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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 9:14pm On Feb 06, 2018 |
mercyymai: lobatan,, mofoo ooo. Adesina12 answer her o, No carry last ooo 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:36pm On Feb 06, 2018 |
kunleis4u:Amen, God bless you too. Thanks. 2 Likes |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 2:03am On Feb 07, 2018 |
siralabai: Waiting concern agbero with bread nylon? |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 2:06am On Feb 07, 2018 |
mercyymai: Gbammmm!!!! The question has been answered by the examiner Let's formalise and make it official I wanna praise God with mercyymai in the bedroom....singing ni ooo Sweetest popcorn for you dearie |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 2:08am On Feb 07, 2018 |
queenitee: Where have you been when I wanted u to hawk popcorn to U.K.? |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 2:09am On Feb 07, 2018 |
skubido: Thanks Mr. Concerns I have replied her |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 4:30am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Adesina12: bro no reason ham oo. Agbero don dey package dem self nao oo. Lolzzz 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 4:35am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Adesina12:smile @Mr Concern. U prove say u b man @d reply tinz lolzzz 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mercyymai(f): 9:30am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Adesina12: Lol...... 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:02am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Dedication: VeeAbuede, kunleis4u, tillaman, olaolutreasure, Sojikhing, bimberry1307, ClarissaXX, Ka52y, Pinkfeet, cyndy1000, jullyrosy, kweenie CRYSTAL I shut my eyes after ending the call and try to think. "Who is this girl?" I asked myself and I heard a voice from no where. "Are you still wondering who the girl is?" I opened my eyes and blinked. "Do I know who the person is? I asked myself too. I closed my eyes again but I heard nothing again. I switched off my phone and retired to sleep. On Monday morning, I dressed up to work and joined Oba in the car. "Good morning" I said with a smile as I take the front seat. "Good morning. Hope you slept well?" He replied. "Yes I did and you?" "Yeah, thanks. Shall we?" Yea, we are stopping at the clinic first" I informed. "I know... I know you are getting the cast off today" he said and turned on the ignition. He honked and the gate man open the gate. We got to the hospital, I was attended to. First we took another x-ray. The doctor checked it and gave me a note the pop room to remove the cast. I was so happy, I went to the pop room, where the cast was removed. I was giving a sling to wear on the arm. It's a shoulder immobilizer which I paid for. I went back to the doctor's office he checked it out and wrote me a referral letter to physiotherapy so I could start exercising the hand. Oba and I thanked the doctor and went to the physiotherapy department. I registered and paid for the sections. I was assigned to a physiotherapist who attended to me briefly and asking me to come back the next day to start the therapy. We left the hospital for work. He dropped me off and left. ____________________Toyin Taiwo He came back to pick me up but I was so busy at the office. We didn't leave until 8pm. The drive home was quiet. And that's how Oba has been since morning that he picked me up at home. I was quiet too because I was so tired. I wanted to ask him about the mysterious girl but given by his cold attitude, I decided to let him be. He parked in front of the house since he's taking the car with him. I picked my bag and other things I kept on the back seat. "Good night" I said and alighted. I stood in front of the gate about to knock but I stopped. I thought a good friend should not ignore a friend who has been behaving strangely since morning. I looked back, he was still there waiting for me to go in before leaving. I went back to the car, I walk up to the driver's side opened the door. I tilted my head a bit so I could hold his gaze. "What's with this attitude Oba" I said calmly, looking straight into his eyes and his gaze met mine. He didn't say a word. "Who is this lady you are not suppose to like, Oba?" He held my face in his hands and brought it close to his face. He made to kiss me, I involuntarily closed my eyes. Then I felt his lips on my cheek. "Gracious God! That was so closed" I said in my mind and opened my eyes. I took his hands off my face and closed the door. He drove off immediately. I watched as he drove into the night until the car disappeared. I rushed into my room and lay lazily on my bed. It was a kiss on the cheek but it revived something in me. It’s non explainable. The peck was like a key that unlock my heart that was closed for a very long time. All along I thought it was just friendship but the peck triggered the feeling that was buried inside of me. Now I had to admit that I had feelings for him. So I'm really the mystery girl. That night I couldn't sleep. How will this work. Oba still has a long way to go, he won't settle down until he achieve his goals. He once told me that. He sent me a text. I guessed he couldn't sleep too and I called him back. _______________Toyin Taiwo OBA I know everything is over, my friendship with Crystal and the love her parents have for me is all over, I just ruined everything. I wonder what will happen if she tells her parent that I took advantage of her. I was assigned to drive her and not her feelings. I wish I could reverse what I did. What will happen to the father-son relationship I have with Daddy Afam. I was doing a lot of serious thinking on my bed infact I skipped dinner that night. I don't know what possessed me, I wish she never came back to the car. When she looked straight into my eyes, I lost it completely. I couldn't hide the feelings any longer. I picked my phone and