Waiting anxiously for update

Johnsown1:
Waiting anxiously for update

like seriously

Kudos. Aunty chumzy more mb to ur fone but we re hungry for more update.

U hv been duing a graet job....more grease to ur elbow

following...

Slimzjane:
This story is a bomb.i do skip pass this story before i just decide to check it out and since then i have become addicted to it.first thing to read in the morning and last thing at night.i ones get in trouble reading it,wen i was sweeping and reading at d same time my dad saw me shout at me and seize the fone..#keep it up mummy pinky i love you

thanks dear. Love u too. Love u dozen. Love u triple

Pls update o!

Chumzypinky:

thanks dear. Love u too. Love u dozen. Love u triple

Come, you this woman *Chumzypinky* it is like you are just concerned about those giving you SWEET MOUTH comments and nothing for us that took time to scrutinize your story and come up with in-depth analysis/criticism.

God is watching you.

Dyoungstar:


Come, you this woman *Chumzypinky* it is like you are just concerned about those giving you SWEET MOUTH comments and nothing for us that took time to scrutinize your story and come up with in-depth analysis/criticism.

God is watching you.

I thought it was only me that noticed sef.
Cos she did the same thing to me. She just ignored my post.
Probably she hates criticism or something.

Oladim001:

I thought it was only me that noticed sef.
Cos she did the same thing to me. She just ignored my post.
Probably she hates criticism or something.

I have said it here times without number... it is a waste of time to criticize her work. I don't know what kind of a writer doesn't appreciate criticism

Oladim001:

I thought it was only me that noticed sef.
Cos she did the same thing to me. She just ignored my post.
Probably she hates criticism or something.

Her life, her habit.

Wetin concern me? I never talk wetin I wan talk?

Dyoungstar:


Her life, her habit.

Wetin concern me? I never talk wetin I wan talk?

when I read ur comment it shows one thing only, you are too full of urself, ,

you and those siding you, ignorant of what criticism did, or what the meaning stands for,,

its not necessarily to reply by ways of comment, she had reply by dropping and improving on her update,

and if it was up to me, I will block and ban you guys from my thread,

nonsense.......


NT dnt waste ur breath replying cos I wont answer you

do4luv14:



when I read ur comment it shows one thing only, you are too full of urself, ,

you and those siding you, ignorant of what criticism did, or what the meaning stands for,,

its not necessarily to reply by ways of comment, she had reply by dropping and improving on her update,

and if it was up to me, I will block and ban you guys from my thread,

nonsense.......


NT dnt waste ur breath replying cos I wont answer you

u ar on point bro

im reali addicted to dix story...i love ur story...keep it up

yewande1234:
u ar on point bro

tnkz sweet sis

Dyoungstar:


Come, you this woman *Chumzypinky* it is like you are just concerned about those giving you SWEET MOUTH comments and nothing for us that took time to scrutinize your story and come up with in-depth analysis/criticism.

God is watching you.

dat i dont reply ur criticism doesnt mean i have not taken note of my shortcomings and places in which i erred

lakezone67:



I have said it here times without number... it is a waste of time to criticize her work. I don't know what kind of a writer doesn't appreciate criticism

me

My observation! Chumzypinky pls dnt tk tìs on the wrong note. I av bn followimg this story frm day 1, updates has really been slow this past weeks. We demand for updates cos we appreciate ur work and are eager to knw what happens next. If u re unable to update at least lt us knw so we dnt kp refreshing ur thread. I do c u comment on other thread bt ignore yours. Leaving a story pending mks one lose interest eventually. Hope the twins are great? Thanks.

