rukidanty:
almighty scorpion is dead, nawa o... who will now fight for simi

Abi oooo. Not only Simisola ooo. Who be now be the Nemesis of Molesters or the Protector of the hood?

YINKS89:
but why juz one update?

Hmmmm.....

Godwindanielboy:
scorpion dead? Why, why shakira why after all he did for you, ahh you wicked ooo? This is Heartbreaking. Op Kudos, keep it up, more updates plsssss.

Truly heartbreaking, Godwindanielboy.

Wat!!!!! Scorpion dead!!!! Shakirah Ur nemesis will soon catch up with you. I wan go avenge Scorpion death first, I dey come back. Thanks for the update Bro

Ann2012:
Wat!!!!! Scorpion dead!!!! Shakirah Ur nemesis will soon catch up with you. I wan go avenge Scorpion death first, I dey come back. Thanks for the update Bro

Awww, Ann2012, please be careful ooo. Shakirah has become very powerful oooo. Abeg no go oooo.

Haaaa scorpion can't die just like that nooooo him spirit go fight........ Hmmmm great story
Lesson learnt:never be too confident always watch ur back & never underestimate anyone most especially
WOMAN
More grace to u
#Respect

cyndy1000:


Amen n Amen to that. I can't stop crying... I can't even comment. Ah shakigoat all just a man that won't even like you talk more of love. The bible said it all, the heart of man is truly evil n wicked

Hmmmmm abi na.. letz just relax and watch as the story unfolds

JamesKudooski:

Becca2017, Pele. Please take heart.

Yea, thanks.. Pa James

sooperrescue:
Nice fiction but it does not add up. Proof read the three chapters again and then rephrase the story line again. How can someone meeting foreign investor leave banana island and pass through Agege? Is he meeting them at Abule egba?

Always finding faults sha...smh

This is way too painful. Someone tell me scorpion was only waiting for them to leave before he wakes up please. He can't just die like that

Olympus has fallen!!!!
Erin woo

* in tears *

herosakin777:
Haaaa scorpion can't die just like that nooooo him spirit go fight........ Hmmmm great story
Lesson learnt:never be too confident always watch ur back & never underestimate anyone most especially
WOMAN
More grace to u
#Respect

Good lesson learnt.

waoh learnt alot from dis story

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kingphilip:


No o I've not being hanging out with him o

The thing is I still share their line of reasoning too on the culprit being ngozi I just had to bring out the other angle to it too so that people doesn't lose sight of the angle they might be missing

Sure I'll have to wait because its not in my power to decide but I'll keep waiting

You deserve the compliment jare

Harjibolar have you been here?
I'm not sure I've come across those lengthy epistles of yours around. Queenitee

School stress ni o, don't worry, I will be back soon.
How have you been?

SCORPION MUST SURVIVN

gud one more ink,rip scorpion

becca2017:



Hmmmmm abi na.. letz just relax and watch as the story unfolds

Yeah, that's the spirit, becca2017.

becca2017:


Yea, thanks.. Pa James

Lol! Pa James? That's ridiculous.

ProfClassic:
This is way too painful. Someone tell me scorpion was only waiting for them to leave before he wakes up please. He can't just die like that

ProfClassic, at times, we can't just take away little tragedies from some plots.

IAmXcessiz:
Olympus has fallen!!!!
Erin woo

* in tears *

IAmXcessiz, yes oooo, Erin woo! So sad. Please take heart.

oloyedprince1:
waoh learnt alot from dis story

Oloyedprince1, glad you learnt from the story.

kingin55:
SCORPION MUST SURVIVN

Hmmmmm...

Xedy:
gud one more ink,rip scorpion

Xedy, thanks a lot.

So far, the story has been captivating. I love your style of writing Mr James, your use of good dictions and figures of speech. I give that to you. You're good bro. Keep it up.

wheres d continuation pls

wow wow

mattobi:
So far, the story has been captivating. I love your style of writing Mr James, your use of good dictions and figures of speech. I give that to you. You're good bro. Keep it up.

Mattobi, your compliments almost bursted my brain. All glory to Jehovah. Thank you so much. I really appreciate.

God bless.

nice story so far good and mind blowing real creative mind

tjquib:
wheres d continuation pls

Please stay tuned.

devilmaycry1:
wow wow

Devilmaycry1, I see you.

queenitee:
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School stress ni o, don't worry, I will be back soon.
How have you been?

we will be expecting you

Just study hard and make us proud

devilmaycry1:
nice story so far good and mind blowing real creative mind

Thanks a lot, padi mi. Really appreciate.