maidaboi:
let's place a bet I know the person that killed Abigail

purity23:
Who

maidaboi:
let's place a bet I know the person that killed Abigail

Gbest90:
Please is it possible for prisoners who accept christ at death point(like mark in the story) to make heaven?

Silver1996:
THE BACHELORS
STORY FINALE..(PART A)
EPISODE TITLE- Like hell itself....




WHO KILLED ABIGAIL...?




Find out in PART B of the story finale......dropping soon

Gbest90:
Please is it possible for prisoners who accept christ at death point(like mark in the story) to make heaven?

Gbest90:
Mark and Lucas just kpai for nothing! Well am waiting patiently to know who killed Abigail. Wetin I go do that person eh.

Lakesc:
Yes it is, just like one of the criminals that where crucified with Christ made heaven, just by acknowledging Jesus and believing...

Gbest90:
Please is it possible for prisoners who accept christ at death point(like mark in the story) to make heaven?

Liposure:
but that's not fair

Liposure:
but that's not fair

do4luv14:

Why you will not know it,

isnt Silver ya Guy

Viiictor10:
I must confess silver ,you are one of the beat writers I know. I've been reading your story for the past 7hours and i with bored at all,I enjoyed your story i will make sure i read all your stories.....���




About the killer, what about the person those police where looking for at the night of her death,the neighbors said they saw the person enter their house,an sure he was the that killed her

purity23:
I don't have airtime to call him

Silver1996:
THE BACHELORS
EPISODE 8
EPISODE TITLE- One of them is lying








2 DAYS LATER





As Brian threw down clothes from the wardrobe, Jeffery glance over at Brian's face, still smoldering underneath his stony expression. His rages seem pointless to him, although he never said so...

"Do you think he did the right thing..?"Jeffery asked

"Right thing..."Brian fling back..."Of course he didn't do the right thing, he gave himself up, who does that..?"

Jeffery shrug..."We should be happy he didn't mention our names.."

"He's our friend Jeff.., even if his confession didn't implicate us, I'm still not comfortable with the fact that he's going to jail.."

"We don't know that yet..."Jeffery said.."He might be grant clemency since he already confess himself..."

"Seriously Where's your head at.., haven't you be reading the news, Abigail's father turned out to be a rich man who has connections and he has said he'll make sure his daughter's murderer rot behind bars forever..., forever Jeft..."

"But if he's that rich, why did Abigail whòre herself out the way dhe did.."

"Turns out they have no good father daughter relationship, so she ran from home..., now her father is back to play the dutiful father...."

"Let's just hear what the judge has to say when he's been taken to court.."

Brian hissed..."Why do you keep talking like a small boy, didn't you hear what I just said, her father has connections.., the only way Mark can be safe is to be out of there because if he goes to court, there's no saving him.."

"You don't know that..."

Brian shook his head and refocus his gaze on the wardrobe.., he pick up his khaki jacket, then he check the side pockets, trepidation froze him to the spot when he found the TT..., the supposed drug Mark said he had taken..., he turn to face Jeffery, shock still lingering inside him.., his head bump with conflicting questions ...

"What is it...?"

"The TT..."Brian mutter....."Is still here..."

"Wait what are you saying...?"Jeffery asked immediately

Confused, Brian deep his hands on the khaki jacket again to find his sleeping pills, when he didn't find them, he turn back to face Mark...."It wasn't TT Mark took..., he took my sleeping pills.."

"Wait slow down..."Jeffery cut in.."Are you saying Mark didn't take the TT but he took your sleeping pills.."

"Exactly.., he took my sleeping pills, that's why he can't remenber having sex with her because he didn't have sex with her..."

"So if he slept off and didn't have sex with her, how is she dead..?"

"I guess we'll know the answer to your question if only we can find out what happened during the time he was sleeping...."

"Are you insinuating someone else came to the house.....?"

"That's the only explanation.., if Mark had slept off.., it only means he didn't kill Abigail.., someone else did.."


"What do you suggest we do.., do we check his room if we'll find a clue as to who was here that day.."

"Yes we should.."Brian said dropping the khaki jacket and following Jeffery to Mark's room.....

When they entered the room, it was just as it was the day Abigail died.., only now there were clothes littered on the bed and ground but everything else was the same...., Jeffery look around and he quickly remenber where Abigail's body was laying on ..., he stepped away from the spot and turn his gaze towards another direction.., he saw something, something underneath Mark's ranger..., he lowered his self down and pick it up....

"Brian.."He call out gently turning to face him with the knife he saw..

"A knife.."Brian resounds walking close to him...

"Remenber I told you yesterday one of the kitchen knives was missing.."Jeffery said...."Well here it is...."