Chumzypinky:

dat i dont reply ur criticism doesnt mean i have not taken note of my shortcomings and places in which i erred

pinky mummy no lemme vex dis Sunday nite oooo,

nah y you dey ansa am


pikin wey dey cry too much cos of attention na slap dem dey use for am,

so no jst lemme vex ooo

do4luv14:


pinky mummy no lemme vex dis Sunday nite oooo,
nah y you dey ansa am

pikin wey dey cry too much cos of attention na slap dem dey use for am,
so no jst lemme vex ooo

Your condition is critical

Oga sorry sir, I never knew my comment was biting you instead of the owner.

do4luv14:



when I read ur comment it shows one thing only, you are too full of urself, ,

you and those siding you, ignorant of what criticism did, or what the meaning stands for,,

its not necessarily to reply by ways of comment, she had reply by dropping and improving on her update,

and if it was up to me, I will block and ban you guys from my thread,

nonsense.......


NT dnt waste ur breath replying cos I wont answer you

Chumzypinky:

dat i dont reply ur criticism doesnt mean i have not taken note of my shortcomings and places in which i erred

Ah! Good, my game plan worked... I wanted you to talk and now you have talked, I am happy, hope you are happy too.

Don't take my matter serious, I just dey waka dey pull people leg.

Dyoungstar:



I was amazed by your level of understanding, going by that I made to make background checks on you just to find that you might be a newbie and unbridled infant seeking attention in the section of NL meant for matured minds as shown in your profile.

You don't even have a thread one should follow yet you plan to ban one on your thread, or are you planning to ban me on your sex thread?

One of the problems you have is acquiring misfortunate education, go back to learning and come back when you are sound so that younger ones can learn better English from you and not this jabs you write here and there.

You are advising a writer whose understanding and education surpasses yours a trillion times, irony.

Please, next time when you talk of banning people on your thread, be specific about the thread as you do not have any useful thread or are you referring to the VIRGINITY thread of yours? What a pity, you are talking about virginity after LIFE has finished fvcking you all round.

Quote me as many times as you want.

hahahaha chai
the guy offend you before

Dyoungstar:



I was amazed by your level of understanding, going by that I made to make background checks on you just to find that you might be a newbie and unbridled infant seeking attention in the section of NL meant for matured minds as shown in your profile.

You don't even have a thread one should follow yet you plan to ban one on your thread, or are you planning to ban me on your sex thread?

One of the problems you have is acquiring misfortunate education, go back to learning and come back when you are sound so that younger ones can learn better English from you and not this jabs you write here and there.

You are advising a writer whose understanding and education surpasses yours a trillion times, irony.

Please, next time when you talk of banning people on your thread, be specific about the thread as you do not have any useful thread or are you referring to the VIRGINITY thread of yours? What a pity, you are talking about virginity after LIFE has finished fvcking you all round.

Quote me as many times as you want.

lolzzzzzz VIRGINITY thread, lolzzz, I wont ask what you go there to do, cos its clearly obvious

who needs to do a research, and background check on somebody jst to comment about something A psycho,, or should I said a psyche,

anyway, everybody knows about the NLHK, that sleep thru here some times ago, that's reason for you thinking am a newbie,

as for the ban, go and read again for lack of understand what I mean,


let me stop here don't wanna derail this thread,

NOTE: as for you sidesticks' I had no reply TNKZ

Woriz all this Na
The thing is that she replies whoever she wants to reply (that is she doesn't reply to every comment in this thread), whether it is criticism or not. So u guys should not take it personal and say that she isn't being appreciative cause she didn't answer your criticism. Some writers don't even reply any comments at all (be it compliment or criticism) until they finish the story



PS mo Una stop this beefing... It will do u no good....

Happy Monday

Dyoungstar:



I was amazed by your level of understanding, going by that I made to make background checks on you just to find that you might be a newbie and unbridled infant seeking attention in the section of NL meant for matured minds as shown in your profile.

You don't even have a thread one should follow yet you plan to ban one on your thread, or are you planning to ban me on your sex thread?

One of the problems you have is acquiring misfortunate education, go back to learning and come back when you are sound so that younger ones can learn better English from you and not this jabs you write here and there.

