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Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:32pm On Apr 13, 2020
BRIDE COMPETITION
{DO ANYTHING TO WIN!!}
EPISODE 01
Gerald stood at the gate, feeling funny in his gate man uniform.
Ugh! This whole idea of his brother was some how annoying and irritating to him but it was actually the best. It was actually the best thing to do.
Just three days ago, the six selected girls for the competition had started preparing and today, they were all coming over at the great mansion of Bikroft family.
One of the wealthiest family in the whole wide world.
Gerald's actually the second son of the family and had just returned from England where he went to school.
There father is late and everything has been transferred unto him and his elder brother, Arnold.
They are both handsome, dashingly handsome and great.
Gerald is almost thirty while his elder brother is Thirty two.
He paid his Aunt who is their late father's sister to act as the coordinator.
Gerald stood at the gate, breathing and breathing out.
He was restless because he doesn't know what to expect.
The girls might end up being disqualified after the game might have come to an end.
He was still contemplating on this, when the first girl arrived, dragging her luggage with her.
She knocked at the gate looking so beautiful.
Gerald quickly opened the door for her and she came in, smiling seductively and looking around the big compound.
Her name is Cindy. Tall and beautiful with a very curvy build. She's twenty four years old.
She has just returned from Canada where she went to spend a nice vacation with her parents.
Cindy is here to do anything to win the heart of the son of the great Bikroft.
"Wow, ma'am. You look sexy." Gerald greeted. Cindy turned to look at him.
" Are you talking to me? " She asked, staring up and down at him. Gerald nodded.
Cindy stared up and down at him, hissed and catwalked farther into the compound. She turned sharply.
"Where the heck is the way here, running mouth?" She fired at him.
Gerald quickly pointed to the right building and watched her go as she swayed her hips.
"Wow. This is beautiful." Gerald laughed to himself.
Not quite long, the second girl arrived. Gerald almost choked. He almost wanted to ask her if she lost her way.
"Oga open this gate na. Wey you dey there dey look like mugu. You no go open am! " The girl shouted, kicking the gate.
Gerald stared at her, from her rainbow coloured hair, down to her rainbow coloured toes.
She was wearing khaki shorts and big sandals.
Her top was lemon whereas her khaki shorts are orange. "Is this where you are coming to?" Gerald had to ask. She is not looking only funny, she looked so dramatic.
"Se no be Bikroft mansion I dey so? Se no be their estate be this! " She shouted.
Gerald quickly opened the gate and she rushed in like waterfall.
Her name is Maria. Aged twenty three. Her parents are rich and famous but she's just being herself. Funny and local.
Maria sauntered into the compound, laughing and admiring the building. Gerald's mouth was hanging open as he showed her the way.
He burst out laughing. Incredible.
Minutes later, the third girl arrived. This one was looking like a princess with her puppy hanging on her left shoulder.
Her ring Bob hair in red matched everything she was wearing.
This one looks adorable but unfortunately for Gerald, she was actually a spoilt brat.
"Carry my bag inside. Oh! I've been walking from up there with many things to carry. Hurry up! Lettuce doesn't like sunshine! " She said, referring to her puppy.
" You say? " Gerald asked again, making sure she heard her tell him to carry her bag.
"Hurry up! Take my bag inside!" She said in a totally different accent. She must have grown up in the states. Gerald thought and wondered where her aunt picked the girls from.
Gerald had to swallow the insult as he pulled the bag inside. She smiled and came in, robbing her palms on her puppy's fur.
Her name is Valerie. The only daughter of Mr and Mrs Benjamin, one of the share holders at Bikroft enterprises. She's twenty two and very pretty.
She also grew up in the states and had come back few days ago for this great competition.
Gerald showed her the way and watched her walk away.
The fourth girl arrived, looking so hot and sexy. Gerald immediately hated her. She was actually half naked. Is she in the right state of her mind? What guy is gonna marry this?
Gerald opened the gate for her and watch her come in.
She actually smiled seductively at him, showing off her chewing gum.
"You are the gate man here?* Uh uh! You are looking good!" She said and laughed.

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:40pm On Apr 13, 2020
Her name is Becky. Aged twenty five.Sexy looking and very bossy.
Very cunning and full of determination. She's gonna do anything to win! Becky isn't here to compete!, She's here to win!
The last girl arrived. Gerald blinked and blinked again when she knocked so angrily at the gate. She actually had tears in her eyes.
"Won't you open the goddamn gate, you dummy!" She yelled at him. She pulled her luggage to her side and stood staring angrily at him.
Gerald knew she was the last girl and here was the most beautiful out of them all.
She looked very slim with curvy hips and breasts that needed no fucking bra.
Perhaps she wasn't wearing one right now!
Stop it, Gerald! That isn't what you look on a woman. It's nit about being beautiful. This is about character! Gerald chidded himself before opening the gate.
"Move out of my way! I hate all of you! You men are wolfs!" She cried.
Her name is Natasha. Aged twenty three.She's an only child of a single mother,Mrs Asade who owns one of the largest supermarket in town.
She's also very famous and influential and this had made her daughter worthy of this super competition.
She looked like a queen even despite the tears in her eyes.
"What the hell are you staring at!" Natasha yelled at him
" I'm sorry for staring at you but you were crying." Gerald said and made the biggest mistake of his life.
He reached out his hand to clean her face only to be greeted with a thunderous slap.
The girl just slapped him. She just did!!

