Lawnray:
Venzal, chasevibes and other bosses in the house, please help me check my profile out

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01a052fa2067014d71?viewMode=1

Venzal:
I like it. Not a bad attempt. You grow as your write more.

Just one thing;

Be careful about using profanities when writing for clients. Many people on their list will consider it offensive.

Check first with a client before using that.

And even if you must use profanities make sure it's semi-censored e.g sh!t should be sh*t.

Modsfav:
Client no wan come online, he had only one revision which I have corrected.
Should I just submit?
Na my first job be this

Venzal:
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT:

Earlier this month, I created a telegram group where I intend to start sharing lessons, resources, and tools that have helped me in business, marketing, and life.

For example, I intend to ride hell for leather into affiliate marketing next month… and I’d be sharing video lessons of my progress with members of that group.

If you’d be interested in joining, the link is on my signature. Click and join.

Of course, this doesn’t mean I am abandoning this thread…

I am still posting here and would also be posting there.

For now though, since most of the people who’d join that group are going to be from here, I’ll mostly talk about this thing (email copywriting) we have started.

And to welcome you to the group, I have created a video PLUS a file with 97 eCommerce emails that you can use as you wish.

The video will explain how to use this file.

Once you get into the group KINDLY CHECK THE PINNED POST… you’d see the link to download the video and the file from.

P.S. If you are up for it, introduce yourself if you want. If you don't want to, that's also fine.

shotanny:
Please guys, how do one register for a PayPal account

mrsteel:

Your input have so far been helpful!
I will like to ask, someone going into video editing, what area should one focus on as a beginner?
Video editing is kinda wide. & can one start this only with Premiere or one should equally have good knowledge of after effect to get started? Thanks.

ziziangel:
I came up with this copy.

I need opinions/criticisms from y'all.



'It was a stricken cold winter morning in Manhattan, Eddie Murphy rushed into the coffee shop only to be faced by a lengthy queue filled with folks with long-straight faces who would readily eat up anyone who jumped the coffee queue...

Inasmuch as Eddie was late for work, he needed coffee more than a fat kid would crave for a cake...

A weird but smart idea tingled in his head, and he smiled sheepishly...

With his hands in his pocket, he pulled out his cellphone and started off an abstract conversation but at the top of his voice...

'Hello, yeah, its Eddie Murphy... Oh Doctor Rogers!
My wife did what!
Come again?! (He caught everyone's attention at that moment)..
She delivered!
Oh, she delivered twins!

A middle aged lady at the front queue who was overwhelmed by his 'GOOD' news quickly pulled him forward and joyfully offered him her position as she was cheered by the rest of the queue members for her kind gesture.

That was how Eddie played his way in and got his coffee in seconds!

Not everyone can be lucky or cunning like Eddie Murphy especially as coffee lovers, but for you reading this, count yourself lucky as I introduce to you a device that can save you off the STRESS of being cunning like a tortoise just to get a taste of your favorite coffee.
I introduce the 'Bluetooth Coffee Maker'...

With this device, you can make your coffee from the warmth of your duvet just with a press on a button.

Click here [LINK] to get one for a dead discount of $59.99 before it reverts back to $99.99.

Foluwadamilare:



I'm a newbie like you, but think you should've laid more emphasis on how beneficial the product will be to your reader...

Nice story though....from a thousand words

Cutezt:


As always, i will advise learning the camera and how it works first, that is the most basic thing, many video editors are out there but they don't even know the reason why they should export at 24 fps or 30 fps, some don't even care, they just export with whatever preset they see, don't be that kind of editor, learn basic camera terms, then dive into premiere, if you don't learn some basic camera terms, you will get confused while watching some parts of the premiere tutorial.

Cutezt:


As always, i will advise learning the camera and how it works first, that is the most basic thing, many video editors are out there but they don't even know the reason why they should export at 24 fps or 30 fps, some don't even care, they just export with whatever preset they see, don't be that kind of editor, learn basic camera terms, then dive into premiere, if you don't learn some basic camera terms, you will get confused while watching some parts of the premiere tutorial.

Carmal90:


Pls any clue on where to learn the camera, either free or paid

Cutezt:


When it comes to cinematography, the best way to learn it is to do it, but if you can't find somewhere to do it and learn on the job, just watch the videos in this Playlist https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLBWs5dCYykYXo6VmL9EuetvoLSH8bEHlt

It will help you cos you will find some of the things you see here inside editing softwares.

Venzal:
Yes, someone just told me that. I am trying to figure it out.

emperorsversion:


How can one get that premium grammerly software... because I have the usual one and it works for me

WordsWriter:
Please some should help me. A client just asked for a call on Upwork obviously to discuss his email marketing campaign

How do I handle the call ooo. Must it be video call?

