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Re: Tradition - A Story by Johnsown1(m): 6:03pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
Waiting anxiously for update |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Sanniboi(m): 6:58pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
Johnsown1:like seriously |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Jellymusty(f): 8:33pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
Kudos. Aunty chumzy more mb to ur fone but we re hungry for more update. |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Opeyemi119: 8:35pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
U hv been duing a graet job....more grease to ur elbow |
Re: Tradition - A Story by BlissfulJeff(m): 8:46pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
following... |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 9:07pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
Slimzjane:thanks dear. Love u too. Love u dozen. Love u triple 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by amnik34: 10:20pm On Aug 11, 2017 |
Pls update o! |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Dyoungstar: 2:11am On Aug 13, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Come, you this woman *Chumzypinky* it is like you are just concerned about those giving you SWEET MOUTH comments and nothing for us that took time to scrutinize your story and come up with in-depth analysis/criticism. God is watching you. 3 Likes |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Oladim001(m): 6:20am On Aug 13, 2017 |
Dyoungstar:I thought it was only me that noticed sef. Cos she did the same thing to me. She just ignored my post. Probably she hates criticism or something. 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by lakezone67(m): 8:20am On Aug 13, 2017 |
Oladim001: I have said it here times without number... it is a waste of time to criticize her work. I don't know what kind of a writer doesn't appreciate criticism 2 Likes |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Dyoungstar: 10:00am On Aug 13, 2017 |
Oladim001: Her life, her habit. Wetin concern me? I never talk wetin I wan talk? |
Re: Tradition - A Story by do4luv14(m): 2:13pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
Dyoungstar: when I read ur comment it shows one thing only, you are too full of urself, , you and those siding you, ignorant of what criticism did, or what the meaning stands for,, its not necessarily to reply by ways of comment, she had reply by dropping and improving on her update, and if it was up to me, I will block and ban you guys from my thread, nonsense....... NT dnt waste ur breath replying cos I wont answer you 2 Likes |
Re: Tradition - A Story by yewande1234(f): 2:27pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
do4luv14:u ar on point bro 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Healer007: 5:12pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
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Re: Tradition - A Story by Rakiababy: 5:33pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
im reali addicted to dix story...i love ur story...keep it up |
Re: Tradition - A Story by do4luv14(m): 6:06pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 6:57pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
Dyoungstar:dat i dont reply ur criticism doesnt mean i have not taken note of my shortcomings and places in which i erred |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 6:57pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
lakezone67:me |
Re: Tradition - A Story by charytea(f): 7:41pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
My observation! Chumzypinky pls dnt tk tìs on the wrong note. I av bn followimg this story frm day 1, updates has really been slow this past weeks. We demand for updates cos we appreciate ur work and are eager to knw what happens next. If u re unable to update at least lt us knw so we dnt kp refreshing ur thread. I do c u comment on other thread bt ignore yours. Leaving a story pending mks one lose interest eventually. Hope the twins are great? Thanks. 2 Likes |
Re: Tradition - A Story by do4luv14(m): 7:52pm On Aug 13, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: pinky mummy no lemme vex dis Sunday nite oooo, nah y you dey ansa am ![]() pikin wey dey cry too much cos of attention na slap dem dey use for am, so no jst lemme vex ooo ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by lakezone67(m): 12:45am On Aug 14, 2017 |
do4luv14: Your condition is critical |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Dyoungstar: 5:23am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Oga sorry sir, I never knew my comment was biting you instead of the owner. do4luv14: 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Dyoungstar: 5:27am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Ah! Good, my game plan worked... I wanted you to talk and now you have talked, I am happy, hope you are happy too. Don't take my matter serious, I just dey waka dey pull people leg. |
Re: Tradition - A Story by olaoreofe(f): 6:50am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Dyoungstar:hahahaha chai the guy offend you before |