Just starting!!
Are you ready to read this romance and battle filled story??
Your likes and comments are needed for the next episode.
You wouldn't wanna miss this!!

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:44pm On Apr 13, 2020
BRIDE COMPETITION
EPISODE 02
"Welcome girls." Aunt Linda said, beaming a smart smile at the beautiful girls as they lined in front of her.
"Thank you." They replied.
"As you all know why you are here, I don't need to talk too much rather than to wish you girls luck.
Also remember that if you take the first position, second position and third.... You are going home with money even if you don't win.
So, feel free and be yourself. Make friends with each other and wish each other luck.
And also you can call me aunt Linda. " Aunt Linda said and smiled again as the girls nodded.
She stepped aside and allowed them arrange themselves into the big hall.
They were shown to their rooms. Cindy, Becky and Valerie were given a very large room with three king seized bed. The space of the room was so much breathtaking.
Natasha and Maria were given another room opposite the other room. It was equally extra great for two people.
"I can't believe this is actually happening. Hmm.
What need is to to compete when I'm actually the best here?" Becky asked, walking all over the room in admiration.
Cindy scoffed, coming down from bed. "I beg your pardon? Gosh. You've got no manners at all. Who do you think you are talking to?"
Becky glanced around,as if searching for something. "Excuse me, peacock....did you just talked back at me? I don't blame you,idiot. Because you see me here competing with you? Hun,let me tell you darling. I'm not here to compete. I'm here to win." Becky said, going closer to her.
Valerie only watched them, hoping they would fight and get disqualified.
"Do you want to get disqualified so soon? Just back of. You've got no powers." Becky said again and walked past her to her bed, smiling evilly. They were yet to know her. But as time goes on,they would read the hand writing on the wall.
In the other room, Natasha was trying her very best not to die of laughter. Maria was something else entirely.
She behaved like a total clown and was so very lively to be with.
"Make I tell you something,na my poppy send me come here oh. They say this Bikroft children rich die. But no wahala, make we dey gbege dey go." Maria said, throwing out colourful clothes out of her bag.
"Maria,have you ever acted masquerade before?" Natasha asked her as she stared at the stunning colourful clothes on the bed.
"Masquerade kwa? Which one be that one? Abeg, make we dress go out go meet our husband. Sebi you hear wettin aunt Linda say.
Make we come dey go..?" They were interrupted by the gentle knock on the door.
Natasha opened the door, recovering from her laughter. Aunt Linda's face appeared at the door.
"You girls should get dressed. Arnold Bikroft is ready to welcome you now." Aunt Linda said and left.
" Hurry up,I don't want to be late." Natasha said, pulling off her clothes.
Soon,all the girls were dressed. They all went into the large living room,where a young handsome man was seated.
Arnold stood up in admiration at the wonderful sight before him.
He started from Cindy who stood at the left side. He took her hand and turned her around.
Becky twisted her body in turn, making sure she made body contact with him.
Arnold checked out the girls one after the other and nodded in agreement. Only Maria had him thinking she was actually hired as a maid...a local maid.
"The competition starts tommorow afternoon. With cooking. For now,aunt Linda will take you on a tour around the house and the compound. Feel free and have a good time." Arnold said smiling. The girls all smiled seductively at him,each trying to please him.
Arnold caught Becky's hot gaze on him. She was already have sex with him..with her eyes!
The girls were taken away and almost immediately, Gerald walked in. He had been listening.
"Listen bro. That was too much. You had the other girl's back side smacked. Remember what I told you. You are not allowed to have sex with any of the girls until I've found the one for me." Gerald said.
Arnold smiled and raised his hands up. He noticed a little wound on Gerald's left cheek. "And what's that?"
Gerald touched the spot. "Oh,this? It's nothing. I got slapped by one of the girls. She was angry... crying. I tried to touch her but she slapped me." Gerald said angrily.
Arnold laughed. " Man,you are so funny. Have you forgotten who you are for now? Look,my man. You are a gate man...as far as this game is concern...you are a gate man. Get that into your head and maintain your fucking league." Arnold scolded.
" But that girl is going to leave this house as soon as possible! I've disqualified her already!" Gerald said angrily and left.
Arnold laughed, falling into a sofa.
**********
"Who's there?" Arnold asked as he woke up to a sound outside his door.
It suddenly snapped open and Becky walked in. Arnold was startled. She shouldn't be here! Not for any reason.

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:50pm On Apr 13, 2020
It suddenly snapped open and Becky walked in. Arnold was startled. She shouldn't be here! Not for any reason.
He quickly stood up from bed and climbed down. He was about, buttoning his shirt when he caught the sight of her.
Becky was wearing nothing but her panties and bra. Arnold stared on, feeling his prick rise in anticipation.
In a flash,Becky was in front of him, going straight for his brief which came flying down in a minute. "I'm gonna make you feel so good and you will be forced to believe there us actually no need for a competition. The best is already standing in front of you..." Becky whispered to him, huskily.
Arnold groaned loudly and fell back into bed as she took him into hey perfect experienced mouth.
Arnold was trying to get hold of himself but Becky was just all over him in the next minute.
She stripped herself completely and sat on him, riding him as if her life depended on it.
She sucked his tiny breast and was moaning heavily now as Arnold played with her breast.
Arnold couldn't believe a girl could be actually this bitchy! She was fucking him so hard.
Arnold turned her over and devoured her mouth with a wet hungry kiss.
Becky wrapped her legs around him and pushed in farther into her. "Bleep me...oh.. please Bleep me. Yeah! I'm the best....baby!"
They were so engrossed in their lustful sex that they did not notice the door had opened and someone had come in, watching them in anger.
Another fast girl....which one is it??