×××××××××××××××××

Scratch that! Call done and dusted!! Just closed my first email writing job(Big Thank you Venzal) But right now I'm clueless on how to proceed

oga venzal please come and help me oo... I need a bit of clarification on how to run a successful email campaign! I've already completed the email marketing course on Hubspot so I have a bit of an idea what to do.

ziziangel:
I came up with this copy.

I need opinions/criticisms from y'all.



'It was a stricken cold winter morning in Manhattan, Eddie Murphy rushed into the coffee shop only to be faced by a lengthy queue filled with folks with long-straight faces who would readily eat up anyone who jumped the coffee queue...

Inasmuch as Eddie was late for work, he needed coffee more than a fat kid would crave for a cake...

A weird but smart idea tingled in his head, and he smiled sheepishly...

With his hands in his pocket, he pulled out his cellphone and started off an abstract conversation but at the top of his voice...

'Hello, yeah, its Eddie Murphy... Oh Doctor Rogers!
My wife did what!
Come again?! (He caught everyone's attention at that moment)..
She delivered!
Oh, she delivered twins!

A middle aged lady at the front queue who was overwhelmed by his 'GOOD' news quickly pulled him forward and joyfully offered him her position as she was cheered by the rest of the queue members for her kind gesture.

That was how Eddie played his way in and got his coffee in seconds!

Not everyone can be lucky or cunning like Eddie Murphy especially as coffee lovers, but for you reading this, count yourself lucky as I introduce to you a device that can save you off the STRESS of being cunning like a tortoise just to get a taste of your favorite coffee.
I introduce the 'Bluetooth Coffee Maker'...

With this device, you can make your coffee from the warmth of your duvet just with a press on a button.

Click here [LINK] to get one for a dead discount of $59.99 before it reverts back to $99.99.

Modsfav:

081-64-360-186 Ca.ll/WhatsApp

Modsfav:


Was it a video call?

ziziangel:


Oh yeah! You're right about the benefits, I thought of it but I wanted to make it short as possible, I think I would have preferably ended with a kinda 'see more details' about the product here [LINK] to initiating 'Call For Action' instantly.

I'm still learning the copywriting ropes anyways , thanks a lot for your input, appreciate.

ziziangel:


Oh yeah! You're right about the benefits, I thought of it but I wanted to make it short as possible, I think I would have preferably ended with a kinda 'see more details' about the product here [LINK] to initiating 'Call For Action' instantly.

I'm still learning the copywriting ropes anyways , thanks a lot for your input, appreciate.

WordsWriter:


Nah... just a regular audio call on skype

WordsWriter:

Nah... just a regular audio call on skype

emperorsversion:



bro, how did you add that to your portfolio... was that a screenshot or you added it as attachment ?

WordsWriter:
Please some should help me. A client just asked for a call on Upwork obviously to discuss his email marketing campaign

How do I handle the call ooo. Must it be video call?

×××××××××××××××××

Scratch that! Call done and dusted!! Just closed my first email writing job(Big Thank you Venzal) But right now I'm clueless on how to proceed

oga venzal please come and help me oo... I need a bit of clarification on how to run a successful email campaign! I've already completed the email marketing course on Hubspot[b][/b] so I have a bit of an idea what to do.

adsmaster:


Are you subscribed to Ben settle emails? If 'NO'' please you should.

Are you asking why?

Will tell you why in a minute...

Hard to say these first, your copy is great,love the story and how you linked it to the product but...

Enters why I said you should subscribe to Ben's email list.

He has a technique of first telling a story and then adding a testimony of maybe a client who bought his course.

Then always remember to talk about the benefit- how these Bluetooth coffee maker benefited someone.

Catch the drift?

That's all I gat for ya!

Nothing more to add.

Stay blessed

Adsmaster.

PS..the weather is freaking cold today. So cold can't even muster enough strength to go make coffee, only have enough left to go pick it up once its ready.
How much did you say you BLUETOOTH coffee maker is again?

Youngsage:

Awesome. Great story. The copy should be a bit longer though...
Throw more light on the product itself, how it works, and more of what people stand to gain from it and why they should buy it

emperorsversion:


bro congratulations... more earnings will definitely come your way for sure... but quick questions

1. what is the nature of the job

2. you talked about having a course on email marketing from some site.... can you tell me about it pls

Won't even lie by saying I know what I'm doing. The job is an email marketing job, bulky and complex( Na God and Venzal go help me ).

Modsfav:

better oooh, make oyibo no go see my ugly face