Angel shouldn't fall for this, i think smarter than jewel... She'll how the picture was taken and who took the photos if it wasn't planned.

Jewel should just open up

Thank you

this one is strong..Angel i trust u a lot not to fall.

This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issue out a threat. Boring!

Yea Yea dis story might be much predictable but I still enjoy it though... infant keeeep doing wot u know how 2 do best... iwotago�

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

Thanks, upload you own and let's judge

Komu1048:


Thanks, upload you own and let's judge

Well said jare

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

shut up there, idiot

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

why don't you compose yours

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

we know your type...you can be constructive with your criticism. It mustn't be this way!

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

who's this own again.

Baba, is it by force to read this story. If it's boring, go and read other stories and stop us here...


BTW, infant well done jare

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

Go and write your own

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

I never knew that there are people who posses this level of stupidity and foolishness.if I don't like the story then stay the Bleep away nobody need you or ur nonsense opinion here

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

Why are you this bitter? The story is boring yet you read everything and even predicted it?

You are simply a frustrated person with a dilapidated moral

Florblu:





Why are you this bitter? The story is boring yet you read everything and even predicted it?

You are simply a frustrated person with a dilapidated moral

Exact him. Dullard

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

let me refer u to an unboring story titled " the first class stupidity by you!!!

SirMichael1:
This story is as boring as fúck! It's so predictable that I am able to predict the next three chapters. Up your game infant, it isn't entertaining when you can figure out who falls in love with whom and who will make a scene or who will issues out a threat. Boring!

They are here o... Inspector gadget

Florblu:





Why are you this bitter? The story is boring yet you read everything and even predicted it?

You are simply a frustrated person with a dilapidated moral

I'm sure you walk around pretending to be sane. That's good except that you just turned it off. Stories that intrigue me are the ones that I can't predict, if I can predict the next scene, it's boring AF!

Just so you know, I stopped reading after finishing page 3. I'm pretty sure Jewel and Angel will get together. Then Francis will get himself friendzoned after summoning up the courage to talk to Lucy. From the pattern of the story, Jewel and Angel would get together amidst controversies because from the look of things, there's only so much obstacles around them and if they must get together -which they will- then those obstacles in person of Henry, Lucy, Francis and Jessica won't sit and watch as things unfold between them. I'm pretty sure that that class rep that was asking funny questions on why Angel and Jewel are together if they dong like each other. Like I said, the story is literally easy to read as chapters unfold. It will only be a waste of time going over a seemingly obvious plot.

kakakoshina:
let me refer u to an unboring story titled " the first class stupidity by you!!!

Lol. What would I have expected from someone's whose intellect isn't developed to figure out plots. Your loss bro. Go develop your mind and read stories that aren't boring.

Maybe I shouldn't burden you 'cause only a retard gets intrigued by a story whose plot is so obvious.

SirMichael1:


Lol. What would I have expected from someone's whose intellect isn't developed to figure out plots. Your lose bro. Go develop your mind and read stories that aren't boring.

Maybe I shouldn't burden you 'cause only a retard gets intrigued by a story whose plot is so obvious.

That's not the way to go bro, you can pass your message in a positive tone or offer suggesstions.

SirMichael1:


Lol. What would I have expected from someone's whose intellect isn't developed to figure out plots. Your lose bro. Go develop your mind and read stories that aren't boring.

Maybe I shouldn't burden you 'cause only a retard gets intrigued by a story whose plot is so obvious.

Guy, you just came here reading just three pages and you already complaining... you should've prove your maturity by keeping quiet since the story is boring to you. You don't need all this you're doing showing us the level of your use of English language... If its boring, keep quiet and leave.
Only people with low IQs do this, and who knows maybe you're just seeking attention, but that's your problem anyway.

SirMichael1:


Lol. What would I have expected from someone's whose intellect isn't developed to figure out plots. Your lose bro. Go develop your mind and read stories that aren't boring.

