afrodoc2:


Is PES better this year? I have got both but never played the PES after becoming FIFA convert 4 years ago

I haven't tried PES this year but i have seen the gameplay and its way smoother than fifa. I like playing online because im in the top 10% of fifa players so what's the point of buying a game if you can't even find someone to flog as most people in my regional servers don't use PES.

joeace2020:


Okay i think you mean the beat.. No its not mine, in fact i got it from here youtube.com/audiolibrary. I was actually asking for reviews on the song in general. I recorded and mixed alone so i need opinions to know what's wrong with my music. Please tell me what you think.

Nihilstjnr:


no I meant the lo-fi production fits the sonic profile of a SoundCloud tune

larride:


Why you and dope come dey beef England na? Wetin happen?

GloryIsaac:


Honestly, I was so pained that I involuntarily shouted "kick the ball out!" ..... The mofo knew that his team couldn't defend any set piece all night long but still guided the ball to a corner kick ....

joeace2020:
Good morning guys. I recorded, mixed and mastered this at home so not 100% great but your criticisms please, even the destructive ones are permitted.

Love you all mehn


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4gZYn8kHaA&feature=youtu.be

sinizia:


Who England epp? As African teams were being räped left, right and center, you happy so? Mehn fúck England!!

larride:

Make una pity England joor

sinizia:
Egypt's display was much better than their previous one. They've played well so far and created few good chances.

This is a balanced tough match. Hopefully, Egypt gets the 3 points at the end. Elneny has been struggling in that midfield though. He looked shaky sometimes.

larride:


Egypt are in Cairo already bro.

sinizia:


Them go chop like 5 for this match sef. That second goal dampened their resolve

larride:


Your friend Elneny is out. Them sef wan chop their own like the Arabians

sinizia:


My friend ke? Free of charge, as a coach I wouldn't touch him with a 10 foot pole.

sinizia:
See the way that giant of a striker bullied that Egypt defence and scored easily. SMH.

Lana1:
Azzin. Dzyuba na mad man. Chest....toe poke past the defender......R2 to the bottom corner.

Best goal so far. Yes better than C.Ro's freekick!!

diggz:



I commend you for your effort and appreciate you for doing your best as regards your music career and to put yourself out there.... let me quickly share the areas I think you may need to improve on;

1) audibility : It was a struggle trying to pick out the words you were saying which shouldn't be..... especially for the type of music(conscious music) you just did. The words, your words, need to be clearer for people to get the message that you are trying to pass across. I actually feel you were trying to fit in too many words in a line which could have resulted in your words not being clear enough.

Solutions: You can try to use fewer words in a line.
You can also try as much as possible to use words that you can easily and clearly pronounce.
After recording a song--- make sure you play it outside your recording studio, in an open place or preferably in a bar with good sound systems.... it will most likely show or tell you if the quality of your sound is good enough and if your words are clear enough.

2) Attitude : It is not so much about how well you can sing or your word plays or melody in the song but how you sing or deliver your lines bro! Delivery(attitude) is very key bro. By the way I think those sounds or intro or whatever it is before you started singing wasn't necessary....kindly remove it

Music is an art...a form of poetry for me. You need to be able to make people see or believe or buy into any message you are selling or trying to sell through your words and delivery. I should be able to mentally picture whatever you are trying to tell me through your music..... That I couldn't do with this particular song but to assume what you were trying to do.

3) Identity: What type of music do you really want to do or which area are you likely to fit in? I may be wrong but listening to this song makes me feel like you are yet to find who you want to be in the industry. If you are still struggling with your identity, please know that most people will struggle to relate or identify with your music too. You need a unique sound or you have to be better than those who do similar music with you.

4) Nigeria Factor : I am assuming you are doing music for the CASH and the rest reasons.... If you want to do music in nigeria and make it, you need to know the way the market works and the people you intend to sell your music to. If you like do just RB, Conscious music like reggae, hip hop, afro etc you must choose one bcuz gone are the days you can do a song without choosing and maintaining a lane in nigeria music industry. If you don't have a lane or cant maintain your lane....you may end up like the iyanyas of this world, Praise etc....

I hope I was able to communicate my points in the right way....

Wish you all the best chief...

joeace2020:


Thanks for the advice boss, i am glad you pointed all these out to me. I am grateful.

diggz:


You welcome bro. But do you rap?

joeace2020:

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[b]I used to do rap back in the day but carefully monitoring the Nigerian industry made me switch to singing and sing rapping since i can sing too. Pure rap isn't doing too well in this part of the world currently. You rap? You seem to be a top music head

diggz:



Ehn ehn....I thought as much. I took you for a rapper immediately I heard that song. Anyways I do understand why you made the switch and I think it is a good decision.

I think you can talk-rap instead for you sing-rap.... It will definitely work better for you since you use to be a rapper. Or just talk!

Where will you place people like Mr Real, Small Doctor and co of this world? I think they talk more than they sing. They don't bother to sing pretty....they just talk! You can try that to see how it works for you.

I am just passionate about music.... I listen to all types of music.

diggz:



Ehn ehn....I thought as much. I took you for a rapper immediately I heard that song. Anyways I do understand why you made the switch and I think it is a good decision.

I think you can talk-rap instead for you sing-rap.... It will definitely work better for you since you use to be a rapper. Or just talk!

Where will you place people like Mr Real, Small Doctor and co of this world? I think they talk more than they sing. They don't bother to sing pretty....they just talk! You can try that to see how it works for you.

I am just passionate about music.... I listen to all types of music.

afrodoc2:
ORORO AIYE! If Fergie had crystal ball he would not have sold this guy for even 200m.