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:51pm On Apr 13, 2020
BRIDE COMPETITION
EPISODE 03
"You slut! You slutty bitch!" Cindy shouted as soon as Becky came inside the room.
" What the hell!" Becky shouted back as they bumped into each other.
" You think you are fast hun? You think so!" Cindy was really mad.
Yesterday night, after witnessing the sex scene, she had gone back to bed, boiling with anger that stayed with her through out the night.
"Oh, you must have seen me walk into Arnold's bedroom?" Becky said and laughed into her angry face.
" Baby girl, now you will understand that I'm really here for business. "
" You should get disqualified. I'm gonna tell Aunt Linda right now! " Cindy threatened and turned to go but Becky's laughter stopped her.
"If you dare do that, honey. Then we are both out of this competition cos you will have to also explain what you were doing in front of Arnold's door last night! " Becky threatened back.
Cindy groaned angrily into Becky's face and stormed out of the room. She was gonna show her she isn't the only fast finger here.
Valerie came out of the bathroom, going straight to her bag to dress for the day.
Becky stared at her as she lifted up her puppy from the bed, kissing and playing with it. "Haven't you got any brain at all? Put that dog away from this room! " She yelled.
" Look. I've tolerated you enough. What's your problem? " Valerie asked. She hissed and took her cloth to the dressing room.
Becky hissed back and git ready to have her own bath too.
"Oh,Maria! What are you still doing in there now?
Aunt Linda is going to call us out very soon. Please, be fast. " Natasha voiced out.
She was selecting her dress for the cooking competition.
Maria was busy blasting igbo songs from the bathroom. She finally came out, still singing happily.
"Today na today! Everybody go no say I be better cook!" Maria boasted.
She was very good at cooking and she knew this was her only chance of winning.
Natasha only smiled and rushed into the bathroom to have her own bath.
Natasha knew she had nothing to fear. She was always good at anything she does.
Aunt Linda had bought a lot of food items for the cooking and they were all in the kitchen.
"So girls,I've decided to make everything easy for everyone. Two girls in a day. The next day,two girls will cook their own food and the third day,one of you girls remaining will cook her own food. Great,right?"
" Yes!" They chorused.
Cindy and Becky were the first to cook theirs while the rest of the girls visited the gym.
Natasha did not feel like sweating this wonderful morning so instead,she strolled out to the compound to enjoy the fresh morning breeze.
She went to the back garden and saw Gerald, standing and staring into the pool,lost in thought.
Their previous encounter rushed into her mind and for a second,she felt guilty to have slapped him.
She brushed off the guilt and approached him.
"You aren't even supposed to be standing here. This is not your duty post." Natasha said, standing beside him.
Gerald turned to look at her, annoyed. "And what's your business with mine if I may ask?" He threw rudely at her.
Natasha breathed in she turned to face him. She couldn't take it anymore. She knew she had hurt him.
"Okay fine. I'm sorry for what I did. I was angry. I'm not a bad person. So please,don't get the wrong impression of me."Natasha said.
Gerald looked away. " Whatever."
"Show me where the library is here. I heard there is a library." Natasha asked.
" The next building after the second hallway." Gerald responded, walking away

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:57pm On Apr 13, 2020
Natasha stared at him as he left, feeling strange. She shrugged and went into the next building.
*******"" ""
"What's smelling so badly! Do you want to poison him! Yuck!" Cindy laughed at Becky.
Becky frowned deeply and glanced down inside her pot.
She had been trying to mix the recipes for fried rice but she ended up cooking pepper rice.
She glanced over at Cindy. She was making groundnut soup and pounded yam and it smelled so nice.
If she, Becky would lose,then someone else will have to. Hmm!! Becky said in her heart as she watched Cindy in anger.
An hour later,the cooking was done. Becky was the first to serve her dish. All the time, Becky made passes at Arnold, exposing her private parts to him just to make him lose concentration on the food but it wasn't working.
Arnold was enjoying the view of her body but yet,he had this crazy hatred for her already. He would tell Gerald not to even make the mistake of picking her. She behaves totally like a dog.
"So,what did you make?" Arnold asked to Becky's disappointment.
" Oh..it... it's... fried rice." Becky responded.
" Wow. Alright. Open it..let me see what you've done " Arnold said.
Breathing out,Becky opened the covered chinaware and a fowl smell of pepper drifted into the hair.
Arnold's brow knotted as he perceived the smell. "You sure this is good?" He asked, taking up a spoon."
" Y....yesss..." Becky stammered and closed her eyes shut as Arnold had his first taste.
The power and the loud scream that erupted from his mouth made her eyes fly open again.
"Jesus! Jesus!!" Arnold shouted, pouring himself water as he gulped down a whole jug.
"What is it!!" Becky asked, looking desperately at him.
Arnold shot her a glance as he stuck out his tongue and fanned it with his hand.
"You see asking me what is it!! You are asking me what is it when you gave me pepper rice instead in the fucking name of fried rice!!!! Take this away!!" Arnold yelled.
Cindy laughed so hard her ribcage hurt. " I warned you! You must be a killer!, Gosh. Imagine giving my own husband raw pepper to eat. Nonsense. Just wait and watch him enjoy my meal. Learn,loser." Cindy laughed as she carried her tray of food and walked out.
Behind her,Becky smiled evilly and bursted into laughter.
"Oh,so sorry dear. She must have had it in mind to pull you with pepper. Can you imagine!" Cindy said as she served the groundnut soup into a plate.
Arnold was still recovering from the pepper.
He looked at the food in front of him. It looked nice and the aroma was great.
Arnold had the confidence that this would be better.
Such a bad cook. I almost collapsed.
Wow, this looks good. You made this?" Arnold asked, licking his lips and taking a handful of the pounded yam. He licked his lips again and dipped one full morsel into the soup.
Bringing it up,he threw it straight into his mouth only for him to spit it back into the plate with the loudest scream than before.
Cindy was shocked at the outburst and reaction. "What is it! What is it!" She shouted but Arnold wasn't getting himself any better. He kept screaming and drinking water,jug after jug until he thought he would die.
He thought he just ate a live pepper!
When Cindy tasted her food,she screamed and spitted it out.
The pepper in it would cook a whole full bag of rice.
Breathing heavily like a mad dog,Cindy let out one strangled scream.
"Becky!!!!" She cried and ran back into the kitchen.