Maybe I shouldn't burden you 'cause only a retard gets intrigued by a story whose plot is so obvious.

Sir, we appreciate God for giving you a developed intellect to figure out plot. That's amazing talent,pls use it very well.
Write your story and stop boring us with your unnecessary analysis. Thanks

Izzykeys051:
Guy, you just came here reading just three pages and you already complaining... you should've prove your maturity by keeping quiet since the story is boring to you. You don't need all this you're doing showing us the level of your use of English language... If its boring, keep quiet and leave.
Only people with low IQs do this, and who knows maybe you're just seeking attention, but that's your problem anyway.

I am not a dummy with no thinking faculty. I think and that's what I do. I wouldn't be intrigued when each time I think of a plot, it comes out exactly as I thought it. Do you know why game of thrones is the best series I've encountered? It's because you can't figure out the next line of action. Very unpredictable.

And besides, there's so many coincidence in it. Coincidence like Henry walking in on Angel and Jewel on two simultaneous occasions. If that isn't boring, I don't know what is.

SirMichael1:


I am not a dummy with no thinking faculty. I think and that's what I do. I wouldn't be intrigued when each time I think of a plot, it comes out exactly as I thought it. Do you know why game of thrones is the best series I've encountered? It's because you can't figure out the next line of action. Very unpredictable.

And besides, there's so many coincidence in it. Coincidence like Henry walking in on Angel and Jewel on two simultaneous occasions. If that isn't boring, I don't know what is.

You should have just kept quiet since it's predictable then go and read other stories instead causing a scene...

And since you're not a dummy with no thinking faculty, you should've use your thinking faculty well by leaving the post and watch the unpredictable game of throne.

SirMichael1:


I'm sure you walk around pretending to be sane. That's good except that you just turned it off. Stories that intrigue me are the ones that I can't predict, if I can predict the next scene, it's boring AF!

Just so you know, I stopped reading after finishing page 3. I'm pretty sure Jewel and Angel will get together. Then Francis will get himself friendzoned after summoning up the courage to talk to Lucy. From the pattern of the story, Jewel and Angel would get together amidst controversies because from the look of things, there's only so much obstacles around them and if they must get together -which they will- then those obstacles in person of Henry, Lucy, Francis and Jessica won't sit and watch as things unfold between them. I'm pretty sure that that class rep that was asking funny questions on why Angel and Jewel are together if they dong like each other. Like I said, the story is literally easy to read as chapters unfold. It will only be a waste of time going over a seemingly obvious plot.

Now you know how it feels when you criticise other people's work without any iota of positivity. I guess you want to reap when it's obvious you did not sow hence all these backlash from when love speaks loyalists. You just launched your energy towards diatribe. Provide a meaningful suggestions and let's take it from there.

Infant shut this people up with an update biko.... Habaaa......

Infant shut this people up with an update biko.... Habaaa......

Izzykeys051:
You should have just kept quiet since it's predictable then go and read other stories instead causing a scene...

And since you're not a dummy with no thinking faculty, you should've use your thinking faculty well by leaving the post and watch the unpredictable game of throne.

**Sigh**

This is pointless. Game of thrones is a movie series and it is bound to end. Now when it does, a man has to get another source for suspense. I thought this would be it.

You mind referring me to an intriguing, yet unpredictable story lying around, cause I could use some suspense right now.

SirMichael1:


**Sigh**

This is pointless. Game of thrones is a movie series and it is bound to end. Now when it does, a man has to get another source for suspense. I thought this would be it.

You mind referring me to an intriguing, yet unpredictable story lying around, cause I could use some suspense right now.

Try kings or price of heartbreak by silver1996

Nice story you got here infant, kudos

kelvyncruz:

Try kings or price of heartbreak by silver1996

Lemme get on with it. Thanks

kelvyncruz:

Try kings or price of heartbreak by silver1996

Lemme get on with it. Thanks