"What was he doing with a knife..?"Brian asked.."Do you think he was trying to commit suicide...?"

"No I don't think so..."Jeffery said..."If he was, why throw it under the ranger..."

"Do you think she tried to kill herself..?"

"What if she stabbed herself..?"Jeffery ask

"No..., there was no blood in her body, I don't think she stabbed herself..."

Jeffery exhale.., now that they know Mark is innocent, the case has gone more complicated

"Let's just keep searching.., we might find something..."Brian said

Jeffery nodded and start looking around again..., he bowed down again to see if he'll see any other thing and that was when he saw a bead, a bead he recognised very well thrown under the bed..., without time wasting, he pick it up and show it to Brian..

"Do you recognise this...?"Jeffery ask Brian..

Brian took the bead from him trying to remenber where he has come across it......

"It belongs to Rebecca..."Jeffery chime into his thought.."Mark's girlfriend..."

"What...?..., then what is it doing here..."

"I don't know.."Jeffery said.."Maybe she left it here the last time she was here..."

"Could the last time be the same day Abigail was here..."

"No, I'm talking about the last time before this whole Abigail thing.."

"I need to see Mark.."Brian said putting the hand bead in his pocket..

"What for..?"

"If it's true she left the bead in the house the last time she was here with Mark.., Mark will know.."

"The bead was under the bed, how could Mark possibly know...?"

"I don't know, whatever the outcome, I've to try..just keep searching"

"Okay..."Jeffery mutter with nibbed lips and watch as Brian disappear with the hand bead...








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"You have ten minutes..."The policeman said to Brian before he allowed him into the room Mark was held....

Brian nodded slightly irritated with the way the policeman spoke to him, on a normal day he would have responded in the policeman tone...., without a second glance at him, he walked into the room, what followed was the slamming of the door by the policeman...

The bad smell of the room found way to Brian's nose before he saw Mark sited, his hands handcuffed to the round hook on the table....

"Oh God..."He mutter, his voice rumbling low and sadden...

"I didn't think they were going to let me see you or Jeffery again.."Mark said, his thin injured lip quivering with the words...

"What happened to you..?"Brian ask when he saw the bruise on Mark's face..

"It's nothing.."

"What do you mean nothing, you've been here for just two days and you already have a bruise ..."

"I got into a fight with my cell mate, it's a long story.., tell me, how are you...?"

Brian sigh.."We want you back Mark.., we'll never be fine until you're back home with us.."

"They're taking me to court tomorrow...."

Brian's eyes enlarged with shock.."What.., so soon.."

"Yes.., they want the case to be done with, so they taking me to court for the judge to decide my fate..."

"You cannot go to jail.."

"I killed her man.."

"No you didn't.."Brian said..."You didn't take the TT.., you took my sleeping pills, that's the reason you couldn't remember having sex with her because you didn't..., do you know what else that means..., it means you didn't kill that girl.."

"Well if I didn't, who did..?"

"That's what we trying to find out.., we needed to know what happened during the time you were sleeping.., so Jeffery and I went into room to search for clues.., we found a knife.., what were you doing with a knife.."

"I didn't have a knife.."Mark said..

"It was in your room.."

"Well I don't know how it got there.."

"We found something else.."Brian said bringing out the bead from his side pocket...."We found this.."He added dropping it on the table....

"This belongs to Rebecca.., I got it for her as a sign of my love to her..."

Brian tilt his head towards him..."The last time you saw her.., that day she said those horrible words to you.., was she wearing the bead....?"
"Yes.."Mark said..."She never take it off...., she said it blends with her skin.."

"Well she took it off..., it means she was at the house that day..."

"Are you insinuating she killed Abigail...?"

"I'm not insinuating anything, but this bead has just proven she was there that day..., if there's an inky probability she knows something, I need to find out..."

Mark sat still wondering if Rebecca was capable of murder..."What do you intend doing....?"

Brian quickly stood up when the policeman knocked on the door signalling him his time with Mark is over..."What time is the court hearing..?"

"9AM tomorrow..."

"If you go to that court Mark, you're never coming back...."Brian said before he glance at his time.."I have just 18hours to prove your innocence..."

"Is it worth it..?"

"Yes it's worth it.."Brian snapped..."I brought this on you, if I had said NO when you asked me to give you a girl, none of this would have happen..., that's why I can't let you go to jail.., I'm going to prove your innocence.., I'll bring the real killer..., I promise you this Mark..., just hang in there "

"Thank you..."Mark manage to say before Brian dashed out of the room....