Something go happen! Ann2012, bobosneh, kimberlywest, devilpen, pabon, hardes, bladeO, bentleyjnr

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by pabon(m): 10:13pm On Apr 13, 2020
Wow! Your writing has improved a lot. It looks and reads way better. Kudos, bro.
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 10:20pm On Apr 13, 2020
pabon:
Wow! Your writing has improved a lot. It looks and reads way better. Kudos, bro.
nt mine
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by BentleyJnr: 10:50am On Apr 14, 2020
Oh boy...!!, you don blow na, this your tory sweet gan oo,
Truly speakin', you're really extravagant at this,
real soft work, good topnotch
Tominix, you're the MAN.....
But promise me you' gonna update frequently, uhn?
Anyways, keep it up, man
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by lahrra(f): 12:11pm On Apr 14, 2020
So nice and captivating. Pls Op more updates.
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 3:31am On Apr 15, 2020
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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 3:47am On Apr 15, 2020
BRIDE COMPETITION
EPISODE 04
"What evidence do you have against me! What evidence do you have that I was the one who pour a bag of pepper inside your stupid groundnut soup?" Becky queried.
They were both standing in front of aunt Linda.
"It was you! It was you who did it! I tested the food. I couldn't have poured so much pepper inside it. I'm not a killer like you!" Cindy shouted.
" Girls,do you want to get disqualified?" Aunt Linda asked.
"No! No Aunt Linda! It was actually a mistake. It must have been a mistake." Cindy pleaded.
" En en. Mistakes can happen just like mine...."
" Yours wasn't a mistake,you killer cook!" Cindy shouted again, cutting Becky shut
" Stop it Cindy! Any more words from you,I'm going to get you disqualified!" Aunt Linda chidded.
"I'm sorry but..."
" Shh." Aunt Linda shut her up before standing up. " You guys have shown your cooking skills.
Tommorow,it will be Natasha and Maria's turn to cook." With that,Aunt Linda left the living room.
Cindy immediately turned to face Becky with tears in her eyes. "I'm gonna so much deal with you. I will make sure you don't win this.
keep doing everything you can but you will never win! I promise you." She rushed out of the living room, heartbroken.
Becky laughed out loud and hissed loudly before walking out.
*****
"How are the girls doing? Anyone you can recommend yet?" Gerald asked, sitting on Arnold's bed.
Arnold shook his head. " Wait,I will tell you." He answered, sitting on a chair beside the window.
He laughed first. "Look,girls can be so dramatic. I'm sorry to tell you this but I've slept with one or them.
Wait. Before you condemn me,let me tell you what happened. She's a desperate babe.
You should have seen the way she walked nakedly into this room.
God. This one will jump into any man's bed! She's...."
" I Know who you were talking about. Becky." Gerald interrupted.
"Oh,you've noticed her too. As for her, she's out of the question." Arnold said.
Gerald breathed in. " What's the next line of action?" He asked.
"Well, you should be asking aunt Linda. She was everything under control. You don't need to worry. Just stay at your duty post,man." Arnold laughed.
" Jerk." Gerald stood up from bed and left the room.
Immediately he opened the door,he see Cindy sneaking up the stairs.
He stared down at her. Cindy was a little but startled to see him. What a gate man doing inside the house at this time of the night? She asked herself.
She came up to the landing and cleared her throat. "What are you doing here so late in the night?"
"I should be asking you the same question. What were you doing here so late in the night?" Gerald threw back.
"How dare you! How dare you talk back at me like that,you common gate man? Oh my goodness,I can't believe this!" Cindy ranted.
" You had better not raise your voice too high else you will have to explain what you were doing here in front of this room at this time of the night." Gerald said to her before walking away.
He stared back at her as he descended the stairs, shaking his head.
"I don't blame you. Fool." Cindy hissed. She rearranged herself and knocked at the door.
"Who's there?" Arnold asked from inside. He was changing his clothes for the night.
"It's me Cindy. I'm here for the night..just to make you happy." Cindy said to Arnold's hearing. Just then,his phone rang on top of the bed. He picked it up.
"Gerald."
"Yes,it's me. Send that girl back to her room immediately. I saw her coming inside your room. Send her back right now." Gerald said and cut the call.
Arnold dropped his phone back on the bed and opened the door. He stood on the way.
"Let me in. I'm here to kill your boredom." Cindy said seductively.
" Boredom? I never mentioned being bored to you, did I?" Arnold asked.
Cindy wondered why he was blocking the way. "At least let me in first. It's cold here." Cindy said trying to push past her but Arnold would not give her a chance.
"I'm sorry you can't come in. This is not part of the competition at least,not now. It might happen later but not now. You will have to go back to your room before I will disqualify you.
Cindy was surprised. "Are you kidding me right now? Then why did you allowed Becky in the othee night? Why? Yes. I saw you guys...in a very hot sex." Cindy said.
Arnold felt like slapping her. " Are you okay? How dare you!" He fired at her.
Cindy quickly recoiled. " I'm ... sorry..."
" Then get lost. I'm not a sex contractor. I'm a man looking for true love. Not sex machine." With that,he closed the door at her face.
Cindy was both mad and ashamed. Quietly,she walked back downstairs.
Immediately she came inside, Becky's laughter almost made her heart jump into her stomach.
She flickered the lights on and was surprised to see Becky fully awake on her bed.
"Guess he did not even open the door for you?" Becky mocked, staring up and down at her.
" What ..are you talking abour?" Cindy fumed, walking quickly to get bed
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 3:52am On Apr 15, 2020
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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Bobosneh: 8:00am On Apr 15, 2020
damn this is so interesting and funny. more update please.
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 9:47am On Apr 16, 2020
Updates loading you don't want to miss it