You are advising a writer whose understanding and education surpasses yours a trillion times, irony.

Please, next time when you talk of banning people on your thread, be specific about the thread as you do not have any useful thread or are you referring to the VIRGINITY thread of yours? What a pity, you are talking about virginity after LIFE has finished fvcking you all round.

Quote me as many times as you want.

all dis grammar ws uncalled for na

Dora knocked mildly on Dike's door. There was no response. She turned and sighed. Just then she sighted Shiv walking towards his room.
She paused and quickly turned back to the door, pushing it open. She entered the room and quickly locked it behind her.

Dike was not in the room but from the running tap from the bathroom, she knew he was there.

She scanned the room and sat on the bed just as Dike came out of the bathroom dripping wet with a towel tied around his waist 'what are you doing here in my room Dora?'

Just then Shiv started knocking.
Dike looked at the door 'who's there?'

'its me Shiv'

'come in. The door is open'

Dora smiled inwardly. She knew Shiv hadnt seen her when she stood in front of Dike's room.

Shiv tried opening the door but discovered it was locked from inside.

Dike looked at her 'why did you lock the door from inside?'

'i guess i forgot' Dora shrugged nonchalantly 'go on and open the door for your ever loving door. She's knocking'

Dike shook his head and walked to the door unbolting it.
Dora siezed that opportunity and took off her crop top and her white bumshorts. She had no bra on, so she was just on her panties, then she relaxed herself on the bed.

Shiv smiled broadly on seeing Dike. He looked so hot with just a towel tied round his waist and his body dripping wet, or was it sweat?

'hi Dike' She greeted cheerfully.

'hi dear' he replied coolly, not as she expected it sha 'come in'

She entered and her smile quickly vanished.

Dike closed the door behind her and his eyes widened saucers at what he saw.

'Dora?'

She quickly sprung up on her feet 'oh Dike! I thought you said you aint letting her in' She covered her naked breasts but made no attempt to dress up.

Shiv opened her mouth and looked from Dike back to Dora.

'you would have told me she was coming in. Perhaps, i would have dressed up or something. How can you just expose me like that. Not fair' She bent down and slowly picked up her black lacy bra.

Dike's eyes darkened in anger. Especially when he saw the disappointed look in Shiv's eyes 'Dora, get out now'

'i'm already dressing....'

'excuse me' Shiv bit her lips and went out of the room even before Dike could stop her.

Dike sighed. Walked to his wardrobe, threw it open, picked a black boxer shorts, black pants and a blue armani shirt. He brushed past Dora, entered the bathroom and came out few minutes later completely dressed.

'you're still here?' He eyed Dora.

'i'll always be here for you baby.
Forever and for always' She blew him a kiss.

'okay. Strip' He ordered.

Dora smiled inwardly. She always knew she would win. She knew just where to get Dike. Shiv was just an ordinary learner. Stupid girl!
She took off her panties and stood completely naked front of Dike.

He nodded approvingly and went to the door, and threw it wide open 'now pick every one of your things and get the hell out of my room. I mean right now'

'huh?' Dora was shocked.

'i said carry everything in your hands and walk out. I'm not joking'

His eyes showed seriousness 'can i atleast dress up before....'

'i said get out! Are you crazy?!' He thundered.

'sorry' She picked all her clothes, including her undies and was about leaving the room when Chinny and Edna walked past.

Chinny laughed first and Edna followed.

'this is what we call witchcraft operation all the way from your mother's side. Lol' Chinny laughed even harder.

A tear fell from Dora's eyes as she headed to her room, panties and bra in her hand.

TBC

Dyoungstar:


Ah! Good, my game plan worked... I wanted you to talk and now you have talked, I am happy, hope you are happy too.

Don't take my matter serious, I just dey waka dey pull people leg.

lol. Attention seeker

hahahahaha. lafing like a maniac

lolxzz dike is funny... shame on dora