Re: Tradition - A Story by do4luv14(m): 8:16am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Dyoungstar: lolzzzzzz VIRGINITY thread, lolzzz, I wont ask what you go there to do, cos its clearly obvious who needs to do a research, and background check on somebody jst to comment about something ![]() anyway, everybody knows about the NLHK, that sleep thru here some times ago, that's reason for you thinking am a newbie, as for the ban, go and read again for lack of understand what I mean, let me stop here don't wanna derail this thread, NOTE: as for you sidesticks' I had no reply TNKZ 1 Like |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Healer007: 9:27am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Woriz all this Na The thing is that she replies whoever she wants to reply (that is she doesn't reply to every comment in this thread), whether it is criticism or not. So u guys should not take it personal and say that she isn't being appreciative cause she didn't answer your criticism. Some writers don't even reply any comments at all (be it compliment or criticism) until they finish the story ![]() PS mo Una stop this beefing... It will do u no good.... Happy Monday |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 11:27am On Aug 14, 2017 |
Dyoungstar:all dis grammar ws uncalled for na |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 1:02pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
Dora knocked mildly on Dike's door. There was no response. She turned and sighed. Just then she sighted Shiv walking towards his room. She paused and quickly turned back to the door, pushing it open. She entered the room and quickly locked it behind her. Dike was not in the room but from the running tap from the bathroom, she knew he was there. She scanned the room and sat on the bed just as Dike came out of the bathroom dripping wet with a towel tied around his waist 'what are you doing here in my room Dora?' Just then Shiv started knocking. Dike looked at the door 'who's there?' 'its me Shiv' 'come in. The door is open' Dora smiled inwardly. She knew Shiv hadnt seen her when she stood in front of Dike's room. Shiv tried opening the door but discovered it was locked from inside. Dike looked at her 'why did you lock the door from inside?' 'i guess i forgot' Dora shrugged nonchalantly 'go on and open the door for your ever loving door. She's knocking' Dike shook his head and walked to the door unbolting it. Dora siezed that opportunity and took off her crop top and her white bumshorts. She had no bra on, so she was just on her panties, then she relaxed herself on the bed. Shiv smiled broadly on seeing Dike. He looked so hot with just a towel tied round his waist and his body dripping wet, or was it sweat? 'hi Dike' She greeted cheerfully. 'hi dear' he replied coolly, not as she expected it sha 'come in' She entered and her smile quickly vanished. Dike closed the door behind her and his eyes widened saucers at what he saw. 'Dora?' She quickly sprung up on her feet 'oh Dike! I thought you said you aint letting her in' She covered her naked breasts but made no attempt to dress up. Shiv opened her mouth and looked from Dike back to Dora. 'you would have told me she was coming in. Perhaps, i would have dressed up or something. How can you just expose me like that. Not fair' She bent down and slowly picked up her black lacy bra. Dike's eyes darkened in anger. Especially when he saw the disappointed look in Shiv's eyes 'Dora, get out now' 'i'm already dressing....' 'excuse me' Shiv bit her lips and went out of the room even before Dike could stop her. Dike sighed. Walked to his wardrobe, threw it open, picked a black boxer shorts, black pants and a blue armani shirt. He brushed past Dora, entered the bathroom and came out few minutes later completely dressed. 'you're still here?' He eyed Dora. 'i'll always be here for you baby. Forever and for always' She blew him a kiss. 'okay. Strip' He ordered. Dora smiled inwardly. She always knew she would win. She knew just where to get Dike. Shiv was just an ordinary learner. Stupid girl! She took off her panties and stood completely naked front of Dike. He nodded approvingly and went to the door, and threw it wide open 'now pick every one of your things and get the hell out of my room. I mean right now' 'huh?' Dora was shocked. 'i said carry everything in your hands and walk out. I'm not joking' His eyes showed seriousness 'can i atleast dress up before....' 'i said get out! Are you crazy?!' He thundered. 'sorry' She picked all her clothes, including her undies and was about leaving the room when Chinny and Edna walked past. Chinny laughed first and Edna followed. 'this is what we call witchcraft operation all the way from your mother's side. Lol' Chinny laughed even harder. A tear fell from Dora's eyes as she headed to her room, panties and bra in her hand. TBC 18 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Chumzypinky(f): 1:03pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
Dyoungstar:lol. Attention seeker |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Kimkardashain(f): 1:21pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
hahahahaha. lafing like a maniac |
Re: Tradition - A Story by Nobody: 1:24pm On Aug 14, 2017 |
lolxzz dike is funny... shame on dora |
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