Aug 09, 2017
MIA should cool down na, abi wetin be her own sef,


thanks moms is for the update,



ladies and gentlemen lets give her likes to encourage more updates cool
Re: Tradition - A Story by PrexyD(f): 1:24pm On Aug 09, 2017
Mia Mia please take it easy on that chap or do you want to loose her the same way Freda lost you

mummy Chump how are you and family?

nice update
Re: Tradition - A Story by BlissfulJeff(m): 1:58pm On Aug 09, 2017
nice piece,weldone pinkylady
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 2:24pm On Aug 09, 2017
PrexyD:
Mia Mia please take it easy on that chap or do you want to loose her the same way Freda lost you

mummy Chump how are you and family?

nice update
we're fine dear. Thanks
Re: Tradition - A Story by Inidinero(m): 7:08pm On Aug 09, 2017
shout out to aunty chumzypinky for doing a grt job... u ar d Real deal!red dis story from pg1 nd i am realy thrilled. had to create an acct to enable me commend u. hmmm, pls say me high 2 our nairaland twins. trust dey ar doin grt


Dike is not an ideal family man, he placed his job over his family wic is wrong. pls help tell ur pen to tell him(Dike)it shuld b #FamilyOverEverything# tho he might soon realised dis wen Shiv finally capture his hrt

Dora pls calm down and stop fighting over a lost cause, it is obvious dat ur era is gone so jst quietly retire to d bkgrnd afta all non of d other wives displayed such envy 2wrds u wen Dike gave u evrytin u desired.

Shiv... u broke up wit choudary in a very brutal manner. u ar too trusting. dont knw if it is d few yrs u spent away from home dat cuased it.not to worry Dora will soon teach u wot rilvary is in a polygamous home.


Mia, sory for all fate(aunty chumzy's pen)made u go tru. it is not easy to forgiv o, but if u can forgiv nd let go, i tink u may hav a hpy ending. ignorance is not an excuse for commiting incest, u and Dike need to undergo a spiritual cleansin to avoid incuring d wrath of d gods.


chinny baby my best character... will neva see d truth nd luk d oda way. i liked her b/c am an introvert who needs a charter box to keep my home lively, lolz.

will comment on d odas letter. once again tnku so so much for making out tym to entertain us. may ink neva lack from ur pen and may ur fingers neva go numb from typing...
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 8:15pm On Aug 09, 2017
Inidinero:
shout out to aunty chumzypinky for doing a grt job... u ar d Real deal!red dis story from pg1 nd i am realy thrilled. had to create an acct to enable me commend u. hmmm, pls say me high 2 our nairaland twins. trust dey ar doin grt


Dike is not an ideal family man, he placed his job over his family wic is wrong. pls help tell ur pen to tell him(Dike)it shuld b #FamilyOverEverything# tho he might soon realised dis wen Shiv finally capture his hrt

Dora pls calm down and stop fighting over a lost cause, it is obvious dat ur era is gone so jst quietly retire to d bkgrnd afta all non of d other wives displayed such envy 2wrds u wen Dike gave u evrytin u desired.

Shiv... u broke up wit choudary in a very brutal manner. u ar too trusting. dont knw if it is d few yrs u spent away from home dat cuased it.not to worry Dora will soon teach u wot rilvary is in a polygamous home.


Mia, sory for all fate(aunty chumzy's pen)made u go tru. it is not easy to forgiv o, but if u can forgiv nd let go, i tink u may hav a hpy ending. ignorance is not an excuse for commiting incest, u and Dike need to undergo a spiritual cleansin to avoid incuring d wrath of d gods.


chinny baby my best character... will neva see d truth nd luk d oda way. i liked her b/c am an introvert who needs a charter box to keep my home lively, lolz.

will comment on d odas letter. once again tnku so so much for making out tym to entertain us. may ink neva lack from ur pen and may ur fingers neva go numb from typing...


oh thanks for this wonderful comment.
You're wlc 2 NL, lova ya plenty *muahhh*

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Re: Tradition - A Story by EmpressT(f): 10:50pm On Aug 09, 2017
Seconded
Dyoungstar:
grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin grin

Okay, me don land GIDIGBA after 5 days of interrupted reading, I managed to finish this story just now.


this goes to EVERYBODY who has taken seats without my notice and permission; I HEREBY BANISH YOU ALL.

