Olawrites:


Dis one na commando sales

Modsfav:
I have edited my profile, but anytime I want to apply for a job, it will be telling me create a specialized profile. can some kindly shade more light in this aspect?

Venzal1:
By the way, you can use the PASO formula to make your profile overview on Upwork really SOLID.

AwesomeDuru:
Boss, thanks for the good job you're doing here.

I have a suggestion, it would be nice if start getting assignments.

Like 'Write an Email Copy for a client to help them promote their "sleep in 15 minutes" ebook to their subscribers'.

And submissions should be done on here. That way, you'd point out salient corrections where needed and have everyone learn in the process.

Practical ALWAYS drives home the point faster.

There are things some may feel 'Yep, I got it now!'

But alas, they haven't got anything.

This is just my simple suggestion.

By the way, I have scanned the way you write and I'm just realizing that breaking up one's sentences into short, concise bits really does a lot to the aesthetics and general readability of one's content.

If I didn't learn anything today, I have that to take home.

Thanks once again.

adsmaster:


Am really stunned!

I read through it and I was...

Guess that his style of writing; he uses lots of vocabularies.

For me "k.I.S.S" is my forte!

But, what can I say- we all have different writing style.

Regards

PS.. K.I.S.S means keep is stupidly simple.

PSS... Big thanks to victor aka venzal you are really doing a dame good job!

WordsWriter:


Create a specialised profile as a copywriter. It is rare to just have a stand-alone skill, most times skill-sets are related, so having a specialised profile gives you room to create a separate profile for a related skill.

example graphics design maybe the general profile, while logo-making the specialised profile. Email copywriting general, while social ad marketing specialised.

AwesomeDuru:
Boss, thanks for the good job you're doing here.

I have a suggestion, it would be nice if start getting assignments.

Like 'Write an Email Copy for a client to help them promote their "sleep in 15 minutes" ebook to their subscribers'.

And submissions should be done on here. That way, you'd point out salient corrections where needed and have everyone learn in the process.

Practical ALWAYS drives home the point faster.

There are things some may feel 'Yep, I got it now!'

But alas, they haven't got anything.

This is just my simple suggestion.

By the way, I have scanned the way you write and I'm just realizing that breaking up one's sentences into short, concise bits really does a lot to the aesthetics and general readability of one's content.

If I didn't learn anything today, I have that to take home.

Thanks once again.

Dear Reader:

On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five years ago, two young men graduated from the same college. They were very much alike, these two young men. Both had been better than average students, both were personable and both – as young college graduates are – were filled with ambitious dreams for the future.

Recently, these two men returned to college for their 25th reunion.

They were still very much alike. Both were happily married. Both had three children. And both, it turned out, had gone to work for the same Midwestern manufacturing company after graduation, and were still there.

But there was a difference. One of the men was manager of a small department of that company. The other was its president.

What Made The Difference

Have you ever wondered, as I have, what makes this kind of difference in people’s lives? It isn’t always a native intelligence or talent or dedication. It isn’t that one person wants success and the other doesn’t.

The difference lies in what each person knows and how he or she makes use of that knowledge.

And that is why I am writing to you and to people like you about The Wall Street Journal. For that is the whole purpose of The Journal: To give its readers knowledge – knowledge that they can use in business.

xfactordv:
I know how to write start with a story but i dont know how to connect that story to my product , that 's the only problem am having right now .

OYENIYIJK:
So this is considered the best sales letter. It generated $2 billion.



no wonder it started with a story

xfactordv:
I know how to write start with a story but i dont know how to connect that story to my product , that 's the only problem am having right now .

AwesomeDuru:
Who wrote it?

JohnQueen:
Boss Venzal great work I must say.

As soon as I finished yesterday's lesson,.... I got overly excited.

I stood up from my table, climbed on top of my chair and yelled out, "Venzal FOR PRESIDENT!!!".

I gotta admit... the other people at the restaurant were NOT excited as I was.

I didn't care though. It was at that moment I knew I had to keep following your lessons keenly, as I have my eyes set on the BAG.

Real quick... AE or BE when writing, cos I am used to writing 'favour' instead of 'favor', 'colour' instead of 'color'... Ati bebe lo...

Goodluck418:


You are not just telling them stories for story sake,
You are narrating a story of someone who was going through hard times and the only way they could solve the problem was through your product.


"John marriage was at the brink of destruction, but nobody knows why. When you see John and Mary in public, they looked like the perfect couple. So what could be eating the marriage? Everyone wondered.
It wasn't until recently when John opened up to man to man. He told since they got married, their sexual life has been bad, he said initially, Mary was okay with it but as it is, she can't take it anyone. As someone that was in that position sometime ago I knew what he was going through and I had the best solution for him."

Introduce your product...

JohnQueen:
Boss Venzal great work I must say.

As soon as I finished yesterday's lesson,.... I got overly excited.

I stood up from my table, climbed on top of my chair and yelled out, "Venzal FOR PRESIDENT!!!".

I gotta admit... the other people at the restaurant were NOT excited as I was.

I didn't care though. It was at that moment I knew I had to keep following your lessons keenly, as I have my eyes set on the BAG.

Real quick... AE or BE when writing, cos I am used to writing 'favour' instead of 'favor', 'colour' instead of 'color'... Ati bebe lo...

graceyg:
Jacky as a child of ten,wanted to be a star,She had Visions of being in the spotlight, signing Auto graphs and taking pictures with her fans.

As she grew older to the age of twenty six,she felt her dreams were no longer valid as she struggled with facial and skin problems.Her self esteem was at it's lowest ebb.

Till she met someone who changed her mindset and made her "FIND HER BEAUTIFUL". With MARY KAY beauty Range,Jacky was able to change her Game.

For Marykay products ,
Call:...............
I composed this, please I need Reviews

africanman85:
@Venzal, can u make a video on how to piece together your research finding.

OYENIYIJK:

.... I need someone to write 300 words for $300. Can you? Send your proposal

Qulink1:

Chris Orzechowski
I see you

graceyg:
Are you serious?or you are just giving me review about my write up?

OYENIYIJK:

Expensive joke
What do you really mean? I mean you are good. Sister calm down oooo. No worry your client go come