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by lahrra(f): 11:48am On Apr 16, 2020
Good day Op....
Patiently waiting for the update
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 4:42pm On Apr 16, 2020
lahrra:
Good day Op....
Patiently waiting for the update
Give me two hrs Ann2012, bobosneh , bentlyjnr , queenitee , kimberlywest , soulho19 ,. . .

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 11:44pm On Apr 16, 2020
" Arnold of course. I knew when you opened the door and slipped out. You are such a cheap bitch, aren't you?" Becky asked.
Cindy was beginning to boil with a running over anger. She sat up in bed with a warning look.."For the last time,witch! Don't you dare talk to me!!" Cindy shouted at her.
Becky laughed again. "You must be so ashamed of yourself.
How on earth did you think Arnold was going to open the door for you and let you come in after what I've made him feel?
Use your head,bad cook." Becky mocked and laughed again before laying back down.
"We shall see!" Cindy raved and lay down, boiling with hatred and anger.
Very early the next morning, Natasha woke up and started cleaning the whole house. She cleaned the living rooms and almost all the spare bedrooms. She changed the hallway curtains and dusted the blinds.
Gerald came out of the gate house to use the back garden loo when he saw Natasha, cleaning the main entrance landing with a mopping stick.
He stood, watching her. Since the girls arrived,none of them had tried cleaning anywhere or anything.
Unknown to them,it was part if the competition but a secret. Only the wife material would be able to find it out and now, he's looking at Natasha who's working with a lot of zeal.
Natasha turned around as she carried her bucket so she would dispose the water when she saw Gerald. She looked at him and walked towards him.
"Good morning. You are up early." Natasha said kindly.
Gerald looked at her and nodded. " Yes. I can see you were up early too. Well done with your work. You are doing a nice work." Gerald acknowledged.
Natasha smiled. " Oh come on,I'm.a woman. It's only natural I do it. Well, today's our own turn for cooking. I hope to do well although I don't really care if I win or not." Natasha said.
" Why? You sound like someone losing hope. Don't you believe in yourself?" Gerald asked.
Natasha looked up at him and dropped the bucket. "Of course I do. I just don't want to get hurt again by engaging in another man...not after what Dave did to me. I'm just here... hoping I will find love again but I don't think it's working. I don't see myself falling in love with Arnold. Other girls are trying to get his attention but not me. I don't just know what to do. I might end up losing." Natasha said and breathed in.
Gerald found himself looking at her and smiling slightly. "Hmm. Interesting."
"What's interesting?, Hey,why are you smiling? Naughty boy. Don't think I can't hit you again." Natasha said, picked up her bucket and walked away.
Gerald stared at her as she left and laughed at the way she waved her hair and walk sharply.
"Oh, before I forget. I want you to be the first person to test my food after I'm done. You must judge wisely!" With that, Natasha went back inside, leaving Gerald thinking about her.
About eight that same morning, Natasha and Maria took their bath got dressed and went to the kitchen.
Aunt Linda welcomed them with a smile. "So,it's your turn today and I wish you girls luck." She said and left after giving them all the ingredients they want for the cooking.
"Yes oh. We don come. Abeg,Nathy...I no want disturbance. Face your work. You dey here me so?" Maria threw at Natasha who was busy rinsing her pot.
Natasha looked up from whet she was doing and smiled. " I should be telling you that. Talkative."
Maria laughed. She sliced some onions down and smashed some pepper, getting ready for the ugwu leaf on fire.
She was going to make rice and ugwu stew,one or the best food she was good at preparing.
Natasha was going to make jollof rice and spicy stew as a plus.
She put in all her best.
In less than Thirty minutes,the whole house was smelling so great.
"Chai,my dear Arnold go enjoy this one tire." Maria boasted as she served the food inside a clean large plate.
She was chosen as the first to serve. Maria was surprised to see Arnold already waiting at the dinning with a watery mouth.
"An an,na so the hunger take hold you!" Maria laughed.
Arnold laughed back. Anytime he saw Maria,his spirit was always lifted. She had this cleaver humor about get that marvelled him a great deal although she's local.
"I hope you made something great?" Arnold said, licking his lips already.
He had this strong feeling that the food would taste like heaven and that was what happened.
One test of Maria's food, Arnold couldn't stop till he emptied the plate. He even licked his hands dry.
"Jesus Christ!" How did you get to cook so well!" Arnold exclaimed.
Maria blushed. " Na wettin I learn very well na. Shey you like am?"
" Like am?? Infact I love am!!"Arnold said and laughed. Just then, Natasha arrived with her own food.
She placed it on the dinning but got the disappointment of her life.
"Take it away for now please. I just had a wonderful meal. My belly is full. I will eat it later!" Arnold said happily bit knowing he was really hurting Natasha.
Does it mean all her hard work was in vein? "But....you have to eat something out of it..."
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 11:50pm On Apr 16, 2020
She placed it on the dinning but got the disappointment of her life.
"Take it away for now please. I just had a wonderful meal. My belly is full. I will eat it later!" Arnold said happily bit knowing he was really hurting Natasha.
Does it mean all her hard work was in vein? "But....you have to eat something out of it..."
"Please take it away. I'm full." Arnold said more sternly.
Natasha could not believe it as she packed the dishes back into the tray and turned away.
Arnold was so happily charring with Maria over her food and praising her endlessly.
Natasha dud not know what to do with the food she served. She carried it outside and walked towards the gate house. She knocked twice and the door was opened as Gerald stared at her, surprised at the sad look in her eyes.
"I just finished cooking for him right now...but...he did not even test it. Please..can I come in..at least...eat out of it so I won't be completely disappointed. Please?" Natasha pleaded, staring at him with large watery eyes.
Gerald finally smiled and stepped aside, inviting her instead.