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18HOURS COUNTDOWN






After asking a few persons the location of Rebecca's house, he finally got it.., he followed the description until he came to face the compound, just like people have described, her flat was the first flat on the right.., he wasted no time before he knocked heavily on the door..

When no answer came, he knocked again until he heard the door key creak before the door sprung open.....

"You..."Rebecca blare out, she look around when she saw noone than some people staring at their direction, she heaved a low hiss and revert her gaze to Brian.."What do you want..?"

Brian certainly had no time to waste, he was bend on saving Mark and he have just 18hours to do that...., he gritted before he took out the hand bead from his pocket and showed it to her..."Yours isn't it...?"

She look at the bead before she poured the word out.."No.."

Brian nibbed, then he look around before he faced her again.."I'm not flirting with you.., this belongs to you.."

"It doesn't belongs to me.."She said back immediately..."And if you have nothing meaningful to say but show me some stupid hand bead, then I think you should leave.."

"You must be mistaken me for Mark.."Brian sneer looking daggers at her..

She huff.."Get out of my house..."

Infuriated, Brian look around again, when he saw no one looking his way, he turn to face her and like an enraged panther, he grabbed her neck and drag her into her house...

She try to breathe as she struggle against his firm grip..

"Listen to me bitch...."Brian snarled tightening his grip on her throat..."I know this is yours and I know you were at our house on monday.., did you kill that girl..?"

She slap his arm but nothing seem to be working.., short of breathe she opened her mouth to talk and that was when Brian let go of her..

She cough as she try to catch her breathe again..

"Did you kill Abigail..?"Brian yelled..

"No.."She yelled back raising her gaze to him.."You're right, I was there in the house that day, but I only went there to apologise to Mark for the things I said to him.., I got there and saw him naķed and he was sleeping..., and then I saw the female clothes.., I thought he hooked up with another girl and I was about leaving when that girl walked into the room also naķed....."

"So what happened...?"Brian asked anxiously, his eyes digging into her..., like a sharp knife to her rips..

"What do you think happened.., I left and didn't look back till I was out of the house.."

"You're lying..."Brian said

"I'm not lying, that's was what happened.., if you don't believe me you can ask your friend, the Jehovah witness...."

"Lucas...."Brian said

"Yes Lucas.., I met him on my way out.., i caught him looking at me for a while before he went into your house..., you can call him and ask him if you don't believe me..."

Surprise at the turnout, he took out his phone and dial Lucas number right there in her front.., he waited impatiently but there was no answer.., he curl his lip and dial the number again, luckily for him, Lucas answered....

"Lucas.."Brian said but there was silence at the other end, so he called out again raising his voice.. "Lucas.."

"Yea, I'm here.."Lucas coarse voice sounded...

"I'm having a bit of a situation here..."Brian said..."You remenber Rebecca don't you..?"

"Yes..."Lucas replied from the other end..

"She said you saw her coming out from our house the same day Abigail died.., is this true..?"

There was silence from Lucas end before Brian hollered....
"Lucas.."

"Yes it is.. "Lucas said..

"And when you heard the news of Mark been detained for his confession to have killed Abigail, you didn't tell us you were there at the house that day.., why..?"

"I...,I.. "Lucas stutter from his end..."I wanted to tell you.."

"Tell me what.."Brian ask.."Did you kill Abigail..?"

"No I didn't.."Lucas said..

"Then what happened...?"

"I went into the house..."Lucas said, his voice trailing low on the phone.."I called out your name, called out Mark's and Jeffery, when no one answered me, I thought you guys just chose to ignore me, so I sat down waiting for one of you to come out...."

"And then what happened..?"Brian queried when Lucas paused..

"I heard footsteps.. "Lucas said...."When I raise my head to see who was coming, i saw her, she..she she.., she was naķed, I didn't know who she was so I said nothing to her.., then she came on me and began rubbing her hands on me, you know how I hate those things so I pushed her away..., she tried to come on me again and that was when I ran out from the house.., I wasn't the one who killed her Brian...., you need to believe me..."

Brian flare his nose, then he took the phone from his ears to look at the incoming call, when he realise it is Jeffery calling, he ended the call with Lucas and answered Jeffery's call...

"You won't believe what I just find out.."Brian said immediately..."Lucas was at the house on that day.."

"Lucas.."Jeffery reiterated from the other end..."What did he say.., is he the one...

"No.., he said she tried to seduce him and he ran out of the house.."

"You won't like what I find that.."Jeffery said

"What is it..?"Brian ask anxiously

"You remember that mug Jennifer bought for you..?"

"Yeah.."Brian said turning to face Rebecca..

"Well it's missing..."Jeffery said...."And then the shirt you got For Jennifer on valentine's day is here in our house, I found it at the back of the chair..."

