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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:11am On Sep 03, 2017
Toyin223:
Tank U,surestG
thank you too
Akinwale14:
SurestG Weldon ma
thanks sir
hormobolanle:
sure u will do better by giving us 3update in d morning
3 in d afternoon
3 at night
Total:9grin
miss dis story like KILODE!
SurestG Wetin dy na?
lol like anti-malaria
Jane1234f:
Well done, dear
thanks alot
swankmee:


.

No p dear.... Take ur tym
thanks for your understanding
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 3:39pm On Sep 03, 2017
Nice Story SurestG
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Neenie(f): 4:45pm On Sep 03, 2017
Nice story, i've been enjoying everybit of it so far.
But i noticed a certain mistake which was the name of the character that played Maurice's wife. You have given her character about three different names, at first you called her Fiona, later you called her Clara and then you later referred to her as Joy.
Pls make amendment about this so it wouldnt confuse your readers any further. MERCI kiss

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 11:56am On Sep 04, 2017
Neenie:
Nice story, i've been enjoying everybit of it so far.
But i noticed a certain mistake which was the name of the character that played Maurice's wife. You have given her character about three different names, at first you called her Fiona, later you called her Clara and then you later referred to her as Joy.
Pls make amendment about this so it wouldnt confuse your readers any further. MERCI kiss

Thanks Neenie, didn't noticed that until you directed my attention to it. Now rectified. I wanted to write Clara

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 9:52pm On Sep 06, 2017
I missed you surestG
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 10:12pm On Sep 06, 2017
queenitee:
I missed you surestG
I knw say u no miss me bt me i sha miss u
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 11:11pm On Sep 06, 2017
Eyinimofeoluwa:
I knw say u no miss me bt me i sha miss u
awwwn, I'm sorry, I missed you too. I'm sure you are now a pro on Nl literature section
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 7:28am On Sep 07, 2017
queenitee:

awwwn, I'm sorry, I missed you too. I'm sure you are now a pro on Nl literature section
Pro bawo nt really jare
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 2:22pm On Sep 07, 2017
surest may God touch ur heart,soul, health,system and pen so that u will give us an update AMEN!!!!!!!!
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 5:16pm On Sep 07, 2017
SurestG darling I hope u are doing good..
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by itsandi(m): 5:31pm On Sep 07, 2017
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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:15pm On Sep 07, 2017
queenitee:
I missed you surestG
missed u more hun
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:21pm On Sep 07, 2017
oly0511:
surest may God touch ur heart,soul, health,system and pen so that u will give us an update AMEN!!!!!!!!
i'll update, sorry for the delay
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:23pm On Sep 07, 2017
swankmee:
SurestG darling I hope u are doing good..
thanks sweetie, i'm good
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 6:58am On Sep 09, 2017
Do u know that i mistaken ur story for another story (the wedding night) when i was checking an updated stories so i have to reread ur last update anyway how r u
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Nuellaluv(f): 7:39pm On Sep 14, 2017
swankmee:



I'm sorry for the short episode, will do better


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No p dear.... Take ur tym
mama the mama you are forgiven so how are you doing hope good. Please try and update more because we are on strike one love......
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Ayomicome(m): 1:01am On Sep 15, 2017
Maurice! Maurice!! Maurice!!!.....As a grown up man shouldn't you have a mind of your own, now that your wife has left you, maybe, just maybe you'll have a change of mind......SurestG, what should I even say about the pace of the update, am still thinking about it
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by xamiel4(m): 6:44pm On Sep 16, 2017
nice work surestg.Please i long for more update.i want to know how everything will end.Mention me again in the next update please.
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 1:09pm On Sep 18, 2017
SurestG:
cHAPTER 15

"Mom is right" Amanda said as she tucked herself into the duvet and straight into Fred's arms.

With his arms opened he pulled her to himself "and what is that mama's daughter?"

"I think its high time we gave Bennett a younger sibling, he is old enough you know" with the expression on her face one could tell she was serious with the discussion. "you caused the delay Fred, we would have done that 3years ago but....."

"shhhhhh..." he interrupted her and planted a passionate kiss on her lips.

She groaned and moved her head upward to his to make the kiss go deeper, his hands went under the pink satin v neckline thigh length she wore and grabbed her tit.

"I want you" he whispered in her ear as he worked on it with his tongue.
She nodded in agreement as he took of her night wear, the kissing and smooching became intense.


....

"I love you Amanda" he said to her as the cold water from the shower sent a beautiful sensation to their body.

"I love you more"

"I can go on and on to show you how I love you" his hands were on her waist and they were both standing unclad in the shower. "I want more of this sweet love making" he said to her biting his lower lip giving her a flirty expression. They both went on another two rounds in the shower and later went to bed exhausted and fulfilled. They both slept soundly that they did not only got to their place of work late the following day, they also felt satisfied.


*****

Tom's phone rang at the middle of the night , he stared nervously at Amanda to make sure she was asleep before he went to in to the rest room to respond to call unknown to him that his fiancée was a bit awake.


After her birthday, Amanda developed the habit of sleeping over at his place once in a while, she tried her possible best in putting the issue bothering her mind about him behind her with the thought that even if his mother rejects her, once she sees her son is into her, she would come to terms with giving him back up. But for sometime she had been speculating something was wrong but amidst her feeling suspicious of him he has never changed towards her neither has she caught him in the act. On that fateful night, she had felt uneasy but pretended she was sleeping immediately she heard his phone rang which was very unusual of him. Though she didn't eavesdrop on their conversation, she knew it was short and businesslike. "could that be one of his staffs?" she thought "by this time of the night?" she thought further and headed to the rest room brushing her eyes with her left hand like someone who is sleepy but pressed just to pretend like she sensed nothing. They both collided but Tom held her tight to stop her from falling.

"easy darl!" still holding her and helped her in.





I'm sorry for the short episode, will do better


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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 3:16pm On Sep 18, 2017
pls can u people stop quoting a full update
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 6:18pm On Sep 18, 2017
SurestG haffa nw
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 6:27pm On Sep 18, 2017
Eyinimofeoluwa:
SurestG haffa nw
left us in the dark. How are you sis?
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 6:34pm On Sep 18, 2017
queenitee:

left us in the dark. How are you sis?
Sis am gud u.... i no dey see ur miss calls again sis
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 6:46pm On Sep 18, 2017
Eyinimofeoluwa:
Sis am gud u.... i no dey see ur miss calls again sis
My phone no dey on ni o, lol. I just stated getting back on jare, been away from Nl for too long, you will see me soon
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 2:55am On Sep 19, 2017
queenitee:

My phone no dey on ni o, lol. I just stated getting back on jare, been away from Nl for too long, you will see me soon
i see u sis
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 9:49am On Sep 21, 2017
Contd
******

he held on to her hand and helped her into the toilet while he left to the bedroom. Amanda couldn't help but wonder what her man was up to.

Grrrrrgh! Grrrrrrrgh!!
Tom's phone rang again and this time, he stepped out of the room into the living room to avoid unnecessary interrogative gaze from Amanda.

"I need to get something from the living room" he murmured not sure if Amanda can hear him from the toilet. "I'll be back" he said aloud

There was no response and so he left.


"I had to drop the call because my fiancée is around" Tom said to the person on the phone in a pleading manner.

"listen young lady, that lady you just insulted through me is my fiancée and I love her, forget whatever misconceptions you are having about us" Amanda heard her man converse with the unknown lady on the phone, she kept still and didn't move closer to avoid suspicion.

"Juliet!!!" he shouted at the caller. "don't be a full, that was just a one-night-stand thing"

Amanda's heart skipped, she was broken and didn't bother listening to the remaining conversation before running into the room as fast and silent as she could.

"I can't believe this" she said to herself in almost a whisper.

That was not the end of the issue, she decided to fight for her love and investigate to know who the lady was and what she needed from Tom. She was planning what to do when Tom came in and gave her a kiss on the forehead which she responded to with a smile.

"I need not make him know I heard something" she thought.

"what was that thing you went to pick from the living room that you needed to use in the middle of the night" she asked as she laid down on her bed adjusting to duvet.

Tom was caught unaware "actually I went to check if my laptop was there or in the car" he said avoiding her gaze, he knew he lied to her and he regretted it.

Amanda smiled sarcastically because she knew he lied but decided to play along with him.

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Toyin223(f): 10:01am On Sep 21, 2017
WELCOME Back Sister
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:33am On Sep 22, 2017
Toyin223:
WELCOME Back Sister
thanks sis
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 7:27am On Sep 22, 2017
CHAPTER 17

"Is this not Fred's wife?"Maurice mumbled and pulled over by the roadside to have a clear view of what Amanda was doing.

She was talking to a male customer who had come to get something for his wife.

Amanda was going around in her shop when she noticed a confused young man who by his appearance and stature should be in his mid-thirties, the man had been fumbling with different fabrics for the past 15mins without knowing which one to pick for his wife. Amanda saw this and decided to help him out.

"good day sir" Amanda said, as she walked to his direction with a charming smile.

"yes madam, how may I help you" the young man who was sweating in the air conditioned shop barely looked up from the fabrics he was holding.

"actually Mr. I'm here to help you" the man still didn't spare her a glance, she moved closer to view the fabrics he was holding before helping him out.

He handed it to her "I want to get them for my wife but I don't know if she would like something like this" still looking confused

"is she over or below 30years?" she asked

"she will be 30 in 2weeks and that is why i want to get these materials for her, she would use it"

"come this way sir" she smiled and walked through the sections to an angle in the shop. "is she fair or dark skinned"

"she is in between" now he is becoming relieved

"these, these, these and this would be suitable for her" she said picking some out for him to see.

Satisfaction was boldly written on his face. "I like these, thanks madam"

"If you would like it to a be a full surprise, you can come upstairs with her picture" she said to the man who obviously was fascinated by the beauty of the fabrics.

"of course ma'am" he said to her and they both headed upstairs. There he tendered his wife's picture and the possible measurements were taking down.

"you can drop them and come back in 2hours, it would be ready"

"you mean the dresses would be made?" he was astonished "this is awesome, this is my first Time of patronizing this place, but ma'am for you to know this place so much, you must be a regular here"

Amy smiled "I own this place" he escorted the man out to his car after making some part payments which is to be completed when he comes back" they were both smiling and chatting.

Maurice picked his phone, dialed Fred's number.

"Fredooo" he saluted his friend

"Maurice what's up na" Fred responded in salutation

"guess who I saw" he said all smiles as he knew he was about causing another disaster.

"you know I hate guessing" Fred said in an angry tone

"Today is Friday bah, let's meet at joint by 6pm" Maurice said and hung up. "he needs to give this wife of his the beating of her life" Maurice murmured to himself, laughed and drove off.

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Nuellaluv(f): 10:14am On Sep 22, 2017
Men..,.. just imagine what that he goat is about doing...... Weldone sis I see you jare
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 10:21am On Sep 22, 2017
I hate men who don't mind deir business angry smh! Maurice!


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