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EPISODE 05
Natasha smiled as she watched him eat. It was so obvious he was enjoying the food.
"Wow. This tastes good. You made this?" Gerald asked. He was so impressed with her.
"Yeah. I took my time in preparing that, you know." Natasha said smiling.
She watched Gerald closely. Something about him gave her a strange feeling. He looked more than a gate man.
His accent was so rich and great.
She decided to ask him a question. "Why did you choose to become a gate man? Like... I mean... You could have gotten a better job. " Natasha said.
Gerald stopped eating to study her. He smiled. "So, dose that make me a lesser guy?
As in.... Does it stop me from getting a woman of my choice and making it in life? "
Natasha laughed. " Of course not. You are handsome. Everyone woman would fall for your looks. "
" Hmm? Like this woman here... In front of me? " Gerald asked.
Natasha blushed. " Yeah.. like this woman in front of you." Natasha said and laughed. She stood up and quickly left the room.
Gerald could not believe his ears. He laughed and shrugged. Hope he isn't falling for her right now?
In the evening that same day, the sat in the living room, watching movies and chatting.
They were all dressed and looking beautiful, waiting for Arnold.
Minutes later, Arnold and aunt Linda came into the living room.
"Hi." The girls greeted
"Hmm. You girls are looking elegant. Hope you are all having a great time? " Aunt Linda said.
The girls giggled to themselves, showing off.
"And before I forget, I will like to recommend that person who created time on cleaning the whole place.
Everywhere is looking so brand new. Bravo. " Aunt Linda said.
Natasha smiled and everyone turned to look at her.
" Shey na you? You for call me make I help you na " Maria said, smiling too.
Cindy and Becky turned away, hissing silently.
Arnold stood up from his seat look all over at the girls. "You all are looking extremely pretty and I've come up with something too.
Yes. It's the next line of action now for you girls. So, aunt Linda will tell you right now " Arnold said, smiling at them.
The girls looked at aunt Linda who smiled and cleared her throat. "Although, the winner for the food competition hasn't been announced yet but we are going to do everything together.
Today is about natural look. Yes. We want to see the natural you. All of you. We want to see what you've got behind these heavy makeups." Aunt Linda said.
" Gbaons!! Ghen ghen ghen ghen!! Halloween night don come!" Maria said, whistling.
There was total silence. Everyone was dead silent that Aunt Linda thought she had says something bad.
"Wake up girls. Chill. Relax. Don't you trust your natural looks? I want to see your natural hair... Your natural Lips... Yeah.. natural everything.
Look at Maria. She's wearing her natural look..that's what I want you to do."Arnold said, smiling and touching them one after the other.
Becky looked away,her eyes filled with confusion. The last time she checked,make up had already been part of her life!
"So, we will be back in an hour to check you girls out. We are waiting. "Aunt Linda said and left with Arnold.
Maria bursted into laughter. "See them! Make uping! Una still sit down? Abeg make una go offload!" Maria laughed. As for her, make up wasn't her thing. She preferred her natural look.
Sighing deeply, the girls left the living room for their bedrooms.
Natasha was the first to come out looking natural. Her natural hair black and long and she looked just the same.
"Babe you gallant! See as you still fine. Make we see them Mrs makeup maid we see how them go be..... Jesus!!!! "Maria shouted, flying out of her chair.
" What! What is it!" Natasha panicked, and turned around to see what made Maria shout.
She did not need to ask again when her eyes landed on Becky.
"Ewoo!! Ewo!! I don die! Omo see Halloween!! Omo come see Halloween ohhh !!"