"Wait hold on.."Brian said..."Are you saying the mug she got me is missing and the shirt I got her is in our house..."

"Yes.., and she could only have brought in these things the same day Abigail died while Mark was asleep...., what if she's the one who killed Abigail..."

"But why would she kill her..?"Brian ask thinking on the possibility

"Man, she's angry with you, maybe when she saw her, she thought she was one of your whòres..., what if she got into a fight with her and she killed her in the process..."








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It was almost an hour later when Brian got to Jennifer's apartment, somewhere he has sworn never to go again..., he stood to check his time, he exhale realising he has exhausted two hours from from the eighteen hours, now he was left with sixteen hours to prove Mark's innocence..

Determination pushed him forward, he trot towards the house, look around to see if she was outside ,when he didn't see her, he rumbled a heavy knock on the protector...., he got no reply, it infuriated him, what she did to him came knocking on his head again, the bitch made him lose his job and that's something he'll never forgive her for and now she's trying to ruin his friend life..

His insides seething with a fiery anger, he knocked again and continue knocking until she came out...

"How dare you come in here..?"She queried, her voice carrying a thread of anger that went beyond everything else..

"Where's my mug..?"He asked and waited for her reply..

"Do you have a mug..?"She retorted.."I gave that mug to you and I took it back..."

"So it's true you were at my house that day.., you must have heard the news, somebody died in the house that day and my friend is been accused of it...

"Are you talking about that crazy bitch..?"She cut in..

His lips curled with suppressed rage..."So you meant her.."

"Yes I did.., I went to your house that day to return the shirt you got for me since it kept reminding of you.., I knocked the door, no one answered, I turn down the knob and realise the door was open, so I went in, I threw the stupid shirt on the chair and walked into your kitchen to take the mug, then I went to your room to search for the perfume I bought for you last week, when I didn't find them, I turn to leave and that was how i ran into that lunatic.., she was naķed and holding a knife..."

"So you killed her..., because you thought she was one of my whòre...?"

"Are you kidding me..?"She fling back tossing a strap of her hair backward..."I may be angry at you but I'm not a murderer neither do I break people's heart..., that bitch scared the shit out of me with the knife.., I left before I could get injured by her okay.., I didn't even get the chance to ask if she was your whòre.."

"You're lying.."He said

"You're the one who lie.., you're the one who cheats and keep murderers as friends..., I loved you but how did you pay me back, you torn my heart into nothing buy shreds.."

"So you got jealous and killed her thinking she's one of my whòres...., for what, to make me suffer?"

"Believe whatever you want.., you think I care.."

"Admit it..., it was you.., you killed Abigail.."

"You're crazy.."She sneer and walked back into her house, what followed was the slamming of the door then she closed the window curtains...

Brain groaned, when his phone rang, he quickly answered the call

"Are you there now...?"Jeffery ask curiously from the other end..

"Yes.."Brian said.."I confronted her, she said she didn't kill Abigail.."

"Do you believe her..?"Jeffery asked

Brian grunted and move a few inch from Jennifer's house..."They're the only ones who came to the house that day.., the only ones who saw Abigail before she died..., now I don't know if I believe them or not, but I do know one of them is lying..."








WHO KILLED ABIGAIL...?





TBC

ramatintin:
i have been following this master piece nice work sire. My instincts tells me Jeffery killed Abigail let's see

Plolly:

Why would you quote everything nah. I even thought it was an update. That's a very bad character

ramatintin:
i have been following this master piece nice work sire. My instincts tells me Jeffery killed Abigail let's see

Liposure:
U R not serious

JerryOJerry6429:
Bia silver, why do you have to kill Lucas na, I thought Mark already pay the price.

As for who killed Abigail, I don't want to know anymore, I'm tired

enirock:
Nd u hv successfully deleted Mark nd Lucas nd we know Jennifer pushep Abigail but so did Lucas. There might b a possibility Lucas push brought abt the situation but Jennifers push aggravated it. See what guilt has done to Lucas? What ifs done 2 much 4 me. I just still think its Lucas. Thanks for keeping us guessing to the very end. We are grateful

KaideeGee:
Boss Silver, Please let Brian also die, since is like all the good people are dying.

Rashford22:
He let the anger engulf every part of him, he boiled with rage and quickly he kicked the door open.., what he saw jolted him backwards and he fell down, his back slamming the door.., his mouth dropped as he saw Lucas hanging from the rope tied to his ceiling fan...., there was no life in him....he was dead..

Silver you are the best writer I've ever came across. Unpredictability shows how special you are. But isn't the suspense too much ?? Lol Thanks man I appreciate this