Then, I have my observations about the story:
1. Freda in the earlier chapters said Mia gave birth at age 12, at Germany it turned 13 - that's understandable though

2. Earlier on Freda said she's not sure if Mia was her daughter therefore cannot allow her get married to the crown prince but at this tail end she changed the story to she EXCHANGED Mia at the Hospital.

3. The story taking a direction to Germany was way off it for me, the Germany side of the story soured the taste of the story as it was boring and nothing realistic about it. That's my opinion though.

4. The writer didn't give us any insight about Choudhary's origin, you said he is white, came down to Nigeria for a woman and after losing her stayed back to get another one or what? You need to clear me on this.

5. Then, you made travelling to Germany look so easy as if one can just wake up and pack his things and head to Germany within an hour without processes.

6. I LOVE ALL THE DRAMA HAPPENING IN DIKE'S HOUSE - I read this story just because of the drama between the seven wives and the prince. Please, endeavor to give us more in subsequent updates.

More observations to come soon... All the same good work.

I suggest you publish and probably PRODUCE this piece as a MOVIE.

Well done Madam Chumzypinky.
Re: Tradition - A Story by Ali1king: 11:59pm On Aug 09, 2017
Chumzypinky:
'Shiv's on her way' Freda announced.

'whatever' Mia replied nonchalantly settling on her once favourite couch. Her mum had managed to coax her into coming here, just to see Shiv.
She knew she agreed because her mind wasnt settled. She was having a reflection of her life at the moment. Her mistakes. The times she fell short. Freda hurried out of the sitting room.

'i miss Junior' Kelly grumbled beside her. She looked at her daughter, opened her mouth to say something but closed it again when she realised she had nothing important to say.

'when will you take me back to Germany aunt?' Kelly tugged at her arm.

Mia sighed 'first of all, i'm not your aunt. I'm your mum, and i wont be called aunt again. And secondly, going back to Germany is going to take a whole lot of time because one, we just got back. And secondly, you've no reason going back there because there's no one for you there. Now, dont provoke me and just continue being the good girl mummy expects you to be. If you're hungry, go to the kitchen which is by your left through the hallway and ask the kitchen workers to prepare anything you feel like eating, understood?' Mia said gently but sternly.

When Kelly opened her mouth to say something, the look Mia shot her scared her.

Freda walked back into the sitting room carrying a tray of freshly made fruit salad and a plate containing small chops. She placed it front of Mia and Kelly with a smile.

'you should try and eat something. This is the only thing i could get the kitchen staffs to prepare at the moment. But there are preparing something more solid. Kelly, i know you're aint used to the meals here but you'll love it, trust me. They are preparing Vegetable soup and pounded yam'

'whats that?' Kelly asked.

'just eat this first' Mia said throwing a piece of springroll into her mouth. She chewed slowly 'you can have the fruit salad if you want'

'no. I love springrolls. I hate fruit salad' Kelly wrinkled her face.

'but you'll eat it. Because fruits are nice for the body' Mia said.

'but....'

'no buts Kelly. Fruits makes you fresh and healthy. And you'll eat vegetable too. You have to look fresh'

'but Mia, if she doesnt want to eat it, then you shouldnt force her' Freda said.

'and neither did i ask for your opinion'

TBC
nice 1
Re: Tradition - A Story by Skimpledawg(m): 10:14am On Aug 10, 2017
Ali1king:
nice 1
Are u OK so? undecided
Re: Tradition - A Story by Sanniboi(m): 11:03am On Aug 10, 2017
nice work mummy chumzypinky Hw are the baby twins doing? Dis is the first tyme of me commenting in dis thread of urs More grease to ur elbow
Re: Tradition - A Story by Slimzjane(f): 12:48pm On Aug 10, 2017
This story is a bomb.i do skip pass this story before i just decide to check it out and since then i have become addicted to it.first thing to read in the morning and last thing at night.i ones get in trouble reading it,wen i was sweeping and reading at d same time my dad saw me shout at me and seize the fone..#keep it up mummy pinky i love you

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Re: Tradition - A Story by Chibitex1(m): 2:10pm On Aug 11, 2017
Buy TBC at a good rate.
Call/WhatsApp 08148139385

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