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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Bobosneh: 8:43am On Apr 17, 2020
omo aswear I dey enjoy this Tory die. nice one op
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Dacaller: 8:53am On Apr 17, 2020
;Dnice story....nextl
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Ann2012(f): 9:58am On Apr 17, 2020
Tominix:
Give me two hrs Ann2012, bobosneh , bentlyjnr , queenitee , kimberlywest , soulho19 ,. . .

Thanks for the mention
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 1:09pm On Apr 17, 2020
would have updated buh, mb finished in this brokevid_19 period, will try to sort tinz out sha____.
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by BentleyJnr: 6:00pm On Apr 17, 2020
Tominix:
would have updated buh, mb finished in this brokevid_19 period, will try to sort tinz out sha____.

Guy' please find mb na, or make I send mb for u? Tell me the network, Airtel or 9mobile?
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Glodeluxe(f): 5:51am On Apr 18, 2020
i have watched the movie its an interesting one
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 8:34am On Apr 18, 2020
Glodeluxe:
i have watched the movie its an interesting one
Wow i didn't knw it is a movie, I will check it out
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 2:01pm On Apr 18, 2020
BentleyJnr:


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Waoh tnx 08181127430 9mobile !!!
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 1:51pm On Apr 22, 2020
Updates coming today
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by MisterChairman(m): 8:03am On Apr 23, 2020
Hmmm .. Am anticipating !
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 5:06pm On Apr 24, 2020
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Hmmm .. Am anticipating !
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Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 5:21pm On Apr 24, 2020
Ewoo!! Ewo!! I don die! Omo see Halloween!! Omo come see Halloween ohhh !!" Maria laughed so hard that tears started to fall off her eye.
"Stop it, Maria! She's not looking that bad". Natasha said, trying to control her own outburst.
Becky hissed and sat down. Maria continued laughing.
Valerie and Cindy came out too, looking good in their natural self.
" Na wa oh, make up dey hide confussion oh." Maria said and everyone bursted out, laughing hard.
"I don't blame you, village witch!" Becky yelled at Maria who only made more fun of her.
"You no see as you be. So na make up dey cover your secret all this days, ba? Ah, your own don finish oh. Ugly muchocho.
"What! How dare you! How dare you call me that!!" Becky shouted and rushed at Maria. Maria flew out of her chair and ran, all the while laughing.
"Ah, onye Ara! She wan take her own kobalize me.
He no go work for you! " Maria shouted over her shoulder.
She was about opening the door so she would run out when it suddenly opened revealing startled looking Arnold and aunt Linda.
"Oh!!" Maria laughed, pretending to be stretching her body. Becky halted to a stop, smiling and stretching her body too.
"And what's going on here!" Aunt Linda demanded.
"Oh! Exercise oh! Na exercise!" Maria laughed, sounding like an idiot.
Aunt Linda and Arnold stared at each other and back at Maria.
"Exercise? Inside the living room??" They both chorused.
" Ahh! Yes sir! Na change of environment!" Maria exclaimed.
Arnold stared at Becky, wondering if she was actually the one or not. "This is terrible."
Behind them, the rest of the girls fell off laughing hard.BRIDE COMPETITION
EPISODE 06
"For the winner of natural look, let's applaud Valerie! " Aunt Linda announced.
Valerie blushed as she fanned herself with her hands even though the AC was on.
"Oh my God! Thanks so much!" Valerie said, hugging the lady.
Maria's clap was the loudest and out of the corner of his eyes, Arnold was watching her keenly.
They were all sitting in the living room. Once the natural look was over, Becky ran straight into her room and spent hours, repairing her make up.
"Oh Maria. I will so much deal with you. I deal with you to the extent that you will quit this competition!" Becky ranted to herself in the mirror.
She heard laughter behind her.
She turned and saw Cindy standing in the door way. "I'm going to give you an advice my dear. Quit before they quit you. Like...you are getting everything wrong. You don't look good without makeup. You don't even Know how to cook. Just quit it!" Cindy said sweetly.
Becky shot up,her face a mask of anger and irritation. "And how dare you speak to me in such manners! Do you girls even Know who I am!!" Becky screamed
" Yuck! I don't care. Like...read my lips. I. Don't. Care.!" Cindy said,hissed and walked to her bed.
Becky watched her as she walked, thinking about what to do to her. Smiling suddenly,she sat back down, happy at her scheme.
The next morning, Valerie made her own food and also passed but when the winner was announced,it was Maria who won. She felt on top of the world!
Natasha was happy for her. There was a chance she would be the winner even though so local, Arnold had started paying her some unnecessary attention.
Gerald was dumbfounded when she saw Becky walking toward him with a bunch of clothes. "And...what are those?" He stammered. Hope it isn't what he's thinking!!
"Such a question. No. They are money. You see me bringing dirty clothes to you and you are asking me what they are." Becky taunted, dropping the clothes at his feet.
" So ..what should I do with them?" Gerald asked stupidly.
" Use it and build a very big house!"Becky shouted at him,hissed and walked back majestically into the main building.
"Oh God! Oh God!, This is not happening...no...it's not happening..thishas to stop.. right now!" Gerald was still fuming when he saw Cindy walking towards him with a larger bulk.
Chai! I'm finished!
"Hello! I will be so nice with you. So I brought this little clothes for you to wash them.
Please don't scrub hard so the fabric won't get loose. Hurry up please. The sun is very high. Hmm." Cindy said, winked at him and left too.
" God..just take my life!" Gerald felt like crying. He thought he was going to faint when he saw Valerie coming with her own.
"Don't give me that look. Mine isn't so large.
Just help me wash them. I will do the spreading.
My hands hurt else I would have washed them myself. Thanks in advance." Valerie said and left.
Dropping to the chair beside his door, Gerald felt like collapsing.
Looking up,he saw Maria coming with her own clothes. Now he thought he would really die!
But Maria stood instead, watching him and looking at the bunch of clothes on the floor. "Bros,na who drop all these one here?" She queried.
Gerald stood up, stopping to reason her question. "The girls.... aren't you here to give me your own too? Just drop them there!"
Maria laughed. " Shoo? Make I drop my cloth? I dey craze?
Re: Bride Competition (Romance thriller) by Tominix(m): 5:26pm On Apr 24, 2020
" Shoo? Make I drop my cloth? I dey craze?
Why I go allow man wash my clothes for me? Infact all those people wey drop cloth for you here dey mad.
Them they craze. Their village people don dey pound fufu for their head. Their ancestors don dey collect rituals from their brain.
Aunty Linda talk say make we carry clothe come give you. Me I no no why she talk like that oh.
But as for me,I go wash my clothes by myself. Thank you. Inanu??" Maria said and went back with her clothes.
Behind her, Gerald smiled, applauding her silently.
He quickly sat back down when he saw Natasha approaching with her own clothes. "Are you here to drop yours too? Just drop it there."
"And why should I? God,this girls aren't serious.
Why should they really drop these clothes with you just because aunt Linda said to do so?
They've got no shame at all and you...don't you dare wash these things! I'm getting it back to them right now.
They should wash their clothes by themselves!" Natasha was really furious and it amazed Gerald.
Gerald smiled looking at her. "Are you angry because they asked me to wash their clothes?"
" Yes I am! They shouldn't have! I'm getting it back to them right now!!" Natasha yelled.
" Yes oh!! Now now now! This girls no get sense!" Maria said, rushing towards them again.
Bending down,she packed a armful of the clothes while Natasha packed the rest and together they marched back inside the house.
"Oya!! Where Dem dey!, Shameless she goats!, Una pack clothes go give man!, A gate man for that matter! Chai,una brain don knock!" Maria yelled at the girls and flung the clothes on them.
They were all in the living room, waiting for their clothes to get washed.
"Yuck! That stinks! How dare you!"Becky shouted, pushing away the clothes.
"You girls aren't getting this. How could you give your clothes to that guy!" Natasha said, bewildered.
" Oh really? Why are you do concerned about him? Maybe you are beginning to fall for him!" Cindy shouted
" You dey craze. If she fall for an,shey na your papa she fall for? Abeg make una carry una self go wash una clothes joor. Shameless people."
Maria said and quickly exited the building before they would gang up and beat her.
*********
Gerald watched them as they left and laughed.
Only if they knew what happened right now was just a test. No wife material would give her clothes and under wears to a gate man!
Only if all the girls knew aunt Linda had put them to a test right now and two of the girls passed.
Just right now,he could see the winners. It would have been better if only one showed the best character but two out of the girls are just too much a wife material.
Which one out of the two would get the star price.... Natasha or local Maria??BRIDE COMPETITION
EPISODE 07
"Who dey inside that place na? You dey born pikin?" Maria asked, banging her fist on the door for the umpteenth time.
"Oh God! Maria leave me alone let me take my bath now? Abi what's all this?" Natasha said, exhausted.
She never knew it was suicide mission sharing a room with Maria.
"Na only you wan bave? Abeg hurry make I take my own bath too..."she was still talking when the scream outside was heard.
" En! Wettin dey happen outside!" Maria shouted, jumping out of the room.
A little while later, Natasha dressed up hastily and rushed out too.
Outside the veranda, Cindy was almost half naked!
She was screaming and scratching her body. Aunt Linda rushed along too,with oil in her hand.
Without wasting anytime,she sprinkled olit in Cindy making her short the more.
All the other girls had gathered, wondering what was wrong with her.
"What happened to you! What's the meaning of all these!" Aunt Linda's voice rose.
Cindy was still scratching her body and Shouting. "I don't know where they came from!
They just jumped out of my clothes after biting me all over my body!" Cindy cried.
" Chai. I don suffer abi na which kind people Dem carry come meet person,bikonu??
So, ordinary because of ochicha you dey cry dey disturb the whole house like this?"Maria shouted.
" Don't mind her." Becky laughed.
"Witch! I Know it's you. I Know it was you that put those horrible creatures inside my clothe!" Cindy shouted pointing at Becky who quickly raised her hands in the air. She immediately denied it.
"What evidence do you have! What? Did you see me putting it!" Becky defended.
" And what's going on here!" Arnold asked, coming out.
" This girls are something else and it's high time we begin to disqualify some of them." Aunt Linda said.
" We are sorry about the whole thing. It won't happen again." Natasha pleaded.
Aunt Linda looked at her and walked away. Arnold followed her.
*******
"Aunt Linda,you don't need yo get crossed with the girls.
To me,they are all fun to be with but I just hope this competition will come to an end as soon as possible.
Let me call Gerald so we can know whet to do next." Arnold said and picked up his phone.

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