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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:11am On Sep 03, 2017 |
Toyin223:thank you too Akinwale14:thanks sir hormobolanle:lol like anti-malaria Jane1234f:thanks alot swankmee:thanks for your understanding |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 3:39pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
Nice Story SurestG |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Neenie(f): 4:45pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
Nice story, i've been enjoying everybit of it so far. But i noticed a certain mistake which was the name of the character that played Maurice's wife. You have given her character about three different names, at first you called her Fiona, later you called her Clara and then you later referred to her as Joy. Pls make amendment about this so it wouldnt confuse your readers any further. MERCI ![]() 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 11:56am On Sep 04, 2017 |
Neenie: Thanks Neenie, didn't noticed that until you directed my attention to it. Now rectified. I wanted to write Clara 1 Like |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 9:52pm On Sep 06, 2017 |
I missed you surestG |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 10:12pm On Sep 06, 2017 |
queenitee:I knw say u no miss me bt me i sha miss u |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 11:11pm On Sep 06, 2017 |
Eyinimofeoluwa:awwwn, I'm sorry, I missed you too. I'm sure you are now a pro on Nl literature section |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 7:28am On Sep 07, 2017 |
queenitee:Pro bawo nt really jare |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 2:22pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
surest may God touch ur heart,soul, health,system and pen so that u will give us an update AMEN!!!!!!!! |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 5:16pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
SurestG darling I hope u are doing good.. |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by itsandi(m): 5:31pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:15pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
queenitee:missed u more hun |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:21pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
oly0511:i'll update, sorry for the delay |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:23pm On Sep 07, 2017 |
swankmee:thanks sweetie, i'm good |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 6:58am On Sep 09, 2017 |
Do u know that i mistaken ur story for another story (the wedding night) when i was checking an updated stories so i have to reread ur last update anyway how r u |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Nuellaluv(f): 7:39pm On Sep 14, 2017 |
swankmee:mama the mama you are forgiven so how are you doing hope good. Please try and update more because we are on strike one love...... |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Ayomicome(m): 1:01am On Sep 15, 2017 |
Maurice! Maurice!! Maurice!!!.....As a grown up man shouldn't you have a mind of your own, now that your wife has left you, maybe, just maybe you'll have a change of mind......SurestG, what should I even say about the pace of the update, am still thinking about it |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by xamiel4(m): 6:44pm On Sep 16, 2017 |
nice work surestg.Please i long for more update.i want to know how everything will end.Mention me again in the next update please. |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 1:09pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
SurestG:No p sis |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by oly0511(f): 3:16pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
pls can u people stop quoting a full update |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 6:18pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
SurestG haffa nw |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 6:27pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
Eyinimofeoluwa:left us in the dark. How are you sis? |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 6:34pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
queenitee:Sis am gud u.... i no dey see ur miss calls again sis |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 6:46pm On Sep 18, 2017 |
Eyinimofeoluwa:My phone no dey on ni o, lol. I just stated getting back on jare, been away from Nl for too long, you will see me soon |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 2:55am On Sep 19, 2017 |
queenitee:i see u sis |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 9:49am On Sep 21, 2017 |
Contd ****** he held on to her hand and helped her into the toilet while he left to the bedroom. Amanda couldn't help but wonder what her man was up to. Grrrrrgh! Grrrrrrrgh!! Tom's phone rang again and this time, he stepped out of the room into the living room to avoid unnecessary interrogative gaze from Amanda. "I need to get something from the living room" he murmured not sure if Amanda can hear him from the toilet. "I'll be back" he said aloud There was no response and so he left. "I had to drop the call because my fiancée is around" Tom said to the person on the phone in a pleading manner. "listen young lady, that lady you just insulted through me is my fiancée and I love her, forget whatever misconceptions you are having about us" Amanda heard her man converse with the unknown lady on the phone, she kept still and didn't move closer to avoid suspicion. "Juliet!!!" he shouted at the caller. "don't be a full, that was just a one-night-stand thing" Amanda's heart skipped, she was broken and didn't bother listening to the remaining conversation before running into the room as fast and silent as she could. "I can't believe this" she said to herself in almost a whisper. That was not the end of the issue, she decided to fight for her love and investigate to know who the lady was and what she needed from Tom. She was planning what to do when Tom came in and gave her a kiss on the forehead which she responded to with a smile. "I need not make him know I heard something" she thought. "what was that thing you went to pick from the living room that you needed to use in the middle of the night" she asked as she laid down on her bed adjusting to duvet. Tom was caught unaware "actually I went to check if my laptop was there or in the car" he said avoiding her gaze, he knew he lied to her and he regretted it. Amanda smiled sarcastically because she knew he lied but decided to play along with him. 1 Like |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Toyin223(f): 10:01am On Sep 21, 2017 |
WELCOME Back Sister |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:33am On Sep 22, 2017 |
Toyin223:thanks sis |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 7:27am On Sep 22, 2017 |
CHAPTER 17 "Is this not Fred's wife?"Maurice mumbled and pulled over by the roadside to have a clear view of what Amanda was doing. She was talking to a male customer who had come to get something for his wife. Amanda was going around in her shop when she noticed a confused young man who by his appearance and stature should be in his mid-thirties, the man had been fumbling with different fabrics for the past 15mins without knowing which one to pick for his wife. Amanda saw this and decided to help him out. "good day sir" Amanda said, as she walked to his direction with a charming smile. "yes madam, how may I help you" the young man who was sweating in the air conditioned shop barely looked up from the fabrics he was holding. "actually Mr. I'm here to help you" the man still didn't spare her a glance, she moved closer to view the fabrics he was holding before helping him out. He handed it to her "I want to get them for my wife but I don't know if she would like something like this" still looking confused "is she over or below 30years?" she asked "she will be 30 in 2weeks and that is why i want to get these materials for her, she would use it" "come this way sir" she smiled and walked through the sections to an angle in the shop. "is she fair or dark skinned" "she is in between" now he is becoming relieved "these, these, these and this would be suitable for her" she said picking some out for him to see. Satisfaction was boldly written on his face. "I like these, thanks madam" "If you would like it to a be a full surprise, you can come upstairs with her picture" she said to the man who obviously was fascinated by the beauty of the fabrics. "of course ma'am" he said to her and they both headed upstairs. There he tendered his wife's picture and the possible measurements were taking down. "you can drop them and come back in 2hours, it would be ready" "you mean the dresses would be made?" he was astonished "this is awesome, this is my first Time of patronizing this place, but ma'am for you to know this place so much, you must be a regular here" Amy smiled "I own this place" he escorted the man out to his car after making some part payments which is to be completed when he comes back" they were both smiling and chatting. Maurice picked his phone, dialed Fred's number. "Fredooo" he saluted his friend "Maurice what's up na" Fred responded in salutation "guess who I saw" he said all smiles as he knew he was about causing another disaster. "you know I hate guessing" Fred said in an angry tone "Today is Friday bah, let's meet at joint by 6pm" Maurice said and hung up. "he needs to give this wife of his the beating of her life" Maurice murmured to himself, laughed and drove off. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Nuellaluv(f): 10:14am On Sep 22, 2017 |
Men..,.. just imagine what that he goat is about doing...... Weldone sis I see you jare |
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 10:21am On Sep 22, 2017 |
I hate men who don't mind deir business ![]() Welcome back SurestG dearie |
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