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RAIN [the Watery Strides] by izzybobo49(m): 1:42pm On Nov 30, 2017 |
. thudding down the crust like flooding plagues after the dust and heat that smeared the inhabitants in the broad and dusty streets in the holes that thirsts for water on the isle that longed for a bath tingle,tingle,tingle how beautiful are thy strides! . the bored duck awaits the drops of instill as of the yearning milky lane that led to 'sapele' tingling the textiles of couchy illusions the cloud presumes the stage play agreeing to visit the mother earth with suprises hefty strides bounced to and fro as the tranquil befell the dusty lanes . how it clatters along the roof like the trump of the greedy tortoise how it gushes and struggles out like the milk on the tips of a slumber across the window glide it pours and pour creaming the unclad fronds &subsiding the angry sun with clasps of watery strokes the terrestial swam in its liquid. the rain,the dreamt rain. # poetic # izzybobo 2017
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Re: RAIN [the Watery Strides] by noble4d(m): 9:58pm On Dec 21, 2017 |
izzybobo49:Splendid brother, how come I didn't see this earlier. I love the language of this poem but not without little flaw. Take note of your punctuations. 1 Like |
Re: RAIN [the Watery Strides] by izzybobo49(m): 9:40am On Dec 22, 2017 |
noble4d: Thanks bro. i really appreciate your observation. |
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