started texting. It reads: 'I'm sorry about tonight. I'm so ashamed of myself right now. And for this I'm resigning as your driver as I can't face you tomorrow. I'll send a friend over to bring the car and drive you to work till you arrange for another driver. I'm truly sorry I didn't mean to take advantage of our friendship' After typing I sent the message. Two minutes later, Crystal's call came through. I didn't pick it till it disconnected. She calls back again and I summoned courage to pick the call. "Oba, I want you here tomorrow morning. Don't you dare send anyone to my house. Remember I'm starting physio tomorrow and you promised to stay with me all through the healing process of my hand. The least you can do is to keep your promise. I'll see you tomorrow. Good night" She said and ended the call. I looked at my phone again and scratched my head. She didn't even want to hear me talk. I don't know what’s on her mind. I can't place her emotions, I don't even know if she’s angry with me or not. I hope tomorrow won't come on time cos I don't even know how to face her. Fine, I know I shouldn't have express my feelings. We are not even in the same league for Christ sake obviously she's someone I can't have. ____________________Toyin Taiwo The next day, I headed to her house in her car. She was already downstairs by the time I drove into the compound. She hopped into the car with a straight face. "Good morning" she said "Good morning" I replied. "I'm sorry about.... "Oba we are getting late" she said, interrupting me. I turned on the ignition and hit the road. 20 Likes 1 Share |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by hizzypearl(f): 10:41am On Feb 07, 2018 |
silent mode deactivated.... this is getting hmmm hmmm.... ehn ehn... 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by emmytemmy: 10:43am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Hmmmm,i knw dis drama will end soon and reality will come.tanx aunty toyin for d update bt d update is short nw. 2 Likes |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sojikhing: 10:53am On Feb 07, 2018 |
chai lovw nwa tintin 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sexyolori(f): 11:17am On Feb 07, 2018 |
mercyymai:choi,ds lady u r not nice at all.is dat how u used 2 do? |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by DemiKOL(f): 11:58am On Feb 07, 2018 |
Interesting! OBA and crystal..... Hmm..... 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by jullyrosy(f): 12:01pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Nice story......
crystal,why not somadina na?? 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mayorchelsea(m): 12:50pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Rachealfst,thanks for the update and mention.Great work you've done with your writing skills.They way you've had me leave many things online and just glued to your stories is amazing.More grace of God upon you. 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mayorchelsea(m): 12:52pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Thanks for the update.More grace of God upon you IJN.@Rachealfst 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by bigbauer(m): 1:03pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Can you make the updates longer please? The suspense is 'over-killing'. This is an awesome story. Great job rachealfst 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by toyhin123(f): 1:30pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Nice one rachealfst,dis is getting more nd more interesting 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 2:12pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Adesina12:Ehmmm, you you see then I was sick na, I told him 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 2:24pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
The cloud is getting tense Oba needs courage...make I borrow ham from mine Rachealfst eku ise opolo 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by wumsgreen(f): 3:00pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Wow this is getting so interesting more grace TT u re indeed a blessed and talented writer 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Mcweber(m): 3:06pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
I'm watching this Oba and crystal on HD 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kunleis4u(m): 3:10pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
thanks for this update, weldone madam 2 Likes |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by ClarissaXX(f): 3:26pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
omg Oba and Crystal thanks for the dedication ma'am 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by dsimple1(m): 3:54pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Oba should Man up.
Nice update... Keep it rolling 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olaolutreasure(m): 5:24pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Thanks ma'am rachealfst.
Oba, get up and man up. Thats if you are eventually the one at last 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 5:47pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Mtchew... Next!! |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pinkfeet: 5:51pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
thanks for the dedication nice update oba and crystal !!! interesting 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by peejaylemmy(f): 5:58pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
Nice one Rachealfst...........This is getting more interesting 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by princessadeola(f): 6:36pm On Feb 07, 2018 |
I don't have problem with Oba and Crystal, but the issue is will her friends be able to accept Oba completely not because of the social status, but I guess they all want her back with Soma.My opinion though. Anyone seeing it this way? 2 Likes 2 Shares |
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