aridude:
Nice story madam. Please get grammarly, it will help you with your many errors and misspellings.

thank you so much, i will download it on my laptop as soon as possible

zyoxo:
quite interesting really.....just as someone rightly said ma, get a grammarly premium account....it will indeed help in many ways.


cant wait for the next episode o!

thank you so much, i will do that immediately

okafor200:
Kiss me one more night

chaiii really interesting story my dear i dey enjoy am

na woman dey give us this sweet tori so

anyways me i don book front seat as a vip with my drunkard friends dem

we plenty come with pammy and ogogoro
some even bring don simon come and 35 creates of bear

me i no be drunkard o but e be say i just see dem this guys for road so i just say make i follow dem come here chai, you eh... Abeg give me Zobo, na that one i dey sip

abeg anybody make still dey come abeg help us buy champaign come and better suya meat

ahhh this place we go drink die here

baba olowo the long prick

you eh... abeg two bottles of Zobo for me

Thanks for the update but you're not updating like before?

Rosemary33 I really appreciate this story of yours and I appreciate ur time,but pls make the update fast or else one will start getting tired of it....

Welldone Ma'am

OP tanks a lot for the update

dejonathan:
Rosemary33 I really appreciate this story of yours and I appreciate ur time,but pls make the update fast or else one will start getting tired of it....

ok no problem, you will not get tired you hear? I will update tomorrow

pacifust058:
Thanks for the update but you're not updating like before?

no vex too much, I have repented

Thanks for the update ma'am

But dis ain't enough

Rosemary33 thanks for the update

Chinyeaka is a lost soul. She is demented. She needs psychological help ASAP.

Thanks Rosy for the update...fantastic as usual.

Rosemary33:
you eh... abeg two bottles of Zobo for me

rosemary33 my baby
nice story from u here
am really enjoying it

abeg who dey sell those small 50 naira gala for here?

me i go need buy like 5000 naira own
so i fit dey enjoy the tori here
and dey flex my gala o

come o i know say some babes dem go dey eye me here
no fear the gala go reach una self

me i dey reason am why i like gala like this o
abi na gala i come life con chop?

baba olowo the long prick

I Shea wished I was a cast in this story, the way I for arrange rat poison for chinyeaka to chop sha.

400k to bail an innocent girl typical Nigerian police

grace is home, nice, she's strong I knew she'd mk it, they shuu shag sharp sharp small.

proofread ur typo, nd I will round up by chopping popcorn and watching abi reading how it pans out

love!! Manny

I pity Imelda, chimyeaka u never see anything yet.. Rosemary good update as usual, you type the pidgin so well, its easy to read.. weldone, waiting for what's next..

Thanks for the update ma'am

Thanks for the update..

Nice update Weldone Rosemary33

Rosemary, you are darling......................thanks for the update.

Tanks 4 d update

Thanks for the update

Thanks for the update @Rosemary33. But am afraid this story may not end like every other stories I have read oo Nairaland.

Thanks my Lady
This is really interesting and educative

Rosemary33 my stargirl
really likes ur story much
i just booked the vip section for myself and some friends

anyways this is good
do continue the good work

Thanks For The Update Ma'am.Hmmmmm This Chinyeaka Girl is A Desperado

Thanks for the updates. Nice one

Rossy Rossy thump up

Rosemary33 u be my sweet potato

really likes your stories much
abeg am still single and still searching

Good story.
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Sometimes I even forget that am reading a story and start to get mad at some characters here. Honestly this story really connects, it is just so native,and matches with our present day native society, I like the pidgin English, the suspense, the expression of emotions of anger, hate, jealousy, fear, love, unworthiness everything is so complete,

One thing I love about your story is that it just keeps unfolding itself. Nothing is faked, even if it is a fictional story. It just relates so well. And that's why I called it NATIVE. We all know that area Boys behave the way you wrote it. We all know that Nigerian police behave the way you wrote it. And at every time you gave us what we never expected. Every suspense in this story gave birth to solutions that we can apply in present day life.

I do read for fun and I hardly comment on nairaland but I can't keep calm on this.

This story carries a message that must be spread

I pray I see this book well published and sold to over a million individuals in this country and abroad

You are meant for greatness

See you at the top

Thumbs up ROSEMARY

okafor200:
Rosemary33 u be my sweet potato

really likes your stories much
abeg am still single and still searching

Rosemary what do